Originally posted by: anamika2010
hey sanaa,sorry details batana hai to mai hindi mein comments deti hun,its easy for me ...pahli baat hai mai late hun but mai abhi ghar se bahar hun to time nikalna muskil ho jata hai. and tumhare ff padhne mein mujhe thora jyada time lagta hai...mai kisi bhi ff mein agar khud ko kho deti hun to wo tumhara ff hai...isliye english meaning ke liye google translate use karna parta hai...but i love it...
actually tum jab ff likhti ho,i think completely khud ko usme duba(sink) deti ho,burna itni achchi ff likha hi nahi ja sakta.mano koi dhaga (thread )ho,jo kahin bhi bilkul loose nahi hai,tuti hui nahi hai...ek line si bani hui chalti ja rahi hai...
riddhima aur arman ka bus journey ke scene,arman ka riddhima ko apna ahsaas dilana...mental support banakar rakhna..its amazing!
riddhima aur arman ka confess,har ek baat ko,misunderstanding ko dheere dheere clear karna,ek dusre ko unki jarurat ko batana..really nice!...
aur riddhima ki diary padhne se riddhima ka fake and sweet anger..actually aisa hi hota hai,hum jo apno se kah nahi pate or apna dard,khushi sab diary mein share karte hain aur wo koi apna padh le to aisa hi mahsoos hota hai...
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saare ff mein mujhe as riddhima jenny yaad aati rahi but last mein confess mein meri angel shilpa,unka confess scene bahut yaad aaya...loved the whole part...and love u too...
punam
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