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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MaitreeluvKajen

Haahhaa Thats fine LOL you seem so cute when u say it😆 Just to let u know,the mere Realisation(of ONE of the them) is by Part 20,I guess.Then the other person takes a longer time to...eh,realise. then loads to come,then CONFESSION,then their moments,then Armaan's mom..separation,back to present.So u see that present mode is LIGHT YEARS away !!! :D

Hahaha.I AM cute..!!! 😃😆
Hawww..!!! Well..that means a longer ff..!!! 😃
Buuuttt that means if present mode is light years away..then AR getting together is like eternities away??!! PERFECTT!! *grumbles*
Hmmphh..Well ud better continue soon missy..!!! AND make those light years come sooner..!!! 😃
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Presenting...*Drum rolls* Sanaa's *Spotlights* MEGA HUGE COMMENT on MTB!!! *Cheers and never ending applause!!! *
Chapter 1
– When I read the dear fianc in the first paragraph, I was so sure it was going to our sweetheart Armaan..!!! But then the

"Morning to-be Mrs Modi" made my eyes pop out!! Lyk honestly..W*F??!!! Then the way she replied told me they had a comfortable relation between them and I was already hurting wondering what the hell had happened to my sweetheart Armaan..!! Yess..I adore him!!! SOOO MUUCCHH!!

Then the love you too from Riddhima already broke my heart..!! If it's an AR ff WHYYY is she saying ILY to Sid?? Soo naturally..that just increased my curiosity to know more about Armaan..when would he come..how would he enter..what would he do..!!So kudos to you girl for catching a reader in the first chapter itself without any suspence..!!

She wanted that familiar husky voice,those ocean-blue eyes,those strong arms..But everything was lost,gone...Left behind.

Now THAT's what I'm talking about..!! mention of Armaan..!!! yipeee..!!! I mean.. who has blue eyes after all??!!! MELA ALMAAANNN!!!!! *dancing with joy* But what happeneddd??!!!

I love how you then shift it to Armaan's PoV!! I was dying to read more about Armaan..!! And I felt sooo bad after seeing Armaan like that..!! Especially after I found out that they had been separate for 7 looonnggg years..!!!! It honestly did kill me and as of instinct I already blamed Riddhima..well not really of instinct..but you can see that I adoreee Armaan and I'll always be the first to take his side..!! =D =D So I thought Riddhima did something..I mean she was the one that was engaged for crying out loud!!! To stupid Siddhant Modi..!! UFFF!!!

But here she was thinking of SID when poor Armaan had an accident??!!! She was thinking of Sid with smile plastered across her face..and mera bechara Armaan had an accident because..(it doesn't take rocket science to know) he was looking at her..!! Hmmphh..!! made me hate her more..!! Why do you ask?? Because I could tell that AR had history right..then HOWWW can she tell Sid I love you..and forget Armaan like that?? Especially when she claims to have loved him so much??!!! Broke my heart it did..!!

Chapter 2 – Greatt…what do I say?? You made poor Armaan have an accident..you hurt him sooo much in ONE chapter??!! How…the hell??? Pooor Armaan..!! Anyways..

I was wondering why is it that she cares sooo much for Armaan..she loves him sooo much but can still say those three magical words to Sid?? HOWW?? In fact come whatever..why even get married to Sid..ok fine..ENGAGED!! I was thinking to myself.. "before I even know him that well I think I love Armaan tones more than you do woman..!!" So she could cry all she wants..but whyyy get engaged to Sid??

So we were introduced to Nikki who knew about their past..!! And the flashback also showed Muski..!!! =D I love that character..!! Simply adoreee her..!! But the part of the flashback scene..the line that made me just gape at the screen…and have my eyes widen with all the adoration for Armaan was .. "you are the sole reason for living"..I don't really look at the title till I finish the chapter…I know..wierd me..but ahh well…so the line I read first in the flashback and made me lose my heart out even more to him..Gosh I love Armaan…I think I've already said that but big deal..!! hmmphh..!!!

Then him murmuring.. "don't go Riddhima..Don't go.." HOW can someone love someone so much? How?? Please do tell..!! And if these people exist why haven't I found mine yet?? *Desperatley looking around* No he's not around incase ur planning to tell me.. "Look closely at the people around you..he might be there but you just don't recognize him"…lol..!!

Chapter 3 – And now Armaan finds out about her engagement..yaar..aur kitna dook dogi uss bechare ko?? Don't you get it..I love him!! ;) Hahaha..but it was obviously needed..and VERRRYYY well portrayed..He was right in telling her no..after all she was engaged..and belonged to someone else..well you know what I mean..!!!So lets start from the start:

The nights alone in her Delhi apartment came flashing in her mind,as she remembered,how she used to cry holding his picture.

Then whyyy woman did you agree to get married to Sid?? Plus she whispered that she kept her promise..for the first tym..I thought..(I assume a lot!!) that Armaan was also at fault here..even though I had no clue whatsoever at what happened !! He must have gave her some sort of promise to stay away from her or something..and not do anything to herself?? Ahh well..!! Anyways..one thing I respect Riddhima for is moving on in life..getting up everyday..and facing the world instead of hiding out forever after losing her love..though getting married..?? isn't that too far??!!

Poor guy was wondering whether it was a dream or reality!!! 7 years?? HOWW do you keep them apart for that long?? I was soo hesitant to keep them apart for 2 months in LOOC!! Then 7 years?? But that's probably the main story..so I don't blame you..!! lolxx..

But I loooveee how you brought out soo many emotions..!! It was all sooo perfectly described…soo overwhelming..I felt sooo grieved after reading that chapter…and the worst part is..I couldn't blame anyone expect fate..destiny? No..you!!! for firstly..keeping AR apart for 7 whole freaking years!!! And then writing it soo wonderfully that it really really really touched my heart..!!!

SID AND ARMAAN KNOW EACH OTHER??!!! Crap..!! from that moment I knewww that if Sid is Armaan's good friend..Armaan is gonna sacrifice his love for him..!!

Chapter 4 – LMAO!!! Armaan was hallucinating..!!! Poor guy..!! And He closed the door in her face..!! I was hating on her for getting engaged to Sid..but this really cracked me up..!!! Poor Armaan..I could just picture him..with a plaster on his head..and that confused dreamy look..then shutting the door in her face..!! And picturing Jenny I was sooo sure her mouth would drop open at that moment..!!! LMAO!!!

Then his speech..no him talking about he's hallucinating cracked me up..!!! I was pretty sure..Riddhima or not..anyone would laugh like an idiot if they are told they are being hallucinated..and somewhere..I loved her sense of belonging in his house.. really touched me..but the question remains…whyyy did she leave..!! something you just refused to tell us till due time!! Hmmmphh..

I am a hungry Indian campaign

Hahahahaha..glad you brought in some reality..!! Really cheeky though..but hilarious at the same tym..!! And poor Armaan acting like a stubborn kid..well I don't blame him..ridzy did throw a HUGE surprise on him..and she called him useless..!!Hawww..shame on you RIddhima Gupta..Armaan is not useless..he's amazing..!!

I loved the rest of the chapter part A..It was sooo adorable..their cute..COUCHBAG fight..and then their chappati making competition..and their famous eye-lock..with Armaan falling for her all over again..!! Hayyyee…I could just picture it sooo well.!! Sometyms..life just isn't in your favour is it?? But it's soo awesome that they are having this tym to realize what they mean for each other..!!

Seriously. Maitree..how did you do this? You put every single emotion in one chapter..!! JUST one part of it..and it felt like the old DMG atta making days..!! When Armaan and his badmaashi always got the better of his darling basket..!! Awhhh..miss those days..!!

I was kinda sad that their breakfast went really quiet..but maybe that was the after effect of that one line that broke my heart..!!

"Yeah, its fine anyway..I'm used to being Defeated now.."

I felt Terrible..!!!Poor Armaan..you know how much we love him na?? Then why put him through soo much torture??!! Kya kuch nahin kiya bechara..!! And their moments just had me going awwhhh…and wondering WHAT exactly was it that caused them to drift apart if they love each other sooo much..!! BTW..I'm hell scared of Roachies too..!! HATE them..!! Disgusting creatures..!!

And his dream.!! *sigh* they can have significant meanings but sometimes none at all..though this particular one I'm sure had a huge meaning behind it..the pillar..(is that Sid??) and the fire of Passion..ooohh..!! Makes it all the more interesting..!! Once again I compliment your amazing writing technique to not put in too much description but make it perfect..for the reader to have a perfect image..and yet not be bored by too much writing..!! Hats off to you for that!!

And then the roses are red violets are blue cracked me up..!! Hahahahaha…but I think their walk on the beach stole the best scene in the chapter award..!! I adored it to the core..!! The scene had tough competition with like nearly every other scene in the chapter..!! But I just loveeeddd it to such an extent..I'm just sooo speechless..!! It was AWESOME!!

And ohhh…KKHH!!! My ALL tym favourite!! I could watch it over..and over and over and over again..!! Yepp..SRK fanatics..!! I love you SRK!!! But I love KSG as well..!! But I think SRK just that TAD bit more because I've been awed by him since when..when I was around 6 or 7??!! Yes... I know..!! I'm kinda a HUGEEE fan of him..!!

And then their moment in the bedroom..a verrryy close second after their walk on the beach scene..coz it had soo many emotions..!! Of fire..passion..intensity..not to forget Hurt..depths and depths of it..and Armaan nearly giving in while Riddhima wanting him too..!! Why stay apart if this is what it does to you?? I never wanna be in that position ever.to love someone sooo deeply and know you can't have them?? It must be nothing short of torture!!! But I salute Armaan..despite everything..he still had his control..I honestly though the would give in to her pleas for her..and even if he would have I wouldn't have thought any different of him..I'd still have loved him all the same..cz firstly..heyy it's Armaan..!! and secondly..He's human!!! Poor guy been through so much deserves at least SOME happiness..!! *sniff* *sniff* you nearly made me cry by the end of this chapter..!! I just loved it soo much..!!!

Chapter 5 - The line.. "Kyun saans loon, kyun main jiyun, jeena bura sa lage.." where have I heard it before?? Some song?? Ahh don't remember..and I'm not even bothered to remember..!!

You described the pain so well..I could almost imagine myself going through it for Armaan..!!! *Sniff Sniff* OHHH got it..!!! The line is from Tere Bin!!! Hahaha..I'm awesome..!!! And the pain HE's going through..yet managed to joke about it..!! hahaha..roses are red violets are blue poem..!! Reminds me of one..!!

Roses are Blue,

Violets are Red,

If you think this is true,

There's something wrong with your Head!!😛

Hahahahahaha..but anyways..back to the amazing way you described their pain..them being together..but knowing it wasn't there to last..!!!

I thought I was going to pick a few lines out here and there but when I re read it..it's impossible..!!

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"Yes,Mom..I know,I'm..Coming..",she spoke into her phone,trying to suppress her broken voice. Cutting the call hurriedly,she pulled the trolley of her bag to take it outside the room.She paused a while to look at the house,every bit of it flashing its memories.She tore her gaze away and walked towards the entry of the house,while she looked everywhere for Him.She wanted to see him one last time..Armaan..

Lowering her head and wiping off her tired bloodshot eyes,she walked past the living room and went outside,just a little far away from the main gate of Armaan's house.Her feet froze to the ground as she sensed him behind her.She turned round,to see Armaan standing behind her,motionless.He had his hands in his jeans pocket,and tears helplessly spilled down his cheeks.His blue eyes were bloodred,and they screamed pain. Riddhima's grip on her bag was left.She walked a bit towards him and gazed into the eyes she loved..One last time.One last moment.

She didn't hesitate.Before he could utter a single word,she was hugging him tight,never to let go.Not being able to control herself,she cried furiously in his arms,while without hesistation he wrapped his arms around his and let his own tears flow down.It would be probably the last time he would have her in his arms.
"Armaan..",he heard her whisper between sobs,"Don't let me go,please..I..Armaan,Stop me..I w-wil d..diee..Plleaasee.."

His tears flew down uncontrollably now,they both were helpless..and worse,they both knew it.Their fate had turned their love down in such a path that they both knew that they wouldn't meet.Bringing her face near his,and cupping it in his hands,he whispered,"Riddhima.."
She pleaded even more,holding his shirt tightly,"Stop me Armaan..Do something..I'm dying..I don't want to go back to that hell again,Please Armaan,I'll die without you..Please,Please.."
"Don't..Riddhima..Basket..Pleasee..",he stuggled with his words,pain stabbing his heart and almost killing him,"Make it hard..for..Me.."

She enveloped her body with his and hugged him tight,"Say it,Armaan...One last time,Say it,Please.."
His voice choked and unclear,yet his words touching her heart,he whispered against her,"I..I Love You..Riddhima,I've loved you since the moment I knew what it is to fall in love..You're my angel,my miracle..my Basket..My life..I'll live for you,with your memories and your love till I die..I..Don't want..Y-you..to..Go.."
"I Love You Armaan,I Love You...I..Love..Yoou..",she said and cried even more.Armaan ruffled her hair and kissed her forehead and sobbed himself. They stayed in each other's arms,enjoying the warmth for the last time ever and crying,venting out all the pain they had.

"Armaan..I don't want..to go..",she whispered to him again,gazing into his eyes.
"Riddhima..We..have no..choice.."
"Why?",she questioned loudly,gripping his shirt," Why is Life so unfair..Why do we have to stay apart like this..",her voice broke down.

Wiping her tears and having nothing to say,he let her hide her face once again in his chest. They parted painfully,slowly and Armaan watched her leave.She didn't turn back again,she just didn't have the strength to.Both lost their lives..But kept one thing with each other..Each other's hearts.

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The whole bit was so BEAUTIFULLYYY put..!!! Sooo AMAZINGG!!!! So awesome..!!! I was crying with them!! I was half hoping he'd stop her..I wanted him to stop her but the fact he couldn't..WHYYY!!!!! Gosh Maitree you HAVE to reveal this mystery SOOON!!! Infact not soon..NOWWW!!! then come hell or High Water..I want them to FIGHT for their love..!! They're sooo awesome..!!! I mean..i remember reading something about Ridzy's parents not agreeing..But WHY?? What's wrong with them??!! URGHH!!! But either way..the pain..the desperation..the torture..alll put MARVELOUSLY!! Kudos to you for that..!! :D

Then obviously..as though it wasn't enough pain in one chapter you made Sid introduce them??!! FLIP man..!! I can't even IMAGINE Armaan's hurt..!!! Bechara..!! He's sooo amazing..!!! And he has to go through ALLL that???!!! Hawww..!!! Not fair…SO NOT fair..!! He's lost his parents and now he's gotta lose the love of his life too..??!! WHYYY??? Thank God for friends like Nikki!!! I honestly LOVE her for taking him away at that point..!!

PHEWWW!!! that's chapter 1 - 5..!!! The majority..!! I've got to comment on chapter 6-8 now..which I'll do some other time..!!

Hahaha..huge innit?? Told you it was worth the wait..!!! 😆😃

Love,

Sanaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
commented edited on p45 <3
OMKAJEN, i wrote too much 😆😆😆😆
i think thats the longest comment i've ever written for one part 😆
sholly for not editing earlier
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww
this part was just like beyond beauitful
it was totally enchanting n mesmerizing
i loved ech n every single word tht u put down
Armaan n Riddhima
sounded so perfect n at ease wid each other
thanks really a lot for the beautiful part

luv
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maitreee! <333

Part10:-
OMAAARRR! I LOVEDD THE PART <3
THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED THEM BEING BACK, AS IF THEY WERENTT APART WAS AMAZING.
READDIN BOUT ARMAAN;ZZ FEELINGS TOWARDSS HISS DAD! BOUGHT TEARS IN MA EYES.
AWWW LOL RIDDHIMA WAS LAUGHIN INSTEAAD OF CRYING, WHEEN SHE WAS WTACHIIN THE MOVIEE!
OMG I LOVEEE DDLG +&& SRK! <33

SECOND PART OF THE PART!
JUSSTT LOVEDD IT. SOOO CUTEE! CHILDISHH AR! EVEN THOUGH THEY HAVE BECOMEE ADULTSS NOW!
HAWWW AMMY POURED WATERR OVA RIDHZYY!
ARMAAN TUM THOO GAYYEE!
MAITREE! YOU ARE JUST MIND-BLOWING!
HATSS OFF. YOU WRIITE SOOO BEAUTIFULLY!

PREVIEW:-
YOURR KILLIINGG ME .
UPDATTEEE ASAP!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear soo sorry for late reply update was nice loved it
do continue soon
take care and thanks for the pm.
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heyaaa di...that was sucha gr8 part :) n m so sorry for the late comment...but it was really a nice part and yayyy...a biggg one!!! i loved it and awww...i loved it Armaan felt that he coud share anything with Ridhima :D :D :D...and i felt really bad for Armaan, he missed his dad sooo much :'( and haha Ridhima was smiling in sad scene that was fun...and i loved nikki's dialogue, hehehe😆 so please do continue very very very soon...will be waiting for your update!!!...:)
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Okay now don't stare like that people,I do get free times this week ( God bless our school's passouts who've done so well that we're getting holidays 'coz of them) 😆 So here's the Part!. And,I will reply to your previous comments,just need a lil more time for that :) Read on..and COMMENT,because its long.People not commenting gives me jitters! :P
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Part 11 : Hues of a Rainbow

*Flashback*

25th April,2002.

The search never ended.It was asif she'd found a thousands of worlds to explore in his blue eyes,and that moment was faded away somewhere in the depths of her heart.Only what existed was them together,their breaths counted,their heartbeats racing,and their eyes lost in each other's.He didn't understand what this magnetic attraction was that pulled him towards her,and he,like a puppet,was helplessly drawn towards it.It was magic and madness,and such a beautiful mixture of both that he felt he was actually Living,to the true sense of the word.

Questions innumerable,and she searched the answers in him.What was it that never let her move her gaze away,and wish to hold his hand?Why did she ever feel so happy when he was around,why did her flutter and leap like crazy when he came closer,why did it feel so perfect then? Her mind shouted the questionnare,while her heart just those to be hardly imporant.When he was around,did she need anything else?

Her eyes blinked back as his phone rang.Immediately he looked down and away,like her.What was she thinking?What was he even looking at?Oh no,was he staring at her?That would be uber awkward.Clearing his throat to think staright,he passed a nervous smile at her which she returned while he picked up his call,"Yeah?"

"What 'Yeah'? Dude,lemme speak.",Rahul's voice brought him back to reality.

He smiled a little,"Uhm,yeah.Okay.So,um..What were you saying?"

"I haven't even said anything.YET.Why are you so lost?Thinking of Riddhima?",he could easily catch his teasing tone,and guess that Rahul must've been grinning crazily at the time.But the question was,'How did he know?'

"What?No.Plluueeaasss", he said,rolling his eyes and trying to sound annoyed while she raised her eyebrows at his tone of voice,"I don't have any other work kya?Firstly YOU tell me,Tune phone kyun kiya?"

In his head,he imagined Rahul grinning like crazzy when he said,"Its a Good News."

Now was Armaan's chance,"HAAWWW Rahul Already?Muskaan is such a chupi rustam!You guys already have THE GOOD NEWS,and telling us so LATE? When's the Rahul jr. coming?",he grinned shamelessly.

"SHIT! DUDE,NOT THAT GOOD NEWS! HELL YAAR!",Rahul blasted off and Armaan laughed like crazy,imagining his face which was probably a red tomato-like at the moment.

"Acchaaaww?Rahul modest kyun ban raha hai..Sharma raha hai kya?Arrey bata na,when's our lil kiddo friend coming,heh?",he teased further,and held his stomach as Rahul fumbled to answer.

"Abbey..Kya yaar..Armaan..tu bhi..kuch bhi.."

Armaan burst out laughing and Riddhima curiously looked at him if he had an explanation.

"Oye,Sorry yaar...I was kidding!"

"I know.Saale I'll see you later.First listen,we are going on a camping trip.From College!"

"How can that be possible?First years don't go for the annual college camping..Don't joke yaar!"

"I am NOT joking!Can you believe it!We're leaving today evening and we're gonna stay for 3 days!"

"Rahul you know I'll hang you if this is a LIE."

"THIS ISN'T!Dude Princy ne khud bola!"

"YES!YES! YES!Arrey Princy ki aarti utaro! We're CAAAMPING!"

"Come to college.Jaldi.Tell Riddhima."

"Yes,Ofcourse.Chal bye.ILOVEYOU saale!"

"Chheee,jaake kahin aur gay ban.Not interested,Already committed.",Rahul said in a formal tone before they both laughed and he cut the call.

He looked crazzily happy as he cut the call.Grinning up at her,he couldn't wait to tell her.Camping!It would be such a experience for them.And when his best friend was there..Definitely more exciting.She smiled as she forgot her scratch looking at his happy face,and asked,"Good news?"

His grin widened,"Yes.We're going to camping today.After college.Can you believe it,For 3 days!"

"Really?",she got excited,"Thats exciting!Where?"

"Where?",he got lost,"Uh..I forgot to ask,how stupid na..",he scratched his head

She giggled,"No problem.Lets go,we have to go to college."

"Yeah.Oh,How's your wound?"

She smiled at his concern,"Okay."

"Are you sure,Basket?"

"Ye-es Armaan.Ofcourse."

"Ok.Wait,One sec.",he took out a large handkerchief and tied it around her leg.She giggled and he raised his eyebrow,"What?"

She laughed again,"Tell me this is a Lame bollywood movie.Guys and handkerchief?And Wasn't the Heroine supposed to do this,the tying thing."

He smiled,"Whatever you call it,I know its friendship.And now,lets go.",she was dumbfounded at his answer,as he helped her stand and said,"Make sure you put band-aid on this,and before that,wash it."

He started walking as he waved away and dazed,she waved back.But suddenly,"Since you mentioned,did you indirectly mean you WANT this to be a Bollywood movie AND you are the Heroine and I'm your HERO?",he came back and said,his grin flashing again.Riddhima came back to her senses,he was back.

Rolling her eyes,she just said,"Thank YOU Armaan.",before walking away.Her heart fluttered at his question and well,the answer..She just didn't know.

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6:00 p.m.

"Move,OYE MOTI HATT!",Muskaan buged Nikki and made her space.

Nikki turned furious,"Oye Moti kise kaha?Hippopotamus ki rishtedar!"

"Accha!toh tu kya hai,Elephants' Mom's Best Friend?"

"Haw!",Nikki's mouth dropped in rage as she answered back,"You're a MOTI MOTI FOOTBALL!"

"You're a..Moti Aunty!"

"Aunty?ARMAAN ISNE MUJHE AUNTY KAHA!",she hit him,complaining.

"Guys,Bas na!",he said irritatedly as Riddhima giggled beside him,"Aur Nikki tu MUJHE kyun mar rahi hai?What have I done?"

"You Should Defend your Friend na!",she whined.

"Kya defend?Khud karo jo karna hai.Now shut up already,the bus is leaving!"

"OhmyGod,inn dono ko to dekho!",Muskaan pointed and Riddhima burst out laughing along with Armaan.

Abhimanyu and Rahul were snoring slightly,already asleep in their seats,sometimes their heads would collide and they would push that away irritably in their sleep,and get back to snoring.The other time,they would let each other's head lay on each other's shoulders,and sleep.It was a sight worth seeing.The bus jerked start and all the students cheered,Abhi and Rahul woke up momentarily and went back to snoring.Nikki and Muskaan wrinkled their noses in disapproval.

"MORON!",Nikki shouted to her boyfriend who murmured in his sleep,'Nik..sleep'

Armaan burst out laughing at Nikki's red face which was followed by,under her breath,"Jerk,Choddungi nahi"

"Tujhe pata hai what these morons did?",Muskaan giggled suddenly out of the blue.

Looking back,interested,Riddhima questioned,"What?"

"Arrey Armaan was right,first years are never taken to the annual camping trip.But these two idiots,they woke up at 5 in the morning,went to Princy's house and started singing loudly and VERY unmusically under his balcony..Princy was,obviously very irritated and told them to stop.They kept singing,and the more Princy begged them to stop,they sang more.Then,obviously..they put a choice that he should allow the first years to go for this trip in order to stop them from singing.The Princy was in half-sleep yaar..He agreed!",Muskaan piped in.

Armaan grinned proudly at his friends asif they were his baby hen and he was their mother.Riddhima giggled as she took in the answer,and then Armaan asked,"What did they sing?"

Nikki giggled now,"Kaanta laga..Hai laga!"

Riddhima put into fits of giggles as all of them joined in.They glanced at Abhi and Rahul who were smiling in their sleep for god knows what,and suddenly Rahul murmured,'Muski bari sexy hai' which made Riddhima smile,Nikki and Armaan grin and Muski blush beet-root.Armaan turned to Riddhima.She was closely engrossed in her book,and was paying no heed to the others who were busy in their own world.Armaan sighed,disappointed.When he finally had got someone he wanted to talk to,she was reading a book instead of paying attention to him?Normally girls would be dying for him to talk to them..But she was hardly bothered.

"KAANTA LAGAAA!",he shouted in her ear and she was left stunned as the book almost fell from her hand.Regaining herself,she glared at him and spanked him hard with the book on his arm,"IDIOT!"

"Ow!",he protested at once,rubbing his arm,"Basket get off this BORING Book yaar!And Talk to me!"

"Kyun?",she said,irritated,"Who are you?Prime Minister of India?Or SRK?"

"None.I'm...ARMAAN MALLIK.",he brought forward his hand and held it as a display infront of his face.

"Huh!",she srunched up her nose,"You're talking asif you are a very busy person,and have time for only some people and that I'm doing a very bad deed in ignoring you."

"Yes,Ofcourse!",he answered at once,"You know how many people DIE for the mere smile of Armaan Mallik? And you..are engrossed in a Stupid book?For you,its full me,baby..",he said cheekily.

"EWWW!",she at once moved away her face,"Gross,Armaan..Don't Baby me!"

"Basket..",Armaan laughed,"Enough yaar..Why are you so agitated suddenly?"

"Well,I was reading my favourite book,and just got to the Most Romantic Part ever..When",she threw her hands up in frustration,"Urgh,You!"

"Romantic?You know the most romantic person who exists in this world?ME! Talk to me..Saare Books ki romanticism bhul jaogi!"

Riddhima rolled her eyes,trying her best not to give away her smile.But it came anyway,and he grinned,"Anything for that smile..",he whispered.

She hit him with her book again,"Basket Kya yaar!One toh I make u smile,and u hit me!"

She looked at him now,"Stop Flirting...You know your cheeky lines don't work on me!"

He grinned wider,"It does,mere saath hoti ho,toh kitna smile karti ho!Warna hamesha..inn BOORRRING books mein khoyi rehti ho..No,I mean,Seriously,Do you even notice that people would want to talk to you?"

She passed a triumphant,teasing smile,"Accha?That means..You can't even LIVE without talking to me now?"

He sighed dramatically,"Dill hai ke maanta nahi..",he sang.

"Armaan!",she laughed,"You're so cheeky!"

He smiled at her,"Its all so easy with you,Basket."

"Okay,Whatever.Now you mind your own business..Because I want to Read."

"NAAI!",he wailed like a little kid,"We were supposed to talk!"

She rumaged through her handbag and took out her ipod and earphones,"Enjoy yourself..BABY",she said,grinning at him and practically dumping them on his hands.He sighed in defeat and put the earphones in his ears,and switched on the ipod.

Even though there were his favourite songs,he still wanted to talk to her.Sometimes at the flicker of a moment he would glance at her to see if she had finally got off that book,but no..Her eyes moved with the letters,her expression changing each moment.Flipping through the songs again,he found a song he loved from his heart,a song he himself loved to sing.Putting on the song,he closed his eyes.

You're my fire..The one,desire..

Believe what I say..

I want it that way,Tell me Why,

Ain't nothing but a heartache,Tell me Why

Ain't nothing but a Mistake..

Once again,he thought of her.Feeling a tap on the shoulder,he opened his eyes and looked sideways.The tap was Riddhima's head on his shoulder,sleeping peacefully,her beautiful eyes closed to the land of dreams.Her book lay in her hand,lying obliquely on her lap,her fingers inside the page she was reading.He felt like he was losing himself again.Her hair flying slightly on his face like the fragnant wind,his heart pumping almost rhythmically to her breathing,his whole mind dominated by her mere Presence.He wanted to touch her perfect face,the face which glowed in the faint moonlight through the bus window,the face which gave him such a peace in his heart that he himself was surprised.The wind blew on her face,lightly touching her beautiful features and giving shivers to him,thinking how angelic could she be.Everything in the world disappered altogether,all sadness ceased to exist,all he knew..He was lost.In her.

He forgot himself.Nothing else mattered.She was smiling in her sleep and very slowly,she inched closer and held his hand gently,as if it was him she was dreaming about.He smiled at the gesture and words failed him as he tried to describe to himself what he saw infront of his own eyes.Putting his hand in hers securely and switching off the iPod,he gently moved his head to the other side.Enwraped in sleep..They went to explore a land they knew existed..The land of beauitful dreams.He smiled in his sleep,her hand still in his,her head still rested on his shoulder.

***

26th April,2002.

"Morning Basket !!",he wished as soon as he got out of his tent.

"Morning Armaan..",she grinned,taking in his appearance.He was in his white sweatshirt and army-checked three quarters.His hair was messed up and his eyes still looked sleepy,but on the whole,Yeah.He was Armaan.

"I know I'm Hot,Sorry..Irrestible.You dun have to stare like that.",he teased and she rolled his eyes.

"Whatever."

"Denial is the first stage of acceptance,Madame..",he grinned,"And you don't look so bad yourself..Hm.."

"Okay.Uh,Move.",she said,passing a small glare,and trying to ignore the effect his husky voice was having on her heart.She strode past him to the nearby sink in the little hut,to brush her teeth.

"Baasskkettt..",he sang,determined to see the adorable expression on her face which he loved.

"Mmph..Gph..",she shook her hands to move him away,between her brushing,"Aauu"

Armaan laughed," 'Mmph','Gph' and 'Aau'..Nicknames for me?",he grinned with one more of his lame jokes.

Riddhima washed her mouth and face,wiped it with the small towel and glared,"I said,Move..Go Away."

"MAAARR DALAA!",Armaan sang in mock disappointment,holding his heart,"You broke my heart,Riddhima..",he sniffed fakely at her.

"Aww?",Riddhima said in a sugary tone,"You want a cellotape?",then burst out laughing at her own words.

Armaan's grin faded with her words.He pushed past her and brushed his teeth,glancing at her with attitude.She smiled to herself.He was so cute,still the Ammu she knew.It made her want to pull his cheeks.She pouted at him,and he just,"Huh!"-ed with fake attitude.

"Ammuuu..",she called as he was about to walk past her.

"Kya hai?",he said,not looking at her.She stood infront of him and held her ears,"Shoollyyy..bura laga?"

He supressed his urge to smile,could she get any cuter?He nodded indifferently,but after a pause,"Its okay.Itni cutely kisi ko sorry bolo gi toh koi bhi man jayega.",he grinned.

She smiled at him,"You find me cute?"

"And beautiful..and sexy,and maybe you do look very H-",he started shamelessly.

"URGH!",She smacked his arm lightly and strode away in frustration while he grinned.He was back to himself.

Teasing her,laughing with her,holding her hand,running after her,taking care of her,protecting her and making her smile..It was like he was living his childhood again,with a touch of adolescene this time. It was different with her,he had to admit,she was indeed very beautiful and it did let sparks fly in the air.It set his heart fluttering when she was close,and he didn't even want to know what he was feeling.He was happy.She had brought colours and happiness into his life that he had forgotten somewhere,she was like the Hues of a Rainbow to him.

Sharply at 9,they were told to make their breakfasts by the campside.The gang formed a group and everyone was bickering who would make and what,when,"I'll make it!",Armaan volunteered. Almost as an instant reaction,everyone's faces lost its colour. Riddhima looked around skeptically.

"What say?",he said at the silent reaction. His friends looked around at each other for something,hoping that SOMEONE would answer.They gulped.Armaan making breakfast? Then it would surely be the last breakfast of their lives.

"Uh..",Muski managed out and nodded at Riddhima who seemed confused and passed a smile to Armaan. Armaan beamed at her and said,"Yeah,done then! I'm making breakfast! Will be back in 10 guys!",he walked away excitedly and the gang held Riddhima,"WHAT DID YOU DOOO?"

"Why?Armaan making breakfast is a Problem?",she said,puzzled.

"PROBLEM?",Nikki blasted off at her,"OYE,TU JANTI HAI TUNE KYA KIYA! DUUFFERRR!",She spanked her cousin's head.

"Ow!Nikki I'll give you one Punch and you'll be down! Mind that woman!",Riddhima warned.

Nikki's mood calmed down immediately and she smiled sheepishly,"Soorrryy.."

"Its okay.Guys tell me Problem kya hai!"

"Ridzi.",Muski held her hand and Anjali looked worried,"Listen.Armaan PERFECT hai,lekin Usko..He Can't Cook."

Anjali nodded,"He Ehem..Made Pasta on Atul's birthday once...Which Er.."

"Was Burnt.",Muski sighed.

"WHAT?",Riddhima looked around her friends who had sad expressions as if it was their Examination Day,"OhGod!",she panicked,"What do we do now?"

"Sit and Die..",Rahul groaned.

"Wait.Wait.You mean,you guys NEVER told him how he cooked?",she asked,panicked.

The gang shook their heads,"We didn't want to upset him,yaar..However he is,hai toh humara dost hi na..",Atul said.

"OhGod.",Riddhima said again,"What do we do?"

"GUYS!",came his excited Voice from the back.They gulped and sent up a silent prayer to keep them alive. Turning slowly,they smiled a half-fake,half-scared smile.They were standing in a group and saw Armaan with a plate with a fully,100 percent burnt BLACK toast,with Yellow butter coming out from the sides. Muskaan held herself back from crying out,the guys flinched at their own condition,Anjali and Nikki passed each other sad glances,while Riddhima stared in shock.

"Yeah,Uhm..Lil burnt I know..Lekin it'll be okay..",he said,smiling sheepishly.

Weren't it for the toast,Riddhima would've have noticed how adorable he looked.But the plate in his hands was something like her Worst Nightmare. Lil Burnt,Are YOU KIDDING ME?,she wanted to shout but didn't.

"Yeah,Trial basis.Rahul,Atul,Abhi?",Armaan passed his shining smile to them and held up the plate.

Rahul cleared his throat to think staright,"Uhm.I'm on a diet..",Abhi Punched him,"Sorry,WE are on a Diet."

"WHAT?",Armaan almost shouted in shock,"You are..On Diet? You Are GUYS,not Girls.Rahul why do you need a diet? If u dun eat waise bhi you'll disappear in thin air!",he exclaimed.

"Pyaar ke liye toh log jaan de dete hai,Armaan..toh Khana kya cheez hai?",Atul said philosophically.Abhi nodded.

"Huh?",Armaan's face srunched up,"You guys are keeping Diet for..the Girls?",All the boys nodded furiously.

"Uh,Okay.Then.Girls?",he said,beaming up at the three girls.They gulped and looked at each other.

"Um..Kya hai na,Armaan.",Anjali started,"We..Um..Can't eat without the boys.Woh nahi khayenge,aur hum khayenge?"

"Ya,ya..If they can prove their love for US,why can't WE?"

"Fine.Prove your love.",he got irritated and got to Riddhima,"Tum bhi nahi khaogi,toh bata do kya bahana hai?I know even YOU don't want to appreciate my effort.",his face fell with disappointment.

Her heart cringed at his saddened face,"No,Armaan.I'm hungry.Mai khaungi.",she smiled.

"REALLY?",he echoed,beaming at her.

"Yup.Not here,but.Lets go..",she held the plate and took it to the rocks by the brook,leaving him dumbfounded.

She struggled all by herself,and took one small bit for him.It was something she couldn't describe and wanted to Spit.It was Terribly Terrible,in a few words. She closed her eyes and flinched whenever she bit on the piece,digesting it very carefully.Even my childhood milk was better,she thought dimly while her face changed expressions.

"Its terrible,isn't it?",his voice made her open her eyes.He was sitting beside her with a small smile.

"Um..What? No..No ways..",she pretended to frown and say that it was the best thing she'd ever eaten.

"Riddhima,why did u eat it? Why didn't u refuse like the others?",he asked.

She sighed,understanding that she knew,"Because the others aren't your best friends,Armaan.I Am.I didn't want you to be Sad.It doesn't suit you."

"So to see me happy,you ate this CRAP I made?",she smiled sheepishly.

"Uhm..",was all she could say.He was touched and thought what good work had he done to deserve a best friend like her.There was a slight pause,and said,"Its terrible,isn't it,Basket?"

"Are you KIDDING me?",she looked at him shocked,"Its,Sorry Armaan..But HORRIBLY terrible."

"Yeah?",he grinned and she nodded,"Gimme.",he said and took a bite from the same place she'd bitten the bread from. Immediately,he spit it out,"Chee!Oh Shit its,Epitome of Crapness! How did u manage to eat this..EW!",he said at his own creation,she giggled.

"No..seriously,Urgh!",he wrinkled his nose and threw it away,"HOW?"

"For you.",she whispered.

He smiled a heart-felt touched smile,"Thanks again,Basket."

"Dosti mein no sorry,no thank you,mere SRK ne kaha tha.",she grinned.

"TUMHARA SRK?"

"Yup.Jealous?",she winked.

"No,sweetheart.Makes it easier,whenever he's not around,I can take my chance.",he winked back.

"Lets go have REAL Breakfast!",she giggled and jumped up to trot to the campside.Armaan smiled quietly to himself.She was more special to him than he could ever imagine.

***

"OYE!Thik se khade raho!",Muskaan nugded her boyfriend.

"You think I look okay,Atul?",Anjali settled her hair.

"Pario ki Pari..",Atul whispered and Anjali rolled her eyes.

"Dhang ke kapde nai hai kya?Wearing a White T-shirt asif you've come to someone's death!",Nikki said.

"Baby its okay.I KNOW.You look so cute,haina?"

"Huh!I always look cute.But I think we should pose properly."

"Enough!",Armaan blasted off,"Camera man nahi hu main! Aur tum log Fashion magazine ke picture nahi khichwa rahe! Comeon Dudes!",he said irritably and Riddhima giggled.

"Oh.Sorry,Armaan.",they all said in a chorus.

Endless photos were captured in his camera.Of friends,of Riddhima and himself,of Riddhima alone,priceless expressions of Abhi while Nikki battered on,Nikki's model-type poses,Muskaan's sticking out tongue,Rahul and Muskaan blushing,Atul watering the plants,Atul and Anjali's dancing pose,Anjali's giggle,Riddhima's laugh,Armaan's grin,memorable moments.He was about to click photos of his teachers eating away like they'd got food for the first time ever in their lives,when Riddhima decided to pester him.

She took the water pipe,put on the tap,and held it infront of his camera,threatening him to splash water all over it. He looked extremely alarmed and as she moved forward,he moved backwards,till finally,

"Riddhima not on my camera yaar!",he protested,and the water came slowshing down on him,wetting him from top to toe.

"GGOOTTCCHAAA!",she squealed excitedly,giggling at his stunned face.His face changed colours,and looking terribly annoyed he said,"You're not getting away..",as they broke into a run.

She laughed and giggled as he chased her like back in their childhood years,he couldn't wipe off that playful smile on his face as they toppled over the campsides,pushed their friends around,and he ran behind her.

She paused,taking quick breaths as she leaned on the wall of the back door.She looked ahead and her heartbeat almost stopped.The blue eyes were back to enchanting her,as their rapid heartbeats made their minds question themselves.He stared right into her eyes,feeling oddly happy as she searched his eyes.Holding her hand,he leaned closer.She closed her eyes,what the hell was happening to her?

Her heartbeats rose,as very huskily he whispered,"I got you too..",and then,the whole bucket of water came down on her,wetting her,as after a while,not only he..but she herself laughed madly.Best friends they were indeed,but did they understand what was happening to them?

"PYAARR HUA IKRAAR HUA HAIII..",Atul sang in his loudest voice,bringing them out of their trance.Armaan grinned at her.She smiled back.

"Armaan",she giggled,"You look funny when you're wet!"

Armaan's grin faded into a soft smile of remembrance,"You still say that...What you used to say when we were small.."

"Because you're still so like that!",she ruffled his hair,and giggled to her own self,"Ammu!"

"Basket!",he said in response,smiling at the crazy and childish turn the conversation had taken,and she looked adorable while saying it.

"Well,then..Let me show you something.",he said looking at her.

"Hm?"

She peeked over his shoulder excitedly as he browsed his mobile gallery.Finding what he wanted,his large grin plastered itself across his face and he said,"Here.",handing her the phone.

Riddhima wanted to hold on to the moment forever.What he showed her was a picture of them together,both in vampire costumes,flaring their fake fangs at the screen.It looked far from being scary.The two little vampires were uber-cute.The scene at once flashed in her mind,and she smiled. She remembered they had bickered so much on who looked cuter and who should get into Rajeev's lap first. However,Rajeev being the lovable person he was,had picked both of them together in his lap.

"Earth calling Gupta.",his voice whispered in her ear and she turned to look at him.

"Armaan..How did you..Where did you..find this?",she mumbled.

"Well,Thank Mom.She was showing me the old albums yesterday,and I found this.Remember?"

"Yeah.We were in the.."

"4th standard.",he completed,grinning,"We had that Junior Fancy Dress Show.We both were partners.."

"Yeah.I remember.We seriously scared off those idiots!"

"And everyone called you Vampira afterwards!",Armaan said and started laughing.

"Haww!",she said,putting her hands on her hips,"Armaan!"

"Yes,Vampira?"

"ARRRMAAN!",she said in a more irritated tone,"You want me to hit you?",she glared.

"Awwhhh No!I'm so scareeed!",he said in a mock act of crying.

"Just to remind you,Varun called you Vampo."

"Haahhahahaa I had scared off that geek,he was LITERALLY crying in class!"

"It was not funny okay.You just had a Personal grudge against him."

"OOH PLUEAS.He just LOURVED you,running behind you like a puppy,and thats why you also L-"

"OHNO ARMAAN MALLIK.DONT.EVEN.THINK.OF.THAT."

"Awwhh Vampira ko sharam aa rahi hai?"

"EWWW Armaan Please,I hated Varun!He was such a NERD!"

"Okay,so you hated that Geek.Good.But you remember that day so well na?Vampo and Vampira!",he grinned.

Riddhima giggled,her anger dissolved away in their moments of togetherness.

***

8:00p.m.

"Anjali!",Atul ran behind her,with a aloe vera plant.

"KYA HAI ATUL?",She blasted off,irritated.

"Ehem..Anjali..Woh,Um,Tum Moti ko paani de dogi please?She wants water from you only.."

"Who the hell in the world is MOTI?"

"She!",Atul said,looking lovingly at his plant,"Yeh aloe vera plant!"

"URRGGHH!",Anjali threw up her hands in frustration and Atul followed her,continuously calling out her name.

They had all sat around the campfire,Armaan and Rahul humming songs with their guitars,the girls talking and giggling among themselves,in which Muski was full-on blabbering about how she had a HUGE Crush on Rahul earlier,which turned to love..blah blah,Riddhima was being embarressed by asking her the silliest questions about Armaan.She yearned to walk into the forest,she always loved adventures,but the Darkness of the night..Well,not a good prospect.She just wanted to get out of the blabber and feel the breeze on her face,the moonlight shining over the place.

"Uhm,girls..Are you sure you're not boring Basket?",he asked,suddenly appearing.

"Acccha?Tujhe bari chinta hai Ridzi ki?",Nikki grinned wide.

"Oye HOOYEEE Hero,Itna Pyyyaar?"

"Why Babes?Feeling Jealous?",Armaan asked cheekily.

"Armaan!",Riddhima scowled.

"Kya Basket,I'm doing this to take you out of here,and you are ki-"

"Ok.Ok.Le ja,Hero.Humare paas to kam nahi hai na,jo Ridzi se jalous honge.."

"Ya.SHOOO!",Nikki shooed them away and continued to talk to Muskaan.

"What was that,Armaan?",she questioned.

"What?",he asked innocently.

"Armaan!"

"Whatever,Basket.Chalo.",he said,holding her hand and dragging her towards the jungle.

"Where are we going?",she asked.

"For a walk."

"Uhm..In this darkness.."

"Afraid?",he whispered,"Dun need to be,Main hoon na!"

"I'm not Scared OKAY.Just asking."

"Toh walk na.",he grinned.

So they went,bickering all the way and sometimes even smiling and laughing for no solid reason.She was trusting him,and it was making her happier and stronger than she'd even imagined.All the moments with him were so special that she could actually know she was living her life in a different way.

"Uhm,Armaan..Dun mind me asking,where are we going,again?"

"Arrey Basket don't worry,we're just-",he looked behind but cut off suddenly,"Shit.",he mumbled.

His eyes searched frantically around the darkness in the torch light for one flicker of familarity,and there was none.Hoe stupid could he have been? How did he just forget everything when she was around?

"We're just WHAT?",Riddhima asked,her voice holding a little panic.

"Uhm.There..Well..might be a possibility."

"WHAT?ARMAAN!"

"Riddhima..",he started,his voice shaking,"I think..We might be..Well,Lost."

***

(COMPLETE)
EDITED, Over.The part,I mean.😆
Those who are grinning,This was for you LMAAOO😆Okay this is Esp for Sanaa,Radhika and My Basket who I miss like hell !! <33 LOVE YOU GUYS!Oye What are you staring? JUST COMMENT FAST!! RAADDDZZZYY I want Biggy comment :D
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Maitree
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