Inseparable- Maaneet

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I couldn't help it! I just had to start a new FF! I couldn't wait at all!
Inseparable means Incapable of being seperated.Two people who were never supposed to fall in love unexpectedly did. Watch their journey, their relationships with other people, the relationships falling apart and two souls becoming one. Becoming Insperable, being each others forever.
Their journey consists of love, drama, it will be heart touching, you might have headaches after reading it, it will be intense, full of passion, two people not admitting their love and not even knowing about it. It doesn't take long to fall in love, but it does take time to admit it. Watch as they fall in love with each other, watch them not expressing it but dying inside to say something. Watch the struggles of two individuals, the struggle of loss, the struggle of love, the struggle of understanding not only others, but also themselves.
CHARACTERS
Geet Handa-
20 year old girl, fun loving, carefree. She is in love with Rehan. She is the younger sister of Sameera. She has a very friendly/funny relationship with her Jeeju, Maan Singh Khurana. She has a degree in Architecture and Sociology.
Maan Singh Khurana-
25 year old Angry kind of man, Hard working successful rich businessman, owner of Khurana Empire and the fiance of Sameera. He loves her deeply. He has a good relationship with Geet.


Sameera Handa-
24 year old nice, sophisticated, smart and educated girl. She is more serious than Geet but she truly believes in love. She has a past that she can never forget but Maan comes to her life and makes everything better.
Rehan-
22 years old, Geet's boyfriend. He is quite immature but loves Geet dearly and Geet loves him. He lives in a studio flat in Delhi and intends to marry Geet someday. He does not work that much as his rich father gives him money whenever Rehan desires.
Be sure to tell me what you guys think of the plot so far!
INDEX
Part 1- Page 1
Part 2- Page 4
Part 3- Page 7
Part 4- Page 10
Part 5- Page 14
NOTE- Page 14
Part 6- Page 18
Part 7- Page 21
Part 8- Page 25
Part 9- Page 26
Part 10- Page 31
Part 11- Page 35 ( Maha Maha Mahii Episode)
Part 12- Page 41
Part 13- Page 45
Part 14- Page 49
Part 15- Page 54
Important note- Page 58
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mrk-1 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow awsome concept yaar...interesting !!
continue soon pls ..
update part 1 tooo
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 1
Maan- Sameera yeh tumhare liye.
Sameera- WHAT THE HELL! Maan baby, I love you, you know I do par aise gifts, I just...I hate them!!
Sameera walked out of the room angry. Geet came towards Maan.
Geet- Jeeju!!!! Maine aapko bola tha ke didi ko aise gifts pasand nahi hain!
Maan was sitting there holding a diamond necklace and was just glaring at it.
Maan- Han, pata tha lekin mujhe laga ke shaayad use aise gifts ab acche lage kyun ki maine diya.
Geet bursted out laughing.
Geet- You two are such nerds!!
Maan- No we aren't! We're just in love.
Geet walked towards Rehan who was sitting on the couch laughing at the incident that just took place. Geet sat on the corner of the couch and put her hands around Rehan's shoulder.
Geet- Pyaar to mujhe bhi hain, but we aren't nerds like you two!
Geet and Rehan stared at each other.
Maan- Very funny.
Maan looked at the diamond necklace again.
Maan- Chalo, maine khareeda to hain, Geet, tum le lo. It will look nice on you.
Geet- Nahi, nahi. I can't Jeeju, it's too expensive!
Maan- Aise samajhna ke yeh shaadi ka gift hain, tumhare liye meri taraf se.
Geet went in front of the mirror and tried on the necklace but she couldn't hook up the hook. Rehan was busy texting so Maan came up to her and hooked it. When they looked at the mirror, they were standing next to each other. They looked like an amazing couple but they could never be together. They were both madly in love with other people.
Geet- Accha hain?
Maan- Beautiful.
Geet went towards Rehan.
Geet- Rehan, accha hain?
Rehan was still busy texting and continued looking at his phone.
Geet- Rehan! Main aapse baat kar rahi hoon!
Rehan- Han accha hain.
Geet- Tumne to meri taraf dekha bhi nahi!
Rehan looked up at Geet for like 2 seconds.
Rehan- OH MY GODDD!!!! IT'S GORGEOUS!!!!! FABULOUS!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!! IT'S THE NICEST THING I'VE EVER SEEN!!!!
(Rehan was talking like a girl, he was a funny type of guy)
Geet glared at him while Maan Hi5ed Rehan.
Maan- Good one dude.
Rehan- Right on.
Geet glared at both of them.
Geet- I can see why didi hasn't married you despite being in a relationship for 5 years!!!
Maan- Ab to hum shaadi karne vale hain! Ha! In a few weeks, don't worry Ms. Geet Handa!
Geet glared at Maan.
Geet- Dekhte hain, kya pata, kal ho na ho.
Maan- Stop copying Shahrukh's lines!!
Geet- I'm not copying him!! It's a COPYRIGHT!! I HAVE THE RIGHT TO COPY!!
Maan- Copyright is illegal you dumbo!
Geet- ARRRGGGHHH MEN!!!!!!!
Maan- Han, hum aise hi hote hain! Ha Ha Ha!
Geet walked out of the room and went to Sameera's room.
Geet- You were right! Men are horrible!
Sameera- Exactly! They are! Vo...vo humare feelings ke baare mein sochte tak nahi.
Geet- Han!
Geet stared at Sameera.
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Ok, sorry for the WEIRD starting! I just wanted to make a different part, but I'll leave the judging to you guys! Tell me how you liked it!!
PRECAP- Planning for Geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
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what yaar maan ko geet ka jija banadiya?it doesnt suit.ab to geet aur maan ek jaise hi lagte hai,so dont separate them

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: maan4love

what yaar maan ko geet ka jija banadiya?it doesnt suit.ab to geet aur maan ek jaise hi lagte hai,so dont separate them


LOL hahaahha I know! But I really really wanted to do a different story! Don't worry, read what happens next !! LOTS OF SURPRISES!! You will just have to read it to find out what happens and trust me, you will like it!
It isn't necessary that they should be together in the beginning of the story, read what happens ahead! I'm sure you will enjoy it ONLY IF you can handle the pain and headaches!!! LOLL
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey what r ur other ff plz tell me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

hey what r ur other ff plz tell me

My other FF is called Pyaar which ended a few weeks ago.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvblue0812

My other FF is called Pyaar which ended a few weeks ago.



i remember i have read it so will u be updating regularly or not
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079



i remember i have read it so will u be updating regularly or not

Yeah I will be sure to update every 2 or 3 days:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice concept
Do continue
Do pm me

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