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@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Poor Geet she was so worried for not completing the file. She knows Maan's ghussa.

Maaneet can't romance in peace even in a FF. Bechare! 😆

Great update Naz!

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

awesome ff...

plz do add me to ur PM list...

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

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kareena

@mayur-maaneet

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

awsome update...i can sense prob regarding dis priya...seriously mahn...she is gna cause a big prob!!

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thekolgal

@thekolgal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

really nice update...

evil Kunal...pushing our Geet...wht if she got hurt...😲...its good Maan ws there to help her from falling...

do continue soon...😊

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@-Nightingale-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: thekolgal
really nice update...
evil Kunal...pushing our Geet...wht if she got hurt...😲...its good Maan ws there to help her from falling...
do continue soon...😊

kunal did not push Geet dear...Geet herself pushed herself away from him😊😊😊

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soulstarspirit

@soulstarspirit

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

its nice..good concept
i really liked it..plz continue soon
and thnxs for pm 😛

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@-Nightingale-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

hi all...

thanks for the appreciation for my work, here I come with the next update

Priya joins KC. Priya commutes to office with Maan and Geet. One the first day of her joining, Priya seems enthusiastic in the office and Geet is happy to see that. Pinky enquires Geet if Priya ever gives any expressions or talks. Geet justifies by saying Priya is introvert. Dev loses a project as he could not come to common terms with the clients.

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In the evening, Nano comes to know about Dev losing the project and blames Priya that she entered the car, then home, and the office, but we hardly know her. the first day she joined office and we lose a project. Dev is like what has Priya to do with this. Nano says she is unlucky. Maan overhears this. He goes to talk to dadi when he sees Priya talking of phone as he approaches near, she disconnects. she says she took permission from dadi. Maan says its ok. Maan tries to redial but gets switched off and is all confused and suspicious.

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Priya asks Geet about Vicky. Geet is clueless who Vicky is. Geet later enquires about Vicky with Maan who says he is his brother who he has thrown out for his notorious behavior. Maan asks how she knows. Geet replies dadi told about him to Priya. Maan is displeased.

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Next morning, in the office, Maan tries to keep Priya in front of his eyes making her work being around him. Maan and Geet are in the meeting and Priya enters with a file. Priya approaches and stands near the desk. She sees Kunal staring the desk with Geet's reflection. She places the file on the desk n leaves.

Maan leaves the cabin to attend a call on his cellphone as he gets network problem.

Kunal to Geet: Did anyone tell you, you got an angelic smile
Geet: (all confused) thank you.
Kunal: (approaches her) you look mesmerizing.

Geet is all angry. Kunal corners Geet staring her upside down. Geet lifts her hand to slap.

Kunal: Please do slap at least u will touch me

Geet feels disgusting and about to leave when Maan returns. Geet tells what happened. Maan asks if she slapped him. she says no.

Kunal to Maan: I told you. No girl can ever do it to me even if I misbehave. (all smiling)
Maan - MSK; Never ever dare do this again to my Geet
Kunal: Sorry. I was just trying to prove my words
Maan: I dont care, I will just finish that person who tries to misbehaves with my Geet who ever he is.
Kunal: sorry Geet and Maan relax, there is nothing serious about it

Maan and Geet stare and ignore the issue. In the evening

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Maan asks Geet and Priya to join him along with Kunal and other people for a meeting outside but Priya

avoids saying she is unwell. Geet gets concerned and leaves with Priya.

Geet to Priya: Are u alright?
Priya; yes
Geet: U said u are not feeling well
Priya: I dont like Kunal.

Geet thinks what happened the other night and in Maan's cabin and is thoughtful.

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After the meeting Kunal enquires Maan about Priya. Maan says she is Geet's friend. Kunal says I have a weird feeling for that girl. Maan is all thoughtful.

Kunal invites Khuranas for the party in which they can sign papers and start working togehter. Maan agrees.

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Maan returns and informs that they are gonna go to the party. All agree but dadi and Priya do not accept to join them. Nano gives a suspicious look to Priya. Geet thinks not again.

Geet to Priya: You are gonna join us for the party.

Priya looks at Geet who nods her to agree. Priya agrees.

Precap: Maneet, Dev Nandini along with Priya are at Kunal's party!!!!!!!!!!!!

do leave you suggestions and comments ...if interested in further updates do press the like button on this post!!!!

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Sej

@SejN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

RES

*editied*

yayayaya im 1st wooohooo

wow di i loved the part it was awesome and this pryia gal i think shes going to try creating some walls between maan and geet :( and i sware she is after ruining the business and taking over.. shes greedy for money and shes a witch it all makes sences in my world 🤣... lol i joke but ye i think priya is a bad bad girl and she is keeping someone updated on what is happening in the house...

lovely part plz write more and a longer part soon

sejal<3

Edited by sejal719 - 14 years ago

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@-Nightingale-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: sejal719
RES
*editied*

yayayaya im 1st wooohooo

wow di i loved the part it was awesome and this pryia gal i think shes going to try creating some walls between maan and geet :( and i sware she is after ruining the business and taking over.. shes greedy for money and shes a witch it all makes sences in my world 🤣... lol i joke but ye i think priya is a bad bad girl and she is keeping someone updated on what is happening in the house...

lovely part plz write more and a longer part soon

tc

sejal<3

hey...love u seju...for replying even before getting the PM.😊😊😊😊

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