'AASTHA'-Maaneet FF-PART 1 RE-WRITTEN - Page 15

Loved it dear, plsss update soon and also PM your new ff the twice born.

Well, this FF is not what I had expected it to be (not meant in a neg way.)

Usually we see Maan pleading and geet giving in, or Maan getting closer to his child which finally convinces Geet.

But here, Maan keeps his distance, knowing that he was wrong and how much Geet must have suffered living on her own, being left by the one person she had trusted would believe her.

And even now, his main concern is not how to get his child but also how to get Geet back. the last bit, where he threatens her is a bit harsh but I agree with him, neitehr he nor Geet want to dran their son into something like this. I strongly believe that small children should be kept far away from fighting parents, it had a really bad affect on them.

He wants her to be happy and also wants his happiness (which we all know finally lays in the same thing). I wonder how Maan's father will react. True, now that Maan knows that his father played dirty tricks on him, making him lose his love and child, he will not beleive his father anymore. But I am sure Vikrant Singh Khurana is not going to give up that easily either, is he?

Ok, this is probably the longest comment I have ever written but your story facinates me.

Keep up the good work.

Awesome updates 👏

absolutely phenomal...both are doing what they should be doing...maan trying his very best to get into their lives and geet trying her very best to get him and his family out of hers and daksh's...still would love a fairy tale in the end...i really hope they work things out where daksh can have both of them in his life...waiting for the next part eagerly...

Wonderful update...Both are in pain...can't wait to read Geets decision

lovely updates...wil b waitg to knw wt happens next...

thank yu thank yu double treat

awesome ...

totally great! maan better make amends at once!