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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#161

well written update...thanx😊
waiting for the next...

Edited by -Nilam- - 14 years ago

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

heartbreaking part

fantastic job

waiting waiting

thnx pm

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#163

nice update..!

i hope everything vl b bak on d track and maan vl soon find his geet...

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Aaksha

@princess.rocks

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#164

so awesome

loved it so much

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#165

hiii anu...
tujhe aaj main chodungi nahi...😡
itna rondhu update diya tumne...
u showed maan as dead for most part of the update😡
geet bawling her eyes out and dadi as unconscious...i am goin to kill u...
and those bas***ds ronak and his dad celebrating the success of their horrific and disgusting plans...
well i keeeping my fingers crossed for the next update..where i suppose u r going to show the prologue and i am curious why maan will b furious with geet as shown in the prologue...
lekin agar if u have any plans of separating them, the i am gong to throw all my jhootis, tamatars, eggs,boulders and brooms on u😆...
so next update likhne ke pehle mere dhamki pe gaur karna😆..
aur agar phir bhi, if u separate them, then i am going to electrocute u and make u lose ur memory..
phir u can give company to maan in GHSP😆

BTW..inspite of the update being very sad, it was wonderfully penned down, especially geet's anguish and unfailing hope that maan is not dead...
BTW just wanted to ask did u take inspiration from Ekta mata...only K serials end up with all the happy moments going down the drain by bumping off the leads or making them meet with some accdent, proving that evil wins over truth...just kidding😆
keep writiing
love u and ur ffs loads
reva

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

Thank you so much that Maan is safe *phew*

The codition of Dadi & Geet was

I wonder what Geet would do now that she knows the truth 🤔 about Maan's "accident"

I hope Maan remembers Geet ; I mean I hope you're not planning amnesia of Maan .

Lovely part 👍🏼 👍🏼

Thanks for pm ...😊

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#167

Amazing update , I hope nothing happens to geet. Hope to see maan back soon.

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Saru

@smallville

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

Awesome update!!!
I hope gets better soon!

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#169

OMG...Maan ka accident...n he is nowea 2 b found for geet...😲
rahul ki to mein🤬...
he kidnapped geet...😡...how dare he????😡
oh god...!!! hope he does not do nythn bad wid geet...me is worried for geet nw cz she is not safe wid dat🤬rahul...!!!!!
hope maan gets well...oh n hope he's nt got memory loss...😒
loved the update...
hey babaji...sab kuch thik kar dena...!!!!
update sooon😉