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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#401

YAY!!! CONFESSION!

Can't wait to see more AR moments!

love how she kept cursing him while confessing! i hope nothing goes wrong... at least for a while!

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qt4ever

@qt4ever

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#402

Yayyy!
Mission accomplished!
Finally AR got together! I m so happy! Yipee
cnt asap

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scorpio95

@scorpio95

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Posted: 14 years ago

#403

i'm sooo sorry for commenting late. i just finished reading it now. anyway, coming to the part, the confession part was written sooo beautifully, and i liked the way, that after they confessed near the part, that you made it back into a light hearted mood between the two, when they were both joking with each other. loooking forward to the next part! 😊 any chance of you completing who knew. 😊 aaargh. i just realized, that after i commented for your part, i became i goldie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🥳 i'm sooo happy. ee, cause you put up a part, i became a goldie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊 thank you for updating. 😊

Edited by scorpio95 - 14 years ago

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Simmy003

@Simmy003

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#404

RES!!!

Edit- O MY GOD!!!! Sanaa!!! Reading your update just made my day!!!! :D Finally the two fools confessed, phewww!!! I'm gonna start from the beginning, where that a-hole was tryna hit on Riddhima! That creep! The way you described him, I felt soo disgusted, ewwwie! Haha but anyway, thank god we had our Superman there! 😳 Omgoshh the way he said, "Meri sab kuch" That made me get goosebumps! That was epic, no joke! <3 Then Awwieee, loved how he lied to the old lady about their engagement!! I thought that was cute! Their whole bus ride was adowable!!!! I was like, come on, you two are blind if you still can't see you guys love each other!!!! 😡 But, but...their confession made up for that <3333

First offf, poor Vidya aunty's story was heartbreaking </3 But props to her for knocking some sense into both Armaan and Riddhima! The confession was sooo touching! <3 They were saying such cute stuff to each other, it almost made me cry! Ahaha loved how Riddhima was curising him out while Armaan kept saying "I love you" to her!!! Aaah <3 Words can't even explain how beautiful the confession was Sanaa! You wrote soo amazingly! To say I LOVED it would be an understatement!

Lmfaooo @ when Armaan told her about her diary!! 🤣 I could so imagine Riddhima being embarrassed as hell! I agree with Armaan though, I thought it was adorable!!!!

All in all, it was awesomeee! One of the best updates of LOOC? I think so.. 😃

Now since AR are back together, you should update realll sooon! And oye, update Who Knew as well! 😉

Love, Simmy <33

Edited by Simmy003 - 14 years ago

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divi1oct

@divi1oct

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Posted: 14 years ago

#405

It was an awesome part..👏

Loved the confession..❤️⭐️

Thanx 4 d PM..

Continue soon..

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#406

ahhh yay!! they finally confessed :))) sooo happyy! great job! thanks for the pm

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#407

OMG sanaa!!!! i love you!!! i was waiting for this part soo much!! :D
urrgghh the guy on the bus was disgusting! i felt like doing sick than looking at him
awww armaans so sweet looking out for her! and when he almost mouthed i love you! i wish he did!

when he did "meri sab kuch" i nearly fainted! hayyeee soo romantic!

hahahaha i cant believe riddhima wanted him to beat the guy up! :P

OMG vidya aunty story was soo sad :( i wish she had gotten her true love! i could understand the fear AR had of them nt confessing their love and ruining their lives coz of it

i loved how armaan confronted riddhima bout telling her feelings...

i nearly cried reading how he felt :'(

HAYYYEEE!!! THEY CONFESSED! again :P

so cute! how riddhima was calling him names n he was like i love you! lol i loved him teasing her bout her diary! hehehe

HAAYYYEEE i loved this part!

continue it soon x

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#408

Sanaa, I'm reserving! Will edit once I'm done with work! =)

But I just wanted to let you guys know, that there's FF Awards being held on IF!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1719300/categories-for-fan-fiction-awards-2011-note-pg-6

I've voted for my best listers, please do vote for your's as well! And most importantly -

People who I haven't voted for, please do not take offence! Its nothing personal or anything, and I love your FFs obviously, but these are my favorites, and according to me, just me, they are the best! Sorry! But Best Of Luck! 😊

And to those who I have voted for! Best of luck! 🤗

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Sanaa

@Sanaa629

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: niknavyu

hiii sanaaa😃
i am super happy and for this part u surely deserve super long comments,now i am starting my longest ever comment and even u better appreciate it😉hehee..hee...he
okay first i was like yiepyy AR will have the whole bus journey sitting together with each other and would have many romantic movements but then later i realized that there was a kabab mein haddi and then there was that sick abhay whose presence actually made me happy because i was sure that he would make armaan do some heroic things and i actually loved the way how u connected armaans rescuing her thing with the old lady giving armaan her seat,and i loved the part were they both thought that the other was sleeping and then leaned on each others shoulders,it was just a picture perfect thing

now coming to them reaching lonavala 1st i was like oh no the day is over and no ar scenes,then i completely loved the vidya wala flashback part which put some sense into both the heads,and somewhere i got an hint of the nearing confessions,so i actually scrolled down the page and reading the end i was like super happy,and then again went back to where i left and even skipped few lines to reach the most awaited part even more quickly

now coming to confession u really made it natural and not a forced thing put in between to listen to readers demand,this part was beautifully written,and yiepyy armaan even told her about the diary so one future misunderstanding ka chances khatam,and them reading the diary together at the end was too cute

ufff...this is really a long comment,hope it makes u happy

love

nikki

That's what I'm looking for people..!! 😆 When I saw the length of ur comment i was like..FInally..no more reserves and a proper comment..!! SO i sat back and enjoyed it..!!!

Hahaha..if i was planning their confession this chapter..I wouldn't have put many AR moments in the journey or before the confession..it's the calm before the storm sort of thing..lolxx..

Everyone was a catalyst..Vidya..Abhay..Sara's death..Daljeet (Muskaan's father) they were all people used by me to bring AR closer together..muhuhahahahaha..Ok..i knwo I sound like a real evil person when I said that..so I'll stop..But these events that occured were all pushing AR together..why?? because I initially thought AR would get together in the second or third chapter of season 3..but then I found out it was near impossible to get them together without making it seem filmy..and unrealistic..so I had to resort to these small small things that inched them closer to each other..and voila..they were finally ready to confess..!!

Hawww..u missed a few lines..and you already guessed they were gonna confess?? Hawww..I demand you to go back and read every single word I painstakingly thought through and penned down for you guys..!! 😆😛 JK..you don't really have to..I'm just glad that that you were sooo excited..!! 😳

The diary wasn't supposed to cause any problem anyway..it was something i just mentioned and the blog readers kept on wishing he would read it so I thought..why the hell not?? It'll help him understand stuf..so honestly..everything fell in place not because of me..but because of my readers..SO i shouldn't be taking credit here..!!lolx..

Thanks sooo much again..!! Luv yah..!!

Sanaa