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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gunurlove

Hey S3 and Joseph'...😊

First of all Thanks God..Joseph is now fine...'hope he get completely alright very soon'...😃

I was not expecting this update quite soon'I thought this time we would have to wait for very long'..but fortunately u updated this quite long long update in one single go without any break''''.it was really treat for all of us''that's y I have taken so much time to read it and as usual became so late to comment'...

But Update was Superb''Mind blowing awesome as usual'..love each n every scene of this update..though there was none sajan's scene in this whole long update..but I can understand all other scenes that were written in his part were really really very important and necessary for the story'..👏

First of all starting wid my very wanted scene'.the locket scene''...Yeahhh'😃😳'.samrat was missing her a lot''missing her each n every moment...from the day one to last'...and then seeing that locket in sam's hand I was so happy'.first time u have written anyscene fully on that time as such I had imagined it'...n wid sam I was also like..'":mera b guess sahi tha"😉

No matter u didn't mentioned the scene when sam went to her cabin..but its not important '...main thing was'...sammy ko wo locket wapis mil jata bs'..afterall it was her mom's last nishaani na''or saamy ko mil gya matlab..gunjan ko b mil hi jae ga kabhi'...😳

But he again misunderstood her'....he doesn't know abt her anything and keep guessing n guessing abt her'...her family n her behaviore towards her family(like usy apni childhood ki cheezon ki value nai..or parents khone ka dard kya hota he') n abt her family status'once again he took her wrong ..'.on that middle class one line...he didn't understand her till yet.Gunjan is indeed a very self-respected girl'...he don't know her n abt her family condition na that y hez saying like this'.hope so samrat get soon realize abt her n her parents'...but each n every line wid sam's all thoughts were written Superbly'👏👏👏

in your updates I didn't get any single line or single moment where I got a chance to criticize on it'every scene has to be written so perfectly and natural way'like in sam's thoughts u have explained his each n every thing'he thinks abt Gunjan'.kab hua..kese hua'increment b nai lia'. Phir ye locket kyu sell kia'etc etc'.😉

he thinks too much abt Gunjan..infact every second he missed her''.

N he was feeling happy after buying it..thats really nice'...Gunjan will be definitely very happy to get back her locket..but only then if samrat will give her it with love and affectionate feelings''..not like jesea bi wo soch raha he...'as a favor of re-joing his office back..not to say sorry to her for his fault'...'and his reaction after knowing abt Gunjan leaving for air-port was Superb''...fully expected'😳

This whole part was Awesome

In next scene finally Sam and his behavior towards his family mystery has been solved'Sam's dad truly deserves that hatred by his son'..hez so mean..how can someone call him sam's dad'specially after reading that Trishna and sam's dad conversation scene'😡😡😡''stupid man'😡😡😡

hez not worthy to be n to call sam's dad'

Drastic news was samrat n richa's marriage'..😭😭...no way yaar..plz do something na'sammy ka to bharosa hi nai he'aese hi chup chaap shadi kar le ga'..haaan pr itna duffer nai he k if lets suppose shaadi ho b jae to wo rainbow comp k shares apne baap ko to nai dene laga'..bs ek daai maa ka hi sahaara he'..n guys ab ye vicky ek new entry daal di tum logon ne'anyways first time u wrote samrat's parents scene and fabulousely written'every line was very Gud'...⭐️⭐️

After that Samrat and daai maa scene was also very very nice'Daai maa is so so smart na...😉...after all shez his mother'but tell me'what happened to sammy .why do he take medicines😕'.sam was behaving like kid in that medicine scene'😆...its very nicely written'.after going Daai maa sam's thoughts were again very touchy and wonderful'that was awesome para when he thought kya hua agr me usse shaadi nai kar skta..pyaar ka izhar nai kar skta..par meri aankhon k saamne to rahe gi na'.😳❤️

Oh God'.hope so Sammy get soon realize the actual n real value of Gunjan and her love in his personal life'

And this time u know what 'what was the most fav line of mine of this part'..

On breakfast time when Daai maa said to sam abt marriage ''after listening and noticing his reaction abt his marriage with richa'.

I love that line sooo much'beautiful and awesome dialogue it was when she said' "ek baat kehna chahti hun shaid aj k bad kehne ka koi matlab na rahe''''''.. Koi bhi last decision lene se pehle...apne dil ki zaroor sunn na...kyunki,Kai baar Dimaag se liye gaye faisle sahi saabit nahin hote. Main tum sab jitni padhi-likhi nahin...shayad issi liye,Aaj ke daur ko bhi nahin samajh paati...lekin,zindagi ka experience hai...jo yeh batata hai ki,yeh Name, Fame, Status... kisi insaan ke paas hamesha nahin rehte...Reh jaate hain toh sirf...'Sachhe Rishte'...Pyaar aur ek-dusre ki parwah. Insaan ki value uske 'Status' yaa 'Bank Balance' se nahin...uski insaniyat...uski soch se karni chahiye... Paisoon se sab kuchh khareeda ja sakta hai par khud ke liye,'mann ki shaanti'[Peace of Mind] nahin kharidi ja sakti. Jo kho gaya...hum usse wapas nahin paa sakte...par,jo hai usse toh bacha sakte hain...

It was beautiful para'❤️'❤️'.loved it alot..

gud news is sam was also provoking and consedring on these words''but at last the final result is always end upon his Ego'.

Nanda house scene was also very gud..gunjan was missing rahul..n automatically her track of thoughts was turn towards samrat'..her feelings thoughts were also written veryy nicely''.shes very innocent..never thinks bad for any one'she noticed the lonliness and sadness in sam's eyes..i know this since their first meeting'..but poor sam..he cant understand her condition'''

Finally sam got to know she has gone to Nixon''.again he deeply considered on all matters abt her family status and reasons behind selling locket''he turned Bhavna sharma into Bhavesh so clevrly..it was hillariouse'..

Overall whole update was asuual mind blowing'..Perfect and amazing'

Now eagerly waiting for Sajan's meeting''plzzz update soon the next part'..

Thanks for the pm


Thanx RiJA for your comment and your good wishes for JOS and also for appreciating this really long update.

As V have mentioned earlier, each character is important...no one is being used as a filler, so V want 2 give equal space to each character and each combination. hence SaJan scenes will not be possible in every update and V R glad our readers understand this.

Yes, this time V did manage 2 write down what you had imagined. The Locket was purchased back from the jewelers. SAMRAT is missing her a lot and she is dominating his thoughts. But then, again he has jumped to conclusions and blamed her. But, he is not be blamed as after all his childhood reality. SAMRAT has been turned to cold hearted human by the behavior of his Dad, most importantly.

He loves GUNJAN but,his view about her class is not good...Social Status is very important for him and this is the main problem... and Second Side,GUNJAN belongs to a Middle Class family...but,her self-respect is everything for her...She knew her relationship with SAMRAT is not possible but,she was happy with her 1 sided feelings 4 him...Not expect anything from his side...but,after his behavior with her...her heart broken,totally.

Whether SAMRAT will return the locket to GUNJAN or keep it with him... and if he does return, how??😕 Wait and watch.😳

SAMRAT-RiCHA wedding sequence is a major twist of this story...Its 2 early for comment on this particular seq...so,Please wait.😳 about ViCKY... well he is SAMRAT's step bro after all...But,don't worry...V R not showing his character (V R going to edited his sequences in this story,so only Name hi use karenge😳)

DAi Maa is a woman who has seen the world... she knows that SAMRAT's mind is ruling over his heart...and so that awesome dio... each and every word so true. She is hoping that SAMRAT gives a thought to his heart... but...

GUNJAN is missing her best friend, but her thoughts are also dominated by SAMRAT. Her simple nature and her innocence is why she was able to see the real SAMRAT, through his outer facade.

BHAVESH KUMAR... the most 'Januable' avatar of SAMRAT... had to be there in our update at least once... V R updating very soon.



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arzzo

hmmm at last i have completed reading previous post so kaha sah start karu tareef karna tu firstly with writing skill its realll great as usuall pic scene pov everything is explained so well and now about story its something which i havent read it before totally different theme and different idea all the characters are really great poor gunji kabi kabi us per bhut taras ahta hai in teno kii wajah sah sb sah zyada prob ussah hu gii aur hu rahi hai and sam woa tora rude hai uska pecha bhi waja hai per woa ab itna change hu chuka thats is not easy for him to forget the past and live for present and rahul he is really cute and caring with gunji atleast till now and monesh as woa filhaal tu gunji kah bura yah uska sath bura nai karna chahta bt woa ussa pana kah leya koi bhi limit cross kar sakta hai that dangerous and as gunji is concern woa tu bahchari kch kaha he nai pah tii ussaha tu lagta hai sam ussaha miss he nai kar raha hu ga jb in real woa ussaha kitna miss kar raha hai

and ur story is going just perfect no complain as sajan scene kam huta per yeh story kii demand hai and what else i dont have words to express my feeling towards this story is simply out of the world awesome great job joseph bhai and s3 its reallly something for which i regularly feel to open and read the nxt part becuz i cant wait what happen nxt but now i have to wait for nxt update plzzz cont soon and really thanx for giving me the link of this story joseph bhai becuz agar mai yeh story nai parhe huti tu shahyad mujh sah bari foolish aur mujha sah zyada bad luck kisi kii nai huti i am really glad and thank full of u kah ap nah mujha is story kii link dii



Thank you, ARZZO for this lovely comment.

V R so glad that U have liked the way V have written and presented the update. It boosts our confidence 2 write when V read such appreciating comments that our readers write for us. Nice 2 read that U find the story different and readable.

GUNJAN is very sweet and soft... totally opposite of SAMRAT.
The character of GUNJAN is crystal clear here. She is naive, simple and pure at heart and in her behavior. She will not change in one update to become a strong person and again in another update naive again. In short, her character will not Yo-Yo between 2 emotions...V R going to continue keeping her character the way the original writer JOSEPH has sketched.


SAMRAT,RAHUL n MONiSH is right on their place... and this is the main beauty of their characters... SAMRAT is missing her to much but,can't accept this fact. MONiSH
jo karne ja raha hai woh,aap next parts (Part-31 n 32) mein read karogi...

Yes,This story is totally JOSEPH creation and he was very sure about this whole concept...so,kabhi story se koi compromise nahin kiya. Thanx a lot for appreciating this story too much... B'coz,after 30 long parts ke baad bhi agar new Members isse starting se read kar rahe hain...toh,I think this is the Best n Biggest compliment for this FF...V R very grateful for this much of appreciation. Our Next Part is ready... will b post very soon.




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pragya_luvsajan

Awesome update loved it

i know i havent been commenting on a regular basis coz i have been really busy...
waiting for the update.. curious to know the mystries..



Thank you Pragya for your comment. And we understand the priorities our readers have, so it is absolutely Ok... updating tomorrow.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Thanx !!😊 our all regular readers, silent ones and those who Hit the LIKE tab and take time out of their busy schedules to write appreciating comments for us.😳 V R really overwhelmed with the huge support that V have got after V took over this FF from JOSEPH.

Thank you...

gunurlove (Rija), arzzo, Snowwhite28 (Tanu), cool_tuli (Tuli), gnaneswari (Lakshmi), Lekshmic7 (Lakshmi), Grace7391, Mukitzz, Tasnin96 (Nilu), hbkumar, MoNaYaRoX, Swaatii (Swati), ruvy, neha_mjht, sreelu.januable (Sreelu), ammykhan, Kins103, 358674, Anjali_12 (Anjali), ekta_monaya (Ekta), ..Ambika..(Ambika), 1gunjan7 (Gunjan), Princessbushi (Bushara), pragya_luvsajan (Pragya), Shafoo, fend, sashazmohit, hiii (Tanzeel), aamirkhanfan, mars14 (Meri), mjht_sajan_rox (Akshara), roknstarz_mjht (Neefa), sanaayaaa, Preety88 (Preety), Kritianya (Kritika), ghamkansoon (Tia), monaya_sajan, lakshmi_SG (Lakshmi), sajanlove3, Saduf, aashizin (Aashi)

With lots of Love❤️,
S3.


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..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]


PART-31 [1/4]


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SHERGILL GROUP of COMPANIES :

SAMRAT stood up straight and was about to leave the cabin, when he stopped. He walked to the washroom in his cabin and looked at himself in the mirror... He seemed dissatisfied with what he saw. he removed his spectacles and splashed water on his face. wiping his face with a towel, He put on his specs and set his hair...check his look on the mirror but,... he was still not happy... He once again removed his specs and checked himself again... and finally... "Yaa... Its better..." (said with a satisfaction)

And he walked out of the washroom and with quick steps reached the door of his cabin. As he opened the door... He exclaimed strangely...

"TUM...?? YAHAAN...?? ISS WAQT...??

MONISH stood there... a smile on his face...Disgusting...thought SAMRAT. This smile indicated that MONISH was here to create another problem...again...

MONISH had a smirk on his face and this smirk was irritating SAMRAT to no end. MONISH forwarded his hand for a handshake, which was ignored by SAMRAT.


MONISH's smirk got wider... and in a casual tone, he said... "Come-on SAM...Oooppss !! Sorry, Mr.SHERGILL... na Hi...na HELLO...aur,itne saare questions...woh bhi back to back...?? Yaar,At least Bande ko saans toh lene do...usse andar bulao..thoda Thanda-Garam puchho...Phir,aaram se baatein karte hain naa...
S - (in very irritating tone) Oh Please MONiSH...stop your Drama... Sorry,But I M very busy now...and,I don't think ki aaj hamari koi appointment thi so,now please, Xcuse me...Mujhe kahin jaldi pahunchna hai.. (SAMRAT said in a 'not interested' tone... and he looked at MONISH... waiting for him to leave.)
MONISH looked at SAMRAT... Shrugging his shoulders, he spoke casually... "Well ,Jaane waale ko kaun rok sakta hai...par,jaane se pehle kuchh zaroori baatein toh kar sakte ho...??
S - Look,MONiSH...This time I don't want to get into any argument with U...so,Please excuse me.
And he was about to leave. But, MONISH had no intentions of letting this happen.Not only did he ignore what SAMRAT had said, but he just walked in the cabin, almost pushing SAMRAT as he walked past him. SAMRAT was too angry to say anything. MONISH took his seat on the chair... making himself comfortable... and turning the chair around, he looked at SAMRAT... Losing his temper, SAMRAT yelled... "Yeh Kya badtamizi hai...Tumhein seedhi baat samajh mein nahin aati...??"
M - (MONISH shut his eyes tightly and put his fingers in his ears. He slowly opened his eyes, moved his hands away from his ears... and with a fake frown creasing his forehead... he spoke very softly... ) Kya karte ho yaar...Y R U shouting...Do,U know 40-45 decimal se zyada sound ears ke liye harmful hota hai...Insaan 'Behra'[Deaf] tak ho sakta hai...zara dheere bola karo,Yaar !... Jaise main bolta hoon... soft and very sweet way mein...
S - (Angrily) Lagta hai tum aise nahin maanoge..?? Shayad tumhein,Security waalon ka hi intezar hai...
M - (Stood-up and said angrily) Enough Mr.SHERGILL...Bahot ho gaya...Its really enough,If U don't want to talk with me..Its Fine...phir,mat kehna ki,maine tumhein last chance nahin diya...
SAMRAT walked towards him angrily... and stood close to him. His eyes blazing with anger, he spoke in a harsh tone... " Last Chance...?? Last chance for what...?? Ab yeh kaun sa naya drama hai..??"
M - Drama or Reality... yeh toh tum meri baat sunne ke baad hi decide kar paaoge...so,Please sit..and listen to my words very carefully..."

SAMRAT saw the look in MONISH's eyes... and he moved away from MONISH. He walked over to his chair and sat down... and in a toned down voice, asked MONISH... " Ok. Tell me...aisa kya kehna chahte ho jo,tumhein lagta hai ki,woh mere liye 'Last chance' jaisa hai ...??
MONISH sat down again and pulled his chair closer to the table. His tone was now serious and his smirk was gone... he said... "Look,SAMRAT...this time I really don't want to any conflict between us. Hum ek-dusre se 2 mature persons ki tarah bhi behave kar sakte hain...Iss liye chahta hoon ki,hum apni saari differences ko door karte hue ek-dusre ki help karein.
S - (Rolled his eyes and in a very normal tone, he said...) Ho gaya yaa aur bhi kuchh kehna hai...?? Look,mera paas abhi zyada waqt nahin hai...agar kuchh important baat karni hai toh keh sakte ho warna,Mujhe abhi jaana hoga...Hum kabhi baad mein baat karenge.
M - Mere liye woh baat Important hai..I hope,tumhaare liye bhi hogi...Anyway,Time toh mere paas bhi nahin hai... so,Please...take it (Removing an envelope from his pocket, he kept it in the middle of the desk... and asked SAMRAT to accept it.).
S - Yeh kya hai...?? (He questioned as he picked up the envelope and opened it, frowning at MONISH as he did so...) 10 lacs ka cheque...?? Why...?? I think hamare Joint Venture ka financial matter Accounts Deptt. handle kar raha hai toh yeh cheque tumhein,unhein dena chahiye na ki mujhe...??
M - Yeh cheque Project ke liye nahin..tumhaare liye hai...take it. (said in very serious way)
S - Mere liye...?? Main samjha nahin...? I don't think mera koi amount tum par due tha yaa hai...??
M - No...Its not any past clearance. Yeh woh amount hai jiske liye tum GUNJAN ko notice dene ja rahe ho... I want ki,tum yeh paise mujh se le lo aur woh saare papers mujhe de do jis par usne sign kiye hain.
SAMRAT looked at MONISH with a start. How did MONISH know about the Notice? and about the papers that GUNJAN had signed?? And why is he paying off the amount? Is he still trying to play dirty games with GUNJAN?? His face turned red with anger as he asked these questions, but the last question in his mind almost blew his top... How dare MONISH interfere in this matter?? This was between GUNJAN and SAMRAT... who is MONISH to interfere??

He looked at MONISH... he eyes blazing with anger... he stood up as he flung the cheque back at MONISH... and angrily, he said... "How dare U...?? Tum hote kaun ho mujhe batane waale ki,mujhe kya karna chahiye yaa kya nahin...?? Yeh mere Office ka matter hai...Main kaun sa NOTiCE apne kis staff ko kab aur kyun bhejta hoon... Yeh mere aur mere staff ke beech ka matter hai...Don't you dare interfere in my internal Official matter..."
As the cheque landed near him, MONISH also stood up... his face clearly showing his anger. He had not expected this from SAMRAT... the SAMRAT he knew would never refuse... but then why?? He clenched his fist in anger , but then calmed himself... he shut his eyes... took a deep breath... and then opened his eyes... picked up the cheque and said harshly... " I don't want to interfere in any of your Official matter... I M not interested... I only want that...(after A little pause) Tum GUNJAN ko release kar do...If,U want more money then...
S - (Yelled More loudly) Just shut-up...and don't say anything about GUNJAN...she is my P.A...Maine tumhein pehle bhi warn kiya hai aur aaj phir kehta hoon...stay away from her. Don't cross your limit...and now,Please leave.Tum uss se jitna door rahoge...tumhaare liye utna hi achha hoga.
M - (said angrily) 1 sec. Mr.SHERGILL...I want to rectify 1 thing...Now,she is not your P.A. Toh uss par apna yeh Haq jatana band karo.Aur,Mere liye kya achha hoga aur kya Bura..yeh tumhein sochne ki zaroorat nahin..
By the way,Achha toh tumhaare liye bhi nahin hoga agar main yahaan se abhi chala gaya...Kyunki,mere saath saath tumhaara KIWISH INTERNATIONAL ko Take Over karne ka sapna bhi chala jaayega... aur tum kuchh nahin kar paaoge...
S - (asked shockingly) WHAT...?? What do U mean...?? KIWISH INTERNATIONAL ka GUNJAN se kya connection hai...??
M - GUNJAN se nahin lekin,mujhse toh hai.
S - Kya matlab...??
M - Matlab yeh ki,KIWISH INTERNATIONAL ke Representive meri touch mein hain.They want ki,main unke saath yeh deal Final kar loon. B'coz shayad tumne unn logon se 1 month ka time maanga hai...aur woh itne time tak rukne ke mood mein nahin hain so,...
S - (looking at MONISH angrily... his hands folded across his chest...his tone straight forward... he asked...) Tum chahte kya ho...??
M - Simple...Tum woh File mujhe de do uske badle main tumhein KIWISH INT. ko Take Over karne mein tumhaari help karoonga.
S - Meri Help...?? woh kaise...??
M - Jab tak tumhein BOD ki permission nahin milti...main tumhaare behalf mein woh Deal final karoonga aur jab tumhein permission mil jayegi main KIWISH Int. tumhein transfer kar doonga.Iss deal mein hum donon ka hi benefit hai so,I don't think tumhein iss deal mein koi problem hogi... (he said very confidently... a look of glee on his face...)
S - (looking at him in a oh really kind of expression... very calmly, he said...) Ho gaya...?? yaa aur kuchh...?? (his voice rising...) toh,agar tumhaari bakwaas khatm ho gayi ho toh tum ja sakte ho...Thanx for your concern.

MONISH looked at SAMRAT amused... he was loving the condition SAMRAT was in...because of him...this made him feel all the more better... he smirked...
The smirk on MONISH's face ensured that SAMRAT totally lost his cool... he blasted at MONISH...
S - Shayad tumne suna nahin...I said...Now...U can go...from my Office...
M - (His smile getting all the more sarcastic, he settled even comfortably in the chair, showing no signs of leaving...) Chill Dude...! Chala jaaoonga...Itni jaldi bhi kya hai...? main bhi yahaan iss chhote se office mein apna ghar basane nahin aaya...Just Relax..
S - Achha hoga...tum abhi chale jaao...warna,main kya kar doonga...yeh main bhi nahin jaanta...
M - Ok.As U like It...Par,mujhe pata hai mujhe ab kya karna hai...Maine toh socha ki,apni 'purani' dosti ki wajah se tumhein 1 chance de doon...Lekin,koi baat nahin...Its your choice...main ab kar bhi kya sakta hoon... He stood up and pushing the chair behind a bit aggressively.
Just then,SAMRAT cell rang...He received the call after reading the Flash name on Mobile screen.He said very angrily... "What's the problem Mr.SHARMA...?? Aap kuchh kaam khud se bhi kar sakte hain yaa nahin...?"
Mr.S - Sorry Sir ! par,problem hi aisi hai...KIWISH Int. se Mr.SiMON ka phone aaya tha...woh aapse aaj hi milna chahte hain...shayad,Unhein 1 month tak wait karne ki condition manzoor nahin hai.
S - (Yelled angrily) Ok...Fine...Aap meri unke saath appointment fix karo..Yeh Project hum kisi bhi halat mein nahin kho sakte. and SAMRAT cuts the call angrily.and looked at MONiSH ...
MONiSH smiled and turned to leave. But,before he could reach the door, he heard SAMRAT's voice stop him...
S - Ruko...!!
MONISH gave a slight laugh... as he turned to face SAMRAT, victory all so evident on his face... "I knew it...Yeh awaaz aayegi...par,itni jaldi aayegi...yeh nahin socha tha...Thank God ! Tumne time se pehle hi situation ko samajh liya.
S - Tum ab tak gaye nahin...??
M - Bas tumhaare Face Expression dekhna chahta tha.1 Top Businessman ...The SAMRAT SHERGILL ka jab 1 ambitious project uss ki aankhon ke saamne se ja raha hota hai toh,uska Face Expression kya hoga...?? Bas,yehi dekhna chahta tha...A million Dollar moment... (smiled again) Actually... (and laughed loudly)
S - (Glared at him and asked angrily) What the hell...? Yeh paaglon ki tarah hans kyun rahe ho...??
M - Sorry Dude ! But,tumhaari condition par toh kisi ko bhi hansi aa jayegi...The SAMRAT SHERGILL apne 1 ambitious Project ko khone wala hai aur Reason...?? Reason hai 1 ladki...1 ordinary P.A.,Jo ab usse chhod kar ja chuki hai...
S - ( Yelled more loudly) Apni bakwaas bandh karo... Woh kahin nahin gayi...bas woh 1 chhoti si misunderstang hai, jise...
M - (cuts with smilng face) ... Jise door karne ke liye Mr.SHERGILL,usse 10 lacs ka compensation charge karte hue 1 Legal Notice bhejne waale hain... (laughed teasingly) Yaar ! Misunderstanding clear karne ka aisa brilliant idea mujhe kyun nahin aata...?? (His thumb scratching his chin as his index finger held his chin, he asked... then he moved his hand away from his chin and folding his arms, he said...) And,Please don't say ki,tumhein uss se Pyar ho gaya hai aur tum ab uske bina ji nahin saktte Blaa...Blaa...Blaa...seriously Dude,Agar tumne yeh sab kaha toh,yeh sab sunkar mujhe toh Heart Attack aa jaayega.. (winked).Yaar,jo feelings tumhaari Life mein exist hi nahin karti,woh reason toh main kya tum khud bhi nahin maanoge... Especially, tab... jabki,kuchh hi dinon mein tumhaari INDIA ke top Industrilist ki beti se shaadi hone ja rahi hai... Wait...Wait... Kahin ..yeh "Kahin pe Nigahein...Kahin pe Nishana..." type case toh nahin...
S - (looked angrily n yelled) Really, Maine jitna socha tha...tum uss se bhi zyada 'Kaminey' ho...
M - (smiled softly n said without any shame) Thanx for the compliment Dude...! I M so,touched...Yaar,itni taarif toh aaj tak mere baap ne bhi nahin ki...Thank God ! Kisi ne toh mujhe pehchana...!! Par,Dude...kabhi khud ko dekha hai...? 1 baar khud ko bhi dekho...phir,aaram se judge karna..kaun kitna...
S - Just Shut-Up...! (Yelled) Main tumse bekaar ki baatein nahin karna chahta...I don't love GUNJAN...so,inn sab mein uska naam laane ki koi zaroorat nahin.
M - I know,U don't love GUNJAN...woh sirf tumhaari zidd hai. Tum yeh accept nahin kar paa rahe ki,1 ordinary middle class ladki tumhaari Job chhodkar chali gayi...aur,shayad 1 baar mudkar dekha bhi nahin...Tum usse apne Office mein dobara appoint karna chahte ho taki,tum usse bata sako ki,Tum kitne powerful ho aur woh kitni kamzor... (said in little hard tone) M I right Mr.SHERGILL ??
S - (Asked rudely) Its none of your business. Mujhe kisi ko apni feelings aur thoughts ki explaination dene ki zaroorat nahin.Aur jahaan tak tumhaare Proposal ka question hai...Mujhe kuchh waqt chahiye...sochne ke liye...
M - Oh..sure,Please take your time...Main kahaan koi zabardasti kar raha hoon...Hum dost hain...ooppss sorry 'the'...Hum dost the toh, apne purne dost ke liye itna toh kar hi sakta hoon...but, the problem is...mere paas time hi toh nahin hai...toh woh main tumhein kahaan se doon...?? par,agar tum itna request kar rahe ho toh...chalo aaj shaam tak ka time diya...Ab tumhaare liye itna toh kar hi sakta hoon... (smiled with teasing way...this smile was indicating his victory)
SAMRAT looked at MONISH in anger... If only...If only, the offer made by MONISH was not beneficial to him, GOD alone knew what SAMRAT would have done with MONISH...but this time, he was at the receiving end... his position was not strong enough for him to fight with MONISH... he would have to take a back seat... his distress clearly visible, he asked...
S - Tumhare Proposal ki conditions kya hongi...?
M - My Proposal is totally based on 'Give N Take' Rule.Tum 1 haath se mujhe GUNJAN ke sign kiye hue woh Contract papers doge...aur main tumhein hamare Contract ki file doonga jis mein,yeh clearly quote hoga ki,after 1 month...yaa,Jab tum chaho , main tumhein KIWISH INT. hand over kar doonga,after receiving the consideration. lekin...tumhein saath mein yeh Promise bhi karna hoga
S - Promise...?? Kaisa Promise...??
M - Promise ki,tum phir kabhi GUNJAN ko SHERGILL's re-join karne ko nahin kahoge.
S - Aur kuchh...??
M - Filhaal toh yeh hi kaafi hain...mere liye (said with smiling face)
S - (said rudely) Now,U can leave.Main soch kar shaam tak answer doonga.
M - Ok...Fine...as U wish...I'll wait. Main aaj shaam exact 6 baje 'HOTT CAFFE' mein tumhaara wait karoonga... with all papers...I hope tum mujhe Disappoint nahin karoge. He bent over slightly towards SAMRAT... taunting him furthermore by singing...
Tere sang...1 simple si Coffee bhi 'Cick' deti hai...Tere sang... [ZAMEEN song]

He winked at SAMRAT and smiling with sarcasm, he turned around to leave...whistling the same tune as he left.
As the door shut behind MONISH, SAMRAT flopped on his chair... swirling the chair to the side, he kept his left leg over his right knee and resting his face in the palm of his hand which in turn rested on the desk, he was lost in his thoughts... his dreams of finally seeing HER... hearing her honey sweet voice...was shattered so ruthlessly by MONISH... ((What the Hell...?? Kya yeh sab sach hai...? Yeh sab kya ho raha hai...? Uss MONiSH ko unn papers ke baare mein kisne bataya...?? Kya Mr.AGRAWAL ne...?? ...No...No...woh aisa nahin kar sakte...phir...?? Oh God ! main paagal ho jaaoonga...Mujhe samajh nahin aa raha ki,main kya choose karoon...? GUNJAN ki woh file yaa KiWiSH Int. ko purchase karne ka chance...I M so confused...KiWiSH Int. ki keemat par GUNJAN ko yahaan laane ka kya benefit...?? KiWiSH Int. ko purchase karte hi hum direct International level par apne New Mobile Range ko launch kar sakte hain.RiCHA se shaadi hote hi, "RAiNBOW COMMUNICATiON" aur "SHERGiLL INDiA MOBiLE" mil kar KIWISH INTERNATIONAL ke through apne new collections ko launch kar sakte hain..I know yeh Project hamein International Brand ka slot mein establish kar dega ...lekin,GUNJAN...?? Main usse kaise jaane de sakta hoon...? Woh papers hi toh usse mere paas wapas laane ka 1 last wipon hai...unn papers ke bina main usse wapas nahin laa sakta... Unhin Papers ke basis par toh main usse Notice dene wala tha...Woh hamesha ke liye chali jaayegi...Main usse hamesha ke liye kho doonga...
par,Yeh MONiSH kya bakwaas kar raha tha...? Is she loves him...?? No,I don't think so...agar aisa kuchh hota toh woh kabhi yahaan job nahin karti...woh iss MONiSH ke office mein nahni gayi...iska saaf matlab hai ki,woh usse Pyar nahin karti... and I know her...Woh unn ladkiyon jaisi nahin hai jinke,saath MONiSH jaisa time spend karta hai...Phir,woh GUNJAN mein itna kyun interested hai...? Kya sirf mujhe pareshaan karne ke liye...??
Lekin,Main kya karoon...?? MONiSH samajhta hai ki,main GUNJAN se pyar nahin karta..,usse sirf apni zidd ki wajah se iss Ofice mein wapas lana chahta hoon.Its good for me...kyunki,agar usse meri true feelings par doubt ho jaata toh...?? Woh yeh sab kuchh RiCHA ko bata deta..phir,ho sakta hai ki, RiCHA mujhse marriage karne se inkaara kar de...No Way...!! Main aisa nahin hone doonga...
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PART-31 [2/4]


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The cloudy weather got GUNJAN worried. She was standing at the college gates, waiting for a Taxi. But so far she had not been successful in spotting one. Adding to her woes were the books that she carried... they were the property of the college and If it started raining and the books got wet, she or rather uncle would be answerable to the librarian. She was searching frantically for a cab as she heard the screech of brakes close to her. She looked in the direction of the noise... her face clearly showing fear... to see a suave Mercedes reversing towards her. As the car came to a halt near her, the rear window opened and smiling at her was...MONISH...


He got of the car and walked towards her. GUNJAN felt relaxed seeing MONISH... a face she knew. He spoke in a caring tone, asking her...
"Tum Yahaan...?? College se aa rahi ho...?"
GUNJAN smiled back at him as she spoke in her soft, sweet voice, mesmerising MONISH even more... "Ji...woh kuchh Books issue karane the iss liye...Par aap yahaan...??

M - College toh main bhi aa sakta hoon...B'coz,I M 1 of the trustee naa... (He smiled,GUNJAN softly smiled too) Lekin,abhi toh bas yahaan se guzar raha tha...Par,tum yahaan kyun khadi ho...?
G - Woh bas kisi Taxi yaa Auto ka wait kar rahi thi...
M - Mere hote hue ?? Kisi aur ka Intezaar...?? Kya yeh tumhein unfair nahin lag raha...?? (asked in fake serious tone)
G - Ji...?? Matlab main samjhi nahin...(asked in little confusing tone)
M - Arre ! Simple sa toh matlab hai... Chalo main tumhein ghar tak drop kar deta hoon...Main ussi taraf ja raha hoon...aur waise bhi Agar Uncle ko pata chala ki,maine tumhein yun hi road par Taxi ka wait karne ke liye chhod diya toh woh kya sochenge mere baare mein...?? (asked innocently)

Waise bhi mujhe tumhein Lift dene ka kaafi purana experience hai... DELHi se lift deta aa raha hoon...ab toh expert ho gaya hoon...Tum mujh par ab bhi trust kar sakti ho...
(said lovingly)
G - (said with smiling face) Thanx but,Its ok...I'll manage it.Aap be-wajah takleef karenge...main khud se chali jaaoongi.
M - Issi liye...Issi wajah se hamare country ki development nahin ho paa rahi... Mujhe laga tha tum 1 sensible aur responsible citizen ho..?? Par tum bhi...ab kya kahoon... (made a very concerned serious face)
G - WHAT...?? (shockingly) Main samjhi nahin...? Mere Lift lene yaa na lene se India ki development par kyun effect padega...?? (asked very innocently)
M - Very simply effect padega...aur yehi nahin kaafi deep impact padega... (said in very confident tone)
G - Woh kaise...?? (asked with ful of curiosity)
M - Ok...tell me kisi bhi Country ke development ka sabse important part kya hota hai...?? ECONOMY... aur Economy tabhi smooth hogi jab uss country mein Transportation easy ho. Transportation easy hone ke liye kya chahiye...Fuel and smooth Road ki facility. M I right...??
G - Yes...Par main abhi nahin samjhi... (asked again with very curious expression)
M - Toh main samjha raha hoon naa... Fuel and smooth road ki availibilty ke liye chahiye ki hum Fuel save karein aur kam se kam vehicles ka use karein...ab tum apna hi example lo...agar tum mere saath ghar tak chalogi...toh iske 4 benefits honge...
G - (strangely) 4 benefits...?? Woh kya...??
M - 1st toh Hum saath chalkar Fuel save kar lenge... Jo Fuel save hoga woh hamaari next generation ko kaam aayega... (As he spoke,his tone serious...GUNJAN felt she was attending a lecture... MONISH was speaking so seriously...) 2nd,Road par agar 1 Taxi kam rahegi toh Trafic ki problem thodi kam hogi...means easy transportation. 3rd Hum saath mein rahenge toh baat karte hue manzeel[Destination] ki doori ka pata hi nahin chalega...aur,hum fauran ghar tak pahunch jaayenge... (said very happily)
G - Aur 4th benefit...??
M - 4th Benefit,woh toh mera zyada hai... (smiled) Woh yeh ki,agar main tumhein ghar tak drop karoonga toh,tum mujhe waise hi toh nahin jaane dogi... Definitely,Mujhe Coffee offer karogi...Ab jab itni khoobsurat ladki,jo world ki Best coffee banati ho agar woh mujhe coffee ke liye pooche, toh main mana kaise kar sakta hoon... (smiled softly) Toh hue naa Itne saare Benefits...Toh Miss BHUSHAN... Please meri car mein baith kar...Hamein bhi INDIA ki development mein kuchh contribute karne ka chance dijiye... (said in very cute appealing tone)


As GUNJAN's smiles converted to giggles, making her look all the more cute , MONISH smiled widely. He wanted to see GUNJAN laugh...her eyes smile ... he spoke in the same soft tone... "Ab toh car main baitho...Aur,waise bhi main tumse kaafi naraaz hoon... (suddenly He made a little fake upset face)
G - (shockingly) Naraaz...?? mujhse...?? Par kyun...? Maine aisa kya kiya...??
M - Yahaan nahin...Car mein baatein karte hain...Kyunki,tumhaara toh pata nahin...par,agar main iss kadi dhoop mein aur thodi der khada raha toh,Butter ki tarah melt ho jaaoonga... Aur yeh mera achha khasa 'Chocolaty' face...sach mein Chocolate ki tarah Dark color ka ho jaayega... Tum Kya chahti ho...? Mere hone waale bachhe 'African' lagein...? (asked very innocently with puppy face)
This sentence sent GUNJAN into peals of laughter... MONISH kept staring at her...She looked so beautiful... and her laugh sounded so melodious... He would ensure that she would never have to shed tears... ensure that he would make her smile and laugh...Keep her happy...His eyes were just not leaving her face...without a blink. He kept looking at her... when, she realised that MONISH was staring at her, she stopped laughing and looked away flustered.
MONISH however continued looking at her...She slowly looked at him and when he realised that he was he was staring, he moved his gaze away from her. Then he looked at her again and raised his eyebrows... implying that he was waiting for her reply. Smiling faintly, she spoke softly... "Nahin main aisa nahin chahti... Ok...saath mein hi chalte hain...waise bhi aap se arguement karne ka koi benefit nahin...main aap se baatoon mein nahin jeet sakti...
M - Yaa...U R right...Mere teachers bhi yehi kaha karte the... (smiled) toh ab hamein chalna chahiye..
MONISH opened the passenger door for GUNJAN. Looking at MONISH and smiling. She sat in the car. MONISH gently shut the door and walking to the other side, took his seat next to her. He glanced at her as he remembered that night in DELHI... but, the difference this time was that, then they were sitting on the Front seat... now they were sitting at the rear of the car But, what made MONISH happy was that today she was relaxed... He instructed the Driver to start the vehicle. Then he looked at her and complained...

M - Main tumse bahot-bahot naraaz hoon... (made a fake anger face)
G - Oh,Yaa aapne bataya mujhe...par,Kyun...wajah toh aapne batai nahin..??
M - Kyun...?? Main uss shaam tumhaare ghar aaya tha par,tum thi hi nahin... Guest ko bulakar khud gayab ho jaana ...Yeh toh koi manners nahin...
G - Oh...I M really Sorry for that day... (She looked away... feeling embarrassed... she then looked at MONISH and lowered her gaze as she spoke...) It was totally my fault...Mujhe aapko call kar maafi maangni chahiye thi...Pehle toH aapko Canteen mein itni der wait karaya aur phir,ghar par bhi time se nahin pahunch saki...I M extremly sorry for that... Par,yakin maaniye mera aisa koi intension nahin tha,lekin uss din... (She left her sentence midway as she remembered the incidents of that night... once again she looked the other way, to hide the tears that were brimming in her eyes)
M - Oh... (smiled softly) Its ok...Don't feel bad...I M not serious . Main toh bas yun hi mazaak kar raha tha...so chill waise bhi,tumse koi naraaz nahin ho sakta aur main toh bilkul bhi nahin...
GUNJAN wiped her tears before they could spill over to her cheeks as she looked at MONISH... trying to understand what he had just said. She felt weird when she heard him speak... and asked him with curiosity... "Ji...? Woh Kyun..?"
M - Kyunki,tum itni achhi Coffee jo banati ho...Tumse naraaz ho gaya toh phir tumhaare haathon ki bani coffee kaise pee paaoonga... (laughed).
GUNJAN smiled faintly and looked out of the window. There was complete silence in the car... a smooth talker like MONISH too did not know how to continue with the conversation. He looked at her and in a normal tone asked her...
M - By the way,maine yeh toh poocha hi nahin...Aaj office kyun nahin gayi...? Aur,yeh college...?? Aur Haan, uss din ke baad se tumne apna Cell bhi switch-off kiya hua hai...?
GUNJAN, who had turned to face MONISH was startled by these questions. She had never thought she would have to answer these questions again... she looked downwards as she mumbled... recollecting the incidents of that night... " Ji,woh Actually ! Maine uss raat apna Mobile kho diya...(She stopped mumbling as she remembered the way SAMRAT had behaved with her and she shut her eyes... trying to brush all those thoughts aside.She looked at MONISH as she spoke...) Ab main SHERGILL's mein work nahin karti...maine wahaan se Resign de diya hai...COLLEGE Library kuchh books issue karane gayi thi...Jab tak new Office join nahin karti...socha thodi study hi kar loon. Though she spoke casually, the hurt in her tone was not missed by MONISH...He asked her...
M - Tumne SHERGILL's se Resign de diya...? par,kyun...?? Kahin SAMRAT ne toh kuchh...
G - (said immediately) Nahin...nahin...unhone kuchh nahin kaha...woh,Actually...Mujhe koi Working Experiance nahin hai naa toh,iss wajah se main wahaan thik se kaam nahin kar paa rahi thi... Bas,issi wajah se mujhe Resign dena pada...aur koi baat nahin hai... Par,main koshish kar rahi hoon...jald hi sab kuchh sikh jaaoongi... Main koshish karoongi ki,New Job mein kisi ko mujhse koi shikayat nahin ho... (said very innocently...)
M - New Job...?? Kahaan...?
G - Yeh toh main nahin jaanti...RAHUL ne apne new Office mein baat ki hui hai...Mujhe zyada kuchh pata nahin... (nodded in negative,innocently) Toh,jab tak woh SINGAPORE se laut nahin aata..tab tak study ka time hai...taaki, ab new job mein koi problem na ho.
Her simplicity, her innocence floored MONISH ... Very rarely did anyone blame oneself for having to quit the Job. It was always the Management or the Boss who was responsible for the pink slip... but, here was someone who took all the blame. She had no complains against her employers...Ex-Employers to be precise... His mind was crowded with thoughts... (( I know GUNJAN...baat itni simple nahin hai jitna tum bata rahi ho...par,shayad tumhain complain karni hi nahin aati... Yehi wajah hai ki tumse har mulaqat ke baad main tumhein aur bhi zyada Pyar karne lagta hoon... Par,tumse keh nahin pata...Pata nahin kyun... Yeh Casanova MONiSH tumhaare saamne itna kamzor kyun pad jata hai...? Please,Mujhe maaf kar dena...main tumhein hurt nahin karna chahta... Lekin,Tumhaari 'Naa' bhi nahin sunn sakta... Iss liye ab jo kuchh karne ja raha hoon...Mujhe pata hai tumhein uss se takleef hogi...par,mera yakeen karo... Yeh takleef sirf kuchh dinon ki hai...sirf tab tak...jab tak hamari shaadi nahin ho jaati...uske baad 'Gham' kya hota hai... mehsoos karna toh door...tum kabhi soch bhi nahin paaogi... Lekin...Abhi jo karne ja raha hoon...woh meri majboori hai... Please,forgive me.))
He looked at her...each passing moment and he was falling deeply in love with her. Not only b'coz of her pretty yet simple looks but, b'coz of her nature, her clean and pure heart... her pure thoughts... and he knew, she was the only one for him. She did not notice MONISH staring at her. She was looking out of the window, enjoying the view outside. A slight drizzle was making the view even more beautiful ... a smile played on her pretty , pink lips. He brought himself of the trance as he said, in a calm and composed tone...
M - GUNJAN..!! Tumse kuchh kahoon...?
She turned to face him, the smile intact, her eyebrows raised as she asked him in her sweet voice... " Ji...?? Aap ko kuchh kehne ke liye permission lene ki zaroorat nahin..."
M - Thanx !! Woh...woh...Kya tum mujhe join karogi...?? Mujhe tumhari zaroorat hai... (The feelings that he had hidden in his heart were out at last.)
The smile vanished as GUNJAN heard these words. She could not understand the meaning of this sentence. She looked at MONISH, questions in her eyes as she worded them... "Main kuchh samjhi nahin...?"
M - Oh...!! I mean...I mean ki,kya tum mera Office join karogi...?? Mujhe 1 P.A. ki bahot zaroorat hai...1 very hard working and intelligent person...just like U (smiled) Salary...,Jo tum chaho... (He sounded confident... this sentence and no way was she going to refuse him...)
GUNJAN was shocked... with the Job offer. So sudden... She kept looking at him, her eyes welled up with tears as she heard his last sentence... It reminded her of SAMRAT's harsh words for her and her Family Status... she quickly wiped her tears as she said... " MONiSH.. kya aapko bhi lagta hai ki, Main paisoon ke liye kuchh bhi kar sakti hoon... Agar Haan...toh main batana chahti hoon ki, Paise mere liye kabhi important nahin rahe...Maine kabhi bhi,kuchh bhi paison ke liye nahin kiya... (As she completed her sentenced, her voice choked and her eyes brimmed with tears again...)
MONISH realised his mistake as he saw tears in her eyes. He never could knowingly hurt his love... in a caring tone, he said... "I M so Sorry,GUNJAN...Mera yakeen karo...mera yeh matlab nahin tha...In fact,main aisa sapne mein bhi nahin soch sakta... Maine toh bas yun hi keh diya tha...Main tumhein janta hoon..Tumhaari Family ko apni Family manta hoon...Kya tumhein lagta hai main aisa kuchh soch sakta hoon...?? If,Yes...then Please forgive me.. next time aisa kuchh nahin kahoonga...
G - (wiped her tears and said softly) No...Please,Dont say Sorry for this...Woh bas waise hi...kuchh yaad aa gaya tha...Sorry ! shayad maine over-react kar diya... But,I really can't accept your offer.. agar RAHUL ne apne office mein baat nahin ki hoti toh main yeh Job zaroor karti...par,mera kahin aur join karna usse pasand nahin aayega... usse bahot bura lagega...
M - (smiled softly) Bas itni si baat...?? RAHUL toh 1 month ke baad aayega naa...tab tak toh tum aaram se iss Job ko accept kar sakti ho...aur tumne abhi kaha naa ki, tumhein Working Experience nahin hai toh iss job ko as a training count kar sakti ho... Mujhe help bhi mil jaayegi aur tumhein Working Experience bhi ho jaayega...
though she agreed with this,she was a bit skeptical about the whole thing...innocently she said... "Lekin..."
M - Koi lekin-wekin nahin... Don't worry ...main hoon naa...Tum mujh par trust kar sakti ho...
G - Nahin ,woh baat nahin hai...Actually,main Uncle-Aunty ki permission ke bina kuchh nahin karna chahti... aur,RAHUL bhi permission nahin dega... (said in very soft tone)
M - Don't worry...main khud Uncle-Aunty se baat karoonga...I don't think unhein koi problem hogi. Agar tumhein yeh Job aur mera Office comfortable lage toh tumhein kahin aur jaane ki zaroorat bhi nahin hai...main RAHUL ke aane par RAHUL se bhi baat karoonga,He cares U a lot so, I M sure woh kabhi tumhein mana nahin karega.
G - Haan...lekin...
M - (cuts quickly) Ab koi lekin-wekin nahin..Its Final...Tum kal se hi mera Office join kar rahi ho...Main abhi chal kar Uncle-Aunty se permission le leta hoon...woh mujhe kabhi mana nahin karenge..
G - Nahin,woh baat nahin...
M - Toh...?
G - Woh,actually...mere saare Documents aur Certificates ki original copy SHERGILL's mein hain... Unhone kaha hai ki,at least 1 week ka time lag jaayega usse issue karane mein...toh,mere paas toh abhi koi original certificates bhi nahin...phir main aapke office mein kya submit karoongi... (said very innocently)
MONISH smiled...she had not changed these 2 years... the innocence still prevailed... the same innocence that had attracted him to her. He said in a loving tone... " Oh...Toh tumhein lagta hai...Main tumse tumhaare Original certificates ki demand karoonga... (smiled) Come On GUNJAN... V know each other...woh mera apna Office hai...woh meri company hai...aur tum wahaan as a employee se zyada meri dost hogi...woh Office tumhaara bhi hai... Aur,waise bhi mujhe tumhaare talent yaa working capability par koi shaq nahin.So,chill...tumhaare certificates mere liye important nahin...Kaam tumhein karna hai, tumhaare certificates ko nahin....(smiled softly)
GUNJAN was surprised... MONISH was so simple...so down to earth... she thought as she looked at him...(( Kitne supportive aur kitne achhe insaan hain yeh... Kitne calm...kitne composed...Itne bade empire ke owner hone ke baad bhi zara bhi Ego nahin...koi 'Ghamand' nahin...very down to earth... Jab DELHi mein mili..toh inhein jaanti bhi nahin thi...par,phir bhi inhone meri kitni help ki..aur aaj yeh Job offer..?? He is such a nice guy...kitna pyar...kitni izzat dekar bat karte hain...Bilkul waise hi jaise DELHI mein the...Kuchh nahin badla...No wonder ki,Uncle-Aunty inhein itna kyun pasand karte hain... par,RAHUL..?? pata nahin woh inhein kyun pasand nahin karta... Uski problem toh mujhe samajh hi nahin aati...SAMRAT Sir ko na-pasand karne ki wajah toh samajh aati hai...par,itne simple aur Friendly nature ke insaan ko koi kaise na-pasand kar sakta hai...? Iss baar jab woh aayega toh usse samjhaoongi ki,Sabhi Rich person bure nahin hote... sabhi SAMRAT Sir ki tarah nahin hain jo,Middle Class person ki insult aur unke self respect ko hurt karne mein koi burai nahin samajhte...))
Smiling at MONISH, she looked away. MONISH was happy when he saw her smile. He knew that his plan was a sure success. SAMRAT would never refuse his proposal... his ambition to be successful would not let him. And with SAMRAT out of the way and RAHUL away... who would stop him from getting close to GUNJAN?? She would be his... and his life would be perfect with GUNJAN. His thoughts about his life with GUNJAN were rudely broken when his cell buzzed. MONISH received the call... from his office. After speaking to the person at the other end, he disconnected the call and looked at GUNJAN. She had kept her head on the rim of the window and was looking out... softly, so as not to startle her as he broke her trance, he said...
M - Woh...Office se call tha...Agar tmhaare paas thoda time hai...toh kya hum Office chal sakte hain...?? Sirf 10 min. ka work hai...Kuchh important papers sign karne hain... I promise sirf 10 min. Please... (He was pleading with her as he spoke.)
G - Oh sure...! Aur Please aapko mujhse request karne ki zaroorat nahin...In fact,Aap mujhe yahin par drop kar den...main corner se Taxi le kar chali jaaoongi...Aap waise bhi bewajah hi takleef kar rahe hain...
M - No...Its not possible...Ok..agar tumhaare paas time nahin hai toh Its ok...Hum pehle tumhaare ghar chalte hain...baaki kaam baad mein... Uncle-Aunty se permission leni bhi toh zaroori hai... (said with smiling face)
G - (she said quickly) No...No...mera woh matlab nahin tha...I know aapka work zyada zaroori hai..maine abhi aapki Phone par convo. suni hai... Main really aapko pareshan karna nahin chahti thi...iss liye kaha...But,Its ok...Hum pehle aapke office hi chalte hain...Mujhe koi jaldi nahin... She spoke in her normal tone, which managed to camouflage her nervousness...
M - (smiled) Thanx a lot. Happily he instructed the driver... Driver Car ko Office ke direction mein lo...
Nodding a YES, his driver took a 'U' turn as the car raced towards MONISH's office. As an after thought, MONISH hurriedly typed an SMS on his cell and sent It. A few seconds later, he received an SMS... and he smiled. He looked at GUNJAN... she was looking out...
He kept his cell in his pocket and started a conversation with GUNJAN... MONISH knew GUNJAN spoke very little, but to hear her sweet, melodious voice, he was willing to do all it takes to make her feel comfortable with him and start speaking...


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SHERGILL GROUPS of COMPANIES (H.O)
SAMRAT was still so disturbed...try hard to control his anger... but,couldn't control it... banged his fist on the desk in anger.



He switched on his lappy again and opened the file of KIWISH INTERNATIONAL... hoping to find some loophole, which would help him avoid MONISH's proposal.But, the deal was too perfect...He pushed his lappy away and moved backwards, hitting his back to the chair. He moved his fingers through his hair, his eyes shut... and then opening his eyes, he moved forward to rest his elbows on the desk as he thought...
((Kya karoon...? Kuchh samajh nahin aa raha..woh 1 month ka wait karne ko ready nahin...aur jab tak meri RiCHA se marriage nahin ho jaati...Main yeh Project BOD meeting mein paas nahin kara sakta...Ab koi option nahin bacha...Kyunki,woh MONiSH yeh chance kabhi nahin jaane dega..Mujhe abhi issi waqt apni priority choose karni hogi...Mera Ambition yaa phir GUNJAN...?? Mujhe donon mein se kisi 1 ko choose karna hi hoga..Yeh decision lena mere liye easy nahin...kyunki,kahin na kahin mujhe pata hai ki,kisi 1 ko choose karne ka seedha matlab kisi dusre ko hamesha ke liye kho dena hai... (GUNJAN's smiling face... her twinkling eyes... flashed before his eyes...) Lekin,kya main GUNJAN ko khud se door kar sakta hoon...??))
His thoughts were broken by a knock on the cabin door. quickly composing himself, he spoke in a very harsh tone... "Come In".
As the cabin door opened, SAMRAT's expressions turned from anger to hatred... The sight of the person standing in front of him made his temper shoot up... and in the harshest tone possible,he said loudly...
S - Mr.SHERGILL...?? Woh bhi bina kisi previous appointment ke...? kya aapko pata nahin ki,mujhe aapka yahaan bina kisi Appointment ke aana pasand nahin...??
SD - Look SAMRAT !! Main yahaan abhi tumhaari Pasand aur na-pasand jaanne ke liye nahin aaya..aur naa hi mujhe uss se koi farq padta hai. (said rudely)

S - Toh...?? Kyun aaye hain yahaan..? Maine toh aapko nahin bulaya... Oh... Please ! Don't tell me ki,aapko meri yaad aa rahi thi..iss liye milne chale aaye...I swear,Yeh sun kar toh mujhe Heart Attack aa jaayega. (said in very taunting way)
SD - Don't worry,Aisa kuchh bhi nahin hai...Wajah important hai iss liye aana pada...Maine kal raat bhi tumhein call kiya tha...par,tumne call receive nahin kiya...Anyway, Tumhein tumhaari Marriage ki final Date ka pata toh chal hi gaya hoga...?
S - Haan...! Kya sirf yehi confirm karne aaye hain...?
SD - No..Tumhein batane aaya hoon ki,ho sake toh Mr.SAXENA ko 1 formal call kar lo...Aakhir woh tumhaare hone waale 'Father-in-Law' hain.Unhein aisa nahin lagna chahiye ki,unke hone wale 'Son-in-Law' ko koi Tameez-Tehzeeb hi nahin hai.
S - (smiled widely) Tameez aur Tehzeeb !! Nice words but,kya karoon...Mr.SHERGILL , mere parents bachpan mein hi mar gaye aur Boarding waalon ne bas yehi ek cheez nahin sikhai...shayad,agar mere Parents zinda hote toh..
SD - (These words seemed to have hit him hard as he immediately cut SAMRAT off and yelled...) SAMRAT !! mind your language...I M still alive Damn it.
S - Toh...?? What's the difference...?? Mere father ki death meri Mom ki death ke saath hi ho gayi thi... abhi mere saamne jo insaan khada hai woh,sirf mera Business Partner hai...aur kuchh nahin...so,zyada closeness show karne ki zaroorat nahin...aur waise bhi,abhi iss Cabin mein koi 3rd person nahin...toh achha hoga ki hum yahaan woh Happy Family waala Drama naa karein.
SD - Go to HELL...(said very angrily) Mujhe jo kehna tha,maine keh diya...call karna yaa na karna tumhaari marzi hai...lekin,Yeh hamesha yaad rakhna ki,agar RICHA se shaadi nahin kar paaye toh RAINBOW COMMUNICATION toh haath se jaayega hi...SHERGILLs mein 55% ki Partnership ka sapna bhi bhool jaao... He left the cabin... his mission accomplished...
As the door closed behind his da, SAMRAT's eyes released the tears they were withholding. Hi hurt, his hatred all seemed to be flowing... his mind speaking what his heart would never let him... ((I hate U Dad...I hate U...Main aisa nahin tha...lekin,aaj aap ki wajah se main yeh ban gaya jo,main kabhi nahin ban na chahta tha...Kaash aapne 1 baar mujh se Pyar se baat ki hoti...1 baar toh poocha hota ki,main aisa kyun ban gaya hoon...? Aapne mera sab kuchh chhin liya...meri Mom...Mera bachpan...Mera ghar...Mera sab kuchh...Kaash aapne mujhe Pyaar diya hota..toh shayad aaj mere paas bhi 1 family hoti...Main yun akela nahin hota... Meri zindgi mein bhi Pyar hota...shayad, tab main GUNJAN ko kabhi khud se door nahin jaane deta...Hamesha usse apne paas rakhta...Pyar karta hoon uss se...par,keh nahin sakta...sirf aapki wajah se Main usse nahin apna sakta.Sirf aapki wajah se mujhe RiCHA se shaadi karni hogi...Kyunki,mujhe aap ko barbaad karna hai...Aapka sab kuchh chhin lena hai...thik,waise jaise aapne mere saath kiya... Thanx for coming here...mujhe mera maqsad yaad dilaane ke liye..Ab main kamzor nahin padoonga...Ab mujhe koi doubt nahin...Ab mujhe achhi tarah se pata hai ki,mujhe kya karna hai...Maine last decision le liya hai... aur ab isse koi nahin badal sakta...koi bhi nahin...)) He wiped his tears as he picked up his cell and dialed a number...his mind made up... once again...letting his mind win over his heart...
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KHURANA INDUSTRIES
As MONISH's car readched a huge gate... the gate slowly opened... and his car entered the office compound... A 15 storey building, It looked impressive... Huge windows covered with expensive glass... a king sized board which read...KHURANA INDUSTRIES stood on a huge stone near the entrance of the building... GUNJAN asked him, innocence evident as she spoke...
G - Kya yeh aapka Office hai...??
M - (smiled) Haan...Yeh mera Office hai...aur aaj se tumhaara bhi...In short,kahoon toh,aaj se Hamara Office hai.
GUNJAN kept looking at the Building, awestruck. As the car came to a halt near the entrance, and the Driver held the door open for MONISH and the security at the office scurried to open the door for GUNJAN, she came back to the present. She got off the car and kept looking at the building... It was so huge...even bigger than the SHERGILL's H.O... GUNJAN was really nervous... She had only seen photos of such structures in magazines or on Television. Never had she anticipated that she would see one for herself, let alone work in such a office. MONISH looked at her and saw her staring at the office Building. Softly, he asked her... "Kya hua...? Kahaan kho gayi...? Exterior pasand nahin aaya...?
G - (come to her sense) No...No...aisa nahin hai...woh actually...iss tarah suddenly...
M - (cuts immediately) Don't worry...Main hoon naa tumhaare saath...aur yeh mera hi office hai..so,don't be nervous...toh andar chalein...? (asked very softly)
G - Wo...woh..main... Nahin...woh aapne kaha naa ki,sirf 10 min. ka kaam hai...toh kya main aapka yahin wait karoon...? Aap apna kam khatam kar aa jaiye...phir saath mein chalte hain naa...
M - (smiled..she still was just as nervous as she was that day 2 years ago...He could feel her nervousness as she spoke... He spoke a bit strictly...)No..way...!! U mean, main tumhein yahin akela chhod kar chala jaaoon...?? Its not possible... Maine kaha naa...Don't be nervous...Tum aao toh...tumhein hamara Cabin bhi toh dikhana hai... (said very excitedly)
G - Hamara...?? Hamara Cabin...? (asked strangely)
M - Arre...mera matlab hai,mera aur tumhaara Cabin..jo, iss Building ki 12th Floor par hai. Tumhein woh zaroor pasand aayega...Tum aao toh sahi... (holding her hand and almost dragging her, gently...)
As they entered the office building, she was even more awestruck. The Reception area was huge...A huge wooden table housed a computer and a telephone... the rest of the shinning wood table was empty...at the other end was a vase that held Orchids... Two sitting areas dominated by sofa's and a wooden center table each and the reception looked wram and welcoming. Looking around, she followed MONISH as they reached an elevator... a Glass Elevator... This was only for MONISH and his close associates... Not for the general staffs. She was surprised not to see an attendant... she said nothing...but, when she saw MONISH Hit the 10th floor button instead of the 12th floor, she asked him in a worried tone...
G - Aapne toh kaha ki,aapka Cabin 12th Floor par hai...phir,10th Floor...??
M - (said with smiling face) Thanx for reminder...(smiled again) Actually,Yahaan sabhi kuchh automatically set hai...yeh lift 12th floor par khud se hi ruk jaayegi,don't worry. Aur,woh jin papers par mujhe sign karne hain...woh,office 10th Floor par hai...Tum chaho toh mere saath meeting mein aa sakti ho...agar nahin toh...jab tak main free hota hoon...tum 12th Floor par mere Cabin mein mera wait karna...Main bas 5-10 min. mein aa jaaoonga...
She said nothing...the fear not leaving her eyes as she faintly smiled... she just nodded. As the elevator reached the 10th floor... and the doors slowly opened, MONISH got off and looked at her... she was looking at him, her eyes still holding the fear in them.
MONISH smiled and said reassuringly... "Don't worry..Main bas abhi aaya..."
As the elevator closed, GUNJAN was alone in the Elevator...at an unknown place... so,what if not with a complete stranger... MONISH kept looking at her till the elevator moved upwards away from his sight...
And as soon as the Elevator moved upwards, MONISH made a call... and asked him in very hurry way...
M - RAVi...Sab kuchh ready hai naa...?? Mujhe plan mein koi problem nahin chahiye...
R - Sir ! Aap be-fikr rahein...sab kuchh waise hi kiya hai jaisa aapne instruct kiya tha... Maine khud check kiya hai...(said in very confident voice)
M - Good !! Tumhein tumhaara inaam mil jaayega...Ok...Now,RECEPTION par instuction do ki,Next 2-3 hrs. tak mujhe mere Floor par koi disturbance nahin chahiye...kisi bhi tarah ki disturbance main tolerate nahin karonga... (said in very strict instructive tone)
R - Don't worry Sir...Maine all ready Receptionist ko order de diya hai...even,12th Floor par appoint staff ko bhi 4th Floor par ho rahe SEMINAR ko attend karne ke liye bhej diya hai...abhi 12th Floor puri tarah se khaali hai.
M - (said with smiling face) Good work...Ok...Main tumhein baad mein call karta hoon...Bye !! another victory, He thought as he disconnected the call...
Meanwhile GUNJAN
As the Elevator stopped on the 12th floor, GUNJAN got off it and was by now totally petrified... not a soul to be seen... all cubicles empty... in a low, scared voice, she asked...
Hello...!!
Koi Hai...??
But,she didn't get any response...she was so scared, she turned towards the Elevator but, the Elevator was gone. She pressed the elevator button, frantically, but nothing happened. She looked around and then she saw the teak wood door... which had a Golden Name Plate on it...the name read as... Mr.MONISH KHURANA... she heaved a sigh of relief... ((Oh ! Toh yeh hai MONiSH ka Cabin...Jahaan unhone mujhe wait karne ko kaha hai...lekin,yahaan itna ajeeb sa sannata kyun hai...? Koi bhi staff kyun nahin nazar aa raha...? Kahaan gaye sabhi...? Oh...shayad 10th Floor par hi honge...jahaan MONiSH gaye hain...shayad wahaan koi meeting ho rahi hai...Ok..Lekin main itna darr kyun rahi hoon...?? Kuchh hi der ki toh baat hai...MONiSH ke aate hi unke saath chali jaaoongi...Tab tak jaisa unhone kaha hai...waise hi chup-chap unke Cabin mein jakar unke aane ka wait karna chahiye...))
Slowly she walked towards the cabin. As she reached the cabin, she stopped and forwarded her hand to open the door... but, then she moved her hand back and turned. She looked around... the silence on the floor was getting to her. She turned around again and opened the cabin door... She peeped in and was amazed to see the decor of the cabin. Slowly she pushed the huge door open and walked in... clutching the books close to her as she looked around, taking small steps.
The swanky cabin was tastefully done up.A semi-circle glass top desk occupied the center of the huge cabin. paintings from around the world occupied prominent places on the wall. the city moving at its own pace could be seen through the french window which was now locked. A sitting area which was made up of two sofa's and four chairs surrounded the glass center table. The grey carpet below her feet completed the ambiance. She walked towards the sofa... treading carefully. She felt awkward in this place. She remembered her Boss's... Ex Boss's cabin... which was small, yet neatly done up...
But,suddenly she heard the click of the door. Her eyes widened in fear, as she turned around with a start, to see the door closed. Her books fell from her hands as she ran towards the door... and turned the knob, pulling the door towards her as she again turned the knob... but, the door refused to budge... she rattled the door, trying to open it. And when this did not seem to work, she started banging on the door...with one hand, her other hand yet trying to open the lock. Her voice choking as her eyes welled up with tears, she cried out...
" Hello...Koi hai...?? "
" Please open the door...!! "
" Please Darwaza Kholiye...!! "
After knocking on the door for a long time, her voice raised and became hysterical as she started to cry and plead with whoever would be able to hear her...
" Please...Open the door... "
" Mujhe ghar jaana hai... "
" MONiSH...R U there...?? "
" Please help me...?? "
She was continuously crying as she slid down against the door, her hands clutching the knob of the door as she sat on the floor. Suddenly she heard footsteps... and she stopped crying... she was absolutely petrified as she heard the footsteps... her heart thumping, she said in alow voice, choked with fear...
" Please open the door... "
" Mujhe yahaan se jaana hai... "


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NANDA HOUSE
SHARADA Jii was unable to concentrate on anything. Since morning, after GUNJAN left and those men came visiting, she was disturbed. She could not concentrate on her cooking or cleaning. The maid did inquire about what was bothering her, but SHARADA Jii just told her that she had a headache. She looked at clock, then at the door. She was pacing the room...she sat down on the sofa and picked up the magazine lying next to her. This was perhaps the 100th time since morning that she had picked up the magazine, trying to read it to divert her mind...failing at it and keeping it back on the sofa.
She stood up again and walked towards the window to see If, her husband's car was parked below. But, no...that parking slot was empty. She looked at the clock and went to kitchen to make tea. Whilst she was making tea, she heard the doorbell ring. Turning the gas off, she rushed to open the door. Seeing her husband standing at the door, with a pleasant smile on his face, she heaved a sigh of relief... and before he could enter the house, she asked in a worried tone...
S - Aa gaye aap...? Itni der kyun laga di...kab se aapka hi wait kar rahi hoon...
Prof.N - Arre hua kya...? Aap itni worried kyun hain...? Aur,mujhe der kahaan hui...? jaise hi Mitra Jii ne bataya ki aapki call aayi thi aur aapne urgently bulaya hai...waise hi half day ki leave le kar aa raha hoon...
S - Toh aur kya karti...Aapka Mobile hi switch off aa raha tha...
Prof.NANDA - Arre Haan ! woh kal RAHUL ke jaane ki tension mein Mobile ko charge mein lagana hi bhool gaya tha... Achha ab andar toh aane dijiye...phir,aaram se baatein karte hain...
SHARADA Jii realised she was blocking the door and she turned around and walked in. Prof.NANDA smiled as he too followed her, after shutting the door of their residence. Hearing the door close behind her, SHARADA Jii turned around and not seeing GUNJAN with Prof.NANDA, she asked him... "Arre ! Darwajah kyun band kar rahe hain...? GUNJAN ko aane toh dete...
Prof.NANDA - (shockingly) WHAT...? GUNJAN ab tak ghar nahin aayi...?? Lekin,aisa kaise ho sakta hai..woh toh subah Book issue karane ke baad fauran hi chali gayi thi...mujhse mili bhi thi..aur,mujhse kaha bhi tha ki,Ghar ja rahi hoon...ab toh (check his wrist watch) 2 bajne ko aaye...ab tak toh usse pahunch jaana chahiye tha...
S - (said very worriedly) Yeh kya keh rahe hain aap...? Woh toh ab tak ghar aayi hi nahin...? Kahaan gayi hogi woh...? Mujhe bina bataye ,woh kahin nahin jaati... Mera dil bahoot ghabra raha hai...Kahaan hogi meri bachhi...?
Prof.NANDA knew his wife very well... He knew how upset she would get where GUNJAN was concerned. He was worried too...It was not like GUNJAN to stay away from home for so long without informing either of them. So putting up a casual attitude to make his wife a bit toned down, he said...

Prof.N - Oh ! Aap bhi naa SHARDA Jii...fauran hi ghabra jaati hain...Arre ! Woh bachhi thode naa hai jo...
S - (cuts with her very worried tone) Jaanti hoon..Bachhi nahin hai...issi liye toh zyada darr rahi hoon...aap jaante toh hain usse... woh aaj kal ki ladkiyon jitni tez nahin... Mujhe bahot fikr ho rahi hai uski...Pata nahin kya hua hoga...RAHUL bhi toh nahin hai... Woh hota toh mujhe itni fikr nahin hoti... lekin...abhi...? kis se poochoon main...?? (her tension and concern was reflecting from her eyes)
Prof.N - Arre...toh iss mein itna worried hone ki kya zaroorat hai...Aap usse phone kar lijiye...Aapko pata chal jaayega ki,woh abhi iss waqt kahaan hai...
S - Kahaan karoon Phone...? Jaldi mein woh apna cell le jaana hi bhool gayi...
Prof.N - Oh ! par,Dekhiye aap itni tension na len...GUNJAN ko kuchh nahin hua hai...Ho sakta hai,kisi friend ke ghar chali gayi hogi...college ke na sahi par,Office mein itne din kaam kiya hai..wahaan toh uske friend honge naa...woh zaroor kisi friend ke ghar hi gayi hogi...Don't worry...woh bas abhi aa jaayegi... He really wanted to change the topic and distract her mind from this matter...so asked quickly... Achha,Pehle yeh toh bataiye...ki,aisi kaun si baat thi jise batane ke liye Lunch Hr. mein hi itna urgently bulaya...? Aap itni tensed kyun thin...?
S - (said in still worried tone) Dekhiye...abhi mujhse aur kuchh nahin kaha jaayega...ab jab tak GUNJAN nahin aa jaati...tab tak main aur kuchh nahin sochna chahti...Main aapko woh Notice de deti hoon...Aap khud se padh len..iss waqt mujhe sirf Apni bachhi ki parwah hai...aur kisi bhi cheez ki nahin... mumbling to herself, she went to their room and returned shortly with a brown colored envelope and handed it over to Prof.NANDA.
S - Yeh NOTICE aaya hai...Aap khud hi padh lo...Jab tak main uska Mobile check karti hoon...Kal hi toh naya liya hai...pata nahin Number bhi add kiye hain yaa nahin...??She was really very worried. Prof.NANDA took the envelope from her and opened it to take out the paper it contained.


SHARADA Jii was busy checking GUNJAN's cell for any number. But her 'Phone Book' was empty...She got all the more tensed... and then she heard her husband exclaim very angrily...
Prof.N - WHAT...?? Yeh kya hai...? Woh aisa kaise kar sakte hain..? Yeh sab koi mazaak hai kya...?
SHARDA Jii looked at her husband and came close to him as she spoke... " Pata nahin yeh sab kya ho raha hai...? Pehle yeh Notice aur ab yeh GUNJAN ka ab tak ghar na aana...Mujhe toh bahot darr lag raha hai...Pata nahin...kya hone wala hai...? Kahaan hogi meri GUNJAN...? Woh kabhi bhi mujhe bataye bina itni der tak bahar nahin rehti...In fact, woh akeli jaati hi kahaan hai...jab bhi bahar jaana hota tha RAHUL ke saath hi jaati thi...par...?? Kahin woh kisi musibat mein toh nahin...? (said worriedly) aur,phir abhi thodi der mein RAHUL ka phone bhi aata hi hoga...kya kahenge hum usse...? Yeh Notice waali baat toh hide kar bhi lenge par, agar usne GUNJAN se baat karni chahi toh..?? Toh kya kahenge hum...??
Prof.NANDA realised the situation was now getting bad. He could no longer hide his concern for GUNJAN. Keeping his hand on his wife's shoulder, he said in a tone reflecting re-assurance... "SHARDA Jii..aap ghabraiye nahin...kuchh nahin hoga GUNJAN ko...aap...aap...yahin rahiye...Main khud jaata hoon...usse dhoondhne...shayad woh Library mein hi ruk gayi hogi... aap toh jaanti hain ki,usse books padhna kitna achha lagta hai..shayad, phir se college chali gayi ho...socha hoga College ke baad mere saath hi aa jaayegi... par,main toh pehle hi aa gaya naa...so,don't worry... Main abhi usse le kar aata hoon... aap please ghabraiye nahin... (He was trying to reassure her...)
SHARADA Jii knew that this was not possible. It was not like GUNJAN to do something like this. Had she wanted to stay back and read some books at the college Library, she would have informed Prof. NANDA or at least called up home. But this time, she hoped GUNJAN had done what Prof.NANDA was saying... her eyes moist, she said... "Aap jaldi jaaiye... shayad woh college mein aapko hi dhoondh rahi ho...?"
Prof.N - Haan...main abhi jaata hoon...Aap mujhe uska cell de dijiye...mera Mobile toh charge hi nahin hai...Agar woh aa jaaye toh...mujhe call kar dijiyega..." SHARADA Jii handed over GUNJAN's cell to her husband. As Mr.NANDA turned to leave, he stopped and turned back to look at his wife, who was wiping her tears. He said in a soft and caring tone... "SHARDA Jii ! Dekhiye agar woh aa jaaye...toh please aap usse daantna nahin... aap toh jaanti hain usse ki,woh kitni sensetive hai...aap usse sirf pyar se samjha dena...woh samajh jaayegi...agar aap usse kuchh kahengi toh mujhe bhi achha nahin lagega... meri beti irresponsible nahin hai...bas woh shayad inform karna bhool gayi hogi.. (said in very confident tone)
S - Kaisi baat kar rahe hain aap...? (said in very loving tone) maine kab daanta meri bachhi ko...? Woh kabhi koi galti karti hi nahin...toh main kyun usse kuchh bhi kahoongi... Aap please abhi jaakar usse le aao... Mujhe sach mein kaafi fikr ho rahi hai uss ki...
Prof.NANDA left after nodding in a positive, leaving behind a worried SHARADA Jii... His princess was not home yet...It definitely was a matter of grave concern, given her innocent nature.

(To be Continued...)



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Edited by SIZZZLER - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar yaha tu sirf banner hai story kaha hai i cant read the story here ? dont know why?😭 😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was soo nice i hope Monish's ka office samrat aya jaya aur gunjan ko bacha la

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