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naamteeg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#901

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BANG BANG... found you without a pm... hows that??? HAHA ... I will go read quickly...

Back from reading... Wow an emotional one!! I was expecting a slapstick comedy one as usual...

Hmmm.. was surprised that Maan was so shaken up my the hurt he had inflicted upon Geet... but why now??. when he showed no emotions during and after he shot her??

Hey Samira... can't see my Maan "Cowboy" all senti like this...

Please Make him into a LOVER COWBOY like this... YIPEEE

Can's wait... how are you going to pull off Maan and Geet sticking together?? What will make Geet stay with Maan?? Other than for the hot body🤣

Hah man loving your FF so much so that I am doing this post from my place of work... but I am using my personal laptop.. hehe.. got to run...

Edited by naamteeg - 14 years ago

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sky_86

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Posted: 14 years ago

#902

me second me second wowww but it was to short.,..so after maan bleeds his fingers himself why doesnt geet scream? when are they falling in love😳😳..its becoming so slow 😡😡😡

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Ankita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#903

me 3rd... Dont know what to do now😆

Edit: OK... really really nice part... Didnt find it short, it was just right for me...Maan and Geet both went through a lot of emotions in this one... For Geet from shock, to fear and disgust,to a rush of sympathy and understanding,then anger and hurt and finally fear again... She is just overwhelmed with the reality of what she witnessed and conflict in her own feelings. For Maan, I think it shook him to see hatred and disgust in Geet's eyes for him. He knows he has hurt her and her sympathy made it worse for him. Maan's loneliness and his fear of rejection from Geet was very well described... I think he is just now realizing the effect his action has left on Geet... Looking forward to next one...

PS-Did you really think I didnt know what to do😆

Edited by ankita10 - 14 years ago

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keenu_kk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#904

superb dear

really great

he hurted himself for hurting her

i think she ll help him

this time tying hanky or somewhat

so he had feelings for her

that we can see

poor geet always fails by her actions before him

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ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

#905

Sam! I loved it! totally. but why so short?!

give us another one quick.. and it had better be looong. but seriously, Maan' s pain and loneliness was very well written - simply and pointedly.

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-bansi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#906

I loved it sammy...!!
brilliantly written..!!
he din want to lose geet again n he made a run for it n caught her...he brought her close to himself...
he cud not see hatred for himself in her eyes...it sent daggers to his heart...!!! is he already falling for her..??😳 😳...me wud b more than happy..😳
n he pierced his fingers with the knife to punish geet..??? 😲 😲...was he punishing her or himself..??
n geet stood dumbfounded there...ohh i hope she stops him from hurtn himself further...!!
loved the update..!!
update the next part soon...😉 😛

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423728

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Posted: 14 years ago

#907

Originally posted by: sky_86
me second me second wowww but it was to short.,..so after maan bleeds his fingers himself why doesnt geet scream? when are they falling in love😳😳..its becoming so slow 😡😡😡

Slow? :O Woman! I made them meet within the first two chapters! 😆 Other writers extend the meeting till the 11th chapter.

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Zooni Begam

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Posted: 14 years ago

#908

Res

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Huh that's all???
Why so short and u left us in a cliff hanger?? 😭
Pls pls update the next one longer than the long chapter!!! 😆 😆
Hmmm spam till 150 oh dear no problem!!!
Awesome update!! Love how u hav express their feelings!!!!
Hmmm wow geet was so frighten over the gun shot poor her!!!!
Pls do update soon dear!!
Love this update!!
Thx for the pm!!

Edited by zooni20 - 14 years ago