Omg you updated and that too freaking hot way😳😳 I need to get this out first.. This update is simply awesome⭐️ It has so much passion, affection. love and tension in it.. I loved it to the core.
I loved the way you have expressed AN emotions, feelings, need, love, pain for each other❤️ It's just outstanding, marvelous..
Well, I can't stop myself from quoting few dialogues that I found very interesting in this update.
"Nikki..." he took a deep breath. "I don't know why, but I love it when you feel hurt if I am hurt...when you feel jealous because I pay more attention to someone else than to you. I love it when the pain in your eyes tells me that something I did or said hurt you."
It's so nice the way you have made 'Mr. I don't give a damn whether you care for me or not' saying such things to 'Ms. I care for u? just in your dreams!! Haha'.. I love this dialogue to the core.. Good that you have knocked some sense into him… And made him finally open up and tell her how he feels when she acts so caring for him...
"It gives me this good feeling to know that I affect you enough to hurt you...to make you angry", he said quietly, his eyes softening, willing her to understand.
Awww I'm totally fidaa over this dialogue⭐️⭐️ This is so so Abhi.. Ise bolte hai dukhti rag ko dabana… A perfect yorker and clean bowled..
"What do you feel for me?" his bluntness stunned her to some extent but on afterthought she might have expected it
She was still confused. She had no idea what she felt. Even after crossing all boundaries of intimacy, she still didn't know.
This are the things that amaze me all the time.. *Nevertheless, I simply adore it when both of them act like this.*
Why does Abhi ask this kinda question after sharing such a beautiful moment with her😳.. For God's sake, she is there with you on your bed and still you need to ask her this question?? Don't you know the answer lies within your heart? That she indeed cares for you ..
On the other side, Why does Ms. Chatter box act like a deaf & dumb & a confused soul when she is supposed to speak.. Why does she act as if someone has hold her on a gun point when she need to confess.. Arey baba open your mouth and say 'Ha ha ha.. I love you Abhi' as simple as it is… No no, but she has to wait for her buddy Armaan's appearance na😡
Umm but that's so Abhi Nikki persona😳😳 And I love it when he gives her cold shoulders to make her react the way he wants her to react😍
Actually both of them like to make their relationship, their life even more complex every time they come across each other.. *Isme bichara Armaan kya karey?*
Aww that reminds me Mr. cool dude has made his appearance in the second update.. *And I love this cool dude too😍*.. Actually I was wondering Khush, why didn't Ammy call her up in the first update? How come Abhi got lucky in spending some quality time with his 'confused lady love' 🤣 der se aaye doorast aaye..
Now its time for Nikki to do 'Daud.. dhana dhan daud' 😆😆.. Sorry it was a joke.. And bad one
Anyways, so now she'll have to leave from Abhi's house.. And that too without clearing an air between them Coz if she won't go, cool dude will barge into Hot dude's house… And then there will be this volcano.. Arey, global warming ka to socho…Isliye Nikki ko 'Runaway bride' karna padega… 😆😆 oopss another bad joke.. Sowrry…
Oh God! I'm going crazy behind this FF.. What should I say further for your writing.. You are an excellent writer and both the updates are simply awesome and excellent⭐️⭐️.. It's nicely articulated FF and am loving it.. Desperately waiting for Sunday.. Thanks for such a beautiful read🤗