Humari Daastan FF Updated Part 7B Page 40 - Page 32

Originally posted by: sarach

liked the update after such a long wait..it sould b long..but liked it

Originally posted by: -vodkatiny-

accha to interesting addition!

this dude is filthy and disgusting!!!

why was Khushi so effected by shyam bein around??

interesting ...!!!!

aagey jaldi likho Baba... aur haan, please dont link Sham with Khushi ... hate that man !!!😡

Originally posted by: sweet1210

I dont like shyam
update soon

Originally posted by: littlemoi

ugh i hate shyam!! nice update!!

continue soon!

Originally posted by: mohini4u

baba baba baba!!! Please apne aap ko itne sundar sundar lafzon se mat nawaaziye!! -> utterly horrible writer<- arrey hamare complaint karne ke liye bhi toh kuch chod dijiye!!! yahaan toh sabhi aap hi ne bol diya ji! 🤣 I am absolutely loving the song lyrics idea, though I will deeply miss your oneliners. Because they carried all the depth your episodes needed, and then some more! Par baat agar gaano ki hai toh hum shikayat kar hi nahi sakte ☺️

Glad you like the idea Monz! Haha - aur kabhi kabhi hum khud apni tareef mein kuch lafz istemaal kar lete hain! 😆😉

ROFL @ your disclaimer! aap nahi batate toh humein pata hi nahi chalta 😉 just kidding.. I guess aap ke readers ko humor karne ke intention se hi toh woh dala hai na aap ne? 🤪 Lijiye ho gaya mission accomplished! 😆

Aur nahi toh kya?! What if you all thought I was an amazing secret lyricist? Just ensuring there is no confusion! 😛😆

waise ek baat toh zaroor hai... continuity ki baadshah.. nahi nahi begum ho aap 🤣 (Translation mein bole toh, queen not king 🤣) Damn hum kuch serious kehne ki koshish kar rahe the aur khud hi has pade 😆 ya so what I was saying was, you give your updates after such intervals but it is so easy to pick up where we left off. There is not even a little disconnect in your episodes! I find that amazing and truly intriguing. When that door of the balcony opened suddenly, what happened next was something I was least expecting. So it felt not only linked, but filled with suprise quotient. I absolutely loved the twist in HD. The peacefully, romantically and steadily moving "Hamari Daastan" with the undercurrent of suspense, just got all the more dramatic and gripping. ❤️

Thank you so much Monz! This comment truly means a lot! ❤️ Aur filmy Baba ki kahaaniyon mein kabhi bhi drama ki koi kamhi nahi hogi! 😉

aap ka aaj ke gaane ka choice apt tha! It covered basically the whole rest of the scene following it!

I can't take credit for this! 😳

waise aap ki writing style - uff! 🤢 I always look out for the choice of words you use when you describe scenes or emotions. And I get lost in them! But I keep feeling like I very often repeat myself, so I won't delve into too many details. You know what I mean. I just love your comparisons and descriptions. Be it fear in Khushi's voice or Arnav's reaction to hearing about Shyam from Kaka. ❤️

This really means a lot! Your comments are always so encouraging, sometimes I wonder if my work is even worth the time and effort you put into your comments! 😳🤢

Par yeh toh I guess technical baatein hui, which I keep learning from you! 😳 The best part is your attention to detail. Arnav ensured that though he was fuming in anger and overbubbling with various emotions, he didn't leave Khushi alone and ran out. He made sure Kaka was there to bring Khushi along since she would have trouble walking down the stairs. I loved it. 😍 Instincts never change haina? A lover is never only a lover na? The protectiveness can be brotherly or paternal... and the need for pampering can be of a child! And similarly with a girl too! She too would give back in all different avatars... Oops sorry, going off on a tangent! Carrying on...

You got it bang on! Instincts are within us all and they come out in different forms depending on the role we are playing in a certain situation, i.e. daughter, sister etc. ⭐️

baba itni romantic love story mein itna sara suspense? jaaney hoga kya? 😆 hum toh bas yahi kahenge.. please please jaldi update kijiyega 🤗 can I bribe you with bonus hugs? 🤣

Baba aur rishwat?! 😲 Anarth ho jayega!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆😉

Ohho finally leech man ki entry ho hi gayi hamari sundar si daastan mein!! saam babu... kaahe aa gaye iha bhi rang ma bhang daalne ka waaste! 😡 Khair jaane dete hai! Hamara Angry Young Man ASR kaafi hai usey tackle karne ke liye!

Ab har kahaani mein koi na koi villain toh hota hai na? Don't worry, aapne bilkul sahi kaha, ASR kaafi hain unko sambhal ne ke liye! 😉😃

😭 Uff he came to snatch that little girl away from Anjali? 😡🤢 The whole scene was build very well. ⭐️ From Shyam's taunts, to Khushi's secret tears, to Anjali's helplessness, to Arnav's anger and defense. I am especially amused at how he went on doing "Tu teri" to shyam. Rightfully so, why would ASR want to give any respect to the slimebag? But it increased the gravity of the crime Shyam must've committed in the past which made Arnav disrespect him to this degree. Well established plot in just a few lines Baba! 😳

I'm glad you picked this up Monz! Makes me feel like I'm doing something right! ⭐️

And finally, such a low comment from Shyam at the end... uss sey aur kuch ummeed bhi kya ki jaa sakti hai? 🤢 But this cliffhanger was no better.. I was like oh shoot, is our Angry Hero going to punch his face now... aur yeh dekho... part khatam! 😆 ab hum kya kahe aap se baba! raato ki neend udaana toh koi aap se seekhe.. dekhiye! Subah ke 6 baje tak jagkar hum aap ko reply kar rahe hai 😉

Wow! I'm once again blown away Monz! Seriously - you're amazing. ❤️

Yeh part sach mein dhamakedaar tha... of completely different flavor from anything you've written so far. This face off was definitely entertaining to read! Looking forward to more rift.. along with more romance of course ☺️

Keep watching this space! 😉 🤗❤️

aap please likhte rahiye aur hamein treats dete rahiye!!!

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