ANKAHI...{LRL-RN} #2 last Ud wd EPI n PG 100(21/11 - Page 14

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

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Hiiieee😊

ek choti si baat karni hai...😭

aur voh yeh ki...main pichle kai dino se try karr rahi hun...par ANKAHI ka update likhna khatam nahi ho raha hai...😭

matlab likhti hun...phir delete karti hun...phir likhti hun...phir delete karti hun...aisa hi roz ho raha hai mere sath...chah kar bhi dimag me kuch bhi nahi ghush raha hai...🥱

upar se jitna bhi likha hai voh itna lamba ho chuka hai ke...main khud baht dari hui hun...ke update karun bhi toh kaise...phir bhi mujhe ek ya do din lagg jayega...pura update likhte hue...

upar se barish me bheeg kar sardi ho gayi...cheenk cheenk ker mere dimag ki batti gull ho gaya hai...aur meri Band baji hui hai...phir bhi update jaldi karne ki koshish karungi...

Priya😭

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

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Hiiieee😊

ek choti si baat karni hai...😭

aur voh yeh ki...main pichle kai dino se try karr rahi hun...par ANKAHI ka update likhna khatam nahi ho raha hai...😭

matlab likhti hun...phir delete karti hun...phir likhti hun...phir delete karti hun...aisa hi roz ho raha hai mere sath...chah kar bhi dimag me kuch bhi nahi ghush raha hai...🥱

upar se jitna bhi likha hai voh itna lamba ho chuka hai ke...main khud baht dari hui hun...ke update karun bhi toh kaise...phir bhi mujhe ek ya do din lagg jayega...pura update likhte hue...

upar se barish me bheeg kar sardi ho gayi...cheenk cheenk ker mere dimag ki batti gull ho gaya hai...aur meri Band baji hui hai...phir bhi update jaldi karne ki koshish karungi...

Priya😭

Ladki kitni baar bimaar hoti hai... kuch leti kyun nahi... Waise jarur kisi ki sunti nahi hogi aur apni marzi ki karti hogi tabhi aisa haal hai..

Chalo get well sooon and take care of ur health..

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

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Hiiieee😊

ek choti si baat karni hai...😭

aur voh yeh ki...main pichle kai dino se try karr rahi hun...par ANKAHI ka update likhna khatam nahi ho raha hai...😭

matlab likhti hun...phir delete karti hun...phir likhti hun...phir delete karti hun...aisa hi roz ho raha hai mere sath...chah kar bhi dimag me kuch bhi nahi ghush raha hai...🥱

upar se jitna bhi likha hai voh itna lamba ho chuka hai ke...main khud baht dari hui hun...ke update karun bhi toh kaise...phir bhi mujhe ek ya do din lagg jayega...pura update likhte hue...

upar se barish me bheeg kar sardi ho gayi...cheenk cheenk ker mere dimag ki batti gull ho gaya hai...aur meri Band baji hui hai...phir bhi update jaldi karne ki koshish karungi...

Priya😭

Madam...ye kaunsa record hai jo aap todne ki koshish kar rahi hai? Itna bimaar koi padhta hai kya?😲 Guess apne aap ko heroine ki jagah kuch zyada hi literally imagine kar liya tumne...barish me bhigti rahi & sardi ho gayi... Jaldi se sudhar jao...warna Raj ko complain karungi tumhari...samjhi? And pls do take care of urself well...UD ki fikr mat karo...we can w8!!😊 Take ur tym...and just get well soon. (ye phrase maine zindagi me sab se zyada tumhe hi bola hai😲😆)

Sumi. 😳

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Priya Hiiieee

Brilliant part..just loved it completely👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ thank youuu😃

see I rarely complain abt the size of the updates coz u people put so much effort in writing these lovely parts for us.Hats off to u for writing so brilliantly👏👏👏 kuch jyada hi tarif ho rahi hai...next part me iss se jyada galiyan millne wali hai yeh toh pakka hai hi...!!! aur vaise bhi next part itna bada hai ke...uss length me mere do long uds post ho sakte hain...mujhe toh abhi se aap sabb ki chinta hone lagi hai...😆

Raj's proposal was just like him..simple and staightforward but he meant every word of it..he loves Naina more than his life and he will always cherish her..

Naina too cud feel the depth of his feelings and she was unable to say anthing,she just wanted this moment to last forever.. phir bhi naina thoda nakhre toh dikha hi rahi thi na...phir bhi Maj saab ko handel karna aata hai...apne junior ko...isiliye unn ka kaam ho gaya...😉😆😛

the song is really gud ..😃 main uss scene ke liye koi song add karna chahti thi...par kuch bhi sujh nahi raha tha...isiliye jo bhi dimag me aaya use likh diya tha...

But this time Raj wanted her answer..he was ready to wait for his entire lifetime just for her yea..he wanted to hear it from her lips.The timing of the rain was just perfect..Raj and Naina both were lost in this moment. romance karne ka full chance diya tha maine...par apne maj saab toh hamesha field par hote hain... unhe koun samjhaye...😆

Raj wanted his protege to follow his orders while she was defying him but she had full faith in him and she showed it when Raj took her duppata from her.she was curious to know the reason and Raj covered her head with it and kissed her. yeh scene maine drafting ke waqt add kiya tha...Thank god fit ho gaya iss scene me...😛(so very romantic and cute..unn DJ's ne to yeh scene hi edit kar diya tha😡😡😡) maine toh yu hi add kiya tha yeh scene...mujhe toh yaad hi nahi tha ke aisa ek scene hona tha LRL me jise DJ's ne edit kar diya tha...tum ne kaha toh yaad aaya...!!! kitne sare romantic scenes ho sakte the unn ke bich par... faltu me...DJ's ne Band baja ker rakh di thi...

Raj ne Naina ko punishment to de di aur woh kaafi khush bhi lag rahi thi..😉

Uss car mein bomb kisne rakha tha??? i was so scared.. philhaal main khud iss bare me confirm nahi hun toh tumhe kya kahu...

Naaz was so angry on Yusuf but he denied his involvement in the blast..I think some1 else is behind this.. sayad...ab yeh toh 2/3 parts ke baad hi pata chal jayega...😃

Yudi has really changed a lot.but it will take a lot from him to change Shalini's mind. par kuch toh hoga hi na...ab main unn dono ke bich sirf ek Hug scene rakh ke..unn ki story khatam toh nahi kar sakti...jaise DJ's ne kiya tha...

Raj is really feeling so shy infront of his cadets😲😉😆😆 ..Naina knows this and she is having a gud time..😃😳 ha ha ha...😆...ab Rajveer sir toh sharmayenge hi na...

Alekh was teasing Naina abt Raj and she was ready to beat him..😆😆😆

Yeh Pooja ajeeb hi hai..uske Veer ki shadi ho rahi hai and she is unable to hide her excitement.😆😆😆 isi liye toh voh giri raj par...😆

Pls continue soon

Bye

LRL jokes were too funny specially the first and last one..😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 ha ha ha...thanks😆😃

Pls continue ZTMK too.😃 kabhi agar phir se ise cont karrne ka dil kiya toh main def karungi...Promise...😃

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

Hmm...this tym part was ok sized...😆...Had enough of my Major Rajveer...isliye kuch nahi kahungi tumhe...😆😳 samne hoti na...toh khoob peetai karti main tumhari...!!! khair...taiyaar raho...next part kafi bada post karungi...matlab mere long ud jaisa...do parts ho sakte hain...itna lamba hoga voh ud...!!! ab sarr peetne ke liye taiyaar rehna...kyoun ke itna pakanewali hun ke...phir kabhi long ud karne nahi kahogi...😆

The first scene was awesome...u always mesmerize me sweetie...😳...the lil bit of challenge...and of course the way Rajveer said it...haiii...pls mujhe bhejo waha...Naina ki jagah!!😆😆 bhej deti...par prob yeh hai ke naina bhi vohi hai...toh thoda mushkil hai...!!! par fiqar not...tumhare liye toh kuch bhi...isi liye ek kaam karti hun...naina sone chali jaye na...toh main tumhe vahan bhej deti hun...okay...😆(waise last reply me u asked na...mera kya kaam hota? Agar usne 'Naina' nahi kaha hota...tab main waha pohuch jati and usse 'haan' kar deti...phir wo mera ho jata na...😉...to mera kaam ban jata...😆) arey haan...ye toh maine socha hi nahi tha...!!! lekin ek aur prob hi jati...aur voh ye ke tum se pahle main vahan pahunch jati...after all yeh creation bhi toh meri hi dimag ki fashal hai...😆

Anyways...it was all very lovely...and u gel everything really nicely. 👏👏 Abhi mere paas bahut words nahi hai to explain...but I knw u understand my dimagless dimag...so not making much effort.😆 Bas samajh jao...ki it was magical...😃 haan pata hai...aur samajh bhi gayi...!!! ab tumhare dimag less dimag ko mera dimagless dimag agar na samjhe toh apne Club ka kya hoga...😆

But car me bomb tha...😲...pata hai...meri rooh kaanp gayi thi kuch pal ke liye...😆...ok ok...I wont exaggerate the concern...but I was seriously scared for a fraction of second.😆 tumhare emoticons toh kuch aur hi ekh rahe hain yaar...😆

Meanwhile...uss aurat ke muh me ghee shakkar...😉😉...I loved the way Raj said..."zabardasti haan karwai"...😆😳 he he he...sahi toh bola na maj saab ne...😉😆

Here...Yudi-Shalini scene went nice...and I just hav one thing to say "Yudi bada ho gaya hai"😆😳 haan...bichare ko bich me chod kar DJ's bhaag gaye the...isi liye maine use spl tonic ka course karwaya tha...😆

Next is the...next scene...😆😆...arre Rajveer ka aana...sabko kuch yu order karna jaise mission ka order de raha ho...sach me!!😆😆 Mujhe just pata tha ki kya ho raha hai...warna main bhi Yudi ki tarah confuse ho jati...😆😆 ab bichare Maj saab toh aise hi invite karenge na...unhe sharam jo aa rahi thi...use chupane ke liye kuch toh karna hi hai na...😆 varna unn ke Cadets kya kahenge...😆

That scene went really nice...and main bahut hass bhi rahi thi..😆😆 he he he...😆

Waise...wo blast Yusuf ne nahi karwaya...ab to mera sui Raj pe jata hai...😆😆...I mean...whether it was any of his plan or wat...😆😆...lets see!! Main bhi kyun apna bacha kucha dimag kharch kar rahi hu...tum ho na...jaldi bata dogi...hai na?😆😉 pata nahi...par 2-3 uds me sayad bata dun...!!! par RAJ...tumhe uss par shaq hai...sach me...😆

Now last scene...Pooja giri Rajveer pe!!🤣 Wo itna zyada xcited ho gayi kya??😆😆 Anyways...will be w8ing to knw that soon!! ab excited toh hogi hi na...uss ke veer ki jo shadi ho arhi thi...zara se...😆

Kuch zyada bak bak kiya maine...hai na?😆😆 Kya karu...mujhe kuch kaam to hai nahi...😆😆...aaj yehi last fic padhna hai mujhe...so saari energy daal di...and tumhe paka diya...😆😆 nahi...balke mujhe kafi kamm laga ye... thoda aur bhi hota toh bhi achha hota...😆...her baar ki tarah iss baar bhi maza aaya tumhare comments padhte hue...

Abhi...next part sochna shuru kar do ok?😉😉 soch bhi liya hai aur almost likh bhi diya hai...😉


For LRL Jokes

Ab main aur kya kahu...apna Rajveer bachpan se smart hai...ye kehte kehte...main thaki nahi hu...🤣...I can always say...ab banda itna smartness dikhayega to tareef karni hogi na...😆😆 aur nahi toh kya... mera slogan toh tumhe pata hi hai...toh main aur kya tumhe...😆And I liked the fact ki tumne kaafi chalaki se elec walo ki band baja di..😉...achha badla liya..😆😆 aur voh bhi raj ke hathon...😆

And Aalekh...mujhe to Rajveer ka sabse mast Cadet lagta hai ye...😆😆...such logic!! Gr8!!👏😆 he he he...😆

Wid lots and lots of love towards Rajveer, (ek chhota hissa for Pri😆) dil aur dimag dono main raj par lagayun...aur sara pyar voh le jaye...not fare Sumi😆...phir bhi raj ke liye kuch bhi...haa...isi liye tumhara chota hissa bhi kafi sweet hai mere liye...😛😉😆

Sumi. 😳

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

heeelllooo😃 Hiiieee😃

first and foremost baat ye ki iss part ke comments main hi likh rahi hun matlab ki shreya jise tum mujhe jaanti ho😆😆😆 okay...😆and second most important thing is ki size waapis se original ho gaya jis tarah ka hua kart hai , tha aur if i m not wrong toh aage bhi rahega😆😆😆 pata nahi...par next ud itna lamba hai ke...us length me mere do long uds aa sakte hain...😆isi liye bachna...ye hasino lo main bore karne phir aanewali hun...😆

now update per aate hain sabse pehle toh raj and naina bahut achca waala part tha jis tarah se naina ki haan karwayi shaadi ke liya raj ne wo bahut hi cute part lagaa aur bahhhooottt achcha bhi lagaa👏 propose karne ke liye itni pyaari jagah bhi to choose kari na major rajveeer ne😍😍😍 haan...maj rajveer ne aisi jagah chuni taki...naina chahe bhi toh chup na rah sake...😉

saath me baarish bhi hone lagi to...iske liye to main sumi ki lines churaa rahi hun iske liye sorry sumi- ha ha ha😆 dont worry...Sumi ..."achhi Bachhi' hai na...isiliye voh kuch nahi kahegi...😆 major rajveer agar naina naam nahi leta toh main bhi chali jaati aur khud haan keh deti na😳😳😳 ha ha ha...aap abhi que me hain...kripiya thodi der baad sampark kare...😆

jab major ne kaha usse kehne ke liye kaha to naina pareshaan karne lagi usko😆😆😆 jab ki sab ko pata tha ki wo haan ke siwaay kuchch aur kahegi bhi nahi😉😉😉 jab raj ne kaha ki use naina ke muh se hi sunna ha to madam phir se cadet naina ahh singh ban gayin jo ek baar me baat to maanti hi nahi hain na😆😆😆jab raj major rajveer ban ke kaha to cadet naina ahh singh ko orders maanne hi pade na😉😉😉 aur agar ek hi baar me baat maan gayi toh naina ...naina kaise rahegi...😆

and wo scene to bahut hi achcha waala tha jisme wo naina ke ser pe dupatta udhaata hai aur uske forehead per kiss kiya⭐️⭐️⭐️ Thank you...😃

and after that wo dhaabe waala scene jahan per wo budhi aurat aati ha aur major kehte hain ki par abhi abhi shadi ke liye zabardasti raaji karwayi hai inn ko👏👏👏 sahi toh bola...maj saab ne...naina kitne nakhre karr rahi thi yaar...😛

lekin , kintu ,parantu bandhu iss itni achchi wali date ke beech me ye bomb blast kahan se aa gaya achaanak😡 jab bhi dono saath hote hain to aisa kuch kyon ho jaata hai😕😕😕 vaise sawal tum ne bilkul sahi inshan se pucha hai..matlab ke writer se...par bandhu... writer tumhe sirf apni battishi dikha sakti hai...iss sawal par...aur kuch nahi...😆

and after that yudi and shalini convo was very good👏👏👏 yudi toh ab sachchi me bada ho gaya na😉😉😉 kyonki woSalma Hayek...Penelopp cruz...Britney spears...inn sab ko main pasand karta hun...par pyar nahi...aur shadi toh main inn se bilkul bhi nahi ker sakta... hai na😆😆😆 aur nahi toh kya DJ's ne jahan choda tha Yudi ko vohin use saddne deti kya...ab uss ke liye bhi toh mera kuch fgarz bannta hai ki nahi...😆

naaz iss baar sachi me gusssa hai yusuf per ek toh usne kuch shocking suna aur uske baad ye bomb blast😕😕😕 gussa toh hogi hi na...use shaq hai ke iss me Yusuf ka hath hai...

bechara raj apni hi shaadi ke baare me bataane se sharmaa raha tha😆😆 arey... students the uss ke...thoda toh sharmayega hi na...😆

ab last me wo pooja aa gayi toofan ki speed me daudti hui bechara raj wo to khud hi girte girte bacha😆😆 haan...aur ab use Pooja ko bhi sambhalna hai...😆

chalo ab main apni badbad band kar rahi hun aur ek baat aur pls pls apne dimaagless dimaaf ko phirse aur jaldi se daudayo aur raj naina ki shaadi karwaayo jaldi 😉😉😉 jo hukum sarkaar...par maine apna dimag itna daudaya ke...uss ka natiza baht bura aaya hai...😆

bbbyyyeee

shreya😃😃😃

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome update...will comment later

Thanksss Dear...😃

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

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Tera RESERVED kabhi khatam bhi hoga kya...😆

Originally posted by: -.Preet.-

reserved...

Le...tujh par bhi doc k Reserved ki bimari lagg gayi...😆

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi hiii

the up is good Thank you

the first is really romantic Thanks...

raj asks naina ke kya woh usse shaadi karega par naina woh kuch nahin bolte haai uske khamoshi jaise rajveer tarpa raha tha woh naina ke muh se sunna chahata tha

aur is ke liye uske naina ko daraya bhi par naina she completly trusts him naina ke paas Raj ko trust karne ke alawa aur koi option bhi toh nahi tha...😆

rajveer aur naina dhabbe pe gaye naina feeds raj punishment jo mile the par yaar yeh kis ne unke car mein bomb laaga diya it was really so scary 2-3 uds me sayad main iss baat ko clerak kar dungi...😃

thank god rajveer aur naina ko kuch nahin hua

ab naina sab ke saath jaa rahe haai naintitall ab shadi hai na uss ki...😃

ab dekhta haai kon haai jo rajveer aur naina ko maarna chahata haai haan...ye bhi toh pata lagana hai...

plz cont soon and pm me