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great update.
continue soon.
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double update for u guys i might update soon

chapter 3

Early morning at the at the Mehra's house

Misha is walking down the stairs wearing a white sari with multi colored polka dots and wearing hoop earrings that have multi colored stones in them . (looking stunning)

Preteeksha: Raju, shanti

Raju and Shanti: ji didi

Misha: mein aur Piya are going shopping aaj toh agar tumhare Sid Bhaiya poocha toh batana ki aaj late ho saktha. Aur haan jab Sid jagjhai breakfast daydoh

Raju and Shanti: didi breakfast main bhaiya ko kya baanana?

Preteeksha: kuch nahi raat ka joh bhi khaanaa hai woh doh.

Raju and Shanti: didi aur raat ka khaana mein kya baanaai?

Preteeksha: kuch nahi aaj mein pizza order kar thi hoon aur bhaiya office jaane kay bade tum dono relax karo.

Raju and Shanti: (smiling )thank u didi aur aaj tum yeh sari mein bhot pyaari lagri haan.

Misha : thank u kaka gaari baahir nikalo

Raichand is house

Misha walks in the house and see's Piya chasing Abhay with the bailan

Misha runs to her: omg Piya tum yeh kya Karen give me the bailan, abhay bro ab kya hua

Abhay: kuch nahi chotu mein tu sirf poocha kay aaj phir aloo kay paraathai aur phir she started chasing me with the bailan.

Piya :haan your right tum ko yeh nazar hai kay aaj phir wohi same khaana but tum yeh nahi dehka ki kal raat I didn't sleep a wink kyunki nihaal kept me up, aur I got up early to feed him, phir I quickly iron ur clothes , make ur Tiffin for lunch then rush to make ur breakfast .

Misha : abhay bro this is not right Piya tum aur niahaal kay vasste yeh sab kart hi haan aur instead of appreciating it u complain that's very wrong .

Abhay : ur right chotu (holding both ears and bending down on both knees) I'm sooo sorry my rasgula u do soo much for us and I don't even realize it thanku for being such a wonderful wife and mother I'm truly sorry.

Piya : theek hai I fogive u *smiles *

Misha looking at them and wondering abhay bro is such a good pati he knows when he's in the wrong and apologies to her kaash sid bhi.

Abhay: ok u both have fun shopping I'm running late

piya : what abt breakfast?

Abhay: I know u made it with so much luv but I'll get something at the office

Piya :oye pati ji tum kuch bhole toh nahi

Smiling Abhay turns around and comes bak to piya and kisses her on the forehead : have fun bye

piya : mishu give me 5 min then we'll leave

Misha: sure no problem take ur time.

Out shopping

Piya : misha I have a surprise for u look over there

Misha: omg Tracker !

Tracker comes running to them wearing a white anarkali with dark and light blue polka dots wearing sliver hoop earrings.

Misha: Tracker kaise ho ? itne dino kay baad aur uncle kaise haan

Tracker: I know bhot time kay baad aaj hun theeno ek saat aaj toh masti kay din aur papa toh busy haan election time u know how it is . aur ek aur chees hai I'm in love

Misha and piya shocked with last thing she said

Piya :what kab kon aur kaise

Tracker : ek larka haan Angad he is too cute but papa is very protective if I even smile at a guy u how he is na and with these body guards toh life is difficult but today no guards I told papa I was meeting u guys so he was fine with it. Any way yeh sab later lets shop

Kabir's office

Kabir is at his desk working away on the laptop just when Angad walks in the room

Angad : yaar kabir I need ur help big problem hai

kabir: ab kya hua

Angad :pyar yes I'm in luv

kabir: kya toh pyaar kar kay problem hai ?

Angad :no yaar it's her papa he is a politician he never lets her out of his sight she always has body guards with her!

kabir: wah kya baat hai sirf ek politician ki bati mili kya tum ko?

Angad :come on Shanks help me

kabir: ab woh larki khaan hai?

Angad :out with her friends shopping at the mall kyun

kabir: cool chalo I have a plan

Angad : what plan kabir ur plans always scare me

kabir: shut up and let's go

Meanwhile at the Mehra's

Sid comes home early

Sid: Raju Shanti !

Raju and Shanti: ji bhaiya apa

Sid: haan chalo muhje help karo apa ki Misha di kay liye ek surprise karna haan

Raju tum market jao aur bring me 100 roses 50 red 25 white and 25 pink aur haan shanti tum raju kay saath candles lake aao big small any size and haan colors should be red, white and yellow

Raju and Shanti: wow bhaiya so sweet of u aur kuch karna hai toh bolo hum ko

Sid: no abhi kuch nahin baad mein decorate karna hai muhje bhot kam hai Chinese order karna phir jeweler kay pass who set pick up karne aur sab kuch Misha kay anna say phele hoona

Raju and Shanti: bhaiya yeh sab kuch khass hai kya ?

Sid: haan because of Misha I signed a huge contract jao blue file Mr. Shaw ko submit karna tha who galti sa Mr. Rao ko submit hua and he loved it .

At the mall

Kabir and Angad are looking for Tracker at the mall

Smiling kabir: so my rajesh khanna where is your spano ki rani

Angad: yaar she's over there point s Tracker she's wearing Polka dots

Just when kabir is looking up to see who Angad is pointing to Misha comes in front he mistakes her as Tracker

kabir: yup I see her in the polka dots, shiny black hair hoop earrings

Angad looks at tracker and see her wearing hoop earrings

Angad: yup just then his phone rings hey I have to go to the office and sign important papers so we better do this later.

kabir: no its fine u go sign them and meet me at your house in half hour I will bring her there .

Angad: ok u sure you know what you're doing?

kabir: yes trust me go

Angad leaves kabir follows the girls they go in to the season's store

After a couple of mins they come out just then he grabs Misha's hand and pulls her in his car and drives away.

Taken back by what just happened Piya and trackerget in their car and follow them.

Ch 4

In the car Kabir is holding Misha's hand tight so she doesn't try to run away even though the doors are locked while driving

Misha ( yelling at the top of her lungs and trying to pull her hands away ): let go of my hand haath choro you idiot .

Kabir driving stops at the light Suddenly Misha's jerks her head up her hair hits Shashank face .

He looks up at her she is starting to yell at him but he is so lost in her beauty he doesn't hear one word she is saying .

Misha: tum kaun ho, aur tum mere saath yeh sab kya hai just leave my hand let go of me you will regret this you fool tere tho .

light turns to green but Kabir is just stairing into her beautiful eye's suddenly from the back lots of people are honking for him to go.* beep beep beep*

kabir gets back to reality and starts driving again thinking to himself : kabir tum ko kya hogaya hai woh tumhare dost ki gf hai aur tum iss ko aise dehkre ho come on kabir focus .

Misha with tears in her eyes : for the last time tum kaun ho, aur tum mere saath yeh sab kya hai just leave my hand let go of me or else mein tumne nahin chorogi I will not leave u, forget about me mere pati wont spare you he will put behind bars . tumahre band bajagi I swear .

Kabir thinking to himself and smiling : wah kya pyar hai yeh Angad ko itna pyar karte ki abhi sai apna pati maanti hai, aww how cute is that… angad is really very lucky.

Misha: your smiling omg! Tum pagal ho ,mein ek pagal kay saath hoon, bachao bachao koi hai bachao!

kabir: What me Pagal nooo no dehko tum plz don't cry ,I hate to see tear in any one's eyes ( he gives her his hankie) I will explain everything to you sirf chup hojao .

kabir: the love of your life has sent me here to get you and mein kaun ho I'm Bonds James bond haha just kidding we have never met before but I'm your pyar's best friends since childhood kabir.

Misha thinking to herself : kya yeh sab is because of Sid has sent him to do this par kyun.

I know all of Sid's Friends he never once has talked about this kabir to me .

In piya's and tracker's car

tracker is driving piya is in the front with nihaal

piya; tracker yeh kya hua hai I hope misu is ok warnaa mian bhaiya ko kaise face kar sakti hoon

tracker: don't worry piya she will be fine have faith sab theek hoga

Oh no

piya: kya

tracker: Yeh toh Angad ka neighborhood hai yeh sab Angad ka kiya kara hai sure of it.

Suhaani: what laken kyun

At Angads 's house

Kabir and mishu walk inside the house

Kabir: Arey my rajesh khanna where are you I have bought your spano ki rani

Angad comes running to Shashank thanks yaar you're the best so where is she?

kabir points to misha there she is

Angad whispers to Kabir yeh kaun hai

Kabir: your lady love

Angad: u idiot u brought the wrong girl

Kabir: Kya Sh*#@!

misha looking at Kabir you said ki tum Sid kay Dost ho phir yeh kaun hai Sid kahan hai?

Kabir :sid Who's sid

Misha:Sid meri pati tuhare dost you idiot

Kabir: Pati oh no dehko I'm really very sorry bohot baari misunderstanding hogaya hai mein gaalti se I thought tum Angad ki gf haan aur phir mein aap ko

misha: kya what u kidnapped me and brought me and on top of that u lied to me bachao bachao koi hai bachao! (she starts wacking him with her bag )

Angadcomes in between to stop her from hitting him but instead she starting hitting as well

Tracker and piya hear bachao bachao koi hai bachao! And come running in the house they see her hitting them with her bag.

Tracker:AngadAlekh What !@#$%&* is going on here ! I am 100% sure ki sab tumne ka kiya kara hai .

All of a sudden Misha stops hitting them ( but her bag accidentally hits kabir really hard below the belt right where it hurts for guys)then runs to tracker and piya

kabir: bends over in pain *uff tum ne yeh kya kardiya abhi tak mein baap nahin bana hoon *.

Angad whisper to kabir : yaar r u ok it look like that was painful, oh no Tracker called me by my full name thanks to u I'm dead.

piya:mishu tum theek ho (wiping her tears ) don't worry we are here now everything

Will fine.

misha:tracker u know these kidnapers

tracker:mishu they not kidnapers at least not angad he is my boyfriend the I was telling guys about .

misha: boyfriend tracker u sure u want to marry him , I mean you know what they say na u can always tell man by his friends that where the saying a man best friend is a dog comes from and that's y they act like them .

tracker mishu he is not like that

piya: some one plz explain how this happened.

kabir: I will explain angad wanted some alone time with tracker but he was scared of her papa so I asked him where is was he said u guys were shopping so we went to go get her but I mistook her as tracker.

piya: how did u get confused

kabir: all he told me was she is wearing polka dots and hoop earrings and has shiny black hair

So I looked up saw her and she fit the description .

misha: You saw that I was wearing polka dots and hoop earrings and have shiny black hair, but didn't see my sindoor or my magalsutra ,I even told u that my pati wont spare u even then u didn't find out I was the wrong girl and how on earth did u come up with such a stupid idea!

kabir: well when u said that your pati wont spare I thought u love him so much that u already take as your pati and as for the idea have u ever seen the movie Ajab Prem Ki Gazhab Kahaani I got it from there.

Misha: Ajab Prem Ki Gazhab Kahaani are you serious . Bas I have had it enough is enough I can't take this nonsense any longer pia,tracker lets go.( misha angerly runs out the door)

Piya runs after her: misha Babes wait

Tracker giving him the eye's: Milind angad I'm so fuming we will talk about this later I'm so not done with you and walks out .

angad: thanks a lot kabir because of u Tracker is so heated and on top of that I made such a horrible impression with her friends hope your happy.

kabir: yaar don't worry if she is upset wait till she cools down then go and say sorry

In the car on the way back

Tracker: mish I really very sorry because of me u had to go through all of this .

misha: no it fine it's not your fault it's all because of that fool, anyways piya don't say word to Abhay bro about this because I'm not going mention anything to your bro because he will go crazy and if Uncle finds abouts this then Tracker 's love story will end.

At the mehra's House

misha walks in the house it is decorated with Rose all over the house the lights are out there's only candel light thru the house and sid is at the table lighting the last few candles the table is set and dinner is ready .

sidwalks over to misha kissing her hand : thank u because of you I signed a big contracted jo file Mr.Shaw ko submit karna tha woh galati se Mr. rao kay pass tah and he loved it. Aur kaal raat mein kya kya bola tum ko I'm really sorry aao you must be hungry let's eat I order your favorite food.

misha: yeah sure sirf ek minute mein fresh hokay aati thinking to herself in the bathroom sid never has done anything like this for me in the 5 yrs of are shaadi all of a sudden yeh sab kyun , there has to be more to this I know sid to well just because he signed a deal he wouldn't do this.

At the table

sid : I order all your favorite things let's see veg chow mein, kung pao chicken, sweet and sour prawns and eggplant and tofu.

misha : thank you but you hate tofu

sid: no it's fine I don't mind so how was today shopping and all what did u buy

misha : oh aaj it was crazy I mean the stores where so crowded that I got lost but then I found piya & Tracker ,I bought lots of sari's and some shirts for you .

After dinner misha is cleaning up the table when sidcomes behind and pulls her sari and the put his arms around her waist bends his head and kisses her neck

misha : sid tum yeh kya kare

sid: today your looking very sexy in this sari leave all this raju and shanti will clean up he picks misha up in his arms and takes her up to the room .

In the room

Sid puts misha on the bed his cell phone falls out his pocket on the bed

sid :misha I will be right back tab tak tum change karo he goes down stairs

Just then his cell rings misha picks up the cell before could say hello

Prashant: hey yaar sid so did my idea work I'm sure you'll get some action tonight if you know what I mean and starts laughing

misha is shocked she couldn't believe her ears just then sid walks in she close the phone.

sid: putting his arms around her you haven't change yet

misha jerks his arms away turns around and gives him a tight slap across the face.

That's it for now hope you like the chapter don't forget to comment and press the like button

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Posted: 14 years ago
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liked the misha sid scene...but poor sid...nice update..!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update.
please continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow! Really nice update! I especially liked the cute Abhiya scene 😊 Waiting for the next update! Update soon 😊
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Fiza...that was so superb...Kabir and Angad are so funny...loved the whole kidnap part...well mein Sid ke liye nahi kahungi usse jo milna tha woh Misha ne hi de diya...update soon sweets
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awesum part fiza👏

i loved the update... the kidnapping part was really nice, it was full of fun and mast😆i... i loved the romantic and naughty moment between abhiya😳... sid deserved wat misha gave him... love ur ff and continue soon🤗
Edited by minahil1997 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey . .
Great update !
The kidnapping scene was awesome. .
Pia chasing abhay wid a bailan and abhay calling her Rasgula. . . Awww ! So cute!
Thanks for the pm. . Dear!
When r u gona update. . Ur other two FFs .?
Continue soon . .
TC . .
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Gr8 update yaar.. Loved d Part at d Raichand's..it was amazing.. n d whole misunderstanding thing was awesome.. Sid's suprise thing was nyc bt later everything went bad.. Carry on..thanx for d pm..lol.
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Ch5

In the room

Misha:Don't you Dare touch Me!

Sid has is hand on his face right where he got slapped furiously he looks up at misha

Sid yelling : MISHA! tum ne muhje thappar kyun mara main ne kya kiya?

Misha: cheekhne ,chilana se kuch nahi hota main bhi cheekh sakti hoon. Aur haan don't you try to act innocent with me Sid Kya kiya. Itne disgusting or cheap harkat ki hai ki muhje sharm aarey hai bolne bhi . Prashant had called and you know what he said hey yaar Sid so did my idea work I'm sure you'll get some action tonight if you know what I mean and then he started laughing 'today you have really hurt me , how sick can you be 'how can you disscuss are personal matters with your friends.

Sid is so shocked: Dehko Misha calm down kyun itne choti si baat ko itna baari issue banana.

Misha: Choti si baat Sid for you it might bhi choti si baat for me bhot baari baat haan. Kyun aise kya .

Sid: Kyun ki tum kabhi muje tumhre kareeb nahi aane dehti I mean itne dooriyaan hai humare beach. For god sake I'm your husband Misha I have every right tumhre pass aane laken you never let me itne dooriyaan kyun hai .

Misha: Kya kareeb nahi aane dehti how can u lie like that Sid ' I have always fulfilled the duties of a good wife up in till today in fact yeh phele baar hai ki I have pushed you away from me other then that I have never refused you ' aur haan doori kyun your asking me this Sid you know exactly why even though I forgave you I still can't forget what ever happened 3 yrs ago and that horrible night and you know what Sid you're the reason the reason for the dooriyan between us your attitude, ego and selfishness has made it happened not me. You never have time for me it's only work work and work' Every night I cry myself to sleep that one year was the worst year of my life because it showed me your true colors and who you really are and took away my dreams.

Sid: You will never let me forget what happened na ?I know it's because of me and my attitude, ego and selfishness but you can at least cry yourself to sleep and you are very lucky u don't have to live with guilt I do. I feel so guilty for everything that happened 3years ago I still can't face you or myself for what I did ,I know I don't give you any time but I'm doing this for you so we have a good lifestyle Misha please try and understand me what so wrong in what I did? I love you that's why I did all of this.

Misha:I know every single day you live with guilt and I always try my best so you don't feel it but It's not that easy to move on with life I have tried to the past 2 yrs but I just can't . Aur tum kya bole that you love me that's why you did all this, no Sid don't lie yeh tum iss liye kare kyun ki you wanted to fulfill your needs. I am your wife once you start treating me like it only then your so called needs will be fulfilled. End of discussion Understood! ( she takes out her night gown and is walking out of the room)

Sid blocking the door with his arm : Where do you think you're going?

Misha: Guestroom(and walks out)

Sid bangs his hand on the wall in anger :!@#$%&*!

Angad's house

Kabir is lost in his thoughts FLASHBACK: Misha jerks her head up her hair hits kabir's face .

He looks up at her she is starting to yell at him but he is so lost in her beauty. And can't stop thinking about Misha's teary eyes.

angad snaps his fingers in front of kabir : yo Mr.cool kya hua what are you thinking about?

kabir: huh oh um kuch'' kuch nahin.

Angad: kuch toh hai kya whats up' if you think I 'still made at u I'm not, you did all this for me so it's ok.

kabir: yaar you might forgive me but I feel so bad for making her cry she had tears in those beautiful eyes of hers. You know something she seemed very sad not because of all this that happened but because of something else there some kind of sadness in them . wish only if I could make her smile just once I would feel so much better for what I did.

angad: Oye! What are you saying it seems that there is more to what you are saying , I feel it just excuse so you can meet her again. By the way you have already done enough and haan you are forgetting a few things 1. Your married 2. She's married 3. She won't want to see your face after what you did so there no use just stay away from her and she will be happy .

kabir: no yaar it's not an excuse I want to say I'm sorry and you will help me otherwise I will go tell ruhi that I lied and this was all your idea. Smiling his mischievous smile

angad: but it was your idea I didn't even know you were going to do all this you wouldn't lie to her

kabir: yes I will if you don't help me' you will help until she forgives me then Ruhi will also be happy because her friend is happy got it.

angad: no one can win with you what will I have to do ?

kabir: now that's what I'm talking about first of all find out basanti's name then go and get as much info about her where she lives her number and what all she likes meaning fav flowers chocolates anything then get back to me ASAP. I better be going Panchi will be back from her shoot soon so I will c you later.

Later that night

kabir is in bed wide awake think about what happened today and Panchi is fast asleep

Panchi turns on her side looks up and sees kabir awake

Panchi : kabir you still haven't gone to bed kyun are you feeling ok is something wrong? u are acting really weird today I mean you only act like this if you have done something stupid. What did u do now?

kabir:Panchi babe you are calling your pati stupid'it's nothing of the sort I just have some work related tension.

Panchi: work related whats up kya hua ?

kabir: yeah um ek clinent kay saath confusion hogaya tha gaalti se wrong package got delivered to them and big humgama happened that's all I will sort it all out lets go to sleep.

Early next morning

Panchi is at the park jogging with IT

Panchi: T you know your bro was acting so weird last night ,I asked was up but he said it was work related do me afavor a find out whats up ok

T: sure will do aww look at that puppy

Panchi: what dog I hate dogs (she starts to hide behind T then sees the puppy looking at her she starts running and puppy runs after : T help me!

She is running and keeps looking behind her to see how far the puppy is from behind when she suddenly bumps in to a guy who catches her from falling (just like abhay always cathes piya ) they have a eye locking session. T is watching all this from far

After a few min of eye locking guy still has Panchi in his arms : Are you ok where were going in such a hurry

Panchi: stupid kutta !

Sid :What ( upset at fact of being called stupid kutta ! he lets go of Panchi which makes her fall flat on her butt!

Panchi: Ouch! (looking up at him from the ground ) you idiot why did you let go of me like that

T comes running to Panchi after she falls on the ground

Sid :mind you how dare you call me a stupid kutta ! after I helped you .

Panchi pointing her index finger at him : main tum ko (suddenly she sees the puppy grueling at her she jumps on to his bike with both feet up ) main tum ko nahin yeh stupid kutta ! kay bare main baat karereh thi point to the puppy that's barking at her .

Sid:what oh I really sorry listen plz don't be scared come down (he gives her his hand)

Panchi: what the hell do you think of your self learn to control your anger naak pe gussaa

T whisper to Panchi kya hot hai yaar : walks by the guy um excuse me but do u belive in love at first sight or should I walk by again?

Sid on his bike : not interested and drives off.

T: but I am interested uff kya style hai but I think I have seen him around some where but where?

Panchi: t why were you flirting with mr. angry young man by way who is he not sure.

kabir is in his car he sees Misha at a bakery he runs in there and orders a cake and tells the sale guy to give it to her with all her other packages

Misha checks all the boxs before leaving the store and opens the boxes of sweets and sees in one box is a chocolate cake with abig smile on it saying I'm sorry : yeh mera box nahin hai

Sales guy: no the guy over there told me to give it to you (points to kabir)

misha takes the box and is walking to kabir: what is all this

kabir: cake you don't like cake? Dehko I'm sorry for what happened (he turns to give her the box when he slips and the box opens and cake falls allover Misha .

That's I t for now hope you all like it do comment press the like button

Edited by lalmirch28 - 14 years ago

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