The Gangsters Mistress M&G - 2nd Thread Link P.127 - Page 100

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ZooniBegam thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Love ur update alot!!!
Keep on writing more mrs Maan Singh phurana!!!!
Will be waiting for ur next update in u new thread!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Was it good to have a sneak peek into the Gangster's heart! Both their feelings and emotions were well described. The part was short, but I know, you're busy with Mahe Ramadhan, so I won't complain.

P.S: I'm still awaiting the reply to that PM.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello! finally got around to reading the whole ff. thanks for the pm. Hadn't read this ff before so started from the beginning, and then couldn't stop till i finished chap 10,*almost missed sehri, for i slept soo late* sorry i digress.
Samee..i mean SamIRA, pls solve my dilemma shud i giv u a big hug? or a round of applaud? for such a fine story and ur way of writing what shud i write. Girl u r really gud, really really good.
in the prologue, as it started i thot oh! geet is a cop or sumthin, for it to turnout smthing else entirely, & her thinking, my my ur geet is one crazy one (and i just love her) not one to self-pity n tears is she.Maan's sister past mad me sad, this had to do sumtin with him being what he is now. OMG!! when Maan shot Geet was i shocked? i expected he will shoot her in her arm or leg u know sumwhere it wont be life-threatening, so a shot in the abdomen was a shocker. Then Maan's concern over her well-being, going to the extent of threatening the docs, and taking care of her. my my i was totally engrossed.
For some strange reason when u were describing Maan working out instead of imaging Gurmeet i saw Shahid Kapoor*no idea y/how happened*
hawww Geet was enjoying the luxury of Maan's home, she didnt leave for more than five months, lol. And then her WOOF WOOF, rofl...
Geet has guts (somewhat). Seriously? the girl is thinking of shaving? when she's in danger. really this Geet is one of a piece.Maan is soo ryt abt her, she is different from the rest girls (she has to be, nah maan, not all geet r created by samira). awww, his reaction to the hprror and disgust in her eyes, he couldnt let her go, esp after her show of trust afore. ' am not a monster' just touched my heart. His hurting himself to punish himself and covering it up and not showing her exactly y he's behaving that way soo goes with ' he lives her more than he can ever show'. wow!!! i feel i can just go on and on...
Sam(can i call u that?), am totally hooked on ur ff, read ur os too. you are really an awesome writer, so easy to imagine what happening as is its been acted out ryt in front of me.
oh! and i like ur 'babbling' ur notes before the updates are just as fun to read as the updates.
pls continue soon, and thanks for the pm.
Ramadan kareem!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hmmm wow missing ur updates!!!!!!!
10 more pages then hoping we get updates!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

First OF all, PARDON me WOMAN i forgot where i stopped reading your FF during the time i went , uh ohhmm well you knw, MIA...😳. so im not gonna ask you that, because thats impossible😆😆, thats like asking the sky hw many times it rained😕 *i really don knw hw i linked both, well chodo thats NOT important now*... but yeah i just read your latest update, i mean part 10...😃😃


maan is so in love with geet😍😳❤️, FULL stop. thats all i can feel from the pain, lonliness... pooorrr maan and geeet..😭. they have to cope with conflicting thoughts and opinions about one another, unable to declare they do have the sparks for each other... it will be good to knw if they ever be brave to declare without any hesitations... not easy loving a gangster and not easy for a gangster to declare the love even if he is... which is what maan feeling nw...everything about the latest updates is awesomely fantastic(see i got a new adjective to describe your updates)😉😉😉

i only have one complaint... WHY WHY WHY the chapters are getting shorter and shorter?? hmm...*zaara goes to 008 mamaji mode*😕


So far the story is awesome...⭐️⭐️ like hw u made a Gangster fall in love with a wild cat... im so far loving this story also... somehow i don knw why, don think bad, i feel irrevocably yours is still irreplaceable...😳 i mean GM is great going too...😃 somehw, IY truly stole my heart away..i mean hw can i forget?? its IY that made me meet you and fall in love...❤️ *SIGH* and i knw its hard for u to keep up with the standard... u get what i mean?? that doesnt mean i don like GM... tell me do i don like anything you scribble?? i mean can i??? wont u murder me if i did??🤢


So yeah you knw i love you...*DON TELL SHANKY* 😉😉 i mean we loved each other once... 😭 before i secretly got married...😳 but im still in love with you...😃 and your work...😃😃 they are unbelievablyy uh-mazing to the extent i thought i was reading a 50-years old lecturer's work...*pardon ME* 😆😆🤣

but i have to pat you for your writing...👍🏼 shabash 👏👏👏👏 sameeeraaa...🤣🤣 i already told u before or maybe u missed my comment on your writing... so yeah, do u knw hw well u write woman?? i mean u read comments right, and there alot praising your writing... u think its for fun?? NO WAY man..u seriously write sooo goood...😳😳😃 nnn thats why i fell in love remember??😳 im sad i have no more humour left in me😭 after my marriage so im boring now...🤢😭😭 *sob sob* nevertheless, loving your humour, wittiness and craziness even today.. *blink blink*😳😉

LASTLY I HOPE U STILL REMEMBER ME... ONCE AGAIN PLS PARDON ME FOR NOT COMMENTING FOR MANY UPDATES, DON ASK ME HOW MANY😡😡 OR IM GONNA GO CRAZY COUNTING... BUT JUST SAY MANY..😔 I KNW I BEEN MEAN TO U,🤢😭 BY MARRYING ANOTHER PERSON AND STOP READING...😭 *SOB SOB* I HOPE U FORGIVE ME AND I HOPE YOU GET MY MILLION CYBER HUGS AND KISSES IM SENDING YOU... 🤗 x 1000000 times...😆

IM already spamming this thread... so i hope u give us an update much better and of course steamier☺️ than the rest...😉😳
~ZAARA, THE PHAMOUS TOILET QUEEN~
Edited by zaara25 - 14 years ago
ZooniBegam thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏 👏
For ur wonderful updates!!!
ZooniBegam thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hahaha I see that u now hav 9 more Pages!!!!!
Hmmm can't wait for ur next part !!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
IM going to spam your thread and also leave comment in a post... and im sending you him... but woman, dare you cheat me with him, i swear ill burn that tatoo too... see i can cheat shankyy with you but NO WAY you cheating me with anyone else, NOT even HIM*look BELOW*🤣🤣 and you might ask why is still send this pc... well thats for all yr HARDWRK... and also its looks more presentable to spam with his pics... don worry ill get you MSP too...😆
Edited by zaara25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

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