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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeee part lovelyyy waitinggg for next asap

Thanqqq Sweta...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

yesss i was ryt ye saara plan major ka tha kyonki 23rd part me to tumne khud hi kahat tha na unhone bahut kuch decide kiya hai apne mission me including unki shaadi๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and yesss finally naina ne major ko i luv u keh hi diya๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ how intelligent i am na๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† mene nahi kaha tha ke unn ki shadi unn ke plan me tha...!!! bass itna kaha tha ke...unhe ab baht kuch decide karna hai...!!! aur haan...khud ki tarif mat karo...RAAZ...FASH ho gaya toh tarif aur jab naina ka kidnap hua tha aur Raj ko bullet lagi thi...tab toh reaction kuch aur hi tha tumhra...kyoun...๐Ÿ˜†

ab pata chalega us yusuf ko bhi ki apne major usse zaada smart hain๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ are aisa plan banaya aur usme yusuf ko hi ghuma ke rakh diya to hua na smart and intelligent๐Ÿ˜ƒyeh sirf humain pata hai...Yusuf ko thode hi na pata hai...!!! infact yeh toh maj saab ko bhi nahi pata...!!!aur vaise bhi Hindi ke purane films kahte hain ke VILLIANS hamesha bewakuf hote hain...๐Ÿ˜†
ab ye tumhe clear karna padega ki naaz bhi ye sab jaanti thi ya nahi aur aalekh huda to shaayad jaante hi honge iss plan ke baare me๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• next part me toh pata chal hi jayega...๐Ÿ˜›
aur wo dusri ladki kya noor hi hai๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• aur bacha ab flashback to pls kripa karke usko bhi jaldi se continue karo๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณTongue nur aur uss ladki ke bare me next part me pata chal jayega...tab tak ke liye thoda wait karo bachha...๐Ÿ˜›
ye achcha waala update tha kyonki dono me se kisi ko kuch nahi hua na๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ mere rehte Raj ko kuch nahi hoga iss baat ki warranty de sakti hun...par NAINA ka pata nahi...๐Ÿ˜†
aur finally saadde aalekh di gaddi to chal nikli ji๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ aur yudi , shalini unka bhi kuch na kuch to hua hi ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† bahut kuch nahi to๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ kuch kuch se hi baht kuch hota hai dear...pahle kuch kuch toh thik se ho...๐Ÿ˜†
ab iske baad waala jaldi se update karo taaki flashback padh thoda kuch samaj me aaye ki ye sab hua kaise๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† jaldi...ha ha ha...dekh lo...main kitni jaldi hun...๐Ÿ˜†
continue soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ
and
takecare sherni๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thanxxx Shreya...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

After so many days i am able to catch up with the updates,i mean i followed the fic upto 12 parts regularly ,after that i am unable to n now i completed reading all parts from where i left ,i tried to press like button for all the parts ,but i dont know why some times it worked n sometimes it didnt worked

I must say the story progressed so beautifully in all the parts RN ki shaadi bhi hogayi ,n there is progress in yudi n alekhs relation ship,inshort loved each n every scene in all the parts
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Posted: 13 years ago


Congratulations first for completing 25 episodes of the fic.๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Priya Hiiieee

Janti ho ab main tumhare updates last se padna start karti hoon he he he... phir toh mujhe aur kuch naya tarika ishtemal karna padega...๐Ÿ˜†
so I was shocked to know that our very own Maj.Rajveer is the master-mind behind these attacks..u must b laughing so much after reading our commnets from the previous part of this fiction..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† aur nahi toh kya...gala phaad ke hassi thi main aur pet me dard bhi hua tha...hass hass ke...๐Ÿ˜†
tum kuchh bhi kar sakti ho seriously yaar ..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†WRONG...Rajeev mujh se kuch bhi karwa sakta hai...๐Ÿ˜†
anyways update was really gud as always..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ thank youuu๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Yusuf is really in a shocked state..he is not able to understand the reason behind Naina's kidnapping.his men are all over but they r unable to bring the right information.Rajveer's plan has indeed thrown him in a state of panic.. purane hindi movies me bhi toh villians ko gadha dikhate hain na...toh maine thoda sa modified kar ke GADHA se DONKEY banaya hai...๐Ÿ˜†
Does Raj knows abt Noor's involvement with Yusuf??? or is she too a part of this whole plan?? bata dunn...??? pakka bata dun...???? naaa...ise jan ne ke liye tumhe next part padhna padega...๐Ÿ˜›
Neelu has now understood the importance of Alekh's love in her life..she is not ready to loose him again..while Shalini is broken with these attacks and Yudi is the one who is supporting her. dekha maj rajveer ke dimag ne kitne gharo ko ujad ne se bacha liya...๐Ÿ˜†
Rajveer's plan has indeed brought these 2 couples close..kya baat hai apne major sahab bhi ek teer se kai shikar kar lete hain๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† aur voh sare teer bhi toh SL company se hain...๐Ÿ˜†
Naina was so worried abt Raj and when he comes to meet her she was so happy.
she said those 3 magical words too.๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ ab kabhi na kabhi toh bolna hi hai na...kab tak main maj rajveer ko aise rakhti...๐Ÿ˜›
and then u stopped the update..not fair at all!!!! naya kya hai yaar...yeh toh main hamesha karti hun na...!!! aur jiss ki wajah se tum sab mujhe pet bhar ke galiyan bhi dete ho...aur main phir bhi nahi sudharti...!!! par kya karun...mera dil hi kuch aisa hai ke...tum sab se jitni bhi galiyan pade...mujhe maza aata hai...๐Ÿ˜†
Continue soon
Bye

Thanksss Suhana...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, brilliant part.
loved it.
continue soon.

Thank youuu Rakhi...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

hai ram !!! toh aakhir meri baat sahi nikli !!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ haan... tujhe galat sabit karne ki koshish kar ke marna hai kya mujhe...๐Ÿ˜†

Major saab hi apne mission ke liye yeh sab kar rahe hai...aur unki pativrata patni as usual unka saath de rahi hai... aur nahi toh kya..."Ek Hindusthani Nari ko hamesha apne Pati ka sath dena chahiye...!!! ager uss ka pati Prem Chopra ho...toh use Bindu bann na chahiye...aur agar hrithik Roshan ho toh use Aishwarya bann ni chahiye...ha ha ha...๐Ÿ˜†
aur yaha tum bekaar mein readers ki saans atkaye baithi thi ! ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜† bekaar me...ohh Hello...tum sab mujhe BEkar me galiyan bakk rahe the...uss ka kya...??? apne dost par thoda sa bhi trust nahi tha na...huh...๐Ÿ˜†

update toh ...khair main chahe kitna bhi achcha bolu...tumhe woh jhooth hi lagega...aur tum apne update ko gaaliya hi deti rahogi... jahna tak main janti hun...yeh bimari her writer ko hai...NAHI...??? kyoun ke yaar hum khud apne UD ko le kar itne confused rehte hain ke...kabhi bhi yeh maan nahi pate ke yeh kabhi achha hoga...๐Ÿ˜†
tumhe sudhaarte sudhaarte thakk chuki hu main...๐Ÿ˜› parr tum thodehi na sudharnewaali cheez ho ! ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜† HELLO...main cheez nahi hun...LIONESS ko cheez bologi toh...tujhe pata hai tera hashr kya hoga...๐Ÿ˜†

haan...toh main kya keh rahi thi... mujhe kya pata...main toh tujhe galiyan bakk rahi thi mujhe cheez kahne ke liye...๐Ÿ˜†
ab kya karu? mujhse bhi toh raha nahi jaata...main bhi sudharne waali cheez thodehi na hu...๐Ÿ˜† tu bhi cheez hi hai...arey waah...๐Ÿ˜†
toh main keh rahi thi ke update was superrrbbb !!! ๐Ÿ‘ Thank you...

Rajveer ne kya chuna lagaya Yusuf ko...par yeh end mein kya tha? ab spl chuna mangwaya tha unhone Yusuf ke liye...
Naaz bhi ismein shaamil hai?? agar nahi, toh Raj ne aisa kaise kaha ki usse glycerine ka bottle thama ke bithaya? agar haan toh kya woh double game khel rahi hai? achha...maine aisa bhi kuch likha tha kya...!!! mujhe toh yaad bhi nahi hai...khair next update padh le...sayad tera doubt clear ho jayega...๐Ÿ˜‰

good to see gunny ustad bhi involved hai ! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ab raj ne mission me jo list banaya tha...uss me gunny ustaad bhi toh the na...

and thank god ! ki yaha hindi movie ki tarah heroine saara ghar ulat-pulat nahi karti aur hero achanak se aake usse nahi kehta ki...' hosh me aao !' heroine apne hi dhun mein afra tafri macha rahi hai aur hero usse ek chamat maarke line par laata hai...uff !! he he he...aise scene pe na...main kuch ulta karti...!!! kya karti...!!! well...kabhi agar mauka mila toh wahan likhungi...yahan kyoun likhu...๐Ÿ˜†
Glad to see Naina behaving NORMALLY and MATURELY ! ๐Ÿ˜† bhale hi writer thodi si pagal ho...par voh apne charchtrs ko dimag de kar hi sara kaam karwati hai...๐Ÿ˜†

Aur to aur Aalekh aur Neelu ki gaddi bhi line pe aagayi... haan...ab Alekh kab tak RN ko romance karte dekhta...uss ka bhi toh mann karta hoga na...๐Ÿ˜†

and END ke toh kya kehne !!!!awesoomeee !!! sachhiii...kha tere ghar ke main door par lage uss chain ki kasamm...๐Ÿ˜†
Naina ne toh Raj se kehdiya...
chal main bhi tujhse kehdeti hu (dont take it in a wrong way ๐Ÿ˜› take it as a friend ! ๐Ÿ˜†) haan...haan...samajh liya...aur main bhi uss TYPE ki ladki nahi hun...ek damm PURE hun...samjhi...๐Ÿ˜†
LUV U PRI ! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ LUV YOU Doc...lekin aap philhaal ho kahan...??? aap ke sare clinics (FICS) khali pade hain...!!! main roz chk karti hun...par kisi ka bhi door nahi khula abhi tak...
Mana...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thanksss Mana...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome update... Thank youuu...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

that sure was a googly...while reading the first half i was so read about all of them be it alekh, naaz, huda, ali, pooja, shalini, yudi, neelu, they were so much depressed...then came ur googly which gave me a shock... he he he...kya karti main...thoda suspense creat karna jaruri tha...!!! Hai na...๐Ÿ˜›
plz update soon...waiting to know how come they planned this plan?sorry dear...baht late ho gayi main iss baar...

Thanksss Dear...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

Sherni ji... haan jee...


Mujhe pata tha Raj ka koi back up plan hai...saaf samajhme aa rha tha...(aakhir TDQ ki writer jo hun...๐Ÿ˜†)...tabhi maine pichle part par na to comment kiya na tujhse koi shikayat ki... I knew aisa kuch hone wala hai... ab jab update ho chuka hai...toh bol rahi hai...!!! pahle kyoun nahi bola tha...??? main batayu... kyoun nahi bola...!!! tune socha hoga ke..."next part padh ne ke baad hi batati hun...pahle se kyoun batayu...kahin iss ne idea cancel kar diya toh..."...hai na...๐Ÿ˜†

Awesome update...Thank you...Naaz bhi shamil hai na...pata nahi...๐Ÿ˜†aur wo ladki Nur hai na...yeh bhi pata nahi...๐Ÿ˜† chal chal agle episode me disclose karna,... waise mai galat bhi ho sakti hun naaz aur nur ke baare me...par koi na...raj ke baare me to galat nahi thi na... haan...yeh toh hai...๐Ÿ˜†

Bekar me Aalekh aur Yudi ko goli lag gayi...par ye jaruri bhi tha...warna unki love story aage nahi badhti... goli lagne ki koi wajah toh hogi hi...ab yeh toh tujhe maj rajveer hi bata sakte hai...kyoun ke mission bhi toh unhi ke under chal raha hai na...๐Ÿ˜†
hope shalini propose kar de yudi se...tham ja...kafi fast ja rahi hai tu...๐Ÿ˜†
Neelu ne to apna kaam kar dia... haan...ab wo bhi kab tak side me khadi rehti...!!! ab tym aa gaya hai ke wo bhi aage ee kar kuch kare...๐Ÿ˜†

Chal chal jaldi ud kar...

Tab tak take care...Byeee... Luv U (Darna mana hai...๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†) LUV YOU RS...aur haan...main tujh se nahi darti...huh...๐Ÿ˜†

Guglu

Thanksss Guglu...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

HI Hiiieee
Pata hai iss update ke liye wait karna bahut mushkil tha๐Ÿค”. But aapki itni badhiya writing padh kar ab hum readers bhi thode se intelligent ho gaye hai๐Ÿ˜‰. So my guess was right, this was all Raj's plan. After all the best way of defence is offence. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
ha ha ha...sahi kaha aap ne...par mujhe thoda sa suspence creat karna pada...par mujhe pata tha ke...mere readers bade hi intelligent hain...par phir bhi mujhe galiyan padi thi...๐Ÿ˜†
Update was perfect as always.๐Ÿ‘ Thank youuu...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Raj aur uske plans itne perfect hote hai, ki dushman ullu ban bhi jata hai aur usse pata bhi nahi chalta.๐Ÿ˜† Ab Raj hero hai toh...use toh villans ko ullu banane ka haq bhi hai na...๐Ÿ˜†
Yusuf yeh soch kar pagal ho raha hai ki who kaun hai jis ne naina ko kidnap kiya hai, His men are trying their best to get any information. Balki who log wahi dekh aur sun rahe hain jo Raj chahta hai.๐Ÿ‘ yupe...aur voh log vohi karr bhi rahe hain jo raj unn se karwana chahta hai...๐Ÿ˜‰
What was most shocking in this part was that iss plan mein Naaz bhi shamil hai๐Ÿ˜ฒ. But i guess we will only have to wait for the you flashback to know how this happened. yupe...next part me...iss ko maine disclose kiya hai...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Shalini breaks down completely on seeing Raj is such a state. she is also very worried about naina's safety. Its good to see that yudi is giving her the support which she needs right now. ab dono ka bhi toh kuch na kuch bandobast toh karna hi hai...๐Ÿ˜›
Seeing Alekh injured, Neelu has realised that she cannot imagine her life with out him. She knows that this is a difficult time for Alekh as both Raj and Naina are very important for him.๐Ÿ˜ณ ab Neelu ko thode hi na pata hai ke yeh sab kya chal raha hai...par phir bhi jo ho raha hai uss se Alekh toh faida hi hai...๐Ÿ˜›
Akram is trying his best to keep an eye on things and giving regular updates to Yusuf. But he is convince that Raj is in a very critical condition.๐Ÿ˜Š aur Raj yehi dikhana bhi toh chahta hai na...๐Ÿ˜‰
Naina is waiting eagerly for Raj, She does not even change her dress as she knows that Raj would want to see his bride.๐Ÿ˜ณ ab Naina bhi toh raj ke dil ki baat ko samajhti hi hai na...๐Ÿ˜ณ
She is very happy to see him and is glad that he is safe. She finally tells Raj the three words which he has waited to hear.๐Ÿ˜ณ ab kab tak wait karwati...maj ko...maine use dhamki di...tab ja kar kaha uss ne...warna yeh toh nakhre hi karti ja rahi thi...๐Ÿ˜†
please continue soon.

Thanksss Nisha...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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