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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar!! i understand dat its difficult for you to type 3000 plus words... but love it... geet always falls in the locker room and wat a co incidence dat maan is always dere to save her... lol...hehehehehehe😆... now plzzz update the next part sooonnn... thanx😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey..
plz...send me pm when u will update it net...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely part really curious to knw wats their past why maan want to stay away 4m geet. It was hilarous wen i imagined wat must have been yash condition wen vicky took yash name 4 basket ball. Oh it was awesome, come soon with past.
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazin...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kitna zada cute part tha... luvd d way ki pehle maan kaise geet ko gussa dilata h...n fir brings a smyl on hr...only he cnt do both of dem 2 such an xtent...luv their chemistry...!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D
waitin 4 d nxt update olready... ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow !!!
Amazing update
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
rocking update
me loved it
cant wait till the next part
cont soon please
thanks for the pm!! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
me is commentin agen hea as m waitin 4 da next update eagerly!!!
lolz plz update soon...
cnt wait 2 read more of this ff n i neva get enuf of this ff
its sooo amazin
plz plz update soon😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: niddzz

hey anupam...!!!😊


i just read all the parts in one go...!!!!
i just cant express how much i loved it...already heads over heels in love wid the maaneet u have created in the FF...!!! i just loved the concept...took me back to school days were once u start hating sum1 nthn can change the feelin...u keep taunting that person 4 no reason...and keep torturing them 4 the reasons even u r unknown too...thou 4 maaneet its little diff but their tiff makes me nostalgic...remindin all evergreen memories of school days...wichh i miss like anythin...!!! it also reminds me how we try to impress the person whom we have crush on...and try to get their attention...OMG i never thit remembering those memories would b so much fun...readin the ff entirely in one go it felt like i was back in school...remembering mah sports day , practice, audi, principal office 4 being caught helping frnds or takin help of frnds in exam... cursing the supervisor and screaming OHH SHIT..!! the momone we realize she is strict and wont let us move 4m our place during exam hrs...but still findin our ways out...OMG result tym...pangas wid head boy and d head gal...crazy frnds...checking of bags 4 electronic items and then fearing that the checker would find wisper in the school bag...lol...it was so much fun...!!! oops...i can go on and on...not to forget being all devil but tring to b in gud books of teachers...lol...and the party on the last day of the exam...cant even wait 4 the next day and cribbing saying i dont have gud clothes ...we should have planned the party tomm and shopped today ...and vagera vagera...and gettin those disgusting looks 4m frnd 4 cribbing instead of enjoying the happiness of bein free 4m the burden of studies...!!!



iss baat par main bhi tum se agree karti hun me to miss all the fun i used to do in schooldays ...ooohhh...kya din the woh !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: niddzz

hey anupam...!!!😊


i just read all the parts in one go...!!!!
i just cant express how much i loved it...already heads over heels in love wid the maaneet u have created in the FF...!!! i just loved the concept...took me back to school days were once u start hating sum1 nthn can change the feelin...u keep taunting that person 4 no reason...and keep torturing them 4 the reasons even u r unknown too...thou 4 maaneet its little diff but their tiff makes me nostalgic...remindin all evergreen memories of school days...wichh i miss like anythin...!!! it also reminds me how we try to impress the person whom we have crush on...and try to get their attention...OMG i never thit remembering those memories would b so much fun...readin the ff entirely in one go it felt like i was back in school...remembering mah sports day , practice, audi, principal office 4 being caught helping frnds or takin help of frnds in exam... cursing the supervisor and screaming OHH SHIT..!! the momone we realize she is strict and wont let us move 4m our place during exam hrs...but still findin our ways out...OMG result tym...pangas wid head boy and d head gal...crazy frnds...checking of bags 4 electronic items and then fearing that the checker would find wisper in the school bag...lol...it was so much fun...!!! oops...i can go on and on...not to forget being all devil but tring to b in gud books of teachers...lol...and the party on the last day of the exam...cant even wait 4 the next day and cribbing saying i dont have gud clothes ...we should have planned the party tomm and shopped today ...and vagera vagera...and gettin those disgusting looks 4m frnd 4 cribbing instead of enjoying the happiness of bein free 4m the burden of studies...!!!

i just cant say how much i already one on one...!!!

MAAN - GEET:
maaneet were best buddies in childhood...what went wrong that they registered themselves in 24*7 cat-dog fight thin...they both care 4 each other...no doubt ...but then why fightin 4 anythin and everythin...??? 4 them the other matters the most...then y ??? there is more to the relationship they share...geet was maan's mishti then why all of a sudden handa..??? they are made 4 each other...u is maan adamant in staying away 4m her and keeping her away 4m him...wen he knos he cant live widout her...he admires her, he likes her , he adores her may b even loves her thou he may accept none...but as a matter of fact he does...why the distance?? sumthin happened betwn the two or due to the circumstances and that is yet to b revealed...me is very curious to kno...!!! maan is attracted towards her...even geet is but she is too nave to realize that...their heart desires the other...their hearts works against their wishes ...!!!maan is so possessive and protective wen it cums to geet...!!

GEET-VICKY:
ohh...how much i love their bonding...!!! vicky is so cute...wanted to break up wid her GF on fone to save tym...!!! he is d one who can do anythin 4 geet ( maan is exception to the group who can do anythin 4 geet )...vicky is so rotective wen it cums to geet...they are BFF...i m in love wid the relationship they share...so pure...were they give everythin widout expectin anythin in return...indeed friendship is the best thin that can happen to u ...no relationship can beat the relationship wid ur frnds...!!! i just hope they remain like dis thru out...!!! geet is vicky's doll...!!! vicky scored 68%...i almost fainted readin that...!!!

YASH:
even yash is a gem of person...even he loves geet to no end as his frnd but is not expressive as vicky...but still can do anythin 4 geet...he played BB wid maan just 4 geet inspite of not even knoing B of BB...he was so scared...lol...vicky scored 36%,,,,woww...what an achievement...even he was proud of himself...his chit removing session was super cool...reminded me of our supervisors sayind...check if there are any chits in ur pockets of compos box or ur desk BY MISTAKE...lol...i was rolling on the floor readin abt yash removing chits 4m all secret places...!!! yash in ur ff is planned wid NT...i was actually imagining the show yash wid show NT...lol

MEERA-DEV:
aww...meera is such a sweetheart...she is so nice...so pure by heart...cant even think of hurting others...she is so much in to herself and the most calmed 1 and the most matured 1 in the group...she gets so nervous and tongue tied wid dev around...!! she misses her mom ...my heart went out 4 her...i glad she had got good frnds...!!! i just love her putting her specks in place wich normally dev does in the show...lol...she is a complete bookworm...whose world revolves around her frnds and books...ahe studies on scholarship and stays in hostel...poor soul...!!!

PARI:
she is so not dreemy...lol...drooling over maan all the tym...she even ditched geet and din even realize it...lol...she actually has got pea size brain but is very good by heart...she tried her best in the party but still thins were screwed up...!!!

ADI & SAM:
adi is a very loyal frnd...who knos the value of frnds...loved how he couldnt bear a wrong word against maan...i love maan - adi bonding...!!! he can do anythin 4 his frnds..!!! loved him...!! he probably knos how maan feels 4 geet and what she means to him..!!!
sam is a cutie pie...she is geets cousin more like an elder sis...just love geet-sam relationship and maan - sam frndship...even she knos that maan-geet mein kuch toh gadbad hai jiske baare mein shayad woh khud bhi nahi jante...i hope adi and sam helps maan realize his feelins wich he is 30% aware of but denying...wen right tym cums...!!! i just hope sam stays positive...lol sams name itself gives me creepy feelings...would love to b proved wrong...!!

loved maans dad and geets bonding too...i love how u r throwing light on each and every relation...i love the school atmosphere u have created...it all looks so real...the teachers and everythin...!!
the best thin is maaneets balcony facing each other ...maan can jump and cum to geets room anytime...i think it will b more in use once they are together as a couple...easy to spend tym...!!!
maan is a tube light...it took him almost a week to realize that geets weird behaviour had sumthin to do wid him...!!!
geet got selected...maan complemented her...maan cleared that alisha creature doesnt maater to him...i m so desperate to read the next part...!!!
cant wait to read more...UPDATE SOON>>>>!!!
nidhi..!!


hey nidhi
I can't express in words how happy u have made me through ur comment...😛

its awesome...u actually wrote everything I have tried to show

thank you so much dear...love u for this🤗

yup u r absolutely right frndship is the most beautiful relationshp man has ever made and school is the best part of life where we get to spend max time with our frnds😃

I m glad u can relate to the ff

every character has an important part to play so they have to be put forward in details and vicky is my personal fav😳
now coming to maaneet, when they r there it has to be different...😆
but yes many things have been revealed and few are yet to be disclosed

so keep reading and commenting

love u

anupam
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Posted: 14 years ago
a yu going to update
this one too hun
oops
cant help it
its my FV one

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