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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Awesome 3...Really rocking update ..Sorry for not giving a long comment..๐Ÿ˜ณ But the update was really a big turn point of the story..It showed & reviled lot of inner thoughts & feelings..It was beautifully portrayed too..Samrat EGO was little too much to handle..But Gunjan was so sweet & caring..All of their point of views are going against each others wishes..Plzz continue soon..Thanks for the pm..

I heard about Joseph...Really hope he feels better soon...๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fend

hey guys๐Ÿค— it was awesome update loved it very much๐Ÿ‘ sam is feeling guilty from inside and missing her presence but hez not showing hope he realises soon n rahul is being very caring towards gunjan๐Ÿ˜ณ eagerly waiting to know what is gng on in monish mind๐Ÿ˜• loved each n every scene very well written ๐Ÿ‘u guys r dng gr888 keep it up๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ do cont soon n thanks for the pm๐Ÿ˜Š



Thanx a lot Buddy for your sweet Reply. SAMRAT is feeling guilty...but,his EGO is main problem for him so,he can't accept his actual condition. Yes,RAHUL is very concerned for GUNJAN..A very caring lover. MONISH is ready with his full proof Plan... Next some parts is mainly focusing MONISH-SAMRAT confrontation.



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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was soo nice 29 3 and 4
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi S3(SOHAM SONIA & SWATI) i hope i have mentioned the correct names...
agian awesome update...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

mohnish & samrat were in their usual self...samrat in his angry young man attitude๐Ÿ˜ก.๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก..& monish in his gunjan dreamland...๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

& rahul ne toh family planning bhi suru kar di hai๐Ÿ˜‰...
one thing about rahul & monish which i didn't like that they always dream about gunjan & want her to be there wife...but nobody things about gunjan's wish that wat she wants..wat is her wish...๐Ÿ˜’
but atleast rahul parents are concern about her wish they don't want to pressurized her for anything..talk bet ween them are nice very well executed...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

rajan scene was cute...

the highlight of the update were these lines
1 din aap ki god mein jo bachha khel raha hoga...woh mujhe PAPA...Aapko Grand Paa...Mom ko Dadi...aur Maa...?? woh toh obviously GUNJAN hi hogi...))๐Ÿ˜•ConfusedConfusedConfused

By this i can imagine the future track of the story...but i can only guess kuch bhi ho sakta hai...which turned out to be shocker for us...๐Ÿ˜ฒ

continue soon...thanx for the pm..

Tanu..๐Ÿ˜Š


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Lekshmic7

BRILLIANT update guys.loved each nd every scene. Rahul is very caring nd protective 4 gunjan.bt onething i cant understand ws, whnvr Rahul is thinking about deir relation,he is considering only about his own feelings.he is nt thinking abt wt gunjan wants in her life nd wt is her dreams in life. he is considering her as his own property..OMG!!! wt was dat, in RED LETTERS? seeing it as a small preview of wts going 2 hpn in future.,twist. SAMRAT!!! wt ws his problem yaar?he is feeling guilty nd is missing her too.bt he is nt ready 2 admitt it.when will he realise his true feelings 4 her?Am sure, one day he will dfntly going 2 pay 4 his egoistic nd ambitious nature. here comes d great over confident MONISH KHURANA! his actions r showing not his love it only showing pure OBSESSION! thinking dat dis kiwish project will leads 2 d DEAL bw sam-monish. u guys r doing a great job. story is going so well. hope everything is finE with JOSEPH. WISHING HIM A SPEEDY RECOVERY.thanks 4 d pm.



Thank you LEKSHMi for your sweet comment.๐Ÿ˜Š All 3 are considering only their feelings... no one is sparing a thought for GUNJAN... what she wants??? Who she wants to spend her life with??? But,If U read the CS carefully...then,Its clear that,this story about to 3 Grey shade male characters and their POV about LOVE. This is typical male dominated thinking prevalent in our Society.
SAMRAT,MONISH & RAHUL... They all are right in their place. Thee can't change their maintelity overnight.
And,RED LETTERS Part is Mega Twist of the story so,V can't reveal any thing about that part But,believe us its not a Routine 'Ghisa-Pita' turn... so,WAIT N WATCH.๐Ÿ˜ณ
V R trying to contact JOS...but,Don't know Y ?? his cell is still 'Switch off'... May B,Usse abhi Hospital se discharge nahin kiya ho. Thanx 4 showing your concern about him.



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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey S3 and Joseph... ๐Ÿ˜Š

Finally after so long u updated it...again witha an Excellent peice of work... ๐Ÿ˜Š

Joseph plzzz Get well very soon na...its my most fav SS and cant wait for it so long

thanks for giving quite long and very very intersting update... ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Seriousely its a much much better than Any serial or any show...infact for me this story and concept is 10 times better than IPKKND...bcoz Samrat is here na with Gunjan.๐Ÿ˜‰.. but apart this story concept is really very strong...i think i have mentioned this in my every comment ... ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ‘

okkk now coming to the update...starting with Nanda's scene...Rahul Gunjan scene was very nice...Poor Gunjan again and again missed Samrat and compared Rahul with Samrat...her thoughts were written so nicely...im still feeling very bad for her Mother's locket...infact in this whole part i was thoroughly waiting for one scene...(will mention later๐Ÿ˜‰)

then Coffe scene...Rahul was lost in her...and today unknowingly he uttered his hidden emotions and feelings infront of heer and his parents now and then...his emotion are really out of control now... but then suddenly Rahul shouted on her just for mobile..๐Ÿ˜ฒ.. seriousely pehle mujhe b yahi lga... ๐Ÿ˜†

but then he explained his care for her...Shardah ji is really a nice lady...her care and love for Gunjan was so lovely...๐Ÿ˜ณ.no doubt she is a motherly figure for Gunjan though shez an arphan but they never used to feel her like an orphan... Sharda ji concern talks for Gunjan was lovely scene... and Gunjan shez sooo innocent and caring herself too...she was crying just for hiding the truth from them...so sweet she is no doubt... ๐Ÿ˜ณ

both parts of Nanda's scene were beautifully written a sweet family picture...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Sorry scene was very nice...infact in the last when Rahul was getting ready for the flight and Gunjan was preparing food for him...and finally he told his parents abt his dramgirl without taking a name...but yet Mr and Mrs Nanda were very happy and sad too ...first time Sharda ji express her desire for Rahul and Gunjan and Pro Nanda too...and i was like inki to problem hi solve ho gai...but who knows what destiny has decided to do with them... ๐Ÿ˜‰

that train and flight convo between Rahul and Gunjan were really nice.๐Ÿ˜†...kitnchen scene was very emotional..Gunjan consider Rahul just as a gud frnd but poor Rahul he misunderstand her concerning lines for him now...but apart all this honestly guys i was somewhere little happy to all this...finally ek or HADDI remove hui just for few days...i know Joesph and S3 these all Haddis combinely make ur story so much intersting and worth to read it with eagerly and desperate feelings...but still i was happy after Richa Rahul also went... ๐Ÿ˜‰

ab reh gya Monish๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Ryt now i m feeling him a great HADDI between my Sajan...Hadd hi hoti he uski (wo kya kehte hen guys khayali pulaao bnana...)...such a day dreamer boy he is...imaginning Gunjan as his wife all the time... ๐Ÿคข

okk now came Shergill's scene..u know what in every update there is always mine one fav scene with one fav and famouse line presents...and in this part...Samrat office scene was mine too much fav scene...how much hez missing Gunjan but not admiting the truth...His first thought were Awesomly written...he missed her but then his Ego come in between ...hez desperatly want to her come back but hen said ye to request jesa sound kar raha he..๐Ÿ˜•etc etc...and then phone convo with Sharma ji was so sweet...when he corrected his sentence.๐Ÿ˜†...you know guys much more from all Haddis i think Samrat's EGO is the Biggest Haddi between Sajan...who never allows him to accept his true feeling towards her and allow him to give a clear way to all his feelings and emotions...

since the day Gunjan has resigned i always thought abt that contract which Smarat had Signed to her...and i think this time he used that contract excuse for calling her back in his office...i loved the way when he said to sharma ji and himself that tum wapis ajae koi tumhe kuch nai kahe ga..me daantoon ga b nai...

kitni efforts kar rha he Sammy usy wapis bulane k lye...this whole scene was mind blowing..Superb...but my fav line was..infact this time not line..but the whole paragraph was mine very fav...when he read the Keewish int files and that points...and after that he thought kitni detail se tum ne sare points explain kiye..phir itni deail se tum ne khud ko explain kyu nai kia..tum kyu chali gai Gunjan and all...it was sooo touchy and Beautifull lines...loved it alot...โค๏ธ

Wondeful part guys u have written this BEautifully...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Then Came Monish...Ahhh so desperately wanted to meet Gunjan and dont know kya khichri paka raha he...but His scene in Sharma ji office was mind blowing...when Sharma ji informed him abt her resignation then his pleasure expressions and sharma ji confused expression were clearly seen in your writting ...I wish Sharma ji would informed Samrat abt all this...And then his meeting with mr, Agarwaal i think...now he might b do something wrong and will create any Panga between Sajan๐Ÿ˜ก

but samrat is Samrat after all..no one can beat him...hope so Samrat win in his determinations.๐Ÿ˜‰... and the last scene was to which i was waiting for...didn't come in this part...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...anyways will wait little more..but hope so u would b write in that way...i was waiting for Samrat going to Gunjan's cabin..and found that paper..which has thrown from her bag..i still hope it would be the receipt of that locket...so that Samrat would come to know abt her sacrifies...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ anyways overall Wonderfull FAntastic...marvellouse update it was... plzzz continue son the next part...eagerly waitng for the update...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: snowwhite28

Hi S3(SOHAM SONIA & SWATI) i hope i have mentioned the correct names...
agian awesome update...๐Ÿ‘

mohnish & samrat were in their usual self...samrat in his angry young man attitude๐Ÿ˜ก.๐Ÿ˜ก..& monish in his gunjan dreamland...๐Ÿ˜

& rahul ne toh family planning bhi suru kar di hai๐Ÿ˜‰...
one thing about rahul & monish which i didn't like that they always dream about gunjan & want her to be there wife...but nobody things about gunjan's wish that wat she wants..wat is her wish...๐Ÿ˜’
but atleast rahul parents are concern about her wish they don't want to pressurized her for anything..talk bet ween them are nice very well executed...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

rajan scene was cute...

the highlight of the update were these lines
1 din aap ki god mein jo bachha khel raha hoga...woh mujhe PAPA...Aapko Grand Paa...Mom ko Dadi...aur Maa...?? woh toh obviously GUNJAN hi hogi...))๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

By this i can imagine the future track of the story...but i can only guess kuch bhi ho sakta hai...which turned out to be shocker for us...๐Ÿ˜ฒ

continue soon...thanx for the pm..

Tanu..๐Ÿ˜Š




Thanx TANU 4 your sweet n long Feed-Back.๐Ÿ˜ณ Yes,U have mentioned the correct names๐Ÿ˜†.

RAHUL & MONISH R totally obsessed for GUNJAN...so,they are thinking about her all the times. And about GUNJAN wish...Its not possible B'coz, they all 3 Characters are in GREY shade...and don't believe in the word of 'Lost' or 'Sacrifice' (Mentioned in CS).This is the main Concept and theme of this story. 2nd thing,They are totally different from Routine 'HERO'. GUNJAN is the main victim of this story.

Red Thought Lines is eternal part of the Future story...but,its truly different from general thought.๐Ÿ˜ณ. And yes...Kuchh bhi ho sakta hai...๐Ÿ˜ณ So,cant judge or assume whole story B4 reading the Climax part...B'coz I personally think...the Climax is main USP of this story...so,WAIT n WATCH.๐Ÿ˜‰

Thanx again for your regular sweet Feed-Back๐Ÿ˜Š.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was soo nice 29 3 and 4



Thanx SHAFOO for your Comment๐Ÿ˜Š.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys ๐Ÿ˜Š
wow as usual another awsome update written by you guys๐Ÿ‘
really loving the story
but i wish i would get to see more sajan sceans soon I know you have to give importance to all the main charecters and the story but still wish the sajan story would move further but il wait ๐Ÿ˜Š
anyways in this update the part that really got me was when rahul's parents said they would love to have gunjan as their bahu๐Ÿ˜ฒuntill now i was thinking that they would be against rahul wanting to get married to gunjan but it turned out to be their dream...rahul seems to have the advantage ๐Ÿ˜‰
and monish part was intresting dont know what he is planning but it sounds bad for my samrat ๐Ÿ˜” hoping things work out in samrats favour and gunjan rejoins office ๐Ÿ˜Š
and im still trying to somehow link everything to thoes teasers of yours although it is not working yet๐Ÿ˜† i guess im just gonna have to wait for the parts๐Ÿ˜›
continue soon
seriously love this ffโค๏ธ
love
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gunurlove

Hey S3 and Joseph... ๐Ÿ˜Š

Finally after so long u updated it...again witha an Excellent peice of work... ๐Ÿ˜Š

Joseph plzzz Get well very soon na...its my most fav SS and cant wait for it so long

thanks for giving quite long and very very intersting update... ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Seriousely its a much much better than Any serial or any show...infact for me this story and concept is 10 times better than IPKKND...bcoz Samrat is here na with Gunjan.๐Ÿ˜‰.. but apart this story concept is really very strong...i think i have mentioned this in my every comment ... ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ‘

okkk now coming to the update...starting with Nanda's scene...Rahul Gunjan scene was very nice...Poor Gunjan again and again missed Samrat and compared Rahul with Samrat...her thoughts were written so nicely...im still feeling very bad for her Mother's locket...infact in this whole part i was thoroughly waiting for one scene...(will mention later๐Ÿ˜‰)

then Coffe scene...Rahul was lost in her...and today unknowingly he uttered his hidden emotions and feelings infront of heer and his parents now and then...his emotion are really out of control now... but then suddenly Rahul shouted on her just for mobile..๐Ÿ˜ฒ.. seriousely pehle mujhe b yahi lga... ๐Ÿ˜†

but then he explained his care for her...Shardah ji is really a nice lady...her care and love for Gunjan was so lovely...๐Ÿ˜ณ.no doubt she is a motherly figure for Gunjan though shez an arphan but they never used to feel her like an orphan... Sharda ji concern talks for Gunjan was lovely scene... and Gunjan shez sooo innocent and caring herself too...she was crying just for hiding the truth from them...so sweet she is no doubt... ๐Ÿ˜ณ

both parts of Nanda's scene were beautifully written a sweet family picture...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Sorry scene was very nice...infact in the last when Rahul was getting ready for the flight and Gunjan was preparing food for him...and finally he told his parents abt his dramgirl without taking a name...but yet Mr and Mrs Nanda were very happy and sad too ...first time Sharda ji express her desire for Rahul and Gunjan and Pro Nanda too...and i was like inki to problem hi solve ho gai...but who knows what destiny has decided to do with them... ๐Ÿ˜‰

that train and flight convo between Rahul and Gunjan were really nice.๐Ÿ˜†...kitnchen scene was very emotional..Gunjan consider Rahul just as a gud frnd but poor Rahul he misunderstand her concerning lines for him now...but apart all this honestly guys i was somewhere little happy to all this...finally ek or HADDI remove hui just for few days...i know Joesph and S3 these all Haddis combinely make ur story so much intersting and worth to read it with eagerly and desperate feelings...but still i was happy after Richa Rahul also went... ๐Ÿ˜‰

ab reh gya Monish๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Ryt now i m feeling him a great HADDI between my Sajan...Hadd hi hoti he uski (wo kya kehte hen guys khayali pulaao bnana...)...such a day dreamer boy he is...imaginning Gunjan as his wife all the time... ๐Ÿคข

okk now came Shergill's scene..u know what in every update there is always mine one fav scene with one fav and famouse line presents...and in this part...Samrat office scene was mine too much fav scene...how much hez missing Gunjan but not admiting the truth...His first thought were Awesomly written...he missed her but then his Ego come in between ...hez desperatly want to her come back but hen said ye to request jesa sound kar raha he..๐Ÿ˜•etc etc...and then phone convo with Sharma ji was so sweet...when he corrected his sentence.๐Ÿ˜†...you know guys much more from all Haddis i think Samrat's EGO is the Biggest Haddi between Sajan...who never allows him to accept his true feeling towards her and allow him to give a clear way to all his feelings and emotions...

since the day Gunjan has resigned i always thought abt that contract which Smarat had Signed to her...and i think this time he used that contract excuse for calling her back in his office...i loved the way when he said to sharma ji and himself that tum wapis ajae koi tumhe kuch nai kahe ga..me daantoon ga b nai...

kitni efforts kar rha he Sammy usy wapis bulane k lye...this whole scene was mind blowing..Superb...but my fav line was..infact this time not line..but the whole paragraph was mine very fav...when he read the Keewish int files and that points...and after that he thought kitni detail se tum ne sare points explain kiye..phir itni deail se tum ne khud ko explain kyu nai kia..tum kyu chali gai Gunjan and all...it was sooo touchy and Beautifull lines...loved it alot...โค๏ธ

Wondeful part guys u have written this BEautifully...๐Ÿ‘

Then Came Monish...Ahhh so desperately wanted to meet Gunjan and dont know kya khichri paka raha he...but His scene in Sharma ji office was mind blowing...when Sharma ji informed him abt her resignation then his pleasure expressions and sharma ji confused expression were clearly seen in your writting ...I wish Sharma ji would informed Samrat abt all this...And then his meeting with mr, Agarwaal i think...now he might b do something wrong and will create any Panga between Sajan๐Ÿ˜ก

but samrat is Samrat after all..no one can beat him...hope so Samrat win in his determinations.๐Ÿ˜‰... and the last scene was to which i was waiting for...didn't come in this part...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...anyways will wait little more..but hope so u would b write in that way...i was waiting for Samrat going to Gunjan's cabin..and found that paper..which has thrown from her bag..i still hope it would be the receipt of that locket...so that Samrat would come to know abt her sacrifies...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ anyways overall Wonderfull FAntastic...marvellouse update it was... plzzz continue son the next part...eagerly waitng for the update...
thanks for the pm...



Thank U for your reply, RiJA.๐Ÿ˜Š V R overwhelmed at your comment comparing this FF to and finding it better than the show.๐Ÿ˜ณ Its really Big compliments for this FF.๐Ÿ˜ณ ofcourse the story concept is very strong... one of the main reasons that V took over from JOSEPH.

Unknowingly, GUNJAN ends up comparing RAHUL and SAMRAT. She is seeing a stark contrast in their behavior. Slowly and steadily, RAHUL is now making his intentions very clear. But then, more than anything else, he cares for her well being and cannot fathom the repercussions of her being not contactable. So, his anger.

Destiny... no one... no one at all can change destiny... what destiny has in store for GUNJAN...well... wait and watch๐Ÿ˜ณ.

It is a very common trait... mistaking friendship to be something else... and this happens equally... being taken for granted, that if I feel so for the other, obviously the other reciprocates. The main reason for sometimes, Best Friends turning foes... and it is these real feelings that help us write the stories... Ok, on the count...2 down 1 to go... haddi's in SaJan's life, I mean... but if all go, RiJA...what happens?? How does the story move??

SAMRAT and his typical male ego, rightly said...the main haddi in SaJan's life as of now. How do you get a person like SAMRAT to accept his feelings??? He is missing her.

MONiSH is playing his cards carefully... maybe he is the closest to winning...๐Ÿ˜‰ wait and watch, dear.And about your Imagine scene...Yaa Its coming in next part.๐Ÿ˜ณ


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