FF IT COULD BE A LOVE STORY imp read pg21 - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing part
love it
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks a lot guys for you lovely comments they are really valueable to will post next part tomorrow love you all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update!!!
loool both dialled each others nos at the same time so both phones were busy ahahahha
loved this update
cannot wait for the next part
CONTINUE SOOON =D XX
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waiting 4 ur update dear...😊
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Part 6

Those 25min where like 25 years long for maan as well as geet as soon as 25 min got over maan took his cell and dialed geets no where as geet rushed out of the lecture and dialed maans no'. both getting others no buzy'..

Maan thinking chatterbox kab phone rahegi aur mein kab usse bat kar paunga geet pouted her lips MR-I-AM-TOTALLY-FREE pata nahi kab phone se free hoga geet again tried maans phone finally the ring passed he picked up the call in the first ring with a huge smile on his face'.

Geet: aap kisse baat kar rahe the

(maan skipped his heartbeat hearing the most sweetest voice in the world)

Maan: mein tumhe he phone try kar raha tha "GEET" but you wer bzy sumwhr else

(the word "GEET" from his mouth fell like heaven to her she never felt her name so amazing so special in her life his voice brought a big smile on her face )

Geet: oh!! Toh aap muje call kar rahe the koi kam tha kyah?????

Maan: ha voh actually mein voh puchna cha raha tha ki voh ha k eco assignment mein kitne pages cover karne hai????

Geet (making a sad face): aap ne islia call kiya tha

Maan: aur by the way tumne muje kyuh call kiya tha???? Why were you trying my no. hmmm'..

Geet (confused): ha voh mein na mein voh yahi eco project k bare mein batane k lia call kiya tha muje laga ki aap confuse ho rahe honge about project so I thought to clear it out

Maan (with a smile on his face): sachi?????

Geet(stammering): hhhaaa sachi'

Maan (in mood to tease her): oh sachi I tell you'. You are such a big lier

Geet (twisting her lips): mein lier hu mein ne sachi muchi assignment k lia call kiya tha muje aur koi kam nahi tha!!!!!

Maan: acha eaasaaa muje laga ki

Geet (cutting maans sentence in middle): aap ko kyah laga aap ko jo laga aisa kuch bhi nahi hai'.

Maan: acha geet muje yeh toh batao muje kyah laga

Geet (confused what to say):muje laga ki voh mein voh voh ha voh muje Rajji di bula rahi hai I need to go'.

Maan: ruko geet mein mazak kar raha tha so you attended your lecture?????

Geet: ha voh bhi aap ki vahje se muje pura lecture attend karna pada verna mera I was not at all interested in attending the lecture

Maan: ha that toh I know much you like studies and lecture

Geet: aab mein di toh hu nahi that I attend all the lecture regularly

Maan: acha aur tum rochan ko kaise janti ho?????

Geet: voh di ka bestest friend hai and he has always been like an elder borther to me'.

Maan: ohk ji'..

Geet: pata hai "MAAN" muje rohan aur di ko chidane meinitni maza ati hai na uski koi limit he nahi hai and when I come to know any of their secret I just love to blackmail them aur aaj sirfaap ki vahje se mein fas gai aap kitne chugal khor ho''

(maan was completely lost in her words it was the first time she said "MAAN" from her mouth it was the best feeling he ever experienced in his life)

Geet: hello aap kaha kho gaye????

(this brought him to the reality he was brought down to the real world from his dreamland)

Maan: kyah kaha tumne????

Geet: mr dreamy what were you dreaming about (and she started all her blabbering again)

Maan: mein chugal khor hu aur khud jo ulti sidhi harkate karti rehti ho uska kyah????

Geet(twisting her lips): mein ulti sidhi harkate karti rehti hu aaj agar aap mein muje meri chugli kar k fasaya nahi hota na toh aaj bhi us rohan ko kuch pata nahi chalta

Maan : geet mein chugal khor nahi hu it was all your fault aur fir bhi mein usse compensate kar ne k lia mein pura assignment bhi toh kar raha hu'..

Geet: ha voh toh hai'..

(suddenly dev entered maan's room maan was first time nervous seeing jay)

Maan : suno I will call back you in some time have some really urgent work

Geet: ohk buhbyeee

Maan: byeee tc'

Both hang up the call

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jay: maan kyah hua kisse bat kar raha tha why are you looking so shocked seeing me

Maan (bit stammering): ha voh mein papa ki company k employee se baat kar raha tha nothing so important or special (only maan knows how special and important it was) about it'. You say what you doing here what are your plans

(jay felt something fishy but he ignored it)

jay: hmmm getting bored lets go to club

Maan: abhi????

jay: nahi kal chalet hai mein abhi bore ho raha hu toh obviously abhi chalte hai'.

Maan (didn't wish to but still): ohk lets go

(the whole way he was thinking about geet finally he text her "hey am stucked with a friend so cant talk to you right now will call you later ohk byee tc")

Geet: k you also take care'

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Days passed even months passed they both came really close to each other whole day and night they kept on chatting or talking with each other sharing every to tits bits of their life with each other it was four months that they became friends (or should I say their relationship started) but they were so addicted to each other that there was not a single hour in a day that they spend without taking to each other they both started falling for each other their relationship was out of this world that no words could explain''''

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Here rajji and rohan was confused and suspected geets behavior as she started attending lectures and after classes was often buzy with her cell. On the other hand the same condition was with dev and meera they always found maan interested only with this cell he would be always buzy with his mobile whenever they hangout''

Preacp: oops maaneet reveling their relationship in front of rajji rohan jay and meera but they haven't seen each other yet and they are in relationship'..

What will happen "jab maan and geet met" (or should I say when they saw each other)

Note:

sorry guys am going out of station for 10 days so wont be able to post'.. but pls pls keep on commenting when I come back I want to see loads and loads of all your lovely comments n don't miss to hit like button the silent readers are specially requested to comment!!!!!!!!!!!!

Buhbyeee miss yew all hope to see yew all soon!!!!!!!!!!

Love yew

Taashu''

Edited by tasshuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
lovely update dear
and it s ok u enjoy ur life

we will wait for ur next update
but cant wait more than 10 days ok
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
Nice part
Have a nice time, take care
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
nice update!!!
Aahhh!!!! 10 days to wait when Maan & Geet come face to face...but anyways have a save journey & enjoy ur trip
Keep up the good work
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful part
love it
have save journey
i'll be waiting
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update...waiting 4 maaneet meeting...😍

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