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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank God it's Sunday...aaj finally time mila hai :P

I'll comment on the part when it's done but this id just an answer to your note :)

A1 - Over dramatic? SERIOUSLY? I think 10th is screwing up your brain 😳
Jokes apart, no it's definitely NOT overly dramatic! In fact it's amazing! And you write absolutely beautifully so much so that sometimes I'm jealous :D

A2 - I have only one chotu sa suggestion! Umm please don't make them fall in love too soon! Okay I know you're like - "Is Aanya stark raving MAD???" But they've just met and I'd love it if you explore their best friends waala relation for a little more time :D Not to long though, otherwise the AR-ian in me will get restless 🤣

A3 - They're both PERFECT <3 Nothing needs to be changed, it's all fabulous :)

A4 - HELL YEAH! I want like an update of MTB every day LMFAO :D Kaise stupid sawal poochti ho 😆

A5 - To be honest, the concept is not entirely new, but then again you've managed to portray it beautifully and not make it overly dramatic! I don't really think you have anything to worry about :) As for the title, it's very apt! Suits the whole theme of separation and then getting together again! That happened to them once in their childhood and once in their adult life and both times they've come back together! And although we're yet to see their re-union, I'm loving the FF <3 :D
The characterization is spot-on!!! You've put the personality traits and stuff very well into the story :) I love the entire gang <3

A6 - I like the strong bond that AR share! And the way they just left off from where they started :) <3

There. Done!

Complete the part soon! :)

xoxo
Aanya
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Thank God it's Sunday...aaj finally time mila hai :P


I'll comment on the part when it's done but this id just an answer to your note :)

A1 - Over dramatic? SERIOUSLY? I think 10th is screwing up your brain 😳
Jokes apart, no it's definitely NOT overly dramatic! In fact it's amazing! And you write absolutely beautifully so much so that sometimes I'm jealous :D

A2 - I have only one chotu sa suggestion! Umm please don't make them fall in love too soon! Okay I know you're like - "Is Aanya stark raving MAD???" But they've just met and I'd love it if you explore their best friends waala relation for a little more time :D Not to long though, otherwise the AR-ian in me will get restless 🤣

A3 - They're both PERFECT <3 Nothing needs to be changed, it's all fabulous :)

A4 - HELL YEAH! I want like an update of MTB every day LMFAO :D Kaise stupid sawal poochti ho 😆

A5 - To be honest, the concept is not entirely new, but then again you've managed to portray it beautifully and not make it overly dramatic! I don't really think you have anything to worry about :) As for the title, it's very apt! Suits the whole theme of separation and then getting together again! That happened to them once in their childhood and once in their adult life and both times they've come back together! And although we're yet to see their re-union, I'm loving the FF <3 :D
The characterization is spot-on!!! You've put the personality traits and stuff very well into the story :) I love the entire gang <3

A6 - I like the strong bond that AR share! And the way they just left off from where they started :) <3

There. Done!

Complete the part soon! :)

xoxo
Aanya

@Bold - EXACTLY! Thats my point..Aah Dun worry,They are Quite Far Away from falling in Love :D :D They are best friends so they need to mature in that step of their lives..Eh,Love is a far-away thing right now! But some people in my FF are So Mad..They want AR together like right away :D :P Oh sure I'll complete it soon! Actually today we're having our 600th KaJen AT celebration,so not today :D

Thanks for the answers!! :D

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Posted: 14 years ago
WHEN ARE YOU UPDATING? 🤔😲😕😒😔
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part Complete Guys! A Preview On Wednesday,Most Probably <3

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Posted: 14 years ago
RES!!
EDITED!!

26th April,2002.

"I know I'm Hot,Sorry..Irrestible.You dun have to stare like that.",he teased and she rolled his eyes.

"Whatever."

"Denial is the first stage of acceptance,Madame..",he grinned,"And you don't look so bad yourself..Hm.."

I used that in LOOC!!!😆😆 But naturally trust Armaan to be all big headed..!! it's an Armaan trait in nearly every ff I read and adore..!!!

"Baasskkettt..",he sang,determined to see the adorable expression on her face which he loved.

"Mmph..Gph..",she shook her hands to move him away,between her brushing,"Aauu"

Armaan laughed," 'Mmph','Gph' and 'Aau'..Nicknames for me?",he grinned with one more of his lame jokes.

Riddhima washed her mouth and face,wiped it with the small towel and glared,"I said,Move..Go Away."

"MAAARR DALAA!",Armaan sang in mock disappointment,holding his heart,"You broke my heart,Riddhima..",he sniffed fakely at her.

"Aww?",Riddhima said in a sugary tone,"You want a cellotape?",then burst out laughing at her own words.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! LMAO!!! Cellotape?? Why the hell not?? Maybe superglue will also do the trick..!! Super super glue, heals all broken things including hearts. Ting tong..!!! Hahahahaha..nautanki..I know..!! But I could just imagine him showing her attitude..!! He's sooo adorable he is..!! Uber cute.!!!

"And beautiful..and sexy,and maybe you do look very H-",he started shamelessly.

Hahahaha..trust him to start hitting on his best friend the moment he gets the chance to..!! LOL!! 😆

Teasing her,laughing with her,holding her hand,running after her,taking care of her,protecting her and making her smile..It was like he was living his childhood again,with a touch of adolescene this time. It was different with her,he had to admit,she was indeed very beautiful and it did let sparks fly in the air.It set his heart fluttering when she was close,and he didn't even want to know what he was feeling.He was happy.She had brought colours and happiness into his life that he had forgotten somewhere,she was like the Hues of a Rainbow to him.

Beautiful!! I just don't know what else to say.. I was smiling at that paragraph like a maniac..!! That's how much i simply adored it..!!! 😊😃

"GUYS!",came his excited Voice from the back.They gulped and sent up a silent prayer to keep them alive. Turning slowly,they smiled a half-fake,half-scared smile.They were standing in a group and saw Armaan with a plate with a fully,100 percent burnt BLACK toast,with Yellow butter coming out from the sides. Muskaan held herself back from crying out,the guys flinched at their own condition,Anjali and Nikki passed each other sad glances,while Riddhima stared in shock.

Uh oh..!!😲 Heyy come on man It's Armaan..!! I was thinking..You can eat it for your friend can't you??

Weren't it for the toast,Riddhima would've have noticed how adorable he looked.But the plate in his hands was something like her Worst Nightmare. Lil Burnt,Are YOU KIDDING ME?,she wanted to shout but didn't.

AWHHH!!!!! I could just picture him..!!! 😆 ANd BTW..NICEEE excuses everyone came up with.!! LOL!!!! Poor Armaan..but I'm glad Riddhima buckled up and got the courage to taste his..well..burnt food..!! LOL!!😆

"Its terrible,isn't it?",his voice made her open her eyes.He was sitting beside her with a small smile.

"Um..What? No..No ways..",she pretended to frown and say that it was the best thing she'd ever eaten.

"Riddhima,why did u eat it? Why didn't u refuse like the others?",he asked.

She sighed,understanding that she knew,"Because the others aren't your best friends,Armaan.I Am.I didn't want you to be Sad.It doesn't suit you."

"So to see me happy,you ate this CRAP I made?",she smiled sheepishly.

"Uhm..",was all she could say.He was touched and thought what good work had he done to deserve a best friend like her.There was a slight pause,and said,"Its terrible,isn't it,Basket?"

"Are you KIDDING me?",she looked at him shocked,"Its,Sorry Armaan..But HORRIBLY terrible."

Hahahaha..reminds me of FRIENDS!!!!!😃

"OYE!Thik se khade raho!",Muskaan nugded her boyfriend.

"You think I look okay,Atul?",Anjali settled her hair.

"Pario ki Pari..",Atul whispered and Anjali rolled her eyes.

"Dhang ke kapde nai hai kya?Wearing a White T-shirt asif you've come to someone's death!",Nikki said.

"Baby its okay.I KNOW.You look so cute,haina?"

"Huh!I always look cute.But I think we should pose properly."

"Enough!",Armaan blasted off,"Camera man nahi hu main! Aur tum log Fashion magazine ke picture nahi khichwa rahe! Comeon Dudes!",he said irritably and Riddhima giggled.

"Oh.Sorry,Armaan.",they all said in a chorus.

Well..at least he's a good photographer if not a good chef..!!! 😆

She paused,taking quick breaths as she leaned on the wall of the back door.She looked ahead and her heartbeat almost stopped.The blue eyes were back to enchanting her,as their rapid heartbeats made their minds question themselves.He stared right into her eyes,feeling oddly happy as she searched his eyes.Holding her hand,he leaned closer.She closed her eyes,what the hell was happening to her?

Her heartbeats rose,as very huskily he whispered,"I got you too..",and then,the whole bucket of water came down on her,wetting her,as after a while,not only he..but she herself laughed madly.Best friends they were indeed,but did they understand what was happening to them?

AWHHH!!!! Now this is what I call friendship..!! Well..frienship on the way to love..!!! Bless those moments between AR I miss them sooo much..!! 😆 But you really did put it in beautifully.!! Not too vaguely so that the readers think they're just friends..and not too intesley so that the readers are sure there's something between them..!! But just in the middle..that slightest bit of hesitation..the closeness..the quick breaths...then bam..he pours a bucket of water on her as well..breaking the trance..AND his line..!! 'I got you too..' simply superb..!! and though I knew it was something like that..part of me was wishing he had an underlying meaning..!! But i guess it's too early to know??😆

8:00p.m.

"Anjali!",Atul ran behind her,with a aloe vera plant.

"KYA HAI ATUL?",She blasted off,irritated.

"Ehem..Anjali..Woh,Um,Tum Moti ko paani de dogi please?She wants water from you only.."

"Who the hell in the world is MOTI?"

"She!",Atul said,looking lovingly at his plant,"Yeh aloe vera plant!"

"URRGGHH!",Anjali threw up her hands in frustration and Atul followed her,continuously calling out her name.

🤣

They had all sat around the campfire,Armaan and Rahul humming songs with their guitars,the girls talking and giggling among themselves,in which Muski was full-on blabbering about how she had a HUGE Crush on Rahul earlier,which turned to love..blah blah,Riddhima was being embarressed by asking her the silliest questions about Armaan.She yearned to walk into the forest,she always loved adventures,but the Darkness of the night..Well,not a good prospect.She just wanted to get out of the blabber and feel the breeze on her face,the moonlight shining over the place.

I love campfires..!! They're sooo awesome..!! and Romantic..!!! 😳

"Riddhima..",he started,his voice shaking,"I think..We might be..Well,Lost."

😆🤣 I LOOOVVEEE the way you say... 'might be..Well, Lost." And end it..!!! I can just picture Riddhima's horrified expression..and Armaan's sheepish and kinda scared look on his face..!!! I think he's much much much more scared of Riddhima than he is about being lost...!!
VERYYY Entertaining chapter..!! Now bring the next one sooonish..!! 😃
Love,
Sanaa
Edited by Sanaa629 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part. AR lost in jungle. Waiting to read more and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG WHAT AN UPDATE...HAHAHA COMPLETE LAUGH RIOT

i love atul n rahul...singing kanta lagaa infrom of princy house...omgg th poor princy...hahahaha

the picnic ride in bus was soo funny and lovely...armaan scaring ridzi and then their small bickering with later riddhima landing her head on armaan's shoulder

hahaha riddhima n armaan brushing soo cute...i love this trip...:)...m sure from this part their feelings are getting magnified day by day...awww

then all teasing AR hayye..and their walk in forest might turn into love adventure😉

both running afte other with water...lol they dont know what happeninggg😍

funny part vampa n vampire...loool...and rohan...roflll🤣

update soonishhh maitruuu...love our ff...dont ever think i aint following...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part

loved the gang

update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
looobed it...
loobed ar moments...haha da vampires...
thx 4 da pm
AMOON
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear nice update loved it do continue soon take care and thanks for the pm.

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