~*~ PYAAR KA EK NAGHMA ~*~ MG ff ...COMplETED .!!! - Page 45

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome yaar...😛i really liked it👏...a biggg thumbs up from me👍🏼
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part 23

both were lost in each other ...
maan slowly removed his hand from geet's face ..and got u p...
geet also got up..

and both together said - srry ..

and continued - aree tum kyun ..??

and again - meri galti hai ...

den geet spoke alone - tum kyun srry bol rhe ho ...meri galti hai ...

maan - aree chodo na ...
accha yeh btao tum yahan kya kar rhi ho ..

geet - voh arohi room mai nhi thi ...aur maine bahar aakar dekha toh yahan room ka door bhi open tha ..toh mujhe laga voh jiju se milne yahan na aayi ho ...

maan - aur arjun voh bhi yahan parr nhi hai ...

geet - iska matlab ...

maan - dono ek saath

geet - hain ...geet completed the sentence ...

maan - chalo chalkar dekhte hain...maan murmered pta nhi kahan chup kar ishq lada rahe honge

geet - kuch kaha tumne ...

maan - nhi maine kuch nhi kaha ...and continued par geet mujhe lagta hai humme unhe akela chod dena chahiye ... dey r a couple ...and pta nhi kahan honge ...aur kya kr rhe honge

geet understood waat maan meant to say and says - nhi dat will be wrong ...3 days baad unki shadi hai ...cant dey stay away from each other jst for 3 days ...mai yeh nhi keh rhi ...poore din mat milo... milo par raat ko nhi ... arohi is pregnant she needs to be take care ...usse rest karna chahiye ... kal dubara saree rasmein shuru ho jayegi ... the next 3 days will be hectic for her ...

maan - yeh baat bhi sahi hai ...chalo chalte hain ...
maan and geet check every room of the mansion but dey were nowhere ...

geet - kahan gaye honge dono ...

maan - poora ghar dekh liya and arjun ki car bhi bhar khadi hai ...
suddenly it strucked both of deir's mind ...

geet - kahin tum bhi toh vahin nhi soch rhe ho ...jo mai soch rhi hun ...

maan - exactly ...i guess both of dem r in the garden ...

geet - chalo check karte hain ..

maan and geet silentle exits the house ..
and sees dem ...
geet was shocked seeing the one part of garden decorated wid flowers...

geet - wow...!!!
mujhe nhi pata tha arjun jiju etene romantic hai haye ...!!!!
maan was standing behing geet and was staring her ..instead of checking out the place ...

other side ...(before geet reachs arjun's room)
arjun tucked the straands of hair behind's arohi's ear ...
and kisses her forhead...
he takes his hand ...and lead her to the part of the park which was decorated ..
arohi gasped seeing the whole place decorated so beautfully...
she moved ahead and touched each and every flower present dere ...
she turned around and saw arjun standing jst behind her ...and dere faces were inches away ...

arohi- yeh sab tumne mere liya kiya ..

arjun says her playfuuly - nhi maine yeh sabh pados mai rehne wali aunty ki beti ke liye kiya hai ...
arohi smacks him hard on his hand ..

and says - uske liye kiya hai ...toh mujhe yahan kyun bulaya ...

arjjun - pulls her to him through her waist and says - mai toh mazak kar rha tha ...mai yeh sabh tumhare liye nhi to aur kiske liye karunga...tum hi toh meri jaan ho ,, meri life ho ..
arjun stared at arohi's lips and slwly moved forward

geet - chi chi babaji ..kya kne jaa rhe hai yeh dono ..
geet covered her and maan's eyes ...
and den arjun claimed arohi's lips ...
both started kissing each other paassionately ..

and both moved apart when dey were breathing heavily ...
maan removed geet's hand from his eyes and adores geet

arohi blushed and hid herself in arjun's chest ...
arjun also huuged her ...
other side

geet - maan yeh mera cell lo ...aur dono ki recording karo jaldi ...

maan - par kyun ..

geet - bas karo na btati hun ...

maan - okay ..
maan starts making the recording of it ...
and the music starts ...
let me 1st decribe the place...
the place is very beautiful...
decorated wid flowers , lightining , etc ..etc...
a table decorated wid flowers kept dere...some food in it...
some boquets and flowers...candels...
and dere r also fountains around the table...
and a decorated bed too...table wid white table cloth..
fountains painted white...the bed wid white beadsheet...
a table and bed in betwween wid fountains all around...
loving place...very beautiful ..like a dream land...

so here the scene starts...
the tuning of soniyo going on (soniyo from raaz the mystery continues ..)
(arjun pulls arohi out of the hug )
baby come stand by my side come and be my gadelite...
(arjun comes to her bend on his knees and puts his hand forward..)
i''ll be wat u want me to bee...
(arohi puts her hand over his hand..and arjun gets up...)
i will give all my love in whole of my life...
(den dey moves towards the table ...)
soniyoo...oo soniyo...
(arjun makes arohi sit and den sits opposite to her...)
tumhe dekhta hun toh sochta hun bas yahi..
(arjun keeps his hand under his face and sees her continuously very romantically...arohi shiess..)
tum jo mera saath do saree gam bhula ke jeeun muskurake yeh zindagi...
(arjun gets up from his place.. and asks arohit for a dance...)
tu dede mera saath tham le haath ..chehe jo bhi ho baat..tu bas dede mera saath ---2
(dey holds each others hand...arjun pushes her and den pulls her towards him ...and den makes her takes rounds...2 rounds and den he holds her from her waist and arohi's hands r on maan's shoulder and den moving slowly slowly...{dis wholw part dey does twice..})
location changed..
tuning going on..
(and den dey both r standind near a fountain..
shiny water arohi's face shinig...arjun comes from behind and makes her wear a diamond necklace..the beautifulest...)
i kept dis feeling now..i cannot wait more longer i know ur luv will keep me happy will keep me stronger , , , i get dis feeling now.i caanot live widout u ..i know ur loves the only one so true...
(arjun holds her from her waist and plants kisses on her neck...)
location changed...maaneet standing...and arohi ke aage deir is a way made of flowers...red petals of rose..spreded in her way...
rahon mai tanha hun saath le chal yun ..sangh tere safar pura karun ----2
(maan holds geet's hands and tells her to move over dose petals...over dat way...)
kya kahun aye zindagi...tu hai meri saans rehan tu paas har ghadi...
(arjun and arohi amne samne..arjun holds her from her waist and gives her a sweet kiss and keeps his head over head...soflty...)
tu dede meera saath tham le haath..chahe jo bhi ho baat ..tu bas dede mera saaath ...
(arjun holds one hand of arohi..arohi comes roolling through his hand...and arjun lifts her...and she keeps her head on his sholuders)
loacation changed...
on the table...
the whole tuning..
(voh dono ek dusre ko khana khilate hain...)
location changed...
dey r standing...
tujhko jo paya toh , hai yeh lagta kyun..bahon mai bas tere mefuuz hoon...---2
(arohi hugging arjun ...so cutely...keeping her head on arjun's shoulder..and arjun feeding her hairs...)
location changed...
tum bano saya mera ...zindagi mai aao ...zindagi betao...bas yehi...
(den arohi comes rooling through his arms...and arjun holds her through her waist..and den slow dancing..)
den dey both singing together..
tu dede mera saath tham le haath chahe jo bhi ho baat...tu bas dede mera saath...tu bas dede mera saath..
(dey r still dancing slowly...drowned in each other...)
location changed..
the tuning going on...
(arohi runing, behind her arjun runing trying to catch her...)
arjun got caught of her and twirls her around swiftly ...
grabs her slowly from her hair and dere lips are really close to each others ..and den dey were about to kiss...

suddenly two persons cough from behind
- ahem ahem ...

precap - who r dose 2 persons ...


plz...plz..do comment me waiting for dem ...
pm's later

Edited by savie_ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
adorable part
make even geet to feel the same dear
savie_ thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

adorable part

make even geet to feel the same dear


thanks di ...
but i m not understanidng wat do u want to say ...???
well geet has started liking maan ..
and i present more maaneet scenes after part 24 , 25 ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

thanks dearie ...for liking it ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

great part...geet is naughy, recording arjun-arohi romance

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsm part js lvd it...cntinue soon...thanx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hehehe that was cute and funny!
cont soon!
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsum!! lolx dat arohi n arjun part was really funny!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW WAT A ROMATIC UPDATE
ESPECIALLY THE RECORDING PART

WELL THE TWO PERSONS R NONE OTHER THAN MAAN AND GEET

NOW KICK START THE LOVE STORY OF MAANEET
AS SOON AS POSSIBLE

CONTINUE SOON
BYE TC
LUV YOU

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