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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

OMG .. OMG.. OMG.. OMG.. OMG...

i LOVE my story! 😆😆 i didn't know you're THAT fab a writer. seriously, girly, it's ahmazing! i love.. myself? LOL. love this cho much! <3

i wanna write sanjna's story. ;D

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fiza

@Fiza28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Nidha sweets i loved it thank you cant wait for what else you have in store for me waiting for the rest love ya 😉

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fiza

@Fiza28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Ch 2

Early moring a beautiful golden retriever jumps on big queen canopy bed and starts barking nonstop . A beautiful girl moves the bed covers from her face " good morning my adorable alarm clock I'm up don't worry" say aysha she jumps out of bed a quickly a rushes to get ready 15 min later aysha is ready wearing red halter top with skinny light blue jeans and a black scarf with nice avatar shades with bronze makeup and smoky eyes and red lips runs down stairs . Papa Papa where the paper aaj ka mera horoscope read kar na hain . Raj kapoor Aysha dad " aysha beta here is the paper but why do you read such nonsense"

Papa today is my 1^st day of college you won't understand she quietly reads it . it says today will be a unforgettable day a start of something new you will meet someone who will become your everything . OMG! OMG! OMG! Kya hua beti

Oh nothing papa I 'm getting late gotta run kisses her papa. Beti breakfast tho

I'll grab something in the canteen. Get in her blue BMW sports car top down has the music blasting driving to mount college thinking about her horoscope when suddenly some guy in a black Bens cuts her off and hits the front of her car. Aysha gets out of her car and see's what happened when a guy in all black gets out of the car and walks to her. A rough sexy voice "Here take this" hands her a check of 20 lacks Aysha "what's this are you serious I can't believe you" hands back the check to him the rough sexy voice kyun kam hai kya yeh lo gives her 50 lac check if it was less you could have said so Aysha sick of his rudeness excuse me I'm not interested in you and your money a sorry would have been enough why don't you go learn so manners with that money rips the check in half and throws in his face I'm also from a big and rich family but atleast my parents have taught me to stick to my values and principles and just for your info you can buy everything but you can't buy people feelings. The rough sexy voice oh really dont you dare bring my parents in this and thank you for your vaules lecture nowif your done lecturing move I'm getting late pushes her aside . written by lalmirch28

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

:::Chapter 3:::First Meeting:::

Nidha in her Suzuki Swift car drives along to Mount College trying to get there on time. She'd woken up late from her late night partying with Surbi and Anky. They were going to the same college. Nidha saw two boys waiting on the sidewalk. They looked cute. What were they doing here she thought?

Nidha offered them her assisstance-Can i help U?

The tall friendly guy spoke first-Yeah sure. We are heading to Mount College. The smart Alec over here thought it would be a good idea to walk it. He wanted a good workout. Unfortunately we've lost our way.

Nidha smiled at them-Do U want a lift? I'm heading this way myself. This way i'll have company. You're not serial killers right?

The rugged stubble one spoke-Do we look like we've escaped from a prison cell?

Nidha thought his tone was very rude-Dude U could be anyone. I shouldn't even be helping U but out of my good heart i am offering to help.I don't even know your name. Can i see some Id on U?

The friendly guy spoke-I'm Neel by the way and that miserable guy next to me is my brother.

Nidha saw Neel take out a drivers lisence-Neel and Jay Khurana. Ok then hop in.

Neel's eyes twinkled-Thanks.

Jay still had his thunderous face on-Yeah what he said.

Nidha already had a dislike for this broody guy Jay-Dude U need to plaster a smile on your face you'll scare off the girls with your attitude. Now buckle up its about to get really scary.

Neel chuckled-Why?

Nidha turned on her ignition and sped off-I'm about to pull a fast and the furious act.

Nidha stopped at the college where all her friends were waiting for her in the entrance. She allowed her passengers to get out first and then Nidha parked her car in the student car park locking the car door with her buzzer. Jay didn't even bother looking at her once and stormed off with Neel who waved a friendly goodbye.

Nidha rushed over to Surbi and Anky giving them all a hug-When did U girls arrive here? I had such an aweful time.

Anky's eyes widened-Who were those hotties?

Nidha managed a calm-They needed a ride and i a gave them one. I don't know why but i felt like doing a good deed unfortunately one of them deserved to be left stranded. He is so up himself. His brother Neel is sweet though.

Surbi smiled-And the broody one is called?

Nidhas finished-Jay. I didn't bother with all the pleasantries. IT WAS LIKE GETTING BLOOD OUT OF A STONE. So where is Fiza?

Anky sighed-She's late as usual. She'll enter in style. Love your top Nidha its very cute.

Nidha smiled-Thanks. U girls are looking like supermodels. So have we met the infamous Kabir Rathod yet?

Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago

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fiza

@Fiza28

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Aysha loved the chapter great way to show nidha n Jay first meeting loved it

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Minahil

@minahil1997

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

owesum ff👏... loved ur ideas... can i just stay here as a reader😳... plz tell me i can , i would love to read this ff😃

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

CHAPTER 4

Dehradoon…

"Maa that girl is not my type at all that's why I left her"Armaan Malik said to his mother while driving towards their home.

"Son you have said the same for almost all the girls you have dated"his father Billy sitting in the front seat said casually.

"Armaan honey its time you settled down na….business bhi itna bada ho gaya hain….you are at the high point of your career….Billy aaj mein ne isse party main itne saare ladkiyan dikhayin but isse ek bhi pasand nahin aayi" his mother complained.

"Son what is your perfect girl"Billy quizzed Armaan.

"A girl who is perfect in all senses from looks to etiquette.I don't prefer the demure behenji types,I want the modern types quick witted and fast" Armaan said giving a crooked smile

"Armaan are you telling me you haven't dated such girls"Billy asked incredulously.

"Offcourse I have but I soon lost interest in them but when I find one who manages to keep my interst I will marry"Armaan said

Billy shook his head.His son seemed to have a really wrong notion of a perfect wife.He seemed to want a super model eye candy than a wife.

"Chillax my dear maata pitha….I will find her soon"Armaan said firmly.

"Hey bhagwaan sudhaaro isko"his mother prayed in the back seat.

Armaan's car passed by a modest villa wherein.

"Hey kiddo chillax…itni tension kyun le rahin hon" Riya Sharma tried to calm her sister down.

"Di from your looks one will feel that you haven't passed a single paper till now" Karan Sharma chuckled

"Both of you shut up….mujhe shaanthi se padne dho"Fiza screamed at her siblings.

Fiza Sharma,20 year old Fashion studies student at Mount College.She was a serious girl but was fun loving too.The only thing that causes her nerves to go haywire is her studies and exams.Her friends always had a hard time prising her away from her books.

Right now she was pacing in her living room eyes glued to her book.She had a test paper tomorrow and was kicking her self mentally for partying yesterday with friends.

Riya giggled

"Pregnant mein hun…aur mood swings isse hon rahin hain….look at her changing expressions….she should be sent to perform Kathakali*"

"Di please…let me study na" Fiza begged

"Badi Di chalo….lets watch a movie and leave this padaku alone….Di be careful you don't get cross eyed…ladka dhoondne ke liye mujhe Mars mein jaana padega"Karan chuckled

Fiza ran after him trying to hit him with the book.

The next day…

Fiza rushed into college burried deep in book.She had parked her Ritz in the parking lot.

"Bhagwaanji kripa karke bacha lena"Fiza prayed nervously.

"Hey Fiz"Akanksha called her friend.

Anky,Sur and Nidha moved towards her.

"Hey Anky" Fiza glanced at her briefly and burried herself in the book again.

Anky snatched the book from her

"Anky yeh kya kar rahin hon…I have exams now"

"Precisely why I took the book….enough of studying…chillax for five minutes and go and give the exams" Anky said firmly.

"Anky but" Fiza was about tp protest.

"No if's and no but's Miss.Brainy….chup chaap chillax karon"

Sur and Nidha chuckled at the site.

"So Anky….this is your sweet little sister….Surbhi right and this…"Fiza lingered

"Hey Fiz Di….this is my best friend Nidha

Fiza smiled at them "Welcome to Mount College girls…hope you enjoy your time here"

"And get a healthy doze of ragging" Anky added winking

Nidha looked non plussed but Sur was back to being nervous.

"Nice dress Fiz….tumhaare legs itne ache hain tho show off karne mein kya kharaabi hain"Anky asked.

Fiza was wearing a strappy knee length floral dress with matching flats.Her styled long hair was left open.She had aptly curvy figure without looking fat and was of medium height.

"Thanx Anky….Di's gift….she is damn good at selection"Fiza said.

Anky congratulated herself on being able to take her friends mind off the exam

When it was time for the exams to start.

"Bye Anky..wish me luck"Fiza said moving in

"All the best jaan"Anky smiled at her.

Nidha and Sur also wished her.

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Aysh you have done a fabulous job...my favourite dialogue was the fast and the furious stunt part...in reality I can't even take a car out of my homes porch😆...and my dude is true to his name the Rude Dude...loved it absolutely

Edited by Nidhsara - 14 years ago

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Shreya(everyone call me Trisha)

@_SnowFlake_

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

WOOHOOO👏way an idea yaar

love it so much🤗

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: minahil1997
owesum ff👏... loved ur ideas... can i just stay here as a reader😳... plz tell me i can , i would love to read this ff😃

Minhali...you are welcome to stay we are doing this to entertain you guys only...do comment on ...thanx for the comment