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manali garg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#331

wow superb update...maan n geet story is startin...loving it...thanks...keep on writing...

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#332

...Dear...😊.

4 PM me...

same time 4 late n short comment dear...becouse m so busy..😕..

dear..⭐️⭐️⭐️.

updates r just , ...

...

i just... ...

...😳😳😳😳😳😳😳.

4 ur ...👏👏👏👏 gr8 gr8 Dear...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

just wanna ......🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

last time said... ...

...😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃.

lov,❤️

Tama

P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only mae it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡

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savie_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: sukklover
...Dear...😊.

4 PM me...

same time 4 late n short comment dear...becouse m so busy..😕..

dear..⭐️⭐️⭐️.

updates r just , ...

&

...

i just... ...

&

...😳.

4 ur ...👏 gr8 gr8 Dear...👍🏼

just wanna ......🤗

last time said... ...

&

...😃.

lov,❤️

Tama

P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only mae it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡

hey wat do u want to say ...

i m not understanding .

i haven't copied any of ur cooments ..

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savie_

@savie_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: charuagarwal
waiting...

srry sweety no update for today ..

but tommoorow paaka ..a update for u ...

luv u sweety ...

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savie_

@savie_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#335

PART 20

vicky left the place ...

(welll gyz dis scene is going when maan and geet were having dere convo behind the pillar ..so i guess u have gotten my POV .)

dia hid herself behind a curtain and waited for sameera to arrrive ...

vicky moved downstairs ...

he saw sameera wid some of the guests ...talking to dem ..and more of a king insulting dem ... he wanted to kick her out of the party ryt way ... but stooped has he wanted prefect revenge from her for making her swwet cute innocent geet di cry ...

vocky moved close to sameera and says rudely - maan bhai is calling u upstairs ..he wants to meet u alone in the room above ...

sameera - cant u say it nycly ...rather dan saying it so rudely ...any way who cares about u...

u c my maan is calling me i need to go ...

bye ladies ...(she says to the guests to whom she was talking to)

sameera goes upstairs happily ...

while vicky smirks seeing the prey moving towards the trap ...

dia is still hiding behind the curtains ..

she sees sameera coming upstairs ...

dia says - gud work vicky...

behind sameera vicky is also coming upwards but hiding himself from sameera ..

sameera enters the room ..

the door of the rooms get bolted automatically ..

sameera got scared for once but calmed herself ..

she moved forward and the next moment the lights of the room were off..

only 2 small red lights can be seen ..

sameera moved towards the light and touched it ..

when the red lights glowed more ..

showing a skeleton in front of her ..

(gyz .. i was not getting the pic of red skeleton so i posted dis one ...but the skeleton looks more scary wid red colour ..)

and weird voices of ghost started echoing in the rooom...

sameera got scared and started shouting maan...maaan ...

as dere were music going on high volume ..no one can hear the screams of sameera except dia and vicky ..

suudenlt the door of the room got unbolted ..

sameera heard the vocie and ran towards the door ..

she opened the door and started running like a mad person

whilist maan was coming upstairs ..

and dia and vicky his demselves behind the curtains as dey saw maan coming upstairs ...

maan was coming towards the room ..

he saw sameera running madly ..

he came towards her and saw dat she was sweating profusely ..

maan - sameera r u alryt ..and y r u sweating so much ..

sameera - maan voh andar ...

maan - kya hua tell me ...

sameera - voh ..andar skel...skeleton dekha maine ...

maan - sam skeleton ... kya keh rhi ho ..i m not getting it ...shuru se btao kya hua ...

sameera - voh vicky ne mujhe kaha ki tumne mujhe yahan uppar bulaya hai ...mai uppar aayi room mai gaye toh dorrs apne aap band ho gaye ...fir saree lights chali gaye ..aur samne se ek bhoot aya ..and mai vahan se bhag aayi ...sameera was crying biteerly ...

when dis convo was going between maan and sameera ..dia and vicky hid all the things and moved down hiding demselves from maan and sameera ...

maan knew dat dis mishief was done by vicky but inside is heart he was not feeling bad for sameera ..and was like i dont care if she cries ...

maan was happy dat he saw the person crying biterly who made his geet cry ...

maan soothed sameera and both of dem moved downstairs ...

when maan and sameera were moving down ...geet noticed it ..

and dere was some kind of pain deep inside her heart ...

she doesn't for wat she was feeling pain..

was it for seeing maan wid sameera ...??

no how can dat be possible..??

the spark of love had started from both the sides ..dat would soon turn into a fire ...

i hope u will like it ...

plz..plz...do comment ..