Desire (TH#2) - [Maaneet] - [Ending - Page 16]

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A Maaneet Tale
Book 2

Character Sketch




Geet Handa

A beautiful, traditional type of girl who the story revolves around.




Geetanjali Handa
Geetanjali Handa is Geet's sister and Yash's girlfriend.


Maan Singh Khurana

Maan Singh Khurana is a wealthy, and rich businessman who falls in love with Geet.



Yash Mehra
Yash Mehra is Geet's best friend and Geetanjali's boyfriend.




Savitri Devi
(Daadima)
Savitri Devi is Maan Singh Khurana's Daadima but to Maan, she is like a second mother to him.

More Characters will be added as the story goes on...

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The Tale Continues...


On the last chapter, you read about how Geet got ran over by a car. Maan is devastated when he finds out that Geet has lost her memory. Now Geetanjali, Yash, and Maan will work together to bring Geet back to her real life. Will they succeed in their plan? What will happen if they don't and Maan doesn't get his love back? What will happen if Geet realizes who Maan is? Will they reunite? Find out by scrolling down...

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Index

Thread 1


Introduction
School
Jealousy
Saviour
Loved
Prom
Abandoned
Need
Conspiracy
Apology
Reunion
Misunderstandings
Caught
Kidnapped
Faraway
Found
Gone
Proposal
Confession
Love
Accident
Dying
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Thread 2


Act
Burn
Birthday - Ending

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Act

The next morning, I immediately sprang up and hit the snooze button. I was determined to bring back my sister Geet. I ran off to the bathroom and stripped out of my clothes as fast as I could and got into the shower, not caring about the temperature.

After I had the quickest shower in the history, I picked out one of Geet's simple salwar kameez and shimmied myself into it.

"How does she wear her dubatta?" I wondered and tried different poses of wearing it. When I finally thought it was similar to the way she wore it, I started on my hair, braiding it carefully.

I ran a sweep of black kohl under my eyes like she always done, and then ran a chapstick over my lips. I put on her earrings and then looked at myself in the mirror.

I looked exactly like my sister, it was kind of scary.

I grabbed my bag and then set out for "work" which was at Khurana Constructions. I sometimes wondered how Geet could wear these clothes and especially her dubatta. How could she maintain her dubatta so well?

I half-ran and half-walked down the street that headed towards Khurana Constructions and once I reached the road where Geet was ran over, I felt tears spring my eyes. I gulped and hit the button, waiting for the man to turn green.

And once it did, I wasn't so sure I wanted to cross the road anymore.

I carefully looked left, and then right, prepared in case some van appeared out of nowhere and drove towards me.

Instead, the cars waited patiently for me to cross the road. So I prayed to Geet's "Baabaji" and then ran across the road.

"I made it" I muttered to myself and then looked behind myself. The body of Geet was still marked onto the ground by chalk for investigation. I sniffed and continued walking, breathing a sigh of relief when Khurana Constructions appeared into view. I ran towards the building and then stepped inside.

***

Geetanjali looked so similar to Geet I nearly screamed when I saw her inside my cabin. But I remembered Geet's eyes are much bigger and brighter than Geetanjali's so I breathed in deep, quiet breaths to calm myself down.

She stood in front of me and twirled around, allowing me to check and make sure she was wearing everything Geet used to wear.

Which she was.

"Okay, sit down" I said and fished out my mobile phone from my pocket. I searched into my contacts and pressed the green button when I found the entry "home".

***

"Geet Beta, you will be going to work today. You used to work there" I said slowly and soothingly, so she could understand what I was saying.

She looked at me and smiled and I breathed a sigh of relief. She seemed to like me which was a good sign.

Geet: "Ji Daadima. Waise bi, I'm feeling very bored today" she said and I agreed with her. We were about to leave when the landline phone rang. I went over and picked it up.

"Hello?"

Maan: "Daadima, are you bringing Geet?" he said on the other end. I glanced at Geet who seemed to be looking at me. I took this as a perfect timing and started to talk.

"Maan, how are you?" I asked and I glanced towards her again. Her head seemed to spring up at that name, but then she started to relax.

Maan: "I'm okay, is Geet there?" he asked

"Yes, Maan. Everything is fine" I said

Maan: "Okay, she IS coming right?" he asked

"Yes, Maan. Don't worry i'm doing very well. Thank you" I said and hung up. She seemed to be fidgeting with her dubatta and I smiled. This was another good sign.

"Let's go" I said and started to walk but when Geet didn't walk with me, I looked back and saw a blank expression on her face.

"Geet Beta" I said a little loudly and she jumped.

Geet: "Maan" she said and I tried not to smile.

Geet: "That name... It sounds familar..." she said

Precap: "Get away from him! He's mine!"

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Yep, nothing of the promo I posted on the last chapter happened today but it will in the next chapter 😉

I also noticed I didn't get as many LIKES as I used to and I can completely understand why but please, please, PLEASE...

Hit the LIKE button 😳

P.S - This is my first time making another THREAD for my FF's and I just want to thank everyone for reading my FF's! I've never had so many people appreciating my stories and it's you guys who bought me this far 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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congo 4 new thread
nd d part is awesome
cont soon
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wowww loved it n congrats for the second thread
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Thanks for thE PM...awesome update...will wait for the next update...
continue soon
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Congrates for the new thread and loveeed the update, plsss continue soon.
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Hey congratulations for the new thread...

Nice updt...cont soon...waiting for Geet to get back to normal...

Thanks for the pm.
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Congratulations for the new thread x











The Update was short But Brilliant
Cant wait for the next part...
Hope To See Geet Back With All Her Memories
And I Hope Geetanjali Doesn't Kiss Maan .. :P
Anyway Can't Wait For Another Update...
Update Again Today If You Can... :)
Edited by Nazmaa - 14 years ago
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congrats on ur new thread...nice part
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Congrats on the new thread Sameeha!!!
Awesome update!!
Continue soon and thx for the PM!!!😃
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@Sameeha: Nice part, don't let anyone else than Geet be near Maan, hayeee ☺️
Only Maaneet r for eachother ☺️

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