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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Saaannaaa!!! Replyyy and tell me when my update's coming!!!

Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai..šŸ˜†
It's coming..!! I haven't even written Armaan's bit down..!! DOn't blame me..elsectricity went off for a good few hours..!! 🤢🤢
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maitree nice idea! Aanya should also join in with her weapon! And now, I bring in the ultimate-All Armaan's in the world are on their knees, with roses in their hands, but they'll give them to you Sanaa, only if you update! Imagine, Armaan in a SupArmaan T-shirt! Then another one in that transparent yellow shirt! Then another in his white vest, showing off all his biceps! And another one *ahem ahem* in his half shorts showing off his abs! They're all on their knees! Just for you! One from AWOTB, one from LI, one from MTB, one from TWOS!!, and one obviously from my favourite - LOOC! And the LAST one from DMG singing Asmani for you with a guitar in his hand! All so you'll update! Will you d it for these Armaan's Sanaa? They're all pouting, and smiling with their cute dimples and those electrifying blue eyes!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Maitree nice idea! Aanya should also join in with her weapon! And now, I bring in the ultimate-All Armaan's in the world are on their knees, with roses in their hands, but they'll give them to you Sanaa, only if you update! Imagine, Armaan in a SupArmaan T-shirt! Then another one in that transparent yellow shirt! Then another in his white vest, showing off all his biceps! And another one *ahem ahem* in his half shorts showing off his abs! They're all on their knees! Just for you! One from AWOTB, one from LI, one from MTB, one from TWOS!!, and one obviously from my favourite - LOOC! And the LAST one from DMG singing Asmani for you with a guitar in his hand! All so you'll update! Will you d it for these Armaan's Sanaa? They're all pouting, and smiling with their cute dimples and those electrifying blue eyes!

You define evil Shru..!!! I'm honestly speechless..!!!!
FINEEE..I'm still working on it..!! Just pray that electricity is there throughout..šŸ˜†
*Grits teeth* EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oooh I luuurrrvvv this idea šŸ˜†

*Clears throat* Here I go:

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He sat there, looking aimlessly at the stars in front of him. The wind whispered in his ear and it only amplified the grief that had been choking his heart since what seemed like forever, now.

Everything reminded him of it. The rustling of the leaves, the thudding of his heart, everything. Suddenly, thunder cracked and he was jolted out of his thoughts. Realizing he had unknowingly let a few tears escape, he wiped them with the back of his hands, hoping that it would come soon. He missed it. More than ever. Nothing was the same without it. He couldn't help but close his eyes as the pain engulfed him once more, reaching the very core of his essence. And he broke down. Armaan Malik. The man who made others smile, broke down. Tears oozed out of his eyes and his body hunched in defeat. Only one thing could make this better.

"Armaan?"

His head shot up and he tried to see through his tear filled eyes. "Basket." he whispered. He wiped his tears, but they wouldn't stop today. Unless he saw what he wanted, nothing would ease the pain.

She engulfed him in her arms, stroking his hair whispering "I love you" to him, as he buried his face in the crook of her neck, breathing in her fragrance.

"Baby, what's wrong?" she asked him, worry lacing her voice. She had never seen him cry like that. Like a broken man.

He looked into her eyes, his piercing blue gaze, tearing through her conscious and making her lose any sanity she had left. She raised her hands to cup his face. Looking into his eyes, she kissed him softly. Moving back, she whispered against his lips. "Armaan? Mujhe nahi bataoge?"

He looked at her forest green eyes, that were filled with a thousand questions.

"Woh actually..."

"Armaan?"

"Woh umm Basket, I was sad because..."

"Kya hua?"

"Woh kya hai na, Sanaa ne LOOC update nahi kiya!" he said, pouting. *visual reference, below*

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LMFAO that was shit, wasn't it? 🤣

Ab toh update kar de! Armaan is crying Sanaa! :|


Look what you made Armaan do -


Bahaha šŸ˜† UPDATEEE
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Posted: 14 years ago
YOU GUYS ARE MEANNN!!!!!
BTW The electricity went AGAIN for the nth time today..!! GRRR!!!
But you guys ARE MEANNN!!! ur' MEANN!!
And Aanya even though I could guess what was coming I still couldn't stop myself reading that amazing writing of urs..!!

This is NOT FAIIRR!!! hmmm..I'll get back at each and every one of you..you wait..!!! hmmphh..
I'm off to write more..!! I barely write a page when the electrivity goes off..then comes back after like half an hour..!!! =(
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

YOU GUYS ARE MEANNN!!!!!

BTW The electricity went AGAIN for the nth time today..!! GRRR!!!
But you guys ARE MEANNN!!! ur' MEANN!!
And Aanya even though I could guess what was coming I still couldn't stop myself reading that amazing writing of urs..!!

This is NOT FAIIRR!!! hmmm..I'll get back at each and every one of you..you wait..!!! hmmphh..
I'm off to write more..!! I barely write a page when the electrivity goes off..then comes back after like half an hour..!!! =(


Yes we are mean. Yes we're going to remain that way. And YES you need to update :P

Damn! Power cuts SUCK :P Although I have an inverter šŸ˜†

Go write! Scoot! :D

And thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Although I don't think it was good at all, buuut who the hell cares as long as you update šŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
Now my turn! *ahem ahem*

Riddhima was hell bent on hunting her down. She was seeking revenge. From the person who had taken her life away from her. She would pay, Riddhima would make sure she does!

She was living a happy life. With her Armaan, her life, her heart, her soul. Her reason for living. His twinkling blue eyes shining with undying naughtiness, his dimples which would melt her in an instant, his smile which would make her day, his touch which would send shivers down her body. She smiled as she pictured him in front of her. But soon, the smile vanished as precious tears began trailing down from her eyes. He was gone. Forever. He had left her. Left her all alone.

She would make her pay for making him leave her. Her hands gripped the gun tighter; her lips curled upwards as she thought of how close she was to avenging her Armaan. He had been killed. Killed for no fault of his - all he had done was be curious. And like any other, curiosity and addiction had killed the cat. And this was only because of one person - Sanaa who refused to update LOOC. What was his fault? All he wanted was an update. But he had gotten death instead. And now, she would pay. Riddhima would make sure she did. As the thought conquered her mind, she curled her fingers around the trigger, her heart no longer hesitated, and she pulled.

"Ah!" a whimper of shock issued from her target's mouth, as she turned to face Riddhima.

"You? But I was the one who created you!" she yelled as she fell to the floor.

"and you were the one who destroyed me, by taking my life away from me! This is for Armaan!" Riddhima said icily. And once again she pulled at the trigger.

She felt her smile widen as her creator lay limp and dead at her feet. She had finally done it.

"I love you Armaan!" she whispered as a tear fell from her eye.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Now my turn! *ahem ahem*

Riddhima was hell bent on hunting her down. She was seeking revenge. From the person who had taken her life away from her. She would pay, Riddhima would make sure she does!

She was living a happy life. With her Armaan, her life, her heart, her soul. Her reason for living. His twinkling blue eyes shining with undying naughtiness, his dimples which would melt her in an instant, his smile which would make her day, his touch which would send shivers down her body. She smiled as she pictured him in front of her. But soon, the smile vanished as precious tears began trailing down from her eyes. He was gone. Forever. He had left her. Left her all alone.

She would make her pay for making him leave her. Her hands gripped the gun tighter; her lips curled upwards as she thought of how close she was to avenging her Armaan. He had been killed. Killed for no fault of his - all he had done was be curious. And like any other, curiosity and addiction had killed the cat. And this was only because of one person - Sanaa who refused to update LOOC. What was his fault? All he wanted was an update. But he had gotten death instead. And now, she would pay. Riddhima would make sure she did. As the thought conquered her mind, she curled her fingers around the trigger, her heart no longer hesitated, and she pulled.

"Ah!" a whimper of shock issued from her target's mouth, as she turned to face Riddhima.

"You? But I was the one who created you!" she yelled as she fell to the floor.

"and you were the one who destroyed me, by taking my life away from me! This is for Armaan!" Riddhima said icily. And once again she pulled at the trigger.

She felt her smile widen as her creator lay limp and dead at her feet. She had finally done it.

"I love you Armaan!" she whispered as a tear fell from her eye.



OMG this was SO good šŸ˜†

And scary...Gee I'd HATE to be on your wrong side 🤣

You murdered Sanaa, virtually *gulps* Shruuu...*says from behind the sofa* I'm shcaredd of you ...

LMAO šŸ˜†

NOW Sanaa, you know what will happen if you don't update! *evil smile*
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Posted: 14 years ago
I'm off now...got school tomorrow :P

@ Sanaa - Seeing that Tanzania is 2.5 hours behind India...which is to say it's 7.30 pm there, you HAVE to update šŸ˜† Abhi toh bahot time hai! No excuses! *bares teeth*

Wee today was so much fun! Spammed a hell lot šŸ˜†

Goodnight :)

xoxo
Aanya
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Now my turn! *ahem ahem*

Riddhima was hell bent on hunting her down. She was seeking revenge. From the person who had taken her life away from her. She would pay, Riddhima would make sure she does!

She was living a happy life. With her Armaan, her life, her heart, her soul. Her reason for living. His twinkling blue eyes shining with undying naughtiness, his dimples which would melt her in an instant, his smile which would make her day, his touch which would send shivers down her body. She smiled as she pictured him in front of her. But soon, the smile vanished as precious tears began trailing down from her eyes. He was gone. Forever. He had left her. Left her all alone.

She would make her pay for making him leave her. Her hands gripped the gun tighter; her lips curled upwards as she thought of how close she was to avenging her Armaan. He had been killed. Killed for no fault of his - all he had done was be curious. And like any other, curiosity and addiction had killed the cat. And this was only because of one person - Sanaa who refused to update LOOC. What was his fault? All he wanted was an update. But he had gotten death instead. And now, she would pay. Riddhima would make sure she did. As the thought conquered her mind, she curled her fingers around the trigger, her heart no longer hesitated, and she pulled.

"Ah!" a whimper of shock issued from her target's mouth, as she turned to face Riddhima.

"You? But I was the one who created you!" she yelled as she fell to the floor.

"and you were the one who destroyed me, by taking my life away from me! This is for Armaan!" Riddhima said icily. And once again she pulled at the trigger.

She felt her smile widen as her creator lay limp and dead at her feet. She had finally done it.

"I love you Armaan!" she whispered as a tear fell from her eye.

Ahem...Thank you for one..
1) Killing me off..!!
2) Killing Armaan off..!!
The second was sarcastic..!! Kill me off fine..BUT ARMAAN too??!!! HAWWW!!!! Shruuu!!! I'm updating nahh..!!! Don't kill him soo soon he has to read the update first..!!!

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~Love makes Life~ KRIYAANSH DRABBLE SERIES 'completed'

Banner Credit goes to -chamkilli- A girl full of enjoyment lives in a chawl, never tries to get effected by any one, she and her sis live with

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