ANKAHI...{LRL-RN} #2 last Ud wd EPI n PG 100(21/11

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monika

@monikaseth

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Posted: 13 years ago

#511

Happy Dussera" and "Vijaya Dashami

Awesome part love it

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Preetika/Elena

@Windsof.Heaven

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#512

Hi Priya...🤗

i really enjoy the update..😃

wow huda ne kitni sahi baat ki ke ek insaan sirf apne ghar ki raksha karta hain lekin ek fauji apne pure desh ki raksha karta han..very nice line..

.yeh dekh ke nahi sun ke nahi padh ke(hehehe.. in sab ko ajkal imagine bhi kane lagi hoon)toh main shocked ho gayi ke nakli atankwadio mein raj huda aalekh hain but sabse zyada tab shocked hui jab naaz ka naam padha ..

.i really love the way write the emotions in the song..really heads off yaar...

cont.soon

love Ayushi.

Edited by sainiayshi14 - 13 years ago

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Radhika

@ridhz21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#513

Hi Priya 🤗

Awesome update
the way huda explain "aap inshan hai ki kya hain"...too gud
Major's concern for Naina, Huda n Alekh safety
loved it
sorry for short comment actually busy preparing for exams but after that long comment pakka😊
continue soon

Luv
Radhika

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#514

Happy Dussehra to u too priya 😃 Awesome part,bahut mazaa aaya padhke ,RN ke scene is so short ,but its really sweet 😳

Liked gunny n naina scene,how much gunny teases naina 😆😆😆

sab milke aache se akram ko fool banaya,

waiting for the next part ,plz continue soon

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Swetha

@Swetha-Sai

Achiever

+ 48

Posted: 13 years ago

#515

wow! what an awesome update by u Priya👏

i loved ur update of this ff really very much..😳

plz add me also to ur PM list😛

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#516

the up is too long to read

anyways the part is really interesting and good so the mission is on gunny who is disguise moves on acording to the plan

akram is viewing all this and informing yusuf

akram naina se milna chahata haai toh gunny made him meet her

rajveer,huda and alekh they are really good

and naaz is also supporting and helping them

ab dekhte haai nadir saha se yeh log kaise aur kab milte haai bcoz that will be the most turning point

plz cont soon and pm me

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#517

awww Major toh sach much raunak se pehle aagaye 😳😳😳... 1 day early raunak will come on 7th 😳😳...😆😆😆...

coming to part as expected ... its 2good 👏👏👏...& kafi action packed 👏...felt like watching oops i mean reading a patriotic mission 👏

poor naina ...😆😆😆 bechari ki shadi ka joda kharab hogaya 😆😆... no worries ...Major haina 😳😳 he will find a way out 😳😳😆

& Naaz ...not only Naina 😛😛 Hum bhi major ko kahin bhi kabhi bhi pehchaan lete hai ...chahe kisi bhi get up mein ho 😉😳...

overall njoyed the mission 😍 😆😆... major ka plan hai successful toh hoga hi...no doubts abt it 😳😳...

so next UD ke liye jaldi kijiye 😛😛...
ahem ahem can we expect major on his bday 😳😳...

continue soon ASAP...😃

& wish u & ur family happy dusshera 😃 😃
😃

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noaccount

@noaccount

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

I wish all my friends here "Happy Dussera" and "Vijaya Dashami".

This is an occasion which celebrates the triumph of good over bad...

i hope u had enjoyed too...BTW the part was very nice...loved it!!!!!!

nicely writen...wow that was really fast...well faster then last time!!!!!😆

i except u to update soon😉😆...bcz i am oo eager to read the next part!!!!

love u

esha