~*~ PYAAR KA EK NAGHMA ~*~ MG ff ...COMplETED .!!! - Page 50

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome update...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover

...😊

1stly 4 PM me...4 this..😳..
Updates..😛.
turely ur updates r just ,
,
... Dear...👏👏..
...😳
really..😃
... n
...⭐️⭐️.
n
for ur
dear..😃.👍🏼
tons of ...🤗.
last but not the list...😃...
wish u very of frnd ship...
...
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ITS BEEN LONG TYM...PLZ UPDATE...M WAITTTIIINNNGGG...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: manali garg

ITS BEEN LONG TYM...PLZ UPDATE...M WAITTTIIINNNGGG...


srry dear but my examz r going on ..
so will update on sunday or saturday ..
plz...wait till den
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 24

geet runs from dere and goes towards the entrance gate and

says to the watchmens - sunio aap log ..bhaiya ji vahan na garden mai arjun aur arohi honge unhio aap bolio ki maan aur geet unhe dhoond rhe the .. par voh yahan bahar nhi aaye aur dubara sone chale gaye ...thik hai aur kuch mat boliyega ... thik hai jaiye jaldi jaiye ..

geet goes back to maan ..pulls him and takes him back to the room..

geet - ab tum yahan se bhar mat aana ... aur jiju ko kuch mat kehna ... tabhi toh kal maza aayega ...

maan - geet tum mujhe btaogi kya chal rha hai tumhare shaitan dimag mai ..

geet - kal btaungi ...abhi ke liye u sleep...eeven i m going to slleeep..

the 2 watchmens goes towards dat part of garden ..
and sees both of dem in a poistion where dey were about to kiss each other ..
when dey coughs ...

watchmens - cough cough ...
arjun and arohi looks towards the voice and found the 2 watchmens staring dem wid a shocked expression...
arjun and arohi faced turns red in embarrsament ..

finallly arjun manages to speak - aap dono yahan kya kar rhe ho ...

watchmen - voh sabh geet memsahb aur maan sabh aap dono ko poore ghar mai dhoond rhe the ...

arjun immedieatly asks - voh dono bahar toh nhi aayi na ..

watchmen - nhi sahb ... abhi dono dubara sone chale gaye hain..

arjun - thik hai ..ab aaap dono jaiye ..

watchmen - ji sahb..
the watchmens leave ..
arjun turns towards arohi

arohi says - dekha ..bach gaye hum aaaj ...agar voh dono yahan aa jate toh problem ho jati ...

arjun - kuch nhi hua aru ..kuch nhi hua ...

arohi - maine tumhe kaha tha na .. bas 3-4 din ki baat thi ..tum etena bhi wait nhi kar sakte the ...
agar geet ne dekh liya hota toh sarra din mujhe chidati rehti ..

arjun - oho..!! arohi ..tum chinta mat karo nhi dekha un dono ne humme yahan ...
arjun kisses arohi on her forehead ...

arjun - chalo ab vapis chalte hain ...

arohi - han chalo jaldi chalo ...
arjun and arohi moves in the house ..
arjnu takes arohi to her room .
and both of dem sees geet sleeping peacefullly ..

arohi - geet sote hue kitni cute lagti hai na ...

arjun - hm ..but tum bhi kuch kam nhi lagti .. tum to eteni cute lagti ho ..man karta hai ki ..

arohi - ki ...

arjun - ki tumhe .

arohi - bas bas aage mat bolo .. main samajh gaye ...
arjun smiled
but geet was jst acting as she was sleeping ..and she heard seir convo
arjun helped arohi to lay down ..

covered her wid the duet ..kissed her forehead and says - gud nyt love ...

arohi blushed - gud nyt ...
arjun leaves after making sure arohi was slepping peacefully...
he goes to his room..
and sees maan slepping ..
arjun goes to the other side ..

slips inside the duvet and mumers bach gaye aaj ...agar geet ya maaan ne hummme niche dekh liya hota toh arohi mujhe kaccha chaba jati ...
maan was also acting and listened arjun murmuring ...
he smiles in his sleep .. thinking wat willl geet do tomoorow ..to tease arjun and arohi...
now all of dem r sleeping ..havinh beautful dreams in deir sleeep ..

next day ..
the preparations r going on full swing as its ring ceremony today ...
geet and maan r again running here n dere ...
whereas arjun is still slpeeing ..
and geet has made arohi sleep forcefully as she will become tired becoz of the ceremonies ...and rasams ...
today dere willl be a huge media chaos as one of the bachelors of delhhi .ARJUN SINGHANIA was getting married and today was the ring ceremony ...
the security wass very tight and noo stranger or outsider can enter the housse ..
only guests named in the lists can come inside the house premiises ...
the event manager chosen was one of the best event manager of india ..
as of now arjun and arohi were sleeping ...and geet and maan were running here n dere checking out the preparation ..

geet - aree jaldi kariye aap sabh ..kitna tym laga rhe hain ..

maan - geet dekho have water and relax..
but geet was not listening to him and was running here n dere while maan was following him ..
trying to make him feeel relax ..

geet - aree maan dekho na kitna kaam baki hai ..yeh wedding
plannner bhi na kuch kaam nhi kar rha hai ...sabh toh humme dekhna pad rha hai ..

maaan shouts - geet ..

geet gets scared and says - kya ...kya hua

maaan - now stop worrying drink it ..he forwards the glass..
geet takes the glass drinks a sip ..
and gives it back to maan ..

maaan - hm ..now listen ...relax yaar ..sabh kaam thik se chal rha hai ...saraa kaam evening tak finish ho jayeg a..
so u dont take tension and jao ...
arohi ki dress check karo and jeweelry too...
mai arjun ki check karta hun and voh rings wale platres bhi decorate karni hai ...
saraa sammaan aane wala hoga ...mai tumhe bula lunga uske liye ..ok...

geet goes and turns around and says - aur voh plates ko decorate karne ke liye ...red roses bhi mangva lena ..

maan rolls his eyes and says - ok madam ..aur kuch ..

geet - nhi ..

geet leaves and goes to arohi's room...
precap - ring ceremony ...

plz...plz...gyz do cooment ..
me waiting ..
i know i have been late dis tym in updating it ..but srry was busy wid functions...
srry srry ...
the next part will be up in the next week ...

Edited by savie_ - 14 years ago
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