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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Omg you updated and that too freaking hot way😳😳 I need to get this out first.. This update is simply awesome⭐️ It has so much passion, affection. love and tension in it.. I loved it to the core.

I loved the way you have expressed AN emotions, feelings, need, love, pain for each other❤️ It's just outstanding, marvelous..

Well, I can't stop myself from quoting few dialogues that I found very interesting in this update.

"Nikki..." he took a deep breath. "I don't know why, but I love it when you feel hurt if I am hurt...when you feel jealous because I pay more attention to someone else than to you. I love it when the pain in your eyes tells me that something I did or said hurt you."

It's so nice the way you have made 'Mr. I don't give a damn whether you care for me or not' saying such things to 'Ms. I care for u? just in your dreams!! Haha'.. I love this dialogue to the core.. Good that you have knocked some sense into him… And made him finally open up and tell her how he feels when she acts so caring for him...

"It gives me this good feeling to know that I affect you enough to hurt you...to make you angry", he said quietly, his eyes softening, willing her to understand.

Awww I'm totally fidaa over this dialogue⭐️⭐️ This is so so Abhi.. Ise bolte hai dukhti rag ko dabana… A perfect yorker and clean bowled..

The whole intimacy scene b/w AN was beautiful 😳😳 I loved it to the core. I am scared to comment on it incase I just ruin it.. but it was amazing… It shows how DMG CVs simply failed to capitalized the depth of AN's emotional turmoil after that 'Riot scene" and ruined the best AN moment.. But I'm happy b'coz you are making it happen through your excellent writing⭐️⭐️Now my soul will rest in peace😆😆

"What do you feel for me?" his bluntness stunned her to some extent but on afterthought she might have expected it

She was still confused. She had no idea what she felt. Even after crossing all boundaries of intimacy, she still didn't know.

This are the things that amaze me all the time.. *Nevertheless, I simply adore it when both of them act like this.*

Why does Abhi ask this kinda question after sharing such a beautiful moment with her😳.. For God's sake, she is there with you on your bed and still you need to ask her this question?? Don't you know the answer lies within your heart? That she indeed cares for you ..

On the other side, Why does Ms. Chatter box act like a deaf & dumb & a confused soul when she is supposed to speak.. Why does she act as if someone has hold her on a gun point when she need to confess.. Arey baba open your mouth and say 'Ha ha ha.. I love you Abhi' as simple as it is… No no, but she has to wait for her buddy Armaan's appearance na😡

Umm but that's so Abhi Nikki persona😳😳 And I love it when he gives her cold shoulders to make her react the way he wants her to react😍

That makes him 'The Abhimanyu Modi' and 'The Nikita Malhotra'⭐️

Besides the fact is that if they behave like a normal couple then they won't be AN.. This is the things about this couple that makes me crazy about them... makes me fall in love more with them every time I read such kinda things in FF's.. They are simply magical couple and I love them completely❤️❤️

Actually both of them like to make their relationship, their life even more complex every time they come across each other.. *Isme bichara Armaan kya karey?*

Aww that reminds me Mr. cool dude has made his appearance in the second update.. *And I love this cool dude too😍*.. Actually I was wondering Khush, why didn't Ammy call her up in the first update? How come Abhi got lucky in spending some quality time with his 'confused lady love' 🤣 der se aaye doorast aaye..

Now its time for Nikki to do 'Daud.. dhana dhan daud' 😆😆.. Sorry it was a joke.. And bad one

Anyways, so now she'll have to leave from Abhi's house.. And that too without clearing an air between them Coz if she won't go, cool dude will barge into Hot dude's house… And then there will be this volcano.. Arey, global warming ka to socho…Isliye Nikki ko 'Runaway bride' karna padega… 😆😆 oopss another bad joke.. Sowrry…

Oh God! I'm going crazy behind this FF.. What should I say further for your writing.. You are an excellent writer and both the updates are simply awesome and excellent⭐️⭐️.. It's nicely articulated FF and am loving it.. Desperately waiting for Sunday.. Thanks for such a beautiful read🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
poori kahani likh di comment main Nammy ... itne main tum ek OS likh deti 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: mitzification

poori kahani likh di comment main Nammy ... itne main tum ek OS likh deti 😛

@bold: Arey fir to ye OS hi ho gaya na 😳
BTW this is my first attempt ever to post such a long comment.. thoda to appreciation de do 😳😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
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Hey Khush,🤗 very nice update dear or rather I should be saying a very hot update.😳 I was all☺️ throughout the update. This update actually reminded me of BBH,🤔 kya update diya tha Mich ne,😍 sorry for going off topic. Coming back to update, yaar I don't understand what more does he want from her?🤔 Ok, I know he wants her to be verbal about her feelings and not itna kaafi nahi hai things, ya ya Mr. Abhi.😳


"Nikki..." he took a deep breath. "I don't know why, but I love it when you feel hurt if I am hurt...when you feel jealous because I pay more attention to someone else than to you. I love it when the pain in your eyes tells me that something I did or said hurt you."

"It gives me this good feeling to know that I affect you enough to hurt you...to make you angry", he said quietly, his eyes softening, willing her to understand.

These two lines are my fav. from the entire part. Kya dialogues marta hai ye banda, just like a bouncer aur saamne waala clean bowled.😳

Ab aur kya kahu? sab kuch to Namy ne bol diya.😉😃

I thoroughly enjoyed this part Khush. Well done...

Continue soon, I'll be (im)patiently waiting.😉


PS Even I can't see the like button just like some other people out there.😕
Edited by Nehu_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
finally another AN ff.. i've been going through the old AN ffs for a while now, reminiscing the good old days..
btw congo on the new ff🥳

awaiting more yaar ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
too hot to handle :) what an update.. i believe you have captured the passion that was seething in A and N really well.. yes they would have crossed all the limits at that point if there werent any disturbances.. and you made sure the *disturbance* came in when they started to talk :)

Lot to talk, lot to clear up but N doesnt have guts yet to actually go though that. Lets see what is next for them.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

reserved ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

reserved ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ oh god ill melt now wid ths so much of hotness..

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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
Edited my comment on previous page.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Khush Superb👏
Edited by jsdoll - 14 years ago

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