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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

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I'll edit when the chapter's done! Will that make you update faster? 🤣
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Naah just kidding! I'll edit after school! Although it'd be AWESOME if you updated by then ;) And this editing-before-the-chapter-is-complete thing is ONLY because this is your first ever installment in this FF <3 Congratulations! 🤗

xoxo
Aanya

*EDITED*

Sanaaa! 🤗

The update was AWESOMEEE [Barney Stinson style] :D I loved loved loved it!

I'm going to start at the very beginning :) I liked the song! Shame on me... India mein rehke, I hadn't heard it but I went and listened to it and it's PERFECT for the update :D So yeah I loved that bit :)

AYIEE I'm in looveee with this Riddhima! Mainly because I think JUST like her! No seriously! It's like I'm reading about myself! She thinks so much! Door door ka sochti hai! Daydreaming in class...thinking about random stuff totally Aanya 😆 Not to mention I'm a straight A student *Puts her collar up* 🤣 And I'm also un-dressy :P So I adore this Riddhima :D

Did you have perfect competition in school in the year that just got over??? We had it in 10th grade which means last year which means two years before you :P But I loveee Economics! Basically our teacher was excellent so yeah :) Shit I'm talking more about random stuff rather than the update nai? Kya karoon it's just so relate-able! But I'll get back to the update now 😆

Mr Jones a.k.a BEER BELLY? Made me LMFAO 🤣

Hmm I quite like the Rahul liking Riddhima angle! It's quite refreshing to see Rahul as a funny, slightly immature guy! I loved him :D <3 And Muskaan too! Ah, I ALWAYS love Muskaan, she's so amazing all the time <3 And funny and spirited and well everything nice ;) I'd love to see her fall in love with Rahul! Or maybe you're not planning that angle but whatever...as long as you have AR, I'm cool with everything :D

Riddhima looked over to where Rahul was calling, and felt her eyes get glued to the figure there. A handsome hunk was making his way towards them, dressed in jeans and a black leather jacket, with a playboy chain around his neck. Unlike other guys, his hair was not mushed up with a whole bottle of gel, or wax (whichever suited the person), but was left to flow freely. She felt her mouth drop open then finally tore her eyes away from him to see other girls passing him interested looks as he walked past them.
"I don't blame Rahul for being gay." Muskaan murmured, her eyes frozen on Armaan
Riddhima dropped her gaze low so as to not be caught staring.
"Armaan." Rahul started. "This is Riddhima, and Muskaan. My closest girl friends."
"Wow, two girls to yourself huh?" Armaan asked as he placed himself opposite Riddhima. Gosh that voice! Riddhima however frowned slightly.
"Hi!" She replied brightly. "Yeahh Rahul's our best friend." She stated, wanting to shut him from the rumours and gossip before they even got to him. She studied him carefully. She wanted to get to know him more. Suppose they got together. Suppose he asked her out. Ok hold it Riddhima, she warned herself.

LMAO she's already checking him out! And liking him! Tee Hee :D Haayyee I loveee this Armaan! And since noone's put dibs on him, I'll say it- HE"S MINE! ALL MINE! Pweasshhh *giggles* I loveee him! Kitna charming hai ;) And oh oh a similar thing happened to me too! Okay umm I joined a new school this year & 5 of my friends came with me so it's cool :P Anyway, what I was saying is, there's this guy called Karan in my class, he's new too and he's really shy! Only talks to a few people! BUT, he's SOOO hot! Seriously! Basically, I'm crushing on him...nothing major but you know ;) And you know how students in India get their own bikes and stuff to school? Not cars but 2 wheelers. Anyway so he [Karan] came on the bike and OMG his bike is sooo sexy <3 And while leaving, I told him bye and he smileeed and said bye too! Gosh...I sound crazy :P But I haven't crushed on anyone since ages so it's funn 🤣 Oops I ended up going off topic didn't I? My bad :D

Coming back to the update, haha I was WAITING for the Bitches gang! There has to be one! Every High School is incomplete without them! OhmyGosh they're so DUMBB! And Armaan complimented them? Haww...koi baat nahi...dheere dheere line pe aa jaayega 😆 Riddhima's thoughts about the bitches were hilarious! I loved this - "Jessica and Jane were just plain dumb and stupid. But since Rhea was the dumber and stupider of the lot, she was some sort of the unsaid ring leader." 🤣

And yay! She already feels something for him! Hehe atleast its not hate! Kuch nahi toh crush hi sahi 😆 I loved loved loved loved loved it <3 All in all, AMAZING update!

*Phew* That was super long! And to think this was only an installment ;) And yes I ended up talking a lot about me rather than the update, but that doesn't mean that the update wasn't awesome! If it wouldn't have been so freakin' amazing, I'd never have had the urge to talk so much about me 😳

Continue NOWW :D

xoxo
Aanya

OMGSHHH Aanya...for an installemnt THIS small such a LOOONNGGG comment..now I HAVE to update further..!!! 😆
Bold set 1 - Actually the Riddhima here is completley me..!!! COMPLETLEY!! And Muskaan is like my friend..She's such a good dresser..but me?? I'm not gonna fail to admit..I don't have dressing style or sense..!! 😭 anything that covers my body decently and I rush out of the house..!! LOL!! Infact..while I was boarding for like 3 weeks at school with my friend..(boarding can be AMAZING yet BORING) she used to get up early and go for a shower first..and come out..iron her uniform..put make up here and there..THAT's when I would get up..(5 mins left for breakfast) and rush to the bathroom..and wear a scrappy uniform..and rush to the table..That is totally me..my mum HATES this habit of myn..but kya karein..??😆 ANd i too always go off on random tangents when I'm thinking..just like now..!! LOL!!! so this Riddhima is totally me too!!! 😆 and you'll see more of me then.. As for Armaan..hmmm..there was this certain guy I was crushing on quite recently..maybe still am.😆..and he was really sweet..charming..awesome at heart...but..if i tell you i'll tell u Riddhima's thoughts as well..so I'll shut up completely..!! 😆..
Bold set 2 - aage aage dekh hota hai kya..Won't give the story away just now..!! 😉
Bold set 3 - Yepp...see a hot guy duhh..!!! lolxxx😆 And then this ARMAAN obviously she has to check him out..!! LMAO!!! hahaha..NO WAYYY!!! What i have planned for him..he's ALLL MYN!! I"m not giving him to anyone..!!! No freaking way..I'm too selfish like that..!! 😆😛 Awhhh...He sounds sweet!!! And his name is Karan?? ok..just like KSG..you go for it..!! You never know..he might be crushing on you too..😉
Bold set 4 - TRUEE!!! There HAS to be a bitches gang..and I've just described the bitches gang in MY skul..though they weren't THAT mean to ur face..but behind ur back..WHOWW!! I felt like taking each of them..shoving them down the drain and shouting out.."suck on that BITCHESS" ..yepp..dnt worry about that..Armaan hai..obviously aajayega..
Now I can't wait for these comments about urself..!!! So I'm off to write and edit more..!!! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

OMGSHHH Aanya...for an installemnt THIS small such a LOOONNGGG comment..now I HAVE to update further..!!! 😆
Bold set 1 - Actually the Riddhima here is completley me..!!! COMPLETLEY!! And Muskaan is like my friend..She's such a good dresser..but me?? I'm not gonna fail to admit..I don't have dressing style or sense..!! 😭 anything that covers my body decently and I rush out of the house..!! LOL!! Infact..while I was boarding for like 3 weeks at school with my friend..(boarding can be AMAZING yet BORING) she used to get up early and go for a shower first..and come out..iron her uniform..put make up here and there..THAT's when I would get up..(5 mins left for breakfast) and rush to the bathroom..and wear a scrappy uniform..and rush to the table..That is totally me..my mum HATES this habit of myn..but kya karein..??😆 ANd i too always go off on random tangents when I'm thinking..just like now..!! LOL!!! so this Riddhima is totally me too!!! 😆 and you'll see more of me then.. As for Armaan..hmmm..there was this certain guy I was crushing on quite recently..maybe still am.😆..and he was really sweet..charming..awesome at heart...but..if i tell you i'll tell u Riddhima's thoughts as well..so I'll shut up completely..!! 😆..
Bold set 2 - aage aage dekh hota hai kya..Won't give the story away just now..!! 😉
Bold set 3 - Yepp...see a hot guy duhh..!!! lolxxx😆 And then this ARMAAN obviously she has to check him out..!! LMAO!!! hahaha..NO WAYYY!!! What i have planned for him..he's ALLL MYN!! I"m not giving him to anyone..!!! No freaking way..I'm too selfish like that..!! 😆😛 Awhhh...He sounds sweet!!! And his name is Karan?? ok..just like KSG..you go for it..!! You never know..he might be crushing on you too..😉
Bold set 4 - TRUEE!!! There HAS to be a bitches gang..and I've just described the bitches gang in MY skul..though they weren't THAT mean to ur face..but behind ur back..WHOWW!! I felt like taking each of them..shoving them down the drain and shouting out.."suck on that BITCHESS" ..yepp..dnt worry about that..Armaan hai..obviously aajayega..
Now I can't wait for these comments about urself..!!! So I'm off to write and edit more..!!! 😆


Oh then I'm just like you! Or you're just like me or whatever :D Haha I HATEE make up! And seriously! It takes me all of 20 minutes to have a bath AND get ready 😆 I wouldn't know about boarding school, never been there! Will go for uni though...although that I'm sure is a whole other thing but yeah :P

Aww you are/were crushing on someone too? Cutee <3 As for me, nah I don't think he's crushing on me :P But who the hell cares ;) No seriously, I'm the last person to think of stuff like that...I'm having too much fun crushing on him to think about anything further...jo hoga dejha jaayega 🤣 FINE -__- You an have Armaan :P BUTTT I'm next in line...LMAO :D Or better still - Share with me? 😆

@ Bitches - True that 😉

UPDATEEE :D Who knows, I might be inspired to write a lot more about me with each update? 😆

xoxo
Aanya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr


Oh then I'm just like you! Or you're just like me or whatever :D Haha I HATEE make up! And seriously! It takes me all of 20 minutes to have a bath AND get ready 😆 I wouldn't know about boarding school, never been there! Will go for uni though...although that I'm sure is a whole other thing but yeah :P

Aww you are/were crushing on someone too? Cutee <3 As for me, nah I don't think he's crushing on me :P But who the hell cares ;) No seriously, I'm the last person to think of stuff like that...I'm having too much fun crushing on him to think about anything further...jo hoga dejha jaayega 🤣 FINE -__- You an have Armaan :P BUTTT I'm next in line...LMAO :D Or better still - Share with me? 😆

@ Bitches - True that 😉

UPDATEEE :D Who knows, I might be inspired to write a lot more about me with each update? 😆

xoxo
Aanya

Hahaha...yeah maybe..!! In fact most probably..You're either gonna love me..or hate me..!! 😕😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Pssht I can't hate you 😆

xoxo
Aanya
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Res!

*EDITED*

Yay! I'm first after the PM 😆

Coming to the update, it was AWESOME! I loved it! Aww she's TOTALLY crushing on him!!! And OMG I giggled through the whole motorbike thing! You know why! 😳 I adored it <3 *sigh*

Thank God RM bicker in this one too! If someone takes away bickering from RM they ain't Rahul and Muskaan anymore <3 I used to love it in DMG when she called him - "Oye Kaankhajure!" 🤣

Armaan is *sigh...awesomeee <3 And full of attitude! But definitely awesome :D

I adored the update Sanaa! Continue super-mega-duper-soon 😆

xoxo
Aanya
Edited by Aanya_taanu4evr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
great part. Ridhima already having crush on armaan. Loved RM. Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

Hey:))

awesome part and great begining I really loved it:))
I liked Riddhima's changed behaviour in this ff and it's something diffirent.
can't wait for more and con. very soon.
PS: just one question...where do they live don't seem to be India ... or u gonna let us know about in the future story??
take care
love miss93
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: miss93

Hey:))

awesome part and great begining I really loved it:))
I liked Riddhima's changed behaviour in this ff and it's something diffirent.
can't wait for more and con. very soon.
PS: just one question...where do they live don't seem to be India ... or u gonna let us know about in the future story??
take care
love miss93

I mentioned it at the start completely..It's set in the UK, Cardiff..not India..I said.."the chilly winds of Cardiff"..Or something like that..but don't worry..it'll be more confirmed as you go along..😊
Thanks loadz..!!
Love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome Part sana =D
Do cont soon ! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Res!


*EDITED*

Yay! I'm first after the PM 😆

Coming to the update, it was AWESOME! I loved it! Aww she's TOTALLY crushing on him!!! And OMG I giggled through the whole motorbike thing! You know why! 😳 I adored it <3 *sigh*

Thank God RM bicker in this one too! If someone takes away bickering from RM they ain't Rahul and Muskaan anymore <3 I used to love it in DMG when she called him - "Oye Kaankhajure!" 🤣

Armaan is *sigh...awesomeee <3 And full of attitude! But definitely awesome :D

I adored the update Sanaa! Continue super-mega-duper-soon 😆

xoxo
Aanya

Hahahaha...I'm glad you did..!!! 😆 You're very inspirational..!!! LOL!! And yupp..she's completley crushing on him..and worse part is..she knows it..!!! But she doesn't want it to go further..!!
Hehehe..Yeah..how can RM live without fighting?? how?? 🤣
And as for armaan..Nahh..I'm not gonna share him..!! He's totally myn..!! and you are gonna ADORE him in future..!!! LOL!! 😆

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