A Crime to Remember -KHKS2- part6 23 june

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Hi! So, i'm new to this website, so i don't know how this whole fan fiction section works, but i'm trying. If you're actually reading this, then thank you! It means a lot that someone is actually reading something written by me :)
So this is something I was working on on FanFiction. net but I wasn't getting many readers. One of my reviewers sujested to post it on here so here i am.
I dont exactly know where i am going with this story, but we'll see.
Just bear in mind that i haven't watched this show in MONTHS so if i get some stuff wrong, please do tell me!

Chapter 1: Staying at my criminal uncle's house. Fun.

I wallked up to the door and took a deep breathe. Just by looking at me, nobody would've guessed that I was very, very angry. To any other person, I looked like a happy 18 (going to be 19 in a week) year old girl who was staying at her uncle's place (he's my dad's cousin) since her dad wouldn't let her stay at dorm.

"It's dangerous! I'm worried something will happen to you!" my dad had said to me. I highly doubt a dorm can be more dangerous than the household of Rudra Pratap Singhania. I mean, come on, the guy is a freaking criminal! But, of course, when I tried to tell my dad that, he didn't believe me.

Seriously, my dad doesn't know about anything that happens in that house. I found, but by accident, three years ago. I was sent to Rudra Chacha's house for a week for vacation. They treid to hide everything from me, but I found out anyway. Mikhail Bhai, even though he is the oldest, is probably the most reckless of the three brothers. Well, now they know I know, but they know no one will belive me, so they don't make a big deal out of it.

I rang the door bell continuously (it really annoys Chachi. It's so funny to watch) until someone anwered the door.

"Isn't ringing the doorbell once enough?" said the person answering the door, looking behind him. It was Arjun. Arjun turned to look at me and a huge smile spread around his face. "Tina! I'ts so great to see you! Everybody! Tina's here! And noker (A/N: sry if i spelled that wrong), get Tina some water!"

Arjun led me into the house. "It's great to see all of you!" I said as everyone assembled around me and I took the water from the noker. I was only really excited to see Rashi Di, Arjun, Dadi, and Romit. I really disliked Chacha, Chachi, and Mikhail Bhai. Then I saw two new people. A cute little boy and a girl around Arjun's age.

"Uh...care to introduce me?" I said to Arjun as I drank some water.

"Oh, right, this is Arohi, my wife, and Raj, my son." I nearly choked on my water.

'Are youall right?" asked Dadi, concerned. Chacha and Chachi just looked bored. Mikhail Bhai had already left. The others stood there as is eh, nothing new here. Really, this household is crazy.

"When the hell did you get married? And a kid?" I exclaimed, seeing that the kid was around 6, and Arjun and Arohi didn't look more than 23. That would mean they had their kid at 17!

"Well, I got married like a month ago-" Arjun said.

"Long story," said Arjun's wife, Arohi.

"And this kid-?"

"Another long story," Arohi said. "We can explan later.

"Um, okay, whatever." I sad, rolling my eyes. In the past years, I've learned that the weirdest things go on in this house, and I've gotten to it. "All right, I'm really sleepy and jetlegged since came all the way from America, so I'm going to bed. Romit, show me where I'm sleeping." Romit picked up my bag for me and led to my room.

I plopped down on the bed, looking at the ceiling.

My stay here was going to be really intresting...

So I hope you enjoyed the first chapter. I know, it's short, but the other's i will try to make longer, promise!

I have the second chapter written, but I just want to wait and see how much response this gets.

If you have any questions/comments you can message me here or you can go tot my tumbl page and click the "ask me anything!" button. you can ask questions even if you don't have a tumblr. here's the link: hpgeek1221.tumblr.com

Thanks for reading! 😊

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Wow, I've gotten ( views in the past 30 minutes. Not bad...So i think this is how i add on to my own posts, but i really dont know *shrugs* here's the next chapter.

Chapter 2: Sure, I'll Help

"Wow, that explains a lot," I said to Arjun as he finished explaining what the whole story was behind him having a wife and a kid.

"Yeah, crazy, huh?" he said, leaving the room.

I lay down on my bed, taking a deep breathe. Theses people are crazier than the last time I saw them. I mean, Arjun fallls in love, but the girl he loves is the daughter of a police officer. Then he leaves all this criminal crap for her, but she pushes down Rashi and Rashi looses her kid, but Rashi forgives her. And now they're getting divorced. How CRAZY DOES THAT SOUND?

But when Arjun was talking to me about his wife, Arohi-I mean Bhabi-, i saw something in his eyes. He was so happy when he was talking about her. It's pretty clear that he's still in love with Bhabi.

"Ugh, but why won't he just tell her?" I exclaim out loud.

"Because you're cousin and Bhabi are complete idiots," said someone from the door. I got up and saw it was Dadi. She sat down next to me on the bed. "Those two love each other a lot, i can see it in their eyes. But they won't say it to each other for some reason. I don't know how to get it out of them!"

"Well, are they scared to express their feeling for each other?" I ask.

"That's the thing. I don't know!" She said, frustrated. Then her eyes lit up. "But you can help me."

"Huh?"

"help me get these two back together! The others int his house won't help, i know that for a fact. PLease, help me!"

"All right, all right, i'll help," I said to Dadi. Wow, she really was desperate. Bhabi and Arjun's problem really is that serious. "But right now, I'm really tired and I want to go to sleep. "

"Okay,y ou go to sleep, we'll plan later." And she left this room.

I looked after her skeptically. How come everyone in this house is always planning something?

Next chapter will be longer. Thanks again for reading :)

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ohhh this is good, please continue! and add me to your PM list!
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Hey, welcome to the forum!!
Your FF is amazing!!
I loved reading it!!
Cant wait for the next part!!
Please continue soon!!
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Hey! Wow, in one night i got 44 views. Thank you so much! Here's the next chapter, I hope you enjoy :)

Chapter 3: A Criminal Mission

"No."

"But you have t-!"

"Dadi, this is so wrong on so many levels! For goodness sake, it's illegal!"

"But it's for Arjun and Arohi!"

"Dadi! I know we want them back together, but I am not going to my ruin my life for that!"

"But--"

"Dadi, I am not doing criminal work to get Arohi and Arjun together."

Yes, you heard me right. Criminal work. That is how bad Dadi wants those two together.

Dadi wants me to go on a criminal mission with Arjun and Arohi (I don't understand why Arohi's going, but whatever) so that I can get them together. She says there will be less of a distraction. Which is false because there will be a distraction--we'll all be busy breaking the law!

"Tina, beta, I want those two to be together. This the only chance you will get to have them all to yourself, and you can bring love together. They'll thank you later in life," Dadi said as she sat down on my bed.

"What are you going to tell my father? I'm here to study. If the college finds out I'm doing criminal work, they'll kick me out and I will never get into any college," I said with a more calm voice, sitting down next to Dadi.

"Don't worry about that. I'll take care of it. Please?" Dadi looked at me with a pleading look.

Now how the hell was I supposed to say no to that?

I sighed and looked up to Dadi. "Fine, what do I have to do?"

*****************

"We are leaving this song."

"No, I don;t like this station. We're putting this station on."

"It's my car!"

"Yeah, and I'm married to you, so have right over this radio."

"Oh, my goodness, shut up," I said loudly from the backseat of the car. "It is 4 o'clock in the morning and you two are fighting?! I am tired! I want peace and quiet, understand? Good."

Arjun and Arohi mumbled a quick sorry and shut up.

We were headed to Goa, where this mission was to take place. The three of us were told by Rudra Chacha (he was pretty shocked to see that I wanted to be part of this) that we have to kidnap some man and get him to buy something. We were supposed to meet and accomplice upon reaching the hotel.

It's crazy thinking that I, Tina Verma, who had never done anything law breaking in her life, was out to kidnap some poor man because he didn't want to buy something from my Chacha. You have no idea how horrible I am feeling right now.

What have I gotten my self into?

**************

After a couple of hours of driving, we finally reached Paradise Resort. It's a very fancy hotel, right on the shore of a beautiful beach. If I wasn't so worried about the whole kidnapping shin-dig and getting Arjun and Arohi together, I would be really excited about the fact that I was staying at such a expensive resort.

As the three of us stood at the check in counter, I looked around the lobby.

Then I spotted something and quickly hid behind Arjun.

What was he doing here?!

Arjun and Arohi looked at me with questioningly looks.

"You see that guy over there?" I pointed to a young, handsome boy sitting on the lobby couches reading a book. "We wen to the same high school and dated for a bit. But we didn't think we could handle a long distance relationship, so we broke up. But what is he doing here? He told me he was going to Princeton!"

Arjun and Arohi looked at the boy sitting on the couch. Arohi raised he eyebrows and said, "Not bad." Arjun gave her a look. Well, that was something to note. he was jealous. How cute!

Arjun looked back at me. "Uh..sorry to break it to you, Tina, but that's our accomplice..."

"What?!"

Well, I hoped you liked this chapter! First, the Paradise Resort is not a real resort in Goa, I just made it up. Second, I thought it would be fun to give my OC a love interest. I thought it would be fun :)
I know I haven't been putting a lot of Arjun and Arohi love stuff in here, but it'll eventually come as the story progresses. It's hard to do love scenes with the two of them since it's in the point of view Arjun's second cousin, but I will try!
Thank's again for reading!

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Hey guys! So, I;m want to change the title of this story, but I don't know how to, so if someone can tell me how to, I would be very happy. I'm also trying to so this whole part and page thing, but i don't get it. Like, would i write Title apart4 page 2 or something? And would i have to change the title each time? I'm just so confused about that whole thing, so if someone can please explain to me how to do that, I would be very, very grateful.
I'm also very mad right now, because i had been working on this next chapter on here for 30 minutes, and I was close to done with the chapter when all of sudden my page backed up and everything was deleted! God, I was so mad! But here's the next chapter and I hope you enjoy it :)

Chapter 4: My Accomplice Ex-Boyfriend

"I don't want to go. Do you know how awkward this is going to get?" I whined out loud as Arohi stood in front of the mirror applying make up. Arjun had already left, saying he couldn't stand Arohi's annoying-ness any longer.

"Well, was your break up with him that awkward?" asked Arohi as she applied eyeliner.

"No, not at all because we'd both agreed to the break-up. What's going to be awkward is that fact the both of us are here to kidnap someone when we had planned completely different things!" My face plopped onto the pillow of Arohi's bed, face down. "What do I do, Bhabi?" I said in a muffled voice.

Then Arohi lifted me off the bed, taking me to the mirror. She handed me some of her make up and said, "Just go down there and talk to him. It's not like you have much choice, right?"

I took the make up and sighed. "Right."

"I'm going to head down to the pool. That's where we're having the meeting. Take your time and come down, okay?" And Arohi left.

I really didn't need this right now, really. I have enough to worry about right now. I have to get Arjun and Arohi together, I have to kidnap a poor man, and now ex-boyfriend is here, working on the mission with us.

And you know what makes it worse?

I'm still in love with the guy.

**********

"Hey, guys, sorry I'm late," I said as I sat down on the pool side table, trying not to make contact with my ex. I could the shock on his face from the corner of my eye.

"Tina?" he said, the surprise very obvious in his voice.

"Hey, Vikram," I said to him with a little wave.

"What are you--" Vikram started before he was interrupted by Arjun.

"You two can catch up later. Right now, we need to discuss the plan."

"Why? We all know it," Arohi said.

"Arohi, shut up," Arjun said, not even looking at.

"Hey, don' tell me to shut up, okay. Who do you think you are to tell me to shut up?" Arohi responded with anger.

"Arohi, why do you always have to be such a brat?" Arjun said as he turned to face her.

"I am not--"

"Hey, guys, not now, please?" I said, shutting the two "love birds" up. "Bhabi's right. We don't need to discuss something we all already know. All we need to decide is where to hide this man. And I have that planned out."

"Where do you intend to hide him?" asked Arjun.

"In my room. We can take turns to look after him. I'll take first watch, then Vikram, then Arjun, then Arohi. Okay?" I looked around the table with a questioning look.

They all nodded.

"So if we're done here, I'm going to leave," and Arohi got up and headed to the designer stores. Arjun also left, heading back to his room.

That left me and Vikram. Alone.

Talk about awkward..

"So, Princeton?" I asked Vikram, eyebrows raised.

"I can explain," Vikram said, leaning in a little.

"Yes, please do explain why you lied to me," I demanded.

"What else was I supposed to do? How was I supposed to tell you that my dad is a criminal in India and he wanted me to join the business? I would have rather lied to you about my family then let you know the truth and not like me."

I crossed my hands and slumped back in my chair. "Well, it's not different in my family. My dad's cousin, Arjun's father, is on the police's most wanted list."

"So what are you doing with them? Weren't you supposed to be in college?" he asked with a challenged look.

"It's a long story. But if it was up to me, I wouldn't be here." And then I got up and left.

************

I don't know why I left Vikram like that. I mean, if I were in his place, I would have lied too.

But I don't think it's that. I just don't think I'm ready to go back to this relationship again. I don;t even know if he wants to be back in a relationship with me. We broke up two-three months ago, and didn't really talk.

I walked over to the hotel room's window, opening the curtains. I had a great view of the beach from here.

I leaned my head against the window, watching all the people enjoying their time on the beach, not having to worry about all the crap I'm worrying about at the time.

Then I saw Vikram.

With a girl.

They were laughing and holding hands and the next thing I knew, they were kissing.

I turned away from the window with a little gasp.

Well, I am now guessing Vikram doesn't want to be in a relationship with me.

Perfect.

Well, I hope you enjoyed the chapter. I know it's not a lot of Arohi and Arjun, more my OCs, but I just thought having more than one problem would make the story more interesting. But don't worry, there will be more Arjun/ Arohi in the upcoming chapters!
Also, like I said earlier, if anyone is willing to help me out, please do, because i am VERY confused.
Thanks for reading! <3

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Awesome update!!
Loved both updates!!
And you can change your title by editing your 1st post!!
Will be waiting for the next part!!
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Hello my wonderful readers 😊 So here's the new chapter! Hope you enjoy :)

Chapter 5: The Jealousy Plan

"So how is it going?" Dadi said on the other line of the phone.

"I haven't gotten very far, actually. Something, uh, came up..."

"What? Tina, you have only a couple of days to get them to confess their love for each other!" Dadi exclaimed.

I rolled my eyes. "Dadi, chill out. Ironically, I have a plan."

"What kind of plan?"

"A jealousy plan."

************

Jealousy is a sure way to make two people fall in love and/or confess their love for each other. And that was what I planned on using with Arohi and Arjun.

But first, I needed to find two people who were willing to be part all of this. So i decided to go to the resort's amazing club/bar.

But upon reaching there, I wanted to turn right back around.

Why, you ask?

Because Vikram was there, cuddling with the girl from the beach.

But, I had mission to accomplish. So, ignoring him, I walked straight to the bar and sat down.

"Hi, can I have a water, please?" I asked the bar tender.

"Sure thing, sweetie," the man said and handed me a glass of cold water.

As I drank my water, I looked around the club, trying to find a man and woman who could pretend to be hitting on Arjun and Arohi.

That's when I spotted two people, sitting in the corner of the club, talking to each other. They could work.

I got up, heading in that direction. When i got there, the two looked at me and smiled.

"Hi! My name's Tina!" I yelled over the music.

"Hi!" The man said. "I'm Jay and this is my sister, Nikita! Jay and Nikita Desai!" They looked at me a little unsure, like why the hell is this chick talking to us?

"Can I talk to you guys? Somewhere a little quiet? I need some help!"

The siblings looked at each other, unsure. Well, I don't blame them. It's not everyday people are asked by and 18 year old girl at club to help her out.

Then the guy named Jay said, "Sure."

We walked out the club and into a quiet cafe that was also in the resort (told you this resort was fancy).

"Uh..so what do you need help in?" the girl named Nikita said.

"Yeah, I know, this is really weird and all, but what I'm asking you is going to benefit two people for the rest of their lives," I said.

And so I started to explain the whole situation to two random people.

*************

Surprisingly, Jay and Nikita agreed to my plan.

Now, if you are wondering on what the plan is, well, it's pretty simple. Jay is gonna hit on Arohi, making Arjun jealous and Nikita will hit on Arjun, making Arohi jealous. And all that will ultimately lead the two idiots to confessing their love for each other.

I am a freaking genius

***********

So as Nikita and Jay worked their magic on the the two, which is amusing, I was having my own problems.

Where ever I went, I saw Vikram with his girlfriend, and I really didn't enjoy seeing that.

I know we broke up, so I'm trying my best to move on and not notice that Vikram is with another girl, but how can I when he's all over her all the time?

At the moment, I standing in line at the cafe to get a coffee, and guess what? Vikram walked in, girlfriend less. That's a first.

"Hey, Tina," he said, coming to stand in line behind me.

"Hey," I said. "What's up, you know, besides planning to kidnap the man?"

"Oh, nothing, just hanging out with this girl I met," he said, not looking me in the eye.

"Nice, nice," I said, looking away from him as my turn came to order.

"Hi, how may I help you?" the woman behind the counter said with a smile.

"Hi, can I have a coffee?"
After a few minutes, the woman handed me my coffee and i paid. And then i turned and collapsed on top of someone. Talk about embarrassing.

"Oh, God, I am so sorry!" I said, to a very (and i mean very) good looking boy about my age.

He laughed. "No, it's okay." We both got up, shaking the coffee off of us.

"My name's Rahul. Rahul Sharma."

"Tina. Tina Verma," I said, shaking his hand.

"Let me buy you a new coffee," Rahul said, heading to the line.

"No, no that's not necessary."

"Well, I want to," and he left me standing there with a smile.

Vikram came up next to me, not looking to happy, for reasons I do not know. "I think he was just flirting with you."

I looked at Vikram. "Man, I sure hope so."

Okay, so not my best update, but I promise the next one's gonna be better! :)

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Hey everyone! I am sorry for such a later update! I've been a little busy for the past two weeks. But here is chapter 6! And I am sure you'll be happy to know that this chapter is about Arohi and Arjun rather than my OCs. From here on out, I will be jumping around for the point of views. I hope you enjoy! 😊

Chapter 6: Arjun's...New Girl?

(Arohi's POV)

"He-is-so-heavy!" I grunted as we carried Banerjee (the man we are to be kidnapping) into Tina's room. He was unconscious with his hands and feet wrapped in a tight rope and his mouth covered in duct tape as we tied him to a chair in the corner of the room.

"You're okay, right?" I asked Tina as she plopped onto her bed.

"Yeah," she sighed. "Don't u feel..bad?"

"About kidnapping this man? Yes," I nodded, sitting down next to Tina on the bed.

"So why did you tag along for the mission?"

I looked down at my hands. How was I supposed to answer that? I came...because I wanted to be near Arjun. I know, we're getting a divorce, and this is what I've been looking forward to since he forcibly married me, but I can't help it. I started falling for Arjun all over again in the past couple of months. "I...just wanted to see what this idiot really does, you know?" I perked up, ignoring the doubtful look Tina was giving me.

"Whatever," Tina said, shrugging.

"Okay well, I'm going to head back downstairs. Have fun!" I said sarcastically and left the room. and headed to the pool. I wanted to get away from everything for a while.

*****

Sitting on the pool side felt good. No crappy plans, no thinking about Arjun, not worrying about anything. Yupp, it's good.

But then I looked across the pool and saw Arjun.

With some girl.

And they were both laughing and having drinks.

So much for not worrying. How come me and Tina are having the same problems?

Well, not my best work, but I'm heading the direction I want to . I promise to get the next chapter up asap! Thank you so much for reading! <3
Edited by LaLi21 - 14 years ago
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Hi everyone!
I just wanted to tell all of you that i am not going to contnue writing this fan fiction. The reason being that I am not having fun writing it. But I promise that i will be back with a new fan fiction, as soon as I think of, that is.
But thank you for actually reading some of this! It feels good knowing that there are people out there that actually enjoy something that I am writng. <3
--LaLi
Edited by LaLi21 - 14 years ago

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