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Hey Anu,

Fabulous Update though I felt it was short. U can call me greedy.😆

Don is worried that how he remembered so much about her, let him think & we can laugh.😉

Don is at his best to creep Geet out but I guess the fiery cat is not easy to be taken down.

Narang & his background check. What kind of background check that was or he just took her word for it. 😛

Geet had hired the people to act. May be overexerting my mind but can it be possible that DON's mocking nothing suspicious led him to keep an eye on her?

Romeo is poor soul 😆stuck with ACP's aspired sister & his apparent mysterious employer. I wonder how much lies are going to get piled in this flat by Geet & Romeo. 🤪

Geet is thinking on right lines about her sudden perquisites as she needs vigilance & skill to deal with all that is bound to occur in Underworld & being DON's personal assistant & targeting DON himself.

DON is daydreaming about his assistance & I love how Geet keeps contradicting his words. First "I don't expect anything from you" & then "I am here to work, not to impress ANYONE...!!"

Continue Soon as with Geet holding her breath, I am holding mine with story's flow.

Originally posted by: serenelove

Hey Anu,

Fabulous Update though I felt it was short. U can call me greedy.😆

short I thought I wrote along one...well may be mai bhi don ki tarah day dreaming arne lagi hoon😆

Don is worried that how he remembered so much about her, let him think & we can laugh.😉

Yeah, uske features nahi yaad rakhega toh kya narang ke yaad rakhega😆🤣
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Don is at his best to creep Geet out but I guess the fiery cat is not easy to be taken down.

she is there to tame him😉

Narang & his background check. What kind of background check that was or he just took her word for it. 😛

more will be revealed in the next part abut geet's fake identity

Geet had hired the people to act. May be overexerting my mind but can it be possible that DON's mocking nothing suspicious led him to keep an eye on her?

may be or may be not😆...aur vaise bhi don ki ankhen toh geet se hatne wali nahi hai😉

Romeo is poor soul 😆stuck with ACP's aspired sister & his apparent mysterious employer. I wonder how much lies are going to get piled in this flat by Geet & Romeo. 🤪

I love the way u give perfect adjectives to characters😛...romeo is actually stuck but he is cute😳

Geet is thinking on right lines about her sudden perquisites as she needs vigilance & skill to deal with all that is bound to occur in Underworld & being DON's personal assistant & targeting DON himself.

Much more is needed to trap don😉...lets see how geet is going to do it😳

DON is daydreaming about his assistance & I love how Geet keeps contradicting his words. First "I don't expect anything from you" & then "I am here to work, not to impress ANYONE...!!"

I am glad u liked the dailogues...I was pretty unsure regarding dialogues as its a very unusal character of maan...I mean his flirty-cum-deadly-cum-serious-cum-jesty-cum-nasty...I can go on and on, u see what I mean😉😳

Continue Soon as with Geet holding her breath, I am holding mine with story's flow.

u can let out that breath...I may take time😆

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

@ anu..joining fb after studies...sounds like a plan👍🏼

i luv that about fb. u can pick up the missing pieces right where u left em.

who doesn't miss old friends 😒

yeah thats true😳

...Daulat aur jawani, ek din kho jaati hai,
sach kahta hoon, saari duniya, dushman ho jaati hai,
umr bhar dost lekin saath chalte hain
Diye jalte hain, phool khilte hain,
badi mushkil se, magar, duniya mein dost milte hain

this is just beautiful...lovely composition 😛

Originally posted by: shining_moon

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

priya..perhi mai ne sari conversation. mountains , valleys, mere pachpan ke din, school life , head boys and male bashing😆

acha chalo gimme two minutes. mai anu ka update perh lon.

ok anu thank u sooo much for a wonderful read.

aww ur welcome😳

ohh don n geet's interaction r very sensuous. me like it 😉

I m always scared whenever I have to put up a sensuous convo b/w maaneet...I keep on thinking whether it'll look nice or not😛

oh so geet setup all the plot to enter don's den. those men were rental goons that she knocked down.

pata hai anu i got worried for geet after reading this...i hope maan teaches her how to fight.( ashoka style) otherwise what will happen to her incase of real combat.

ok I want to clear this...geet is a trained fighter...karate black belt😳...so don't worry and then don hai na, who'll dare to harm her in don's presence😉

geet's relation with romeo is very sweet. aww romeo was talking about his boss. the whole para was funny... romeo kept on correcting himself keeping in mind that adi is dead.

yeah, actually I m trying to give clues about the mystery through their convo...lets see if u'll get it or not😛

luvd the way don thought "nothing suspicious". yay narang kya item hai. i don't know where he gets his information checked😆

he's an overconfident fool😆

why do you expect that I'll let you in...??.

I don't expect anything from you i read this so many times already. wow anu that was pretty sexy dialogue exchange. right on the ball.👍🏼

thank you😳

Geet held her breath with the deadly toxic proximity they were sharing and her heart quickened its pace... yes yes meri bhi. i have the same effect..strange na 😆

same thing for u...breath freely as next part may take time😆