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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww... poor Geet 😭

Looks like Maan's going to regret his words someday...

cant wait for the next part.. please update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great !!! Please add me to the pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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update,, update,, update,, update,, update,, update,, update,, update,, update,, n plzzz pm meee
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loveeed it, very interesting story.plsss continue soon and also want Bhageeratha update.plsss.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congratzzz on new ff...
interesting prolouge...
plz cont soon...
tanx 4r pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow... really interesting. Plz Pm me to ur list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats for the new SS brother. šŸ‘
Oh my poor Geet is deaf and Maan is not aware of it! Why is he so angry with her? šŸ˜• She just goes for lip reading to understand what he says. Poor girl! And I hate that Sameera 😔 Oho brother, the prologue itself drives me crazy to crave for quicker updates.
Please continue ASAP. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Another amazing story. Am loving all ur concept.
Is Geet just Deaf or she is Deaf n Dumb.
Cos she could have at least spoke back to Maan saying she is so n so...
But why maan shouted at her. wat was she doing at his ofis...
plz cont soon...
thx for the pM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT
THANKS FOR COMMENTING


Part 1

Geet came outside from khurana constructions not knowing what to do. She couldn't understand why the owner of that company was angry at her. She didn't knew even his name. As it was a bright sunny day she became tired. She started to feel hungry. She checked her purse. There was no single penny left. When she entered the office in the morning she came with a lot of hope that finally she could get some money. But her bad luck reached the place before her. She sighed in disappointment

She looked at her watch. It was 12pm. She looked at the busy road and all the people who were busy in their respective works. A smile came upon her face...from disappointment ..from pain...she then wiped her sweat on her forehead with her dupatta and started walking slowly along the road side...Then all the incidents which took place past 7 days since she reached that city flashed in her mind.

I week back...

Geet woke up from the sleep when the bus stopped moving. She hurriedly looked around. All were getting down from bus. Conductor was saying something. As she was deaf she could not hear...She sighed and came near conductor...

geet: bhai saab,...delhi aaya hey kya?

having asked this question..geet carefully looked at him...she understood from his words that it was delhi anand vihar ...she thanked him and got down. First time in her life she is visiting such a big city...As she was orphan she had no one to accompany her.To attend a natinal level painting competition she came all over from chandigarh.She took out the address of the venue from her bag.She looked at the address..pragathi maidan...was written on it.

She had no clue of that place.She looked around not knowing what to do. On the opposite side of the road she saw an old couple. Geet decided to ask them about pragathi maidan.
she started crossing the road looking at the address without giving any attention to the vehicles...then suddenly one BMW car stiopped infront of her with a sudden break...
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Maan was waiting for sameera past 1 hr in the restaurant. But she haven't showed up.He got frustrated and kept trying to her mobile. But his attempts to reach her were in vain...

maan: oh god...iam getting late...aur upar se yeh sameera abhi tak aaya nahi...

then he recieved a message from her.."sorry darling...important meeting with a friend ...can't come now".His anger reached heights. He clenched his fist in anger and came out of restaurant..Then he received a call from adi..about the trouble in anand vihar construction site...He kicked the car door in anger...

maan: what the hell is happening to me today...aaj ek bhi kaam teek se nahi hua...sameera se important baath karna tha...woh bhi nahi hua...aur upar se yeh anand vihar wala ...pehle iss site ka kuch klarna hoga warna aise hi har roz problem hojayega

maan quickly sat in his BMW and drove towards anand vihar...he was in a foul mood...then his phone rang...it was from sameera...he sighed...and answered the call...

maan: sameera...kaha ho tum?...aaj patha hey na tumhe ...ki aaj hume engagement rings keliye shopping jaana hey...lekin tum apne hi kaam mein busy hogayi...mein yaha saaara meetings cancel karke...tumse milne keliye pichle 1 ghante se wait kartha raha...

sameera: maan...relax...bola na..important friend hey...

maan: kya woh friend humaare shaadhi se badkar hey

sameera: haan...woh mere future career keliye bahuth important maan...why can't u understand ...Stop behaving like an emotional fool...engagement rings...aaj nahi tho kal kareedhlenge..what is the big deal in that?

maan: daadi ne kaha aaj subh din hey...

sameera: dekho maan..be practical ok...now i need to go now...rest we will talk at evening ok...bye...

maan: sameera...at least lunch tho mere saath karsakthe hey na

sameera: no...i can't actually unhone mujhe lunch keliye invite kiya hey..agar mana kiya tho bura lagega na...

maan held on steering stiffened when he felt bad that sameera gave importance to her friend than him...he closed his eyes just for a moment in frustration. When he opened his eyes he saw a 18 yr girl crossing the road...looking at a piece of paper in her hand..who was only a little far away from his car...she was so close to his car...Not knowing what to do he applied brakes suddenly..car stopped right infront of geet making a squeaking sound...at that moment geet felt that she was about to die and closed her eyes tightly...

sameera: maan...maan..kya hua?

but maan was in no position to answer back...when car stopped..he looked at the girl...she was fine... he sighed in relief. Geet stood before his car like a statue closing her eyes. He threw the ear piece aside in anger and got down from the car...

when maan was not responding sameera too disconnected the call and got herself busy in lunch with the friend...

he came near her, grabbed her hand and pushed her aside from the road...geet got shocked with this sudden act ...she has no idea of what was happening around her. she then looked at maan who was holding her hand with bright red eyes sending virtual daggers on her...she got scared...

maan: tumhe marne keliye mera hi gaadi mila hey kya?

geet looked at maan confused...she was unable to read his lips...his way of talking was too fast...she kept looking at him trying to interpret what he was saying

maan got irriated with that constant staring of her...he freed her from his grip...

maan: patha nahi kaise kaise log hothey hey iss duniya mein...dekho kaise besharam ki tarah meri hoton ki taraf dekh rahi hey...

maan gave a disgusting look to her and came back near his car...he got into the car and left...Then geet slowly recalled all the incidents and understood what actually happened...

to be continued...

next: Geet in khurana constructions
Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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poor geet...she is deaf...n on top of that she is having to bear insults of other...continue soon n thnx for the pm...

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