newFF(Maneet)Mere humsafar Trd 1uptd prt16 pg 138 - Page 45

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zahra15

nice part...i fink dadi will ask her to atay in outhouse...wee hope so...continue soon n thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: soni4eva

relii relii nyc n interestin

cont soon 😊

THANKS😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: disha_maan

heyyy dear... interesting ff... loved it a lot👏👏👏

maan is sooo darn arrogant...😡😡😡🤢🤢🤢
n what's ccking on dadi's mind???😕 is she goona make geet live in outhouse???😉😉😉

update sooonnn n plz add me in ur pm list...😛

loads of love... hv fun...😊😊😊

THANKS FOR UR APPRECIATION FRND
YS MAAN IS REALLY A DHUST DHANAV Angry REGARDING DADI'S PLAN U WILL CM TO KNOW IN D NXT UPDATE😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

mindblowing one

is dadi want geet to stay
outhouse
love it
ty 4 pm

Keep guessing😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: butterfly.tanu

waiting for the next buddy...😍😍😍😍


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: silkyarora

nice update...!!
ye daadi to badi smart hai yar... i know ye KM mein nahi geet ko outhouse mein rukwayegi...but i dont know but i have a gut feeling...rest dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...!!
continue soon yar...!!
and special maaneet moments...!!!

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 i hope itna hint khafi hai😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thank you frnds for your appreciation and encouragement. Here is d next part. Enjoy reading

Love ' Piya
PART 8

Geet's room

Geet: (Self talk) Main jaanti hoon Maan singh khurana tum poori koshish karoge ke main tumhare saamne haar maan lu magar tum shayad nahi jaante ke iss baar tumhara saamna kisi kamzoor insaan se nahi pada jo ke haalatho ke saamne ghutne thek de (I am very sure MSK that u will b trying your level bst to fill my life with difficulties but this time u r not facing a week person I m strong enough to face ur challenges)

Geet: Zindagi mein maine itne utar chadav dekhe hain k ab mushkilo ka saamna karne se darr nahi lagta.

Geet: Tum chahae jobhi hatkhande apnalo lekin main humesha hi neki aur sachhai ke raaste par chalungi. Apna kaam puri sincerity aur imaandari se pura karungi. ( U can try n number of formulas but I will always do my work with full sincerity n dedication)

Geet: (thinking something) Haan mujhe apne faisle ke baare mein dadima aur Annie ko batana hoga ( ys I need to inform Dadi n Annie abt my decision)

She goes to meet Annie and Dadima

Living room

Dev and Annie totally confused.

Dadi is patiently waiting for Geet.

Geet arrives

Dadi (smiles) Are Geet bete aap aa gayi

Geet: Dadi wo main aap logo se kuch baat karna chahti thi (Dadi I need to talk to u)

Dadi: Haan boliye bete kya baat hai (ys dear tell me what u want to say)

Geet: Dadi aap please bura mat maniyega

Dadi: Nahi bete bhala hum kyun aapki baato ka bura mane lage

Geet: Dadi wo main ye keh rahi thi ke'

Annie: Geet ab bol bhi do naa

Geet: Dadi bachpan se maine khafi takleefo ka saamna kiya hai aur inn takleefo ne hi mujhe zindagi ko jeena ka sahi tareeka samjhaya hai. (Dadi from childhood itself my life was filled with struggles n these obstacles have actually taught me to life life in the proper way)

Geet: Badi mehnat se maine apni padai puri ki hai aur humesha se hi meri ye khwaish rahi hai ke main khud ke balboothe par apne pairo par khadi rahu' ( I hv completed my studies with great difficulty n I always wanted to build my life on my own potential)

Dadi: Kahiye bete hum sunn rahe hai ( Go on I m listening )

Geet: Annie k roop mein mujhe ek badi hi pyari saheli mili aur aaj yaha par aakar mujhe aapne maa ka wo pyar diya jiske liye main humesha se hi tarasti thi aur dev ke roop mein mujhe ek bahut hi acchha dost mila aur aap logo ne mujhe apne company mein naukri bhi de di aur iske liye main aap sabki tahe dil se shukragusar hoon' magar' (Annie was always my bst frnd but today after coming here I found a mother in u n a great friend in d form of Dev but')

Dev: Magar kya Geet? (But what geet?)

Geet: Dev main aap logo k saath iss ghar mein nahi reh sakti? (Dev I can't stay with u in this house)

Annie: magar kyun? ( but why?)

Geet: Annie tumhare bade bhai mere boss hai aur kal jab office mein ye pata chalega ke main apne hi boss k ghar par reh rahi hoon tab pata nahi sab kaise react karenge aur waise bhi main aap logo ka aur ehsaan nahi le sakti ( Annie ur big bro is my boss n when tomorrow everyone will cm to know that I m living in KM then I m nt sure hw will people react to this n at d same time I really don't want to trouble u any further already you'll hv done a lot for me)

Dev: Achha tho batau agar tum humhare saath nahi rahogi toh phir kaha jaaogi?( ok then tell me if u don't want to stay with us where will u go?)

Geet: Dev Delhi toh kafi bada shehar hain tho zaahir si baat hai k yaha khafi saare ghar honge jaha pe paying guest ki zaroorat hogi main bhi kisi aise ghar mein reh loongi ( Delhi is a big place I will look out for a house where the owner needs a tenant I think that should solve my problem)

Annie: Geet ye tum kya keh rahi ho?

Geet: Annie pls ye mere self respect ki baat hai mujhe apni zindagi khud k balboote par khada karna hai ( pls Annie try to understand this is the question of my self respect)

Dadi: Geet bete hum aapki soch ki izzat karte hain' magar hum aapse kuch pucchna chahte hain ( Geet I really appreciate ur thoughts bt I need to ask u smthng)

Geet: Haan dadi puchiye (Ys dadi )

Dadi: Kya aap humpar bharosa karti hain? ( do u trust me?)

Geet: offcourse dadi

Dadi: Toh chaliye humse ek vaada kijiye ( ok then give me a promise)

Geet: Vaada? kaisa vaada dadi? (Promise?)

Dadi: Ghabraiye mat bete hum aisi koi bhi baat nahi karenge jisse ke aapke aatmsaman ko thes puchhe (Don't worry Geet I won't demand anything that will hurt u)

Geet: Ji Dadi main vaada karti hoon ( Ok dadi I promise)

Dadi: Geet aap apne boss k ghar rehna nahi chahti haina aur aap kisi k ghar paying guest bankar rehna chahti hai bus yahi baat hai na ( ok then u don't want to stay with ur boss n u want to live as a tenant somewhere right?)

Geet: Ji Dadi

Dadi: Toh phir humari baat suniye humhe yakeen hai k iss baat se aapki aur hum sabki problem solve ho jaayegi ( ok then listen to me m sure this is a perfect solution to ur problem)

Dadi: Aap kal se KM mein nahi rahengi ( frm tomorrow onwards u r nt going to stay in KM)

Annie: Dadi ye aap kya keh rahi hai? ( dadi what r u telling?)

Dadi: Annie pehle humhe humhari baat puri kar lene dijiye. ( Annie let me complete first)

Dadi: Haan geet toh hum keh rahe the k aap kal se KM mein nahi rahengi balki aap humare Outhouse mein rahengi aur iske pehle k aap hume galat samjhe hum batade k hum aapar koi ehsaan nahi kar rahe hai balki hum aapse bakaida kiraya wasool karenge. ( Ys geet u r not going to stay in KM from tomorrow bt u would b staying in the outhouse n b4 u get me wrong let me clarify that u will have to pay a rent every month)

Dadi: Outhouse kafi dino se bannd pada hain aap waha rahengi toh aapke ghar ka problem bhi solve ho jaayega aur koi aapse ye bhi nahi kahega k aap apne boss k ghar reh rahi hai. Maan toh waha se guzarthe bhi nahi hai aur saath hi saath humhe ek badi hi nek aur pyari se kirayedaar mil jaayegi

Dev: Wow dadi what a brilliant idea

Annie: Haan dadi aapne toh mujhe khush kar diya. Pls geet maan jaaona pls

Dadi: Geet agar aapne humhe sachhe dil se dadi mana hai toh aap humhari baat se inkaar nahi karengi ( if u really respect me then u will agree to my decision)

Geet: (smiles) Dadi mujhe manzoor hain. Haan magar rent main aapko apni salary milne par hi de paaungi (Dadi I agree but yes I can pay u d rent only once I get my salary)

Dadi: Ab itni pyari kirayedaar hume mil rahi hai toh phir hum rent ka thoda wait toh kar hi sakte hain na

Everyone is happy

Dadi: Geet ab aap jaakar apne kamre mein aaram kijiye hum nakul se kehkar outhouse ki safai kar denge ( Geet now u go and take rest I will inform nakul to clean d outhouse)

Geet: Ji dadi.

Geet leaves

Dev: Dadi main aapse kuch puchna chahta hoon ( Dadi I wanted to ask u smthng)

Dadi: Haan bete puchiye

Dev: Dadi aapko kaise pata chala k geet yaha aane wali hai? (Dadi how did u make out that geet is going to come here)

Precap1: Dadi, Dev and Annie : "Mission Maneet"

Precap2 : Maan: "Nakul ye outhouse ki safai kyun kar rahe ho?"

Part 9: pg 79
Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Update Piya... wow Geet! I like her... adore her...! really... she is really straight-forward... and really really nice... self-respect... wow... what to say...! Don't add any confusion regarding Dev... please... and Maan hadn't any role in this part... waiting for next part... yippee... me in top 3!!!!! yay!
Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part continue soon waiting for more

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