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Posted: 14 years ago
amazng part luvd it n waiting eagerly to read next part n as war as ur creation ix cncrnd its outstanding😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan taking care of geet...
the end was... lol...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...maan cauterising her wound...oh this must have been painful...n then the last bit ...lol...geet thought she was dreaming about her future married life...lol...i loved the last line...:

Before anyone could be warned, the entire house was filled with her screams.

continue soon n thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg omg omg omg I Luuurveeed it!! 😃
Right from when Maan tended Geet's wounds so lovingly and actually sat there so that She wont turn and hurt her wounds .. Ahh so much hard work and he eventually slept with there.. 😉 Not that I mind .. Ofcourse not .. 😆 Coming to when Geet gains consiousness. . Loo She's imagining a married life with a billionare.. That was cracking .. Loved it! And Opppss .. haha Cant wait for the next one .. I wonder how Maan will be able to shut her up .. Superb one!
Continue very fast ..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Samira,

U Updated unexpectedly 🤗

Pic is awesome & well versified.

Maan venting out his anger & recalling time with geet

Liked how Maan is worried 4 Geet.

Cauterizing part though needed but it was dreadful

Geet & her fantasies 😆

Geet reminiscing & her reaction was hilarious 🤣.

Maan learn to behave with beautiful, vulnerable and fragile female or she will make u deaf with her shrieking like u did with ur guns.

P.S: this is final comment, I am leaving tomorrow early morning.

Originally posted by: _SiinnceMaan_


@ Serene love - Aww have a fun trip! I'll miss your absence.


Thnx dear 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved it... generally i dnt read running ff's but this title caught my fancy... nd here i am... commenting...loving and requesting you to update soon... also plz add me in ur list and pm me... :) have sent u d request...
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhh yeaaah!! we get an update 😃

lemme say Miss.Sammy your threat of delay in update worked and see i am commenting 😆 btween tat's not the actual reason y i am commenting... just for little flattery mentioned like that..you said like you like fake flattery 🤣

between wait wait am i talking anything sensible here? 😆 ooo girl i am following your path in commenting 😆 hope no one sees my comment and thinks i am crazy..

coming to wat i actually wanted to say...😃 it was a flawless update! 😳 <mai flattery or buttering nahi karti...> 😆 Really could feel Maan and Geet... Maan is very powerful...awww! i love this gangster 🤗 he is dangerously attractive... ☺️

now now i am impatient for the next update... 😭 waiting and looking forward to your pm... 😃 take your time and update long 🤗 you are a fabulous writer...great to come across your piece of writing... 😳

note: the second bullet was good...it increased the intensity of emotions..love you for thinking the perfect plot for the perfect time for the perfect couple in your perfect style 😆 😆 all perfect huney!! 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
uhhh... i tried sending u a buddy request bt cdnt... :( plz add me and update soon...😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 5
wow dint expect this quick update...
am praising u dear and so u better maintain this regularity always...
awesome part...
she was shot twice?
whoa...
oh Maan cares for her...
loved it very much...
he doesnt want anything to happen to her...
good good...
the precap looks damn interesting...
here she goes again...
liked the son of a gun line...ha ha ha...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update

geet and her dreams!!!!!!!!!!!!!


waiting for ur next update

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