FF-Immoral World-THREAD 1 - Page 75

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Waiting for the triple treat...

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

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Maan "don't you ever ask a single question about me!" geet feared his answer. Who was he? What was he? She nodes and watches maan walking out...

A week have passed by. Brij and rano was back. They have showed there false love towards geet in order to win maans love, who did not care at all but also showed his fals love towards geet. He staied with brij 24 hours long, trying his best to locate dev, the thought of him betraying his sister as well was somewhere in his mind. It killed him, specially the way he used his sister, but wasn't he doing exactly same! But this is his step sister! Was she like her dad? No good! Good for nothing... He was in deep thought. Something was truly bothering him, he knew well somewhere his heart started to melt for geet. No matter how much he tries to control to be rude towards her, it always end. Like the other day, he tried to be cruel but end up loving her!... Maan did not like all this distraction. His aim was to find dev & transfer the property...

Everyone ate there dinner and left whole geet waited for maan. He was late coming in... Ge walks in. Tiered. Walking in geets bedroom... She flows, helping him to take his shirt off...
Geet "ap bohot tahke gye. I left hot water... Ap shower karlena. I will warm the food for you..." geet was about to leave when maan holds her hand roughly... She makes a small noise. Shivering. Trying her best not to make any noise... "it's hurting me..." a tear rolled down her eyes. He forcefully brought her close. He stank of alcohol. Geet tries to cover her mouth but he forcefully holds both of her hand... She feared... And spoke in a shaky voice "ap pike ayhe?"
Maan "ha! Yes I am drunk so?"
Geet "why you behaving like this? It's scaring me!"
Maan "so! What can I do?"
Geet "please ap aisa mthe kaho!" maan pushed her to the bed, holding her hand firmly. Breaking all the bangles... Then quickly pushes her cheek in. Geet started to wimp, fearing him further. Trying not to make any noise as it will let everyone know.
Maan "what makes you think I love you?" his word was bitter! Geet looked at him with a shocking eyes. What was he asking about. "showing your innocent face, and you think I will melt this easily? You exactly like your dad! On surface you something els and inside you are something different! And that brother of your brij! I will make sure he begs on the road." geets eyes widens. She feared him further... Who was he? Why he is behaving like this?... He frees her. Geets lips was bleeding... She sits up, trying to hold maan... "apko ka hua? Ap aisy ku behave karhi hi? Hamse koi galti hui ka?" she cried, trying to cup maans face... But he snaps. "ap please kuch boliye. Hamko kuch samaj nahi ae raha!"
Even in his drunk state maan was hating him self! Why he felt the pain? Why he felt the torments when he hurts her. He hugged her tight, pinning her to the bed, kissing her madly... Geet looked at him in more confusion, he hurriedly took there cloths off. Closing the gap... Moving in a rhythm... She dis not understand him at all... What was bothering him... Tears did not stop rolling down her eyes as they moaned... He bends down and kissing them way softly. Geets wrist was bleeding... And his hand was covered with blood...

Next morning, sky was still dark. Both sat under the spread... Maan was creasing her nude body, while he finished bandaging her hand... He did not say anything except kissing her wrist... Which was enough for geet. She comes more close... "promise kariye... You will never drink!"
Maan nodes, but only he knows what made him to take this disgusting step... He felt hurt seeing geet in pain... He smiled sadly and gets up from the bed...

Last night maan have left her shaken. She couldn't understand anything, nothing at all...

2 whole day have passed. Maan kept his distance. His inner torment left him no where... What was exactly about her that drives him insane. There must be something. He was surly in love with her, but he just couldn't accept the fact...

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maan is himself confused about his
care towards her and
he is sooo damn frustrated!!
and tht is really hurting geet!!!!😕

but i knw hez gonna accept her whole
heartedly soon..😳
hai na?????😕


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He realized how geet have kept her distance yet always there for her when he needs her the most.

He slowly walks in to the bedroom... His cloths already on the bed. All decorated nicely... He was about to take his shirt off when geet helps him.
Geet "ap bohot late ho gye!" he did not reply, as the shock covered him. Wasn't she suppose to be angry mad, specially about his drinking! Being so rude. The bandage was still over her wrist. Why she is not moving way...
Maan "aren't you suppose to be angry at me?" geet nodes and hugs his bare back. Resting his cheek on his back...
Geet "how can I be Angry at you?"
Maan "what do you mean?"
Geet "you are my husband!"
Maan "yes so!"
Geet "I love you!" she spoke slowly... He snaps.
Maan "stay way from me!" geet was taken back with his rude attitude. She did not understand why he was like this... He quickly wore a shirt and walks out again...

12 midnight he walks in... Geet sat on the bed. Hugging her knee, his sudden appearance feared her, yet age took a sigh relive... She ran towards him and hugged him tight, but the alcohol smell... She bakes way... "apne pher pi?" her teary eyes questioned him. That made him smile, he liked the pain. He slowly walks in and closes the door behind him... Geet steps back... "apne ku pi? Apne promise KIA tha!"
Maan "what promise?... Whose promise!" he comes close and holds her hair tight...
Geet "ap aisa behave ku karti hi... I know you don't want to? If it's my fault why won't you tell me?" he pushed her to the bed...
Maan "how dare you question me?" he almost shouts..
Geet "please speak slowly, everyone will here. What will they think!" she spoke worriedly...
Maan "why? Who cares? Do I give dam about them?"
Geet "please ap shan't ho jaiye!"
Maan "shut up! Just shut up!"
He pinned her to the bed while geet did her best to calm him down. She was not understanding why he is behaving like this. What's her fault?
Geet "why you behaving like this?" she cried. "have I done any mistake?"
Maan "shut up!"
Geet "maan, ap aisa ku..."
He frees her for some odd reason and starts looking round bed for something... She wondered what he was looking for!
Geet "do you need anything?" she worried, trying to keep her voice low, so no one will here them. She indeed was very scare with his behavior...

Next morning... Geet could barely sit up. She surrounded her self again last night, and they made love... He was very rough. She couldn't get used to this behavior. She decided to confront today.

Maan walks out of the shower barely remembers anything from last night... Geet walks in with his coffee. "ap hamse naraj hi?" she kept her head low, speaking softly. She tried to be hard but when ever it comes to maan, she always turns a cat." maan gives her a furious look. Firstly how dare she ask him question like this, and secondly why?
Maan "how many time I have told you! Don't you dare ask me question!" geet jumped. Her hand was shivering with the hot coffee...
Geet "ap hamse aise..." her low voice. Couldn't even speak out when maan snaps at her again and this time she drops the hot coffee on her hand...

now only got time to read poor me ... ..kithna der se wait kar raha tha ... and meim first to comment i cant believe ..miracle ...oh god ..one miracle in my life is gone ... ...uff leave it....

1 = thank you for ur reply ...
2 = thank you for giving double updates ..

baki ..thanks fir kabhee dengey ... ok

"little " =M-EEE-N-A .. ( little means "KUM" in hindi )... "PUPPY" (puppy is dog ka bacha ..) 😡Maan Ka Koi Haq Nahee Bantha ki vo ek ladkee par zulum karey ..vajah jo bhee ho..even if that father handa of geet raped maan's whole family ,, he dont have right to ruin , hurt poor geet ..❤️..

dont make him do too much wrongs 😡 ... ...dear dont forget u already given us one ..big ...serious ... strong....remorse ...a very long stretched one...
(please dont take above dialogues as bashing ..fire ..at least i am not disturbing you with my cats .. ... much ..😆)


And Eagerly Waiting For Next Update😭 ... Really This Story is ... "Nice" i cant say ,like enigma 👏..poor Geet Suffering....

Ya Its Touching.😕. not too painful ..geet do enjoys☺️ most of the time🤪 ..wink wink😳.. ..thank God Not to the level of hurting😭 like Siski...