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Posted: 13 years ago
atlast i have updated..comment pls :)
Edited by aru_86 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ aru :
commenting on the 19th august update, baap re, how do you manage to type such huge posts yaar 😲??!! haath nahi dukhte kya ??😲
okay back to the update, i loved this line :
Dakshita : hey iswar ek balak to ek balika..are koi in dono ko bacho ke mahal pr le jao..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
so chandu fuming with anger at the loss of his kavach while sukant looking for " chance pe dance " with subhadraπŸ˜†, durdhara desperate to get her sword back so as to save her face in the public and for a nice change, ambik's attention shifted from durdhara to kalyani. well, good for all of them, i guess !!πŸ˜‰

update soon.😊



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: polly_03

@ aru :
commenting on the 19th august update, baap re, how do you manage to type such huge posts yaar 😲??!! haath nahi dukhte kya ??😲
okay back to the update, i loved this line :
Dakshita : hey iswar ek balak to ek balika..are koi in dono ko bacho ke mahal pr le jao..πŸ˜†

so chandu fuming with anger at the loss of his kavach while sukant looking for " chance pe dance " with subhadraπŸ˜†, durdhara desperate to get her sword back so as to save her face in the public and for a nice change, ambik's attention shifted from durdhara to kalyani. well, good for all of them, i guess !!πŸ˜‰

update soon.😊




thanks polly for such lovely comment

hath to nahin dukhta but time zaroor waste hotaπŸ˜†..but kya kare baht jyada prem karte hai is ff se hum...
glad you liked it...hope from next epi onwards you won't have complain for my ff being dragged..it will enter in complete new track...
actually itne characters ko deal karti hun woh bhi apne frustration se time nikalke..so drag ho jata hai...cmnts k wait bhi to karti hun...πŸ˜†


khushi thanks after such a long time u commented..hope to see your more comments too
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Posted: 13 years ago
@aru_86
wow di super long update😲it was fantasticπŸ‘loved dhurdhara's confrontation to chandragupta as warrior and ambhik's mixed feelings😊sorry for late comment kyunki i was in mysore😭an big hand for youπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ jitni tariff ki jaye kam hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks nivi for succh lovely comment..no you are not late dear..because you are too first than the rest readers who almost forgot about thiss ff😭

ASR thanks for comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow nice update aru...
chitra is alright nw... But don't understand the actual feeling of chitra for chandu?
Awsom commnt by dakshita to akshay and mala:):)
ye kya kiya chandu humari rajkanya to pahlesehi aswastha hai...aur to aur uski jadibuti bhi samapta ho chuki hai...hw will she complete his chalange?
Very much excited to the next part...
One more thing... don't u ever think to discontinue this ff...u knw that hw much i like this one...
Update soon
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update di...thodi spelling mistakes hai..but that'll be ok..πŸ‘
Di update bahut long hai na aur aajkal maine thoda busy hun toh beech-beech mein time nikal ker read karne aati hoon aapki incredibly interesting story ko.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

In The Royal Palace- Nicely characterized bachpan ke yaadein...πŸ‘ lovable..⭐️that garland of colorful stones.. di ek muft ka suggestion deti hoon..aap narrator ki tarah beech mein thoda aur jyada..bta diya karo waise aap aisa karti hi ho but mere kehne ka matlab hai jaise ki.. (Chitra's heart is leaning towards Chandu but he was unknown of this secret admiration) is se aapki long update mein thoda aur badiyaa touch aajayega and inke beech ki feelings bhi easily samaj aajayengi ...

In The Royal Ground- most lovable name-uddand vanvasiπŸ˜†πŸ˜† followed by it i like the incident taken place b/w kalyani dance and ambhik(in mind).Gr8 touch of outer(in dance) and inner(Ambhik's ideas) movements in practical sense seems like with every beat in music an another idea raise in her mind.

In The Royal Garden-good conversation and incident b/w subhadra n sukant.. Really subhadra amatya putri hi lag rhi hai mitrta mein bhi dhara ka profit khoj rhi hai πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

In Atithigriha-Shashank : is balak ne phirse apna muh khola??🀣 🀣 tujhe kitni bar kaha hai na jo vishay samajh mein na aye us pr mat bola kar..🀣
Dakshita : hey iswar ek balak to ek balika..are koi in dono ko bacho ke mahal pr le jao..🀣🀣
Aditya : Sukant ki choro ajkal vo koi alag hi prithvi mein rehne laga hai.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Really totally a lovable, light and 🀣 kya part hai di hasten hasten thak gayi..her 3rd line mein koi ek punch..

some words likesandhan, khudha ke meaning mujhe samaj nhi aaye..πŸ˜•
(Chandu ki pratigya..usne bhi apni shika toh nhi but baal pakdker pratigya ki hai kya πŸ˜†)

In The Midnight- Sukant : adhairya mat ho vandhu..vo log ate hi honge..
di u can probably use dhariya mat kho bandhu inspite of adhairya..it'll sounds better.

Gr8 fiery converstaion b/w Dhara n Chandu...mujhe baar baar apna rushi yaad aarha tha 😭...
Edited by indupriya2008 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks ruku..i am so so happy to see your comment after such long times..i don't want to discontinue it too..actually decreasing reader of this almost dead forum compels me to think sometimes..but is ff ko bandh karke main bhi nhi bachungi

indu dear u don't know how happy i am to see your critical comments after ages...i know its long update..and thanks 4 reading in your busy schedule..hope before you become disappear again my ff would end...and i will remember your suggestion from now


Edited by aru_86 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aru_86

indu dear u don't know how happy i am to see your critical comments after ages...i know its long update..and thanks 4 reading in your busy schedule..hope before you become disappear again my ff would end...and i will remember your suggestion from now


don't worry di..this tym i'll try not to disappear...but at least visit once in a week..

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