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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome ff
read it in one go
luvd it 2 the core
m really anxious 2 know what evil plan crossed Ammy'[s brain 2 break into the house
update soon n do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago

Finally we got our much awaited update…..Aww just loved it…..You know I Just Love this Prankster Armaan…Who laugh like there is no tommrow, who Do anything for their friends….Chooo chweettt…..Oyee why u stopped the part at such stage…..Really want to know ki ab Humara Hero kya karne wala hai😛……Do continue soon My baccha……Take care….

Lots and Lots of Love

GEET

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_044

awesome part..luvd armaan...
cant wait fr ar to meet in de sangeet..
continue soonn


Heyya dii...How are you??? Thank you so very much..Glad that you liked the part and my Armaan..AR meeting will be in the Wedding not in the Sangeet..Sorry about the change jaani..Sure will continue as soon as possible..<33
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: divi1oct

Superb part..👏

Armaan was spying on her..😉
Loved the convo b/w Rahul n Armaan..😆
Continue soon..


Thank You very very much jaani..Oh yes Armaan was spying on her..Glad you loved the convo between Rahul and Armaan..Sure will continue as soon as possible..Jaani..What do you I call you??I mean your name?? Thanks for commenting..:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DMG4EVER

That was fab and i love how armaan's feelings were depicted in this segment.


Heyya Misha dii..Thank You very very much..So glad you loved the part..Awwie..That means a lot to me..BTW Misha dii..How are you???Long time since I have seen you in Yet Another Sunset..I guess you are busy with life..<33
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: youth_showsfan

hey amal it was an ausum update

i simply loved it
hearing armaan's side of story made me smiled
he spied her lol
waiting for AR to meet
update super soon
btw i hope u r njoying ur holidays


Heyya Shrishti dii..Thank You very much jaani..Glad you loved the update..Awwie..Your comment makes me smile too..Yup he spied on her because it was irresistible..They will meet very soon jaani..Sure will update ASAP..I am back jaani..Did enjoy my vacations all right..MUAH..<33
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shonagudia

The part was amazing. I can't express how happy i am after knowing that Arman loves her to the core and now determined to finish his work to be with her forever.
You can actually extend the meeting to another part +sangeet. It will be more fun.
Can't wait for AR to meet soon.
Continue jaldi jaldi ...
Muuuah..


Heyya diii..Thank You very much..Awwie..So glad that you are happy with the storyline..Oh well yeah he is done with his work which is why he is back..The whole story will come in time..Oh thank you for that..MUAH..They will meet real soon..Sure will continue soon..MUAH
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thank You very much Ritu diii..<33


Thanks a lot my dear Tashu dii..<33
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Maitree..

I'm So Sorry Baby! I know you're angry,I know you deserve to hit me,I know I need to run behind you every moment and tell you,"Man jao na Basket" and manofy you,I know you want to hug me that I am back,I know that you still love me and that that you miss me terribly.Here's Loads of Love,Hugs and Kisses for You.I Love You Janemaan,Come back soon...Your Armaan is so incomplete without you!You know na! *Armaan wala pout* I MISS MY BASKET!!Now,coming to the parts,Love..

Part 9 : FAB Part !! I Loved all of it,of how the POV changed from Riddhima's to the narrator's,I loved how they all sat in peace and played a game..and the answers they gave were adorable! Riddhima's answer almost made me want to jump on her,"Aankhein" PERFECTT! Basket,explain HOW?HOW Can you write so beautifully that I am deficient of words everytime?You know how much you Awe me,Love? I am always left dumbstruck and wonder if I am worth you,love..You're there in my heart,my angel..Writing like you're talking to me,and then here I am,stuck among everything,so late in opening up to you..I don't know what I am blabbering but all I know that your writing is Beyond Comparison..It is something I cannot Describe even if I want to.Its something thats just engraved in my heart,PERMANENTLY. I Loved how you described Armaan's POV.He is So in Love with her...and the way he admires her brings a Big smile to my face I can so imagine KaJen here..His heart is with her,his Soul is in her,how will he live without her?I am so glad you gave a insight as to what happened the day at the hospital and how he feel just crazily for her... OhBasket,I wish,I wish words would come to me to describe how much this part means to me.Its like,I've fallen in Love with YAS all over again.I Love You..

Part 10 : OhChrist,Give me one reason..ONE. O-N-E. Just ONE reason why I shouldn't fall in Love with your writing all over again and Tell you that you're a PRO.You are,Miss Amal..Just Admit it ALREADY.Aah,Your Writing makes a mark in my heart like a Etched Memory,Each line bringing forward that person in me I never knew existed.Each line you described about Armaan was beyond what I ever imagined.That,you see..My Dear Basket..Is the sign of a Pro.I Love You Soo Much Amal,this part was one of your Best.No,sorry...Make it THE BEST. He was spying on her,he surrendered himself to her,to her love..It was him all along,in her heart..In his heart,it was her all along..God how more perfect can this get..My mind is Spinning..I Am so glad you Updated..

It was a rainy night..Amidst the heavy rain, deafening thunder and blinding lightning..His thoughts were unwavering..It was stuck on her smile..He had got to know her name just a day back..Ridhima..The name chimed upon his ears..Like music..Like a nightingale..Yearn crept to him almost choking him..He controlled..But it din't stop..He gulped it..But it regained itself like sheer magic..He had to go and it wasn't easy for him..Yet it was insuppressible..He went for it..

My God..This para left me STUNNED.HOW? HOW CAN YOU Leave me Speechless like that?You know what it does to me?I WANT MORE OF YOUR WRITING!! God,Kill Me.I Can't Live without my Basket Anymore.I Love You Soo Much My Riddhima,I Miss you..Come back soon..<3

Last but not the least,I have nothing to say to you for the new thread..Its just Meant to Be..Coz mano ya na mano,You are the Real Professional,My Basket My Love..I am so proud of you..<33
Love,
Your Armaan<33


You know exactly how to make me cry even when I am angry with you..I forgive you jaani..AND ALL KISSES AND HUGS ACCEPTED..Love you jaani..MUAH..OKAY..What do I have to reply to you??? To everyone else the comments are from the point of a reader..But you..I never understood why but you take YAS as something beyond a reader's capacity..Like its something you crave deadly..And for some reason I love it..and more over I deeply think I dont deserve it..I am a very new writer jaani..Unlike you who has experience and know how to perfect things..But me i just write, whether good or bad post it here..So dont call me pro once again..But that will not stop me from telling how much this comment meant to me when I was India, with apparently no means to connect myself to the outer world.And then my aunt came when I realised her mob has connection..came to IF..smiled at all the comments..and then this page took time to load..I wondered why..But after I read the long long comment from you..god..I dint know whether I had to smile or cry..You see I am a very touching person..I get easily touched..I may not show it but yeah i get affected easily..And thats what I did when I saw this..Even though half the things are stuff I dont admit and never will..Its like too overwhelming when you know you work is worth it..When you know there are people who love you and your work without comparing with other stuff (because if you guys did compare my FF with others, i will be my only reader)..SO yeah thats it..Not exactly a reply but I had to say it..Thanks jaani..You remain my best commentor ever..Not longest though after Radhu dii came in..I still feel stunned how she can blabber to the characters..Love ya jaani..Missed ya like hell...MUAH..NEVER LEAVE ME LIKE THAT..Always yours, Basket..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: coffeearoma

Hey!!
wow Armaan was spying on her...sneeky fella! haha...n Rahul knows bout AR...coolness...um i didn't get a pm...so am sorry i commented a bit late..bt i absolutely can't wait for thee next update!!
cheers!
Rucha :D


Heyya Rucha diii..How are you???Oh well yeah..Armaan was spying on her because he dint really have any other means of controlling himself..Hehe..Rahul does know about her..Oh thats coz I dint sent the PM while I was in India..Sent it some time back..Thats fine jaani..I dont ever mind late comments..Awwie..Its nice to hear that..MUAH..Will update soon..

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