Pyaar ,Dosti Aur Duriyan epilogue in pg 46 dt12.09 - Page 14

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hey superbbb promo...
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Posted: 14 years ago






Next Part:-

Geet:- maan r u sure , mujhe daar lag raha hain.

Maan hugged her and said u trust me na.
Geet placed her hand on his hand and said khud se jada.

Maan then trust me and don't think and btw how is my angel now

Geet smiles and said she is fine and said papa don't worry when u r with me and mama all r fine

Maan chuckled and bend and kissed her little bump and said baby , papa is always with u but dear just scold ur mama for taking too much tension .

Geet making face and said hmmm papa –beti making team against mama.

Maan pull her cheeks and said my sweet heart how could we forget u ? u r ,my heart and she is my soul,then .

Geet smiles and hugged him tightly……

Maan:- geet take some rest later we will go to sea beach and then market.

Geet nodded and later maaneet went to sea beach. Both walking together for some time then sit in the sand and maan hold her waist and said how r u feeling here

Geet placed her head in his shoulder and said m feeling good thanks maan for this wonderful trip.and how do u feel?

Maan smiles and give a quick peck to her lips and said when u r happy and content I'm also .

Geet look at him and lost herself in his eyes.

Both looking at sun set and taking the beautiful view of the place.

Then they went to some market and buy some local things,

After some time geet feeling little tired to they went back to their cottage.

Maan order simple food for them and said to geet, jaan sit here, m coming. After some moments he takes her in his arms and placed her in the top table of the bathroom and then placed her leg in the small bathtub and massage it by hot and cold water gradually then after some times he again took her in his arms and placed on the bed then helped her changed the dress and then said relax here and don't move , m coming just after change the dress.

After change in his track pant and black vest he come and said how r u feeling now, u r looking pale.

Geet smiles and said no maan, it's happen some time and u know actually just last two days I was craving for sea fish and eat it extreme so. And making baby face.

Maan want to scold her but stop himself and said it's ok, and pls from the next time pls listen to me,

Geet:hmmm

There is bell in the main door when maan said may be dinner come I'm coming with it and don't u dare to move ur feet from here.

Geet nodded like kid and seeing this maan can't control but placed kissed on her cute nose and lips then said wait

After 10mins maan come with their dinner.

Geet smiles and said aww, u order panner curry with paratha,

Maan:-yes jaan.

Geet pouted and said but I want some pickle also .

Maan:- I will bring it here let's start the dinner fast.

Maan kept her plate there and went to take the pickle from kitchen .

Where geet put all food in one plate and then said now we will eat from one plate and giggling like small kid.

Maan come and see all food in plate and look at her with questions mark in his face when geet get up on her knees and said come here.and hold his neck and said I want to eat from ur plate and got ur love for me and our child,and I want u fed me , if u not then I'll not talk with u and left his neck and sit in the bed like kid.

Maan murmur her mood swing start great.

Then said ok jaan, now come here , he placed some pickle in the plate and then sit in the bed and take geet in his lap and fed her lovingly where geet also feed him and said maan, just one day then avhishek will come na.

Maan smiles and yes jaan, I guess u miss him.

Geet nodded then said but u r here na so I' fine but If u not with me then I don't feel good.

Maan kissed her cheek and said I'm and will always with u.

Later at night before sleeping maan put oil on her leg and massaged it lovingly and geet feel fine and said how do u know it

Maan:- dadi ma teach me then we used to know many things from ARMY,

Geet smiles to see her proud husband , MAJOR MAAN SINGH KHURANA.

She just kissed his face and said love u jaan..

Later at night , geet sleep in maan's arms where maan patted her back and head lovingly and make her sleep peacefully.

They roam next day only some local markets and beach and then back cottage as next day their family will come and they will be more busy.

After eating dinner maan make geet sleep on the bed and then he went to complete some work .

After 40mins , when he return he seen geet is mumbling something and kept tossing in the bed he quickly goes besides her and take her in his arms and soothed her by patting her back then geet falls back to sleep .

Tears continuous flowing from her eyes and said pls mere bacche ko maat maro pls but they killed her child and she faint.

Later she stand in the beach alone and Geet looking at then sea and the waves and think just like this waves crashed in the shore ,and crashed everything and here her world also .

Geet shouts maaannn and here maan is preparing morning break fast for her so he is in kitchen now but after hearing he runs there and seen geet is panting and searching for him and tears flowing from her eyes , he quickly take her in his arms and soothing her . after some time geet calm down and fall on sleep.

Later dadi ma and whole family come but maan said that geet is little unwell so still sleeping

They decided to see her later when dadi ma said kya hua beta ? kya usse sab pata chal gaya hain

Maan :-nehi,I'll not tell her now this is not right time she will shatter how much strong she is still it's too delicate matter and I don't want to put her any stress full condition for any reason , for me her well being is most dadi ma.

Dadi ma look at him with proud eyes then said par beta if she know it … when maan stopped her and Maan:- dadi ma do u trust me

Dadi ma:-yes beta

Maan:- then leave it to me I'm doing everything for her well being.

Dadi ma nodded in yes and agree with him.

Later when geet wake up and said good morning maan.

Maan said good after noon jaan, how r u feeling,

Geet spread her hand to hugged him and maan take her in his arms and said r u feeling hungry now.

Geet nodded in no and said tumne thori der pehele utha ke toh khila dia break fast like me eat lunch and dinner together now don't feel to eat.

Maan laughed and said good , let's have bath ,I'll put hot water in the bathroom.

Geet nodded when said where is every one

Maan:-I send them to seen some local place as they feeling bore and before they come back I want some time alone with my wife and bit her earlobe and she let out a moan when maan smiles and kissed her eyes and said let's take bath first.

After bathing , geet sat on the bed and put her mangal sutra and sindoor when maan come with some fruit and a glass of milk, But geet frowned when maan said don't do that jaan , nothing will help u , now come here and finish and maan make her eat all .and take the milk also.

After some time geet looking at maan and said abhishek kaise hain

Maan:-he is fine and don't worry I told Priya to let abhishek sleep tonight with us

Geet smiles and hugged him and said u r sweet heart.

Maan :-hmmm, only sweet heart.

Geet smiles and said my jaan, my sweetu, my darling and keep kissing his whole face but intentionally left his lips and when maan look at her but she just giggled and quick gave a peck and almost runs from there but maan shouts geet, don't run and geet have to stop when maan said geet grow up ,

Geet turns and said I'm and much better than u, look at ur face how u look like some one snatch some thing from a little kid and she continue laughing and maan feels happy to see her smiling like this.he wish all time geet is smiling like this and he just want to see her like this all time

Later the evening, Maan kissed her lower lips then to her jaw to her chin to her throat to collar bone and then bit her shoulder.

Geet moaned maan when maan, licked the place to sooth her then kissed there then cover them both with blanket and love her from head to toe , cherished her by his immense love , care passion for her and give her all his love and passion . drive him a new world , take her to place and then bring her again.

After some time ,Both r panting and maan said love u baby.

Maan kissed her lips gently and then bend and kissed her little bump and said love u darling.

Geet smiles to see the love for their child having from maan and the way he is waiting for his child ,she is so happy for it . Then, both snuggled in to each other arm.

Later at the night time all r meet with geet and chatted some time but dadi clearly said to take rest every one as they whole day in out side so looking tired and geet also need some rest but geet take abhishek from Priya and said he will stay with them tonight and Priya agreed .

In maaneet's room, geet patted abhishek for sleep when maan said Neel is boyfriend of pari .

Geet nodded in yes and then said how do u know ?

Maan smiles and said Mrs khurana I have also some source ,

Geet look at him then said well either pari told u that is impossible jitna bhi tum acch se baat karo she will shake in fear in front of u and then it's either yash or adi.

Maan:- so vicky also in dark like me till some times ago.

Geet:- well, may be don't know ,actually last few days he is too busy and I don't' find him to talk with this matter so.

Maan :-hmmm

Chalo so jao good night

Geet:- good night

Both slept and abhishek sleeping between them.

Next day morning , geet wake up and find abhishek sleeping peacefully and remember early morning maan feed her milk and how he heated the milk from kitchen , how caring he is .

Geet see him standing in the balcony when she come and stand besides him and said kya hua maan.

Maan remember about his parents and how he missed them and feel sad when geet also feel sad but she take brave face and said maan I understand it , but u have dadi ma na, she always give u love of mama and papa and u know what I know u will be best papa of my son. When maan look at him and him feel good little then said not son daughter but yes next time we should think about son.

Geet pouted and said let's see then said u know maan ,papa and mama r proud of u and u know they r blessing u from there and make him see the light blue sky , he look at there and then hold geet by his hand and said yes they will proud of u to see how sweet there daughter in law, I wish if today they r and then hugged her tightly and silence tears fall from their eyes .

Their thought, grief break by abhishek's cry when maan runs to him and take him in his arms and calm him.

Geet seen it and think U will best papa maan when maan turn and seen geet looking at him lovingly he just pull her in his arms and cradle her by another arm and kissed her head and said love u and my daughter ,

Geet smiles and give a gentle peck on his lips.

Precap:-

Geet in labor room



Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago

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