kabhi jiju kabhi hubby/last part updated - Page 14

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plz cont soooooooon fabuloussssss job just read the whole story can wait for the next part 👏

both of ur fanfiction r gr8. Plz cont............

TO TELL U ALL THE TRUTH THE THING IS IAM REALY SUPRISED THAT U ALL LIKE MY FAN FIC BECAUSE IN SCHOOL MY TEACHER THINKS THAT IAM NOT GOOD AT WRITING

MY TEACHER THOUGHT THAT I WAS SO BAD THAT I SHOULD DROP OUT OF LAUNGE(LOL)

PLEASE KEEP TELLING ME ABOUT CHANGES I CAN MAKE IN THE FAN FIC SO I WILL KNOW WHAT I NEED TO IMPROVE ON

THANKS SO MUCH
********NIGHT GIRL*********

you are so good
i totally disagree with your teacher.

Originally posted by: Fazzu

you are so good
i totally disagree with your teacher.

thats a first😆

part 19

4 years later

in the usa we see a big house with white bricks on the house inside the house we see a little 4 year old girl running around the house jumping on a king size bed yelling

girl-dad dad wake up it is my birthday wake up dad!!!!!!

a guy in the bed grabs the girls feet and pushs her down on bed with him

the girl takes the covers of the bed off of the guys face....we see the guys face it is angad!!!!

a-good moring bithday girl today u r 4 years old tina

t-know daddy iam a big girl so can i come to the office and come and work with u

a-sure


angad now lives in the usa with tina angad no long lives with his parents and prithiv ever sence he found out that he was in love with kripa....angad had tried to find kripa again but was unable to find her...angad spend 4 years of his life takeing care of tina and every night angad would pray that kripa will come back to him....every six months prithiv comes to vist angad and tina in the usa every time prithiv would come to the usa tina would alway bug prithiv and ask him what her mother was like and prithiv would alway talk about kripa as tina mother....tina knew very well never to ask her father about her mother because angad would alwas get angery when tina asked about her mother




hope u like this part next part comeing soon i know this part is short but i haave to get some rest for tommrow lol

wow nice part you made me said yeh dil mange more

it's good
please continue again

part 20

angad was at the office with tina.....ever sence kripa left angad, angad has become a very succesful man

as angad walked in the office every one welcomed angad with a "hello sir" or by saying "hello boss"

tina walked beside angad quitely with her hand grabing angads thumb....as angad made his way to the elevator to go to his cabin tina pulled on angads hand

t-daddy iam scared to go on the little box thing...when ever u go in the box thing,the floor starts to move up and down

angad didnt want to scare tina so he thought to take the stairs but the problme was that angads cabin was on the 20 floor and he was right now on the 1st floor

angad bends down to tina

a-tina today u r a big girl right....today u r 4 years old....come on if daddy can ride the box thing so can u

tinas face lights up

t-real daddy u think so

a-i know so

angad pushs the button to the elevator and the elevator opens up......angad and tian walk in to the elevator as the elevator gose up tina is realy scard so angad hold on the tinas hand soon the elevator reachs the 20th floor and the door of the elevator opens

t-wow daddy that was fun can we do it again

a-no tina daddy has a lot of work to do

tina makes a kid/crying face

t-please daddy pleaseeeeeeee dadddddddyyyyyyyy

a-no means no (in a parent voice)

tina makes a sad face but follows angad to his cabin as angad opens the door to his cabin we see that behind angads desk the wall behind him is made out of all glass in frount of the glass wall there is a black chair then a wood desk and infrount of the wood desk are two red chair for any visters....angad gose in his chair which is the black chair while tina sits in the red chair

tina was starting to get bord so she started to play with her fingers then tina started to kick her feet in the air

t-uuhhh daddy can i explore the office

angad looked up from all the paper work he was doing and started to think if he should let tina explore the office by her self

a-ok but dont go out side of the offic ok

t-ok

a-have i made my self clear

t-i know daddy i know....do not go out side of the offic and do talk to any one i dont know

a-not thats like a good girl

tina runs out to the room

angad then picks up his phone

a-sheena please follow tina and make sure she dosent go out side of the office ok

phone-yes sir

angad puts the phone down and then picks up his office phone again and calls some one else

a-can u bring me my mail

person-yes sir

a guy comes in the office and hand angad his mail

angad looks throught his mail and most of them were just bills then one mail chought his eyes the name said kripa khanna

angad quickly opend the letter and started reading it

dear miss tina khanna (angad relised that this letter was a company letter because angad company is by the name of tina khanna not angad khanna)i am writeing this letter to ask u for a request i have been watching your company grow in the last 4 years and i was hopeing that u would like to join togather our company this way both are companies will become internatiol companys....iam well ware that my company is already and succeful company and have a lot more better offers then this company but the reason i am asking to make this company apartner with my company is because i have a daughter by the name of tina khanna and i know any name with tina in it is bound to be succeful

please consider my request
kripa khanna


angad right away knew that kripa had writen this letter and knew very well that kripa didnt know that he owned the company not some 4 year old tina

angad quickly when on this computer and e-mailed the cell phone company back saying he will except the offer

then angad when out side of his cabin were he saw a big crowed around the elevator on the 20th floor....angad moved through the crowed and said some one what happend

person-sir some little girl has been rideing the elevator up and down and wont stop

angad call sheena

a-sheena were tina

s-sir your kid gone mad...she has been rideing the elevator up and down for so long oh god help me

a-sheena give the phone to tina

t-hi daddy

a-tina please get out of the elevator

t-no

a-tina if u come out of the elevator i will take u to josh uncles house

t-we are going to josh uncles house yeh

a-first come out of the elevator

t-ok daddy comeing


hope u like this part
comeing up-intro on josh
next part comeing soon

aww...ruheee that was a fantastic part..i love it yaar....tina is soooo cute....continue soon cant wait to see whats going to occur next!

tc