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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey S3 and Joseph. Again it was the wonderful and mind blowing update.😛

Each scene and line was written so fantastically……👏👏👏👏👏

the very First scene Between Mehta and Samrat was Awesome……..very very nicely written……⭐️…..each n every line Mehta disgusting conversation about Gunjan and Samrat's 100% expected reaction ..each n everything was so perfectly written👍🏼….from starting to end..the way you have written this scene with each n every line was Superb…👏👏👏👏
firstly sam was pretending like a cool person n gave him a chance to speak more n more……….but finally he lost his control on himself n beat him very badly…wowww just for Gunjan…..…n the line when he said …tu ne meri Gunjan par apni buri nazar daalne ki himmat ki he❤️…here I was like.. "oh my God.😲.Meri Gunjan…." N then ab tujhe pta chale ga k wo mere liye kya he…I was praying kaash Gunjan sun le…..😳

Samrat spoke out so clearly in front of Gautam…but he was stupid enough to understand Samrat's feelings and condition abt Gunjan…….means not even once he didn't point out to samrat that hez interested in just an ordinary P.A…..or why he became so harsh and angry with his business client just for an ordinary girl…why hez saying meri gunjan now n then...wo mere liye kya he…ye wo…..…but he just said in starting that… tum ne ek ordinary P.A k lye mujh pe hath uthaya he…and then Finally Samrat proved that for Gunjan he can go at any extent….the way he trapped Mehta in drugs case ..that too in few minutes was Superbly written….very very Well done guys…👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏….4-4 brains chalte hen is SS me….its clearly visible by readers…………😉😳

Then Parking Area scene was also very nice……Sam's angry care his inner most feelings and he became worried for her..everything was so naturally described……he was angry with her n upset for her too……😉

But the Most Beautiful scene of this Part was Both Samrat and Gunjan's thoughts feelings n emotional scene for each other…..at their respective place……..what a scene guys………what a Heartbroken Confession of Sajan's………poor Gunjan I was totally feeling bad for her…….too much she had suffered today……..and the heart throbbing scene was Gunjan's mother's locket scene…😭….awww so touchy scene it was..i felt really very bad for her…what a self-respect girl……I really admired her self respect but plz guys koi or option nikaal lo na..but she should not sell her mother's single Nishaani………n gift …

plzz I really felt like cry on her condition……..😭😭😭

But finally both confess their true feelings n emotions for each other……awww I was so happy to read this………………..now eagerly waiting for the moment when they would confess infront of each other..which is not yet so simple…..

And here for one second I became so happy to read that line…..n I was like wowww sam was also thinking the same like me…… "dinner sath karne wale the"…….but unfortunately nothing happened like this……

This whole Scene was Magnificently written……..with its each n every line dialogues..having so much intensity pain and emotions of Sajan's feelings and condition….everything was Perfect………readers can clearly n completely feel all the intense situation…….Hatts of To you S3…for writing this whole scene so beautifully………👏👏👏👏👏

But then sara maza khrab karne end me Monish aa gya……now what is he planning…im sure he was talking abt any notice to sending Nanda's home…….😡

Don't know what would b happen next….eagerly waiting for next part to know abt Gunjan's resignation….will she actually resign n or not……….😕

Overall the whole update was As Superb as before…….⭐️

Now plz continue next part sooonnn….

as soon as possible…..cant wait…..
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Posted: 14 years ago


Thank you for your lovely comment😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

Hey S3 my good friends Soham, Swati , Sonia..

I know I am little behind in your FF MBYPH ...have not read last 2 updates...But now I am back home so I will catch up soon and then give a LONGGG comment...😊...SORRY My friends for late reply and not being able 2 read last 2 updates ...but will catch up soonnn...Pakaaa...and will comment soonnn...

wasey I absolutely love ur FF ..its the most awesome n most rocking FF in IF👍🏼...do continue superb updates...Love them a lottt👍🏼...

Love Ur good friend
Gunjan😊😊...



Do edit soon dear.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Joseph_A

FABULOUS Update Guyz...Totally Rocking ... 😊Actually,very busy now days..but,I can't control my self, to read this Update 😳 😆 😊.

Outstanding written part👏.each n every scene was so fantstic...just like, SAM-GAUTAM scene👏SAMRAT's thoughts n anger😳 and most emotional part of this Update...GUNJAN's thought scene in her room.😭 😭 😭 .Its very touch part.MONISH planning is surprise for me also...really no idea😕.

By the way,I am too much excited about further turn of story n 3 New Cameo Entries😊 😊.Please,update fast naa...😉 We are waiting eagerly.😊 and,I love long Updates...😳 so,please...continue it.😊

@Rija N Swati -> Thanks Guys,for your Big compliment...😳
IPKKND is my favorite too...so,I like ASR n SAM character similarity...Yes,SHYAM ko RAHUL or MONISH mein fit kar sakti ho.😆

Joseph.❤️


What can V say Buddy??? Thank U 4 appreciating our writing.😊 And taking time out of your busy schedule to read the update.😳

Writing GUNJAN's emotional scene was totally sapping for us... as writing SAMRAT-GAUTAM fight scene was enjoyable for us... about MONiSH's plan...finally ...4 once, U will have to wait and watch.😆

About the similarity between IPKKND and MBYPH... it is so similar... and MONiSH character fits SHYAM as of now...😃 But this the POV of SwaNia only...😃LAVANYA is also similar to RiCHA.😆

V will B updating very soon.😊


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Amira10

Nicee uptd!!! lovee it <3 Plzz cont soon n pm mee!!




Thanks Amira for your lovely comment.😊 We will update soon and definitely PM you.😃

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Thanks dear, for your comment.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gnaneswari

A heart-wrenching update! But, u have wrote it amazingly. Both sajan r in a vulnerable state, u have wrote it very nicely that i have started crying while reading it. And gunjan...in this state also, she is thinking that she had done something wrong! How innocent! How selfless she is! And hats-off to her self respect. Poor gunjan, she is going to sell her mom's last present. I'm feeling sad for her. I'm glad that they had confessed their love to themselves. I hadn't thought that samrat will accept that he loves gunjan this early. But, what is the monish's plan! And why he said that don't send that as they'll already be upset by rahul's trip! This means he is going to do something which will hurt gunjan or else whole nanda family. I want to know what will gunjan say to rahul. Because, in first look scene rahul is angry at samrat that he is responsible for gunjan's tears. If, gunjan won't say the whole scene to him, why he is so angry at samrat?! And how will gunjan get that contract for samrat? Where that file had gone? When will samrat comes to know that gunjan hadn't done anything, she hasn't done any deal with monish to harm him! I know, i have to read the next update to know all the answers. So, please update as soon as possible. And i really hope that all the misunderstandings will clear soon. U guys have done a brilliant job. Eagerly waiting for next update. Plz do cont very soon. Thanks for pm



Thank you for your comment, GNANESWARi.😳 It is nice to read that you have loved the update... heart wrenching it was. But this is how two extreme opposites who have not seen a normal childhood would behave, I suppose. While one decides to give back the hatred he received, the other decides to see the nicer side of people around. Perfect Balance .

GUNJAN is a self respecting girl. For her to live with the fact that she is the reason for someone's loss is not easy. Somehow, she has to repay at least the 'Hotel Bill' for the evening... and so the decision to sell her Mom's locket.

The confession was a surprise, hopefully making our readers smile through this extremely heart breaking update.

What will GUNJAN say to RAHUL ??? and where that File had gone..?? Please,Wait till some upcoming Updates.U will get many more surprises.😳

MONiSH is moving ahead with his plan...obviously by now he has realized it is not going to be that easy. His plan will also be unfolded soon. We will be updating soon.



Edited by SIZZZLER - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gunurlove

Hey S3 and Joseph. Again it was the wonderful and mind blowing update.😛

Each scene and line was written so fantastically''👏

the very First scene Between Mehta and Samrat was Awesome''..very very nicely written''⭐️'..each n every line Mehta disgusting conversation about Gunjan and Samrat's 100% expected reaction ..each n everything was so perfectly written👍🏼'.from starting to end..the way you have written this scene with each n every line was Superb'👏
firstly sam was pretending like a cool person n gave him a chance to speak more n more'''.but finally he lost his control on himself n beat him very badly'wowww just for Gunjan'..'n the line when he said 'tu ne meri Gunjan par apni buri nazar daalne ki himmat ki he❤️'here I was like.. "oh my God.😲.Meri Gunjan'." N then ab tujhe pta chale ga k wo mere liye kya he'I was praying kaash Gunjan sun le'..😳

Samrat spoke out so clearly in front of Gautam'but he was stupid enough to understand Samrat's feelings and condition abt Gunjan''.means not even once he didn't point out to samrat that hez interested in just an ordinary P.A'..or why he became so harsh and angry with his business client just for an ordinary girl'why hez saying meri gunjan now n then...wo mere liye kya he'ye wo'..'but he just said in starting that' tum ne ek ordinary P.A k lye mujh pe hath uthaya he'and then Finally Samrat proved that for Gunjan he can go at any extent'.the way he trapped Mehta in drugs case ..that too in few minutes was Superbly written'.very very Well done guys'👏'.4-4 brains chalte hen is SS me'.its clearly visible by readers''''😉😳

Then Parking Area scene was also very nice''Sam's angry care his inner most feelings and he became worried for her..everything was so naturally described''he was angry with her n upset for her too''😉

But the Most Beautiful scene of this Part was Both Samrat and Gunjan's thoughts feelings n emotional scene for each other'..at their respective place''..what a scene guys'''what a Heartbroken Confession of Sajan's'''poor Gunjan I was totally feeling bad for her''.too much she had suffered today''..and the heart throbbing scene was Gunjan's mother's locket scene'😭'.awww so touchy scene it was..i felt really very bad for her'what a self-respect girl''I really admired her self respect but plz guys koi or option nikaal lo na..but she should not sell her mother's single Nishaani'''n gift '

plzz I really felt like cry on her condition''..😭😭😭

But finally both confess their true feelings n emotions for each other''awww I was so happy to read this''''''..now eagerly waiting for the moment when they would confess infront of each other..which is not yet so simple'..

And here for one second I became so happy to read that line'..n I was like wowww sam was also thinking the same like me'' "dinner sath karne wale the"''.but unfortunately nothing happened like this''

This whole Scene was Magnificently written''..with its each n every line dialogues..having so much intensity pain and emotions of Sajan's feelings and condition'.everything was Perfect'''readers can clearly n completely feel all the intense situation''.Hatts of To you S3'for writing this whole scene so beautifully'''👏

But then sara maza khrab karne end me Monish aa gya''now what is he planning'im sure he was talking abt any notice to sending Nanda's home''.😡

Don't know what would b happen next'.eagerly waiting for next part to know abt Gunjan's resignation'.will she actually resign n or not'''.😕

Overall the whole update was As Superb as before''.⭐️

Now plz continue next part sooonnn'.

as soon as possible'..cant wait'..


Thank you Rija for your lovely comment.😊n where r u dear ? koi ata pata hi nahi hai 😳... anyways thanks for showing up ... n now come to the update ...

Mr Mehta... thank him , Rija... Samrat said those so sweet to read words...'MERI GUNJAN'...😍 but, yes, such people do exist... and the way Samrat deals with him is probably the only way to bang some sense in that cheap mind.

Samrat does get worried for her and then angry with himself for that. So he hides his concern by putting up a facade of anger.

The SaJan emotional talk at their respective homes... the locket scene was really very emotional to write too. And SaJan have finally confessed, but is it a case of too late now?? Both have decided to move away from each other. Gunjan has no other way to compensate part of the loss incurred by Samrat which she feels is because of her. She is a girl who will never take help from anyone... even if it means selling the locket...one final physical memory of her parents...they will always live on in her heart...and with the same respect... that is more important to her than any superficial memory. This part is a very cute and emotional part...Gunjan's decision to sell the locket... please wait for some upcoming updates.


Yes, Samrat did have plans on taking her for dinner...but these 3 IDIOTS 😡 ...they will never let it happen so easily, will they???😉 😆


Monish and Rahul are important characters in this FF. They have their own important roles to play and therefore need their space in each update. So that part was important too.

We will be updating soon.😊
Edited by SwaNia_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fend

hey guys🤗 it was awesome update👏 but very emotinal really feeling bad for gunjan as she is hurt badly n blaming herself for everything both sajan have confessed their feelings for each other in their mind 😳cannot understand what monish is up too hope he does not create more prob😕 each n every scene loved it very well written👏 do cont soon n thanks for the pm😊

Thank You for your comment.😊 Gunjan is at an all time low... she is unable to fathom the reason of so much anger. But she does feel that she is the one responsible for this loss. So her attempt to correct what has gone wrong.

Monish is just planning to get closer to Gunjan... after his plans of an evening with Gunjan has gone wrong. Now he is carefully planning each step.

We will be updating soon.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnin96

superb update.. it was sooo awesome.. SAJAN unknowingly confessed their feelings about each other..bur it was sad too...
plz do cont soon & thanks for pm.



Thank you dear, for your comment. 😊 Finally SaJan confessed to themselves atleast about their true feelings... Sad it was as both are hurt... their painful past adding to their woes.

Will be updating soon.

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