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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: imaastha

Congo for da new thread...
Awsum update...
Thnx for da pm...
Cont soon...


thanks dear😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: angili

well 👏👏👏 with standing ovation honey great job i have a request now i want maan to realize that she is folling for him and than some ramance please than some funny moments with vickey and her friends finding out the person geet loves i want some hallurious scenes pleaaase


OMG...!!...you have left me speechless...!!...seriously I don't know what to say...!!


Its so over whelming to see my work getting appreciated this way😳😳...thank you so very much...!!


I have not planned the future parts yet but will try to incorporate ur demands😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Uff this is such a cute update. From first line to last , I can read it a million times. Baywaqoof Vicky , he lives with maan , doesn't he know whomgeet was describing. Oh I was dying in thinking what if Vicky goes to maan n says, geet is acting weired , today this is what her reply was for the character description. U tell me to study... Itna to mujhe bhi yaad hai and I thought she was the topper... He he he
I just luv luv luv ur ff.
Oh forgot to tell u... The way u wrote geet running away and blushing on her own accord was beautiful. I cud actually picture her running through corridors ... Waise to I cud picture each n every scene. Maan with his stiff neck trying to grasp the newfound information about geets' audition and then actually showing up there... Thud thud thud... Mai to gai
it was so hard to live through ur update. Part of me wanted to read it in so much speed ... I wanted to know how long did u write, where will u end and then part of me wanted to take it slow, to let myself enjoy ur update. Argh. Y do u write so well? I felt like pulling my hair.
The song choice was awesome. It made the war flow beautifully. Haahhh Kia lag rahi ho go geet with her swift moves and piercing eyes. Maan o maan how did u survive this majestical moment. No wonder it struck in ur brain... That u were the cause.

Awww anu abhi to I read ur update and just from this second the wait for the nxt update has started. Waqat katay naheen katta hai Tere ff ke bina... Kash ye ho ke to ek aur update de...
I wish I had found this ff after it had finished. The way I found iswak. I'm not saying I don't like it ... I'm telling u how hopelessly I'm in luv with this ff. I just don't want it to evr end. Till it actually ends...
Acha chalo I'll read the jealousy factor again. Maan telling all the boys to run away was hillarious. Kya cool hai... Khud to poora show dekha and baqi sab ki chutti. He he he



arzoo did I ever told you wat a sweet heart you are...🤗...just love u dear

seriously ur comment energise me a lot and force by lazy bones to articulate...😆...so a new info about me...I am a big lazy creature who loves to sleep🥱...and its also the reason for the delay in updates sometimes...😆😆

anyways...I just love ur comments...muuuaahhh...!!

maan has a height of possessiveness...it was just a trailor.😉


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

Awesome update::
Wow geet lied so convincingly,,she got scared of a spider,,a hot lukin one😆
loved geets description of maan,,so cute
Awww luv geet friends,,weneva geets sad all ov them try and cheer her up
Oooh luvin maans possessiveness & geets jealousy
Her dance was amazing that all eyes wer on her
So maan has found out about her jealousy
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM


yup the spider is too hot to resist😉...😆...usse scare hokar bhagna bhi muskil hai...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: butterfly.tanu

awesome part...👍🏼

love it...
vicky is soo protective over geet...
Maan felt a great satisfaction seeing her incredible performance ...☺️☺️
finally maan understand why geet behave like this...
looking forward 4 the next...
cont soon...


vicky is going to play a crucial role in future as he can do anything for geet😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was just a trailor of maan's jealousy... Uff luv u for this sentence. I'm so waiting for the show then. What if maan tells her she cannot dance infront of others and they have a heated conversation then later... A lilttle more later geet dances all seductive moves in her room. Ha ha ha maan ki to chutti ho jai gi. He he he. And whn he tells her to stop... She'll ask what is his problem????
Ok ok u do no this is not for u to adjust it in ur ff this is just me going crazy picturing them in their closely situated rooms. U know I go gaga over those scenes.
Acha chalo plz update kerdo na.
It's such a janu ff.
Hey anu do u have other ffs too apart from these two?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shining_moon


thanks saba...ur comment is quite lively😉 Thnx 😳

actually I used to like antony's character in my 10th when our class watched the movie in my school but only till interval...after that he became a total jerk😡
and I just loved the dance in DTPH...karishma was fab⭐️... Doing it as opponent of Madhuri was quite achievement
I m glad u find it apt for geet's emotions😊

P.S if this is trailer of Maan's possessiveness (as u told Arzoo) then I so want to see the movie 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh yeah Saba we r so in line. Where is the full show? Dying to read it.
I nvr knew y ppl spam... But today whn I saw this ff on the 2nd page of my posts... Argh I wanted to spam like crazy.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Oh yeah Saba we r so in line. Where is the full show? Dying to read it.

I nvr knew y ppl spam... But today whn I saw this ff on the 2nd page of my posts... Argh I wanted to spam like crazy.

right Arzoo. bring it on 😊

Anu, we want update badly

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

Awesome update

loved it loadz
LOL she called maan spider
yay maan banged rahul out
woooh
Lol instead of antony geet described maan
Hhehhe loved whn sam said geet name when maan didnt wanna go to the cheerleading pracrise
Alisha and geet against eachother wow
Wow geet danced amazing the way u described it :PPP
Maan finally got it that she is jealous
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx


thanks dear
did u all thought maan will let go rahul so easily..😡...he's the biggest devil when someone tries to harm geet...😈

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