Chasing Shadows - Chapter 6-Pg118, NOTE-Pg120

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#841

Originally posted by: Munchkin.

Tell me what :( Don't just leave it there, that's like torture.

I think I felt that the whole interaction between AR was forced, I don't know. It didn't seem natural to me and I have no idea why, though.

Did you not want to write this chapter?

And cheer up it's not as bad as you think it is!

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Sanaa

@Sanaa629

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#842

I don't think anything was off with it..!! Honest opinion..

I mean the whole Riddhima Muskaan sequence was brilliantly portrayed..and at the moment Muskaan is a bit too much..she blamed Riddhima for everything she did when Riddhima had her own issues to sort out.. but when we find out she slept with Rahul her whole perspective is seen.. and somehow I don't think she didn't tell Riddhima because Riddhima had never had a boyfriend so she wouldn't undrstand.. I think it was more to do embarrasment for sleeping with a guy whom she'd sworn to hate.. get where I'm coming from??

Armaan Riddhima meeting and stuff may have seemed forced..but then if you look at it one way..it was sort of forced upon them anyway.. Riddhima actually dances for a crowd of strangers?? That is so bloody brave..! I would never have a courage to stand up and do that.. no way!

Nikki Armaan...hmm.. Shucks.. jaldi jaldi get them to date..!!! And then get them to break up.. So we can have AR again..!! :D Soon.. I love how Riddhima keeps answering back to him..

So I'll sign off..I'm actually at Uni at the moment..but when I saw your update on my phone I had to rush to a comp and read it during my hour break..

I think your writing is still as brilliant as it can get..I dunnow why but I think a small scene between Riddhima and her parents would be nice..since after all they are probably still over protective regarding her.. and seeing their concern and care would just put things in the bigger picture because at the moment all I can see is that Riddhima and Armaan should be together come what may.. but obviously there are bigger things in life...lol!

Oh..and before I really sign off I'd just like to say I love Armaan putting Riddhima and his mum together..it's just amazingly sweet!!

Ohkie doke..gotta go!!!

Bye! :D

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#843

Loved the part...but niki!! She will be a haddi in their kabab in future now :(

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Rumz_12

@Rumz_12

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#844

I am not much of a coments person, but the line 'You get used to ii' moved me. It was amazing. I really love the character Riddhima in this ff. Normally I've read, Armaan as the strong yet pained character, but here I think, Ridzie's character is exceptionally awesome unlike the other fragile ridzie. Here though she is fragile she puts up a strong face. I really wanted to read on. Guess I gotta wait longer. Just felt bad that, though, Ridzie luvs Armaan which is obvious ofcourse, she planned to set him up with Nikki. Too bad its gonna hurt her later.

I really luv Riddhima you've portrayed.

Cont. soon

Sorry if I've blabbered on useless talk.

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#845

Important Note :)

Hello!

So i've been getting several hundred PMs about people not getting PMs on updates, and wondering if I could add them to my buddy list.

I know it sounds really arrogant, but I really do not have the time. My University timings are 'til 4 pm, I am doing an Arts degree, so I have piles of courseworks (two, this semester) to get through. If I say so myself, I've stopped having lunch these days, because I can't find time to cook something. Times I wish I was still hiding in my Mommy and Daddy's house.

Anyhow, I know many of you aren't aware of the updates sometimes as well, and I know its unfair.

But its a task to get through 1000 people on my PM list (the story one!). Yes, even that's got a million people on it now, somehow, because the PM list shows me even people who've sent me requests. And most of them don't read my crap.

Can anyone, anyone, be kind enough to do the job for me? i can't pay you, sadly, I would, but I'm not making any money. But a huge thank you could suffice, right? Please, please, pretty please? Anyone? Please let me know, for both AWOTB, and CS. Plus, seeing that I don't update that often anyway, it shouldn't be that bad right?

Please :(

Let me know!

And thank you for all the comments till now. From what i've read -

Anyone who thinks Riddhima's already fallen/falling for Armaan, I don't see how that happened, but if you like to believe so, i won't stop the merriment. LOL.

Thanks again!

Love,

you know who *blush blush*

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#846

I hear you yaar PMing is a bitch

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#847

just don't forget to change the title evrytime you update and we would know…no need for pms

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#848

Originally posted by: Mr_Mrs.KSG
I am not much of a coments person, but the line 'You get used to ii' moved me. It was amazing. I really love the character Riddhima in this ff. Normally I've read, Armaan as the strong yet pained character, but here I think, Ridzie's character is exceptionally awesome unlike the other fragile ridzie. Here though she is fragile she puts up a strong face. I really wanted to read on. Guess I gotta wait longer. Just felt bad that, though, Ridzie luvs Armaan which is obvious ofcourse, she planned to set him up with Nikki. Too bad its gonna hurt her later.
I really luv Riddhima you've portrayed.
Cont. soon
Sorry if I've blabbered on useless talk.

I don't think Ridz loves Armaan right now because you remember <<"Just thinking how a few years ago being observed by you was one of my main agendas!" Riddhima chuckled. >>

but I agree…setting him up with Niki now will hurt her later I suppose…or Armaan would understand that he loves Ridz and will dump Niki or there would be a new character Abhimanyu and Niki will dump Armaan for him…or there are more possibilities…lets leave it for Shru to decide what she wants… 😆