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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update!!!
oo poor Vicky got kicked...he help geet for winning her love..

Flesh Back scene was so cute.. you have increased my curiosity level and juct cant wait what had actually happen

Can't wait to see how story unfolds!

take care and continues soon:)


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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update anu...

vicky's reaction to geet when she expressed her feelings for maan was simply hilarious...
no i am curious what is it about maan's past that he fears from accepting the fact that geet loves him and he shud reciprocate it...

finally we get to see glimpses of maan and geet's friendship in the past...

good to see that maan is getting attracted and pulled towards geet's inncocent actions and is not able to restrain himself from getting attracted to her...
i am sure he also harbours feelings for her but something looks amiss...something is preventing him from coming clean on his feelings

hope to get some clear idea about it in ur next wonderful update

cant wait for the next update

keep writin

and thnxxx for this marvelous update

love and ur ff

reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update...the vicky part was funny...y is maan trying to avoid her???
but it was really short:(:(:(:(:(
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Supebbb update.. Wat a cute flashback!!! Luvd it 2 d core.. Thx 4 updating besides ur busy schedule... Plz update nxt part soon n a long 1.. Can't wait 4 it.. Take care, luv u n God bless u.. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago


caught up with work at present



will give a detailed comment wen free!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 19
awesome...
Vicky always makes me to laugh out loud...
oh now Geet is gonna make Vicky help her...
what happened in Maan's past?
why is he stopping himself?
oh the flashback was honestly very sweet...
loved it...
wow loved the last scene, Maan with his control let down, admired his mishty with so much care, love and concern...
cont soon dear...

PS before i got the pm i read the update...super...but it doesnt mean u stop or miss pming me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey awsum dear!!!
Pls do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome
loved it
add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wowww!!!! What a beautiful FF!!! I wonder why I hadn't seen it for so long...

This FF is just mind blowing N I'm just mesmerised by the way U write... Awesome!!!!
Thats why din't sleep till 2 in the morning in order to complete it...

The concept of ur FF is fabulous n I'm loving the way the story is unfolding...


Hmmm...seems like they have been best frnds in their childhood... The flashbacks of their childhood are really so sweet...

I wonder what created distance between them!!!! There is definitely something big... Pleeez reveal it sooon...

And what is it with Maan's wardrobe that he doesn't allows any1 to open it 😕 😕 😕

The Vday dance was superb!!!!
OMG!!!! Geet was drunk but still she looked so cute and her antics are so sweet dat any1 cud fall for her dat time...like Maan
😉 😳 😳

And that Rahul😡 😡 😡 Wish I could kill him... But Maan taught him a good lesson... So finally Geet is in love with Maan n Maan knows that...thats why he is behaving so weird... Anyways... Geet will soon make him confess his love also 😉

Loved all their sweet little nok-jhoks...esp the concept of school like is just amazing... Thanx for writing such a beautiful FF...
Will be waiting for the next part... Cont sooon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
When can we get the next update???? Cant wait for it!!!!!

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