'AASTHA'-Maaneet FF-PART 1 RE-WRITTEN - Page 43

awesome update!!
lovd it!!!👏

Thanx for the PM.It was really a lovely update😉.Loved the past,the way they met was mindblowing. Maaneet started thier journey with a kiss😉.U have descriped thier meeting fantasticly,that was totally awesome.Right Maan still holds the same power with which he captured her at first,she can't deny that.Geet is denying him the marriage,but how she will face Daksh when he will ask Geet that he wants to live with his Papa like other kids do in his class.Hope Geet agrees for the marriage keeping Daksh in her mind,she can give chance to Maan later on,but it is better she agrees for the Marriage with Maan before Daksh demands her.Curious to read more about the past and how they got close,do continue... Love this fiction🤗.U are an amazing wirter.

Hi I m Deepa . I really like your story. I have been a silent reader on this forum from past 3 years. This is the fist time I m commenting on a story. I like the way you described each character feelings and emotions. U said u inspired by a novel can you pls tell me which novel is that? please add me in your friends list.

wat a first meeting!dev was geet's friend too, how cud he do that to her :(

Can we expect an update today?

loved the updates...
very beautiful ff...:)

nice concept...do continue soon...do pm me when u update next pls...

hey nice update 😊 hope geet agrees for d marriage

Originally posted by: luvabbybaby

I loved it! The past was amazing and can you write more of the past? PWETTY PLEEZZ? Like their actual consummation scene, u wrote some parts of it (when he proposed I think with the ring) I loved it truly and deeply! Please update asap, ur updates were missed!

Thank hunny!

I actually want Maan to repent some more (I think he barged into their lives and lacks any vocal remorse that might melt Geet further!) Even when they first met . . . He's more forcing himself on them (I get why he has a son) but the same can not be expected from Geet! She's used to leading a life without him and him pushing and forcing is to me forcing her to make a decision (based on what they had, Daksh's future, etc.)

So I want him to repent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Even if Geet says yes, I want it to take longer for them to be all loving, etc! Since he is forcing her, and if she agrees, I would hope that if they do get married they stride slowly into any signs of a relationship.

Love

Liz

p.s UPDATE SOON PLZZZ CAN't WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: angili

👏👏 fabulas great job honey