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Posted: 14 years ago


1st things 1st Marvee loads & loads of
to you for such a fantastic update 👏


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You know people always strive for perfection . I feel your updates are an Example of Perfection . The way you write is mind-blowing , the way you justify the sub-plots in sync with your title "Untold Emotions" is fantastic & lastly the characterization of the protagonists , Geet & Maan is prolific 👏

I'm amazed by the way I'm left @ loss of words after each of your mind-blowing updates ; & this is your 1st ever attempt . Glitter StarGlitter StarGlitter Star


Coming to the update . The bed scene was sensuality @ its best ; but what surfaced was pure & simple Love that these 2 have for each other . Loved the witty inputs you gave like the cologne part , facing back to Maan , no bra 😈 !!! 😆 Too good !!


The office part was like a double treat . Geet gave her intro as Maan's wife 👍🏼
Human & robot 😆
Omg !!! I loved how Geet gave it to Sasha 👏 1st her addressing , her dress code & finally how she should address Geet 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Maan thought he could get away getting Geet jealous 😈 But this Geet simply knows her trump card 👍🏼 Entry of another handsome male employee 😈
Oooh !!! I can only imagine how the next update will be .
To add to everything the precap was simply like a Cherries
on top of a delicious update .

In a nutshell Brilliant , Excellent & Perfect update .
Keep it up Marvee !!! You're 1 heck of a writer !! 👏

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Lastly my heartfelt
for Thread 2 of "Untold Emotions"
May you have many ,many more & it triples & quadruples the success of its former .
My
to you ...
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amzu32 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congrats!!!
Loved the update!!!
cont soon.

Thnks for the pm.
mandymore thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fab prt,geet is so cute n stubborn.office to ab lively ho jayega.sasha ki to band baj gayi.omg msk dont challlenge geet she will do extra than asked.cont soon precap is so tempting.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowoo wowoo amazing yaar...m just in love wid ur FF...n d precap already gav me butterflies...heheh..waiting for it desperatly...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

congrets new thread... ufff maar dala... nice part...

and precap... i m loving the punishment ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congrrts on the New thread ..
Amazing part ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congrats for new thread n awsome update
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing
omg
plzzz do a nxt update
i loved how geet told sasha off
omg it was to funny
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Posted: 14 years ago
marjaawaaan
hell of an update
wow
awesome yaar
loved it infact my love for maangeet is growing by day
lov u tooo
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congrats On New Thread. Nice Updates.

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