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mandymore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Congratz 4 new thread.grt prt.

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Pickachu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Loveee the part!!!

Geet is back!!!

Waiting for the next part!!

Because i'm older than 12!!

Continue soonnn.

Thanxx for the pm.

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Humera Anwar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

This part was awesome, Geet finally got her memory back

Loved the way she got her memory back, and the way she reacted 😆
Looking forward to the next update.. Geet's birthday :)

Update soon
And I am older than 12 😉😛

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Neha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

hey where u ????

no updates for today??? how sad... :(

i was sooo excited for precap!!!! 😭 but u didnt update

it'sokkk updtae ASAP

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kanika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

update asap ...
eagerly waiting
and haan i 18+...actually in 18 and half

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

part 24
awesome Geet got her memory back...
cont coon...

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SaJan-SaJan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

loved d updates...

thnx 4 d pm..

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Sameeha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

A Maaneet Tale

Birthday

"Happy Birthday to you!" they sang and I quickly glanced at Geetanjali who stood beside me standing in front of her cake on the table while I stood in front of my cake on my seperate little table. She gave me an enthusiastic nod and smiled.

"Happy birthday to the sisters" everybody sang and within' that crowd stood Maan, Yash, and my loving Daadima.

"Happy birthday to you!" they ended and everybody 'hip hip hoorayed' while I made my wish, blew the candles, and cut a piece of my favourite chocolate and fresh cream cake. Geetanjali blew her candles and cut a piece of her favourite strawberry and fruit cake. We fed each other cake, practically cramming our mouths with them. The crowd around as laughed as Geetanjali smeared a bit of chocolate on my cheek.

The Khurana Mansion was decorated only for me and Geetanjali and for the millionth time, I looked around and started to quickly admire the decorations again before feeding other people cake.

I cut another piece of cake and fed it to Yash who gave me one of his dazzling smiles before eating. I then turned to Daadima who patted my head lovingly and then took a small piece. When I turned to Maan, he gave me his killer smile that always melted me right on the spot and leaned in closer to me. His perfume was driving me to insanity.

Maan: "Happy Birthday, love" he said and then very discreetly licked the chocolate off my cheek, using his teeth to scrape off the remains.

He made my toes curl but I tried to controlled myself.

I gave him a glare and stuffed a piece of cake in his mouth with shut him up before he could say anything further.

I fed the rest of my friends some cake and then sat down on the sofa to open my gifts. The gifts were so expensive and beautiful it nearly hurt my eyes and I wanted to refuse it all. I didn't deserve that expensive gifts but I accepted them anyway, not wanting to hurt anybody's feelings.

I sneaked a glance at Maan and saw him talking to some friends.

He hadn't given me my birthday kiss yet.

"Hai Rabba" I feigned in a weak voice and put a hand on my head. Geetanjali came rushing to my side and I could see from the corner of my eye that Maan was looking at me with worry.

Geetanjali: "Are you okay?" she asked, worried.

"Yes, I'm fine... Saare gifts kitne aache hai lekin..." I said and fanned myself

I glanced at Maan and saw his worried expression turn to realization. His frown turned to a smirk.

Geetanjali: "Lekin?" she asked

I pressed my lips in anger at Geetanjali. Didn't she get it?

And then it suddenly dawned on her at what I was trying to say. She smiled and winked at me before leaving.

I turned to look at Maan and pouted my lips. He smiled and was just about to come over to me when his phone rang.

I rolled my eyes in frustration. This phone rang at so many wrong times I sometimes felt like throwing it against the wall. I watched Maan shake his head in disbelief and look at the phone with a cold, and angry gaze.

His cold and angry gaze changed when he looked at me to passion and love. He held up a finger, motioning he would only be a second and charged off to somewhere at the back of the house.

I sighed and got up, feeling bored. I decided to head off to the garden and so I did, taking my time to admire the beautiful decorations set up just for me and Geetanjali. I made the appropriate 'Ooohs' and 'Aaahs' as I went along and I finally reached the garden.

It was evening which meant the sky was turning dark. The darkness made the huge, aquamarine water look even more crystal clear.

I smiled as the birds flew over me, making their way to their nests for the night. I walked around the huge garden, taking in the colourful flowers.

But just when I was near the pool, I felt like I was being pushed in.

And before I could cry for help, the chlorine water was already filling my lungs.

I couldn't swim.

***

I folded my arms across my chest and smirked as I watched Geet trying to cry for help but unfortunately, her cries were too soft to be heard.

And when Geet stopped crying for help, I decided I wasn't going to let her die so easily. I was going to torture her.

***

Just as I thought my lungs were about to explode and Baabaji was preparing for a place in heaven for me, I felt somebody grab my hand and pull me out of the water. I lay on the floor, my body feeling like hammer. The chlorine water was gurgling in my stomach and just as I was about to puke my guts out, I felt the oxygen being stolen away from me again.

***

I grabbed her neck and shoved her against the wall, tightening my grip to as hard as I could. Her eyes popped out and her neck started to turn red.

"Hello, Geet. It's nice to see you again"

***

"Sas... Sasha" I managed to squeak out her name.

Her grip thankfully loosened on my neck but her hand was still wrapped securely around it. I took in big gulps of air, spitting out water.

Sasha: "You think that you would get away with me being fired? No" she spat and stared at me with narrowed eyes that took my body in.

"Look, we can... We can talk this... Out. It doesn't have to be --" I said between coughs and gulps of air but she cut me off before I could even complete my sentence.

Sasha: "NO! This has to be done this way! You think your accident was an "accident"?!" she exclaimed and I suddenly widened my eyes as the puzzles fit and clicked together in my head.

She did it.

Sasha: "I hired somebody to run you over. Unfortunately, they didn't do a good job" she said and stared away into the darkness. When she looked back at me, her eyes were filled with so much hatred I nearly squealed.

Sasha: "But now... I'm the one who will finish you off. I'll kill you with my own hands and then throw you into the pool so it appears as an accident" she said and smiled.

And then her grip on me tightened and I started to prepare for my death when a loud, cold voice scared me and scared Sasha even more that she let me go.

Maan: "LET HER GO!" he shouted so loud his voice seemed to echo around the world.

I took this as my advantage and sent a flying punch towards Sasha's cheek so hard, she ended up stumbling towards Maan who caught her and held her by the arm like filth. I had never seen Maan so angry.

He had eyes that could probably kill any person that walked by them. His jaw was clenched tight and he was shaking in anger. He was so angry, a bead of sweat trickled down his temple.

But he was still so sexy. Maan did everything sexily no matter if it was being angry, or sweating profusely.

He even sweated sexily.

I shook my head at my stupid thoughts and focused my mind on Sasha. I watched as the place I hit her slowly formed to a shade of beetroot red. I smiled in satisfaction.

And then suddenly Yash, Geetanjali, and the police came barging into the garden. Suddenly, the water in my stomach gurgled even more and I bent down, coughing and sputtering. Geetanjali wrapped a blanket around me and Yash took me in his warm arms.

Yash: "It's okay... It's okay..." he cooed and murmered sweet things into my ear which warmed me up instantly. I could feel Geetanjali's hands running up and down my back in a manner that relaxed me.

And then I was taken from Yash's warm shelter to another even warmer shelter which was more solid and safe.

Maan.

"I can't walk" I murmered. My knees felt numb and jelly-like and I was scared I would faint. Instantly, he ground beneath me vanished and I pressed my body closer to Maan's chest. His perfume started to calm my nerves. He smelt so amazing I could stay like this forever.

Finally, I felt something soft beneath me and I knew I was being laid down on a bed. I clutched my blanket closer to me and took in Maan's worried face and smiled faintly.

"I'm okay" I reassured and he shook his head.

Maan: "I shouldn't have left you alone. I'm sorry" he said and closed his eyes tightly. A tear escaped from his eye and landed on my cheek.

"Don't --"

Maan: "I'm such a horrible, irresponsible, idiotic boyfriend" he said and I shook my head and put my hand over his mouth.

"Don't ever say such stuff. Your the best person i've met in my entire life" I said and wiped the trail of tear away from his cheek.

Maan: "I'll never leave you alone. No matter what. Damn these stupid phone calls" he said and switched off his phone before throwing it away so it landed on the other side of the room.

I heard footsteps and I looked over Maan's shoulder to see who had arrived.

It was Geetanjali.

Geetanjali: "I bought cake" she said and smiled before continuing, "I thought this would make you feel better. It's a bit of both" she ended and held the plate in front of me, showing me half the cake was chocolate and the other was strawberry.

I smiled and took it, surprised at how hungry and empty I was feeling. I needed some sugar to energise myself.

Geetanjali: "Daadima says that your going to stay here for the night since your not feeling well" she said

"Will you be staying too?"

Geetanjali: "Yes" she said and smiled before leaving. I sat up in bed, letting the blanket fall off me as I started to eat my cake. I abruptly stopped as I realized that Maan and me were alone.

In this bedroom.

I could feel Maan's eyes travel from my neck, to the bottom of my body. I knew I was wet and I also knew my clothes were completely clinging to me.

I was about to say something to try to strike a conversation when he suddenly smeared cake on me. I pressed my lips together and looked at him in anger.

"What the hell was that for?" I asked and stood up, putting the plate of cake down on the bedside table, I strutted away from him.

Maan: "Sorry I feel like having some cake too" he said and I furrowed my brows. What was he trying to get at?

Suddenly, I knew what he was getting at and before I could protest I felt myself being pinned against the wall.

Maan: "I'm so hungry" his voice turned husky. We were close to the door so he used his left hand to lock the door and his right to press my body closer to himself.

"Th-Theres... There's cake over..." I trailed off, his hot body temperature was seriously driving me crazy.

"There's cake over there" I managed to point out in a squeaky voice and I gulped.

Maan: "But... I want a certain type of cake" he whispered and his hot tongue ran up my cheek where the chocolate cake was smeared on. His tongue left a burn lingering on my cheek and I suddenly wanted more.

I needed more.

My hands automatically ran up his chest. I clutched his collar and pressed him onto me even more, so close we were really inseperable. My chest started to ache, not only because of the heaviness of my breathing but because of the overwhelming sense of love I felt for Maan. His licking turned to teeth as he scraped off a bit of strawberry cake on my neck. His lips then smashed against mine as I pressed myself harder onto him.

His hands slowly slithered up my top like a snake and I shivered at his warm touch. I clutched his collar even tightly, scared that I would rip it off completely. I frantically unbuttoned his t-shirt and flung it away. My lips seemed to move in time with his as his hands went from my top, to my hair. He tangled his fingers into my hair and gently tugged on it, giving me a wave of pain and pleasure.

Maan: "I... Love... You" he groaned between the hard touching and kissing. I felt his solid, tanned chest and let my hands slowly work my way to his hair, twirling it around my fingers.

I was too dazed to reply to that statement because I could feel Maan's fingers crawl to the place where the knot securely tied my kameez. I felt my eyelids grow heavy with pleasure.

With one pull, the knot on my back untied and my kameez fell loose. He wrapped his arms around my waist and trailed hot and heavy kisses down my neck. I was completely dazed and all I could think about was how good he felt and how good his kisses felt.

He threw me on the bed and trapped myself between the bed and him. His hands moved stealthily to my kameez and ripped it open.

Literally ripped it open.

But nothing mattered just now when Maan was so close to me, giving me so much pleasure I could melt and seep into the mattress right now. I completely surrendered myself to him, letting him take off my trousers.

He began to trace me and feel my body in places that gave me utter bliss, pleasure, and pain at the same time. The feeling was so overwhelming I moaned loud enough for everybody in the house to hear, silently thanking Maan for covering his lips to seal any sounds.

As he moved inside of me, my hands wrapped around his neck. I whimpered under his touch and dug my nails in his flesh. It felt amazing but the pain still shot through me.

Maan's lips were still over mine to cover any sounds that escaped from my throat and then suddenly, a gush of pleasure went through places I didn't even know existed. I arched my back, loving the feeling of the velvet and silky bed sheets against my skin.

Maan: "Happy Birthday" he whispered as he lay down next to me.

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Epilogue

True love doesn't have a happy ending

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Because true love never ends

No, my story didn't end at just that point. It continued on for many, many years. Maan and me got married, and then settled in with Daadima by our sides. Geetanjali and Yash also got married and moved in with us. And the best thing was, Sasha got arrested.

You'd think it was Maan and me who fought the most after our marriage but believe me. Nearly every day Geetanjali came to me and told me Yash and she had a fight.

About a few weeks later after... Well you know... I turned pregnant and I was carrying a baby but don't worry, Yash and Geetanjali made out in the end too.

The funny thing was, Geetanjali turned pregnant after a few weeks of my report turning positive for pregnancy. I guess sisters are very alike.

Maan was the most possessive man I had ever met, always telling me to rest and always carrying the simplest things such as a glass of water for me during my pregnancy. I guess all I could do was thank Baabaji for such a caring, amazing (and also sexy) husband.

After 9 months, my baby was born safely and I was carrying her in my arms in the hospital. Maan was so overjoyed, he started crying. When Geetanjali's baby was due, she had a bit of complications but also made it out at the end.

In the end, me and Maan named our baby Muskaan, and Geetanjali and Yash named their baby boy Aditya.

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Okay firstly, I'm so tired due to writing such a hot and steamy part and secondly, I'm so sad that i'm having to end this FF so suddenly.

I had a writers block and couldn't think of what to write so I decided to just end it.

And yes. I need more IDEA'S so if you have a spectacular idea and you want it to be written by the famous, amazing, sexy, beautiful, gorgeous, talented, and way too young to be writing such steamy scenes (👎🏼), writer like MOI ⭐️, please, please, PLEASE post your idea below and I will definitely consider it.

I want to thank a very special person, Nazmaa. She gave me such an amazing plot I was forced to use it. And half of the likes I got on this FF go to her because she deserves it 😊

Yeah anyway enough with the emotional talks, I have another writers block and I need more idea's to actually continue writing FF's so PLEASE don't forget to mention any ideas you have. (How many times have I mentioned that ^^ )

Anyway i'm so tired I really need so sleep so I'm off to send about 150 pms before I go to sleep. I will be expecting your ideas when I come home from school tomorrow and if you don't give me any, i'll sniff you down with my vampire sniffing skills. (I'm being serious )

Anyway speaking of vampires, any SUPERNATURAL ideas may also be accepted. This includes immortals, wizards, vampires, werewolves, etc!

Thank you guys for appreciating my FF's 🤗

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Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

Fab update::
So sad that this FF ended
It was awesome x
Loved geets birthday party
Wow geets gift was damn Hawwt 😳😳
Glad dat sasha has gotten arrested and geet had a baby
Hope you come bak wiv another FF soon Xx..,

Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago