~*~ PYAAR KA EK NAGHMA ~*~ MG ff ...COMplETED .!!! - Page 66

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lovely ...brill ..awesome update ...plz cont soon
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ive jst read da whole fing
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nice ff. being in 10th u write so beautifully. great going. pm plz
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Great FF dear
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part 26

arjun - han voh na ..arohi ko na.

arohi - han mujhe na ..ice- cream..

arjun - han arohi ko na ice- cream khani thi ...toh issliye mai usse ice-cream ke liye le gaya ...

maan - but arjun yaaar teri car toh bahar hi khadi thii ...

arjun - han voh na maine socha ..

geet - kya socha apne ..

arjun - han ...maine socha ki walking karna pregancy mai baby aur mummy dono ke liye accha hota hai ..toh hum walk karke chale gaye ...

geet - oh..ok...

maan - toh kounsi ice- cream khayi tumne arohi ...

arohi - choco...choco ...hot choco fudge ..

geet - ok..ok...

arjun - ok..gyz leave it ..
geet winks maan and maan smiles seeing her naughtiness ...

geet gets serious and says - arohi toh apne kamre mai jaa aur bhai tum bhi jao ... mai aur maan niche sabh dekh lenge ..

arohi - thik hai ..

arjun helps arohi to get up anboth of dem makes deir way out of the room ..
as dey exits the room..
maan and geet bursts out in laughter ...
maan handles him self and sees geet ..he got lost seeing geet ..
she was looking like an angel ..her soft supple lips curved in a smile ... and her curly brown hairs dangled on her cheeks and shoulders ... and her greeen emerald eyes filled wid joy and happiness..
maan got lost in her ..and geet continued her laughter ..
geet stooped herself ...and turned to loook at maan ..
she saw him staring her ..
she also got lost in his eyes ..
both started staring each other ...
and after some tym ..geet broke the eye contact ..
and looked down fully emabaraseed .. and den maan also looked downn embarassed of his act ..

geeet broke the silence and says - voh...mujhe lagta hai ki humme niche chalna chahiye ..kafi kaam baki hoga ..

maan - hm..u r ryt ..

geet - aur yeh platters bhi hum niche rakh dete hain ...

maan - han yehi thik rahega ...
both of dem moves downstairs and got busy in deir work ...
after some tym ..
maan and geet moves to deir respective rooms as in arjun and arohi's rrom..
the ceremony was about to start in about 2 hours ..
in arohi's room..
geet was helping arohi to get ready ... arohi dont want any beautcians to help her to get ready ..she wanted her dearie sis geet to help her in getting her ready ..
arohi has already wore her lehnga ..____________________________________________
and now geet was drying her hairs ...
after drying she tied her hairs in a beautful maanner...
and den she started wid her makeup ...
she did her eyes wid kohl , masckara , eye colour... and den applied some light coloured lipstick to her soft lips making her looking gorgeous ...

geet - ahem ..ahem ... aaj koi bohot sundar lagne wala hai ...
aaj toh bhai jab tumhe dekehenge toh unke saree hosh udd jayenge ...
arohi was luking lyk dis ..
in arjun 's room
arjun was getting ready ..

maan - ahem ahem ..

arjun - aree tu baki kaam baad mai dekh lAena .. jaldi se taiyar ho jaa ..

maan - hota hun yaar

maan was luking like dis


arjun


geet


arohi


geet and maan walked down from the stairs ..
it was luking lyk a couple is coming down from heaven ..
dey came down and got busy wid the guests ..
soon the couple was called and the ceremony started
the ceremony ended wid a loud applause for the couple ...
everyone came to give deir blesings to the couple and some even gave boquests and other gifts ..
sameera came as usual wearing her short short stupid dresses ..
she gave an angry glare to arohi which was noticed my geet and arjun ..
she den turned towards arjun and huuged him ...

and said - congrats arjun ..
arjun didnt payed much attention to sameera ..
he casually said her thank u ... and removed her arms from his shoulders ..
and turned to look towards arohi who was really angry from arjun ...
sameera went away smirking to herself ...

arjun - arohi cool down baby ..dekho etena gussa acccha nhi hai

arohi - how dare she came near u .. and touch u ..aur tum khade rhe uske saath chipak ke ..

arjun - arohi mai tumse pyaar karta hun .. tum usse beech mat lao
jst look at me
arohi looked in arjun's eyes and her anger soon melted ..

arjun - u trst me na ..

arohi - more dan myself ..

arjun - den believe me i luv u and only u ..

arohi - hm..

arjun- luv u

arohi blushed and said - luv u 2 ..

geet coughed and says - ahem ahem ...are bhai yahan par hum bhi hai .ab meri gift ki bari ...

geet den shouted - lights off..
the lights switched off..
4-5 persons came and brought a portrait kind of thing overed wid white satin sheet ..
dey placed it carefuuly and stood by its sides ..


hm..
so dis is all for today ..
finally my examz r over..
to know wat is dere in the portrait stay tuned ..
and do make some guesses ..
plz..plz..do comment ..me waiting for dem ..
urs ~~~ savie ..
Edited by savie_ - 13 years ago
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awesome update 👏
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y d hell sammera came to the party.. always spoil d moment... i hope next update will hv masti nd dhammal...
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hey girl welcome back...

beautiful update with beautiful pictures... maan is looking handsome so arjun... thanks for the update and pm. do continue
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thanks yaaar ..

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