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desikalakaar

@desikalakaar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#301

Sanaa!!!

I'm going to go to my SAT class, come back, and comment!

This is too good!! I can't wait to tell you how amazing you are ! ;)

-Edited (P.S. I'm back)-

HEY SANAAA!

Well what do we have there? A confession! Wow! :)

Thank you so much! Seriously. Thank you. Thank you, Thank you. Thank you. THANK YOU.

It's been so long, Sanaa. Wait nahin ho raha tha. And then I get up this morning, and I see this update. and I literally scream. In the bathroom. I got these looks from my parents when I stepped out, that they might be contemplating sending me to a mental asylum or not. So yes, I was very excited.

Shhhooo. Onto the part:

What can I say that hasn't been said before? Oh, not much, but I'll try.

Words that describe that scene (in my head):

exciting
arousing
intimate
much-awaited
amazing
awesome
touching
marvelous
stimulating
loving
melting
amusing
hysterical (well Riddhima, when she starting calling my poor baby names)
not to forget to mention...WITTY :)

I loved the part Sanaa, I have no other way to tell you how much. These words took me like an hour to come up with :)

Now, I know it's really selfish...but when are you updating next??

;)

Love,

Kriya <33

Edited by kajenkashkriya - 14 years ago

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#302

hey sana aslam
swweety thank you oo much for the pm
the part was gr8
i lov the bus scene loved the way arman saved riidhima soy ridzy from abhay
love idya anti storry
lov the riddhima yelled at arman and in the process tell him about her feelings
love the way arman tell her how he spent those mounths without her
lov ar kis acene
and affter that their again confession of felings
and in between loved the riddhimas galia he he
plz sweety continuee soon and forgiv me for the latereply
lov
maria

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caprigurl

@caprigurl

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#303

Sanaaa ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Thanku for the re-union :D
Comment more subah mein, have to run abhi but am already doing the mental equivalent of a bhangra! YES YES YES Romantic(check), rain mein(check),AR(check) confession(check) and so real :)

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#304

Sanaa! Fab update! I know I'm supposed to edit my comment, but I just got back from the group study thing and I'm dead tired, edit kal karoongi :|

Love you <3

xoxo

Aanya

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@-Spirited-

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#305

hiii sanaaa😃

i am super happy and for this part u surely deserve super long comments,now i am starting my longest ever comment and even u better appreciate it😉hehee..hee...he

okay first i was like yiepyy AR will have the whole bus journey sitting together with each other and would have many romantic movements but then later i realized that there was a kabab mein haddi and then there was that sick abhay whose presence actually made me happy because i was sure that he would make armaan do some heroic things and i actually loved the way how u connected armaans rescuing her thing with the old lady giving armaan her seat,and i loved the part were they both thought that the other was sleeping and then leaned on each others shoulders,it was just a picture perfect thing

now coming to them reaching lonavala 1st i was like oh no the day is over and no ar scenes,then i completely loved the vidya wala flashback part which put some sense into both the heads,and somewhere i got an hint of the nearing confessions,so i actually scrolled down the page and reading the end i was like super happy,and then again went back to where i left and even skipped few lines to reach the most awaited part even more quickly

now coming to confession u really made it natural and not a forced thing put in between to listen to readers demand,this part was beautifully written,and yiepyy armaan even told her about the diary so one future misunderstanding ka chances khatam,and them reading the diary together at the end was too cute

ufff...this is really a long comment,hope it makes u happy

love

nikki

Edited by niknavyu - 14 years ago

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eesha ahmed

@ssidra

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#306

hey, the part was amazing, superb, wonderfull... The most awaited confession was written so beautifully. I loved how riddhima was abusing him and Armaan was confessing his love for her...
Riddhima was so embarassed when she came to know that Armaan read her diary...
In short i loved ur upadate!!!
Thanks for pm and cont super soon

Edited by ssidra - 14 years ago

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#307

YAY!!! CONFESSION!

Can't wait to see more AR moments!

love how she kept cursing him while confessing! i hope nothing goes wrong... at least for a while!

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qt4ever

@qt4ever

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#308

Yayyy!
Mission accomplished!
Finally AR got together! I m so happy! Yipee
cnt asap

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scorpio95

@scorpio95

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#309

i'm sooo sorry for commenting late. i just finished reading it now. anyway, coming to the part, the confession part was written sooo beautifully, and i liked the way, that after they confessed near the part, that you made it back into a light hearted mood between the two, when they were both joking with each other. loooking forward to the next part! 😊 any chance of you completing who knew. 😊 aaargh. i just realized, that after i commented for your part, i became i goldie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🥳 i'm sooo happy. ee, cause you put up a part, i became a goldie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊 thank you for updating. 😊

Edited by scorpio95 - 14 years ago

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Simmy003

@Simmy003

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#310

RES!!!

Edit- O MY GOD!!!! Sanaa!!! Reading your update just made my day!!!! :D Finally the two fools confessed, phewww!!! I'm gonna start from the beginning, where that a-hole was tryna hit on Riddhima! That creep! The way you described him, I felt soo disgusted, ewwwie! Haha but anyway, thank god we had our Superman there! 😳 Omgoshh the way he said, "Meri sab kuch" That made me get goosebumps! That was epic, no joke! <3 Then Awwieee, loved how he lied to the old lady about their engagement!! I thought that was cute! Their whole bus ride was adowable!!!! I was like, come on, you two are blind if you still can't see you guys love each other!!!! 😡 But, but...their confession made up for that <3333

First offf, poor Vidya aunty's story was heartbreaking </3 But props to her for knocking some sense into both Armaan and Riddhima! The confession was sooo touching! <3 They were saying such cute stuff to each other, it almost made me cry! Ahaha loved how Riddhima was curising him out while Armaan kept saying "I love you" to her!!! Aaah <3 Words can't even explain how beautiful the confession was Sanaa! You wrote soo amazingly! To say I LOVED it would be an understatement!

Lmfaooo @ when Armaan told her about her diary!! 🤣 I could so imagine Riddhima being embarrassed as hell! I agree with Armaan though, I thought it was adorable!!!!

All in all, it was awesomeee! One of the best updates of LOOC? I think so.. 😃

Now since AR are back together, you should update realll sooon! And oye, update Who Knew as well! 😉

Love, Simmy <33

Edited by Simmy003 - 14 years ago