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Posted: 13 years ago
update kar be kamini😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
very iknteresting part.cant wait 4 d next part.maaneet going 2 meet
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Posted: 13 years ago
you said U will update soon for that long time passed but you didn't update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
will update it 2mrw pakkkaaa
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey roopali r u a kannadian??????
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mounacuty

hey roopali r u a kannadian??????

im a gujarathi but born n brought up in bangalore so a bangalorian
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 39

Present


Rajeev left to home with Ashii n Omi n had a fun time

Avani was atlast able to manofy Maan with a Shower Romance

N Preet spent the 2 hours massaging Geet's legs n Romancing with her but was very careful to not hurt her

After 2 hours Geet n Avanii got down to get ready as there was only 30 mins left for the party to start.

Maan got Ashii ready n Preet got Omi ready n it was time for the Party.

Maan took Ashi with him n went to the party n even Preet left with Omi. As they entered Ashi saw Rajeev n jumped down n ran to him.

Ashi, "Rajj Mujhe choki do…"

Rajeev, "Sexy baby yeh lo chocolate lekin Mumma ko mat batana warna Mumma daante gi"

Ashi smiled n said, "I lub you"

Rajeev, "I love u too"

Now Maan sees Aditya n moves towards him n at the same time Preet moves to meet Rajeev…

Preet seeing Ashii "Hey cutiie piee hw are u??? n hey u have a chocolate i also want ittt"

Ashii "Noo Nooo Ashiii chocki no givee"

Preet "Plzzz Plzzz give na Ashii plzz"

Ashiii cutting a small bite frm the chocolate she gave it to Preet n said "Okkk but oly thisss much"

Preet kisses Ashi cheeks n says "Thank u"

Ashiii "Welcume whr Omi ?????"

Preet "Omi is playing there baby with Ash Massi"

Ashiii "Ash Ashii Mamii no Omi Massi"

Preet "Okkk Ashii Mamiii there gooo"

Ashiii "Byeee" n runs to Ash feeling possessive n jealous of Omi n her Mamii playing n laughing without her.

Geet enter's the hall n is searching for Preet but is shocked to see the sight in front of her…….

She saw Preet n Maan dashing against each other n then a surprised look n Preet hugging Maan n Maan hugging him back as if they were old friends….

One was who had betrayed her...

The other person who had held her when she was betrayed...


One who had promised to be with her no matter what...

The other one who didn't need to make any promise to assure her tht he was her's...


One was had broke her heart in pieces...

The other one who fixed her heart with his love n care...


One who filled her life with bitterness...

The other one who filled her life with sweetness...


Such was the irony of Geet's life n the view in front of her n the moment Maan turned towards Geet n saw tears in her eyes……


Past


Next morning

1 day before the Marriage


Geet got to know that Maan n Meera Aunty had a fight n Maan had gone to stay off in the hotel where the wedding was going to take place.

Today was the final day of making their parents agree if thy didn't agree Maaneet were going to run away from the house.

She excitedly went to the Hotel n asked to the reception about the room no.

Geet "Excuse me, Can u just let me know the room no. of Mr. Maan Singh Khurana????"

Receptionist "Just a Sec mam will let you know, Mam his room no. is 105 n must say that guy is hot n sexy that his Girlfriend came with him yday night n now a girl come to ask his room no. there must be something in him"

Geet "What do you mean by his Girlfriend came with him in night???? Im his girlfriend n would be wife"

Receptionist "Im reallly sorrry Mam I didn't know that you his girlfriend, bcoz the way that girl was clinging onto sir it looked like she was his girlfriend n when Sir just booked 1 room I thought they were a couple realllyyy sorry Mam maybe im mistaken"

Geet "Itsss Okkk Misss but make sure you never do it again as it will just ruin your hotel's reputation n I would not take long to sue your hotel for it" n just passes a smile n moves towards the room

Room 105


Maan was sleeping next to a girl who had his hands under her cheeks

Maan just smiles seeing the girl sleeping peacefully after having a very long night….

Maan just kisses her forehead n gets up n sees his shirt's button's broken n his chest full of scratch marks n just nods his head n goes into the washroom to freshen up.

Geet comes to the room n finds the room lock so she ring's the bell n Maan opens the door in a towel tied on his lower body n his upper body nude.

Geet comes into the room n sees Maan chest full of scratch but by then Maan had gone into the washroom to change so she couldn't talk to him…

Next Geet sees Maan shirt on the floor but with all the button's broken n then finally oh the bed she sees a girl sleeping in Maan's kurta.

As Maan comes out he sees Geet looking at his accussingly n Maan just gave her I Don't care look….

Geet "Would you care to explain about all this???? If u remember today is the last day for us to make our parents agree to our marriage which is suppose to be tomorrow"

Maan "Chilll babes why are you screaming?????"

But Geet's voice had already shaken the girl out of her sleep n she seeing Geet started shivering n Maan just forgot everything about Geet n went n just hugged the Girl n the Girl just stopped shivering but cuddled her face more into Maan's chest n Maan was soothing her back.

Maan "Geet would you plz just go away from here….. come n meet me near the coffee plantation, I will talk to you later n now if you don't mind just close the door n go"

Geet "Buttt Maan….." n before she could complete

Maan "Cant you understand anything if I tell it once just get losttt…." He shouts n that scares the girl even more n she again started shivering

Maan "Luv….Honey….. see im here dnt get scared of tht Witch she will not separate us ever

Dnt worrryyy Sweetheart I love you naaa….. you also love me naaa

Don't worrryy Babes im always here with you" n kisses her forehead n cheeks n the girl stopped shivering but hugged him tight….

N Geet sees this scene n feels betray's but thinks to give Maan a chance to explain himself seeing the girl shivering like that so she goes away but her heart is broken in pieces when Maan told her a Witch n the scene is continously playing in her mind……

Coffee Plantation

Geet was waiting for Maan but the scene of some other women hugging Maan n Maan hugging her n kissing her cheeks n forehead just didn't go off n it made her more frustated n angry….

As Maan came in front of Geet before he could tell anything he felt a slap on his cheeks n he saw Geet with anger that she didn't even give him a chance to explain. As Geet was about to slap him he held her hand…

Maan "Miss Geet Handa????? Control your hands im not a toy in your hands that when ever you want you can slap n when ever you want you can hug it…."

Geet "Then what am I to you???? A mere doll whom you used to satisfy your desires n now when you are satified from me you went to some other Girl throwing me away like a Doll……

No Mr. Maan Singh Khurana im not sooo weak to let you do whatever you want with me….."

Maan "Yesss Geet Handa I used you to satisfy myself n its not the first time im doing it….I have done it with sooo many girls before you sooo it realllyyy doesn't matter to me what happens to you….."

Geet "I reallly wonder if you are really loved me or that all was also a drama to make me fall for you"

Maan "Comon Geet, Love????? Are you serious????

When I told you I used you to satisfy my needs…. Are you reallly soo dumb to think that Love has any chance in MSK's life its just Lust n always will be Lust…"

Geet "I curse you Maan that even after knowing you love a person you will never be able to get it…." N stands there having tears n slowly turns n goes away n it starts raining heavily……

Precap-


Past – Maaneet breaking down

Present – Preet running behind Avanii who had tears in her eyes seeing Preet


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Guysss i know i hv not updated but now its my final year n studies hv become very hetiic
just finished 1 set of exams n now all the stiching ,emberiody n sketching has become innumerable
n hopefully i become a nice fashion designer
just pray that im able to complete my assignments sooon
n im free only on Sat so will be updateing only on Sat
n just Baarish FF n all my other FF's will be on Hold
this FF's will end in sm 5 parts
sooo alll who wanted it finished just hv patients to see hw it ends
just sm more weeks left
n luv u all lotsss
muahhh
do remember me
n specially idunno n Hinal_ maaneet my sis
reallly thankful to ur explaination as tht entirely changed my mind n i decided to update this FF n hinal for making my screwed up brain come back to its place
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Posted: 13 years ago
errr 🤔 which swearing words should i use for maan?
ass...b******...*a****??? none of these suit that stupid arggghhh 🤬
amazing update poor geet...
thnx for pmme first???
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Posted: 13 years ago
awseome update dear...now maaneet r face to face...👏

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