Life Out Of Control #2 - Page 40

Hey:))

hey buddy...

simply amazing part yaar..

loved it..

sooo finally...armi is back on his usual self...

reading this part..a smile was pasted on my lips..

hw he was teasing her...n she was already to kill him...

n that was awsum..teasing abt hot chics...n she a female devdas...haha..

viraj was sooo cute...

n ishan..wanna be gal...ish...

n the last part...along wid AR u made me shocked as well..

now wat happened to anji,...y she is behaving like this,...

update soon..

thnx for the pm...

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Thanks for being soo honest here..!! 😊 I was actually really surprised when you said this part wasn't written in my style..to be honest..I also think this part lacks intensity..however..while I was re-reading..I thought it better to be this way because the last few parts have been very very intense..since the season started actually..I mean with Sid's entry..and Armaan returning, and Muskaan Rahul Armaan drama, not to mention the conflicting thoughts and feeling between both Armaan and Ridzy, then the Sara dying part..it all seemed tooo intensified..especially considering Armaan's only been back for what..2 weeks??😕

You wanted Ridzy to know what Armaan had been through..Basically..I also thought that this chapter lacked the "TALK" between them when I was re-reading it..and yes..they willl have the talk..but for all they've been through..I think it's best for now to just let them be in the bliss of being together..Personally..that's what I would prefer..just be assured that I was with the one I love instead of go through all the grueling details and painful memories...

In the next couple of chapters..you WILL know what Armaan has been through..probably in the next chapter you'll get bits of Armaan's feelings towards this whole thing..and chapter 11 maybe 12 is when I plan to get them to "talk" about it..😊

Hope that helps..and if not..I'm really sorry for disappointing you..hope I can write up to ur expectations in the next few parts..😊

love,

Sanaa