MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140.

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#781

AMAZING UPDATE...

LOVELY...😊

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Mou.

@Mou.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#782

i loved the end talk the most...i m not saying that i didn't love the romane part.i loved that too...lol..but the insecurity that Nupur was feeling & mayank's perfect words to wash those away...the things they talk abt being a couple was exactly what i wanted to see.how could u understand these things abt relationship so well magician? truly magical update!!

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bhargavi

@gopi06

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Posted: 14 years ago

#783

beautiful updt
thanks for the pm

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#784

omg kinzu how?? how do u manage 2 make me speechless in ur every update??
Beautiful update...
luvd it 2 d bits!

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#785

superb update

luved the morning part n kids were sooo cute.awee...unka school miss ho gaya.

luved mayank staring at her n nupur was hell nerversous.. the last part was amazing

luved the way, he assured her and she said "i love u"...

now waiting fr his answer... fantastically written

plzzz update soon

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#786

just wonderful...amazing...😊

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Tasnim

@C_O_O_L

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Posted: 14 years ago

#787

awww.lovely update...

sooo nice

cont soon

can't wait for mayank's confession...

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#788

Finally one confess the feeling of completeness with utmost sincerity...I ws waiting for this...And wat a perfect moment to confess...
The morning scene ws lovely...But the last part ws beyond everything...The way mayank gave her the assurance that their relationship will never be regretted and washed away all her insecurities ws amazing...U r brilliant in describing emotions...Magical part...
Cont soon...

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Ally

@.PINK.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#789

awww Kizzi such a beautiful part na 😍😍

but sachi mein it went so fast, all I remember is I was reading it and then it was already ended😒

when I saw ur pm, I ran to read it 😆

sachi mein sis, diz part iz beyond amzinGG!!!

toh MayUr wakezz up when kidz knockz

n dey crying n hiccuping telling Nupz dat dey have been knocking for such a long time, OMG n Nupz blushing

n Mayu continues staring @ her whole time 😳which makez Nupz even blush more 😆

sope he tellz kidz to not go to skool dat day since dey were already late, n den dey leave

Nupz wanted to go with dem, but Mayu stopped n told her she didn't say god morning to him 😆

n awww his parent died bc of fire, n he didn't like his di b4, n he alwayz thought bc of Rahul Kanchi died, n he didn't like him b4 either, but of corse, it waz his son na :S

sachi mein you wrote diz part beautifully

I loved loved every single part frm da starting to ending

n da last line when Nupz sed

ILY Mayu😍😍

plezz plezz plezz continue ASAP na sis

n awww I should say thank u 2 u na, 4 writing such wonderful FF 🤗 sachi mein I loved reading every single part 🤗

love ya

-Linu

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#790

Both parts were awesome, Mayank gave full support to her which she needed at that tym n i was imagining mayank's michieviously smile which he gave to nupur, kinza v r jst blessed with a wonderful writer lyk u, thanku sweet n Ramazan Mubarak!

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