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Posted: 14 years ago
JWALA w8ng for the UPDATE …….. 😭

where r u DUDE …… plzzz plzzz UPDATE this SS too ….. 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
update ka kya hua Deva...waiting since yesterday
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THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT
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Part 5


He tried to calm himself and started driving the car again...to avoid maan's deadly angry looks geet looked through the window...then she saw a small pup trying to cross the road...but suddenly a truck came upon it...when the pup came on the road...this scene shocked geet...and she suddenly started screaming..."gaadi rokhiye..gaadi rokiye"...maan who was driving the car busy in thinking about his next day ventures got startled with sudden scream of geet and stopped the car...looking at geet in shock...when car stopped... geet...without thinking for a second got down from the car and started running towards the other side of the road...

maan quickly got down from the car and pulled her back before she could cross the busy road...

maan: tumhara dimag kharab hogaya kya...pagal ki tarah aise busy road cross kar rahe ho...

but geet was not at all looking at maan...she was more worried about the pup...maan's hold on her wrist was so strong that she could not free herself...her silence and her behavior towards him irritated maan further...

maan: agar tumhara tamasha khatham hogaya tho hum chale...mere paas ithna time nahi hey...tumpe waste karne keliye...

still geet was looking at the otherside with a worried face...with each passing second..her worry started to increase...she didn't even bothered to look at maan...this made maan furious...he left her hand...

maan: bas bahuth hogaya ab...chahe kuch bhi hojaye...mein tumhe apne saath nahi lejaonga...

the moment maan left geet's hand geet without even looking back ran to the otherside of road...searching for the pup...

maan got frustrated...

maan: kaise bathameez ladki hey yeh...mere baath...maan singh khurana ke baath dakhal andaaz kiya...yeh apne aapko kya samjatha hey...khair...why should i bother...

maan in anger sat in his car and drove towards khurana mansion without even looking back at geet for once...

geet on reaching otherside of the road looked for the pup...there she saw the same pup playing with the paper safe and sound...she sighed in relief and thanked god for saving it...she took the pup in her arms and kept in the safe place away from the road...she then with a smiling face turned back to reach the car...her smile vanished when she understood that maan left her...she looked around...the whole place was busy...not knowing what to do she sat on the foot path...with tears in her eyes...

maan reached khurana mansion...he was still furious at geet...her behavior towards him irked him the most...he snapped out of his thoughts and got down from the car...then his eyes fell upon the bag which was lying on the seat...

maan: yeh tho ussi ka bag hey...khair mujhe kya karna hey...

he then took the bag and threw it aside...some paper drawings, few clothes and few 10 rupee notes fell from the bag...maan picked up the drawings...his eyes widened in surprise...

maan: superb drawing...shayad isiliye..dadima..unhe ithna appreciate karthi thi...aur yeh paisa ,kapde...shayad yeh bag unkeliye bahuth zaroori hoga...mein bhi gusse mein unhe raasthe pe chodke aaya...iss raath mein...woh bhi delhi mein...iss bag se lagtha hey ki woh iss shahar ki nahi hey...mein ne galath kiya..bahuth badi galath..aise raasthe mein unko chod ke nahi aana chahiye tha...

maan without a second thought kept all the things back in the bag...sat in the car and drove towards the place where he left geet...

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slowly the busy road became quiet as the hours passed...geet stood up from that place when the people passing by were giving her weird looks...she wiped her tears and started walking from that place...then some auto drivers who were observing her came near and said.."madam auto chahiye"...geet lowered her head and continued her walk with out giving any attention to them...auto drivers too followed her repeating the same question...again and again...she doesnot know what they were asking as she saw very much scared to look into their faces ...when she saw them following her she started running with her full energy...

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maan was very much tensed...for the first time in his life he is feeling guilty for leaving her at that place...he snapped out of his thoughts when his mobile rang..it was a new number...he thought for a second and answered the call...

"maan..maan..mein sameera bol rahi hu...plz save me maan...2 gunde guss gaye meri flat mein..they are trying..to...aaahhh.maan...plz..help...no...no...meri paas math aana...nooo

the call got disconnected...

maan for a moment got shocked...but later he calmed himself...and started driving the car searching geet...as if nothing happened...

After sometime he again got a call from the same number...

"maan..plese mujhe bachalo...they are trying..to...aaahhh"

the call got disconnected...

this time maan didn't even bothered to think about sameera...he continued with his driving ...third time again he got the call from the same number...

he stopped the car and answered the call...

"maan please mujhe bachalo...e gunde ..they are trying..to...aahhh"

maan couldnot take it anymore...he became furious...

maan: sammera...shut up...stop ur drama...

sameera got frozen with maan's words...

sameera: maan...sach mein...mein problem mein hu...

maan: will u shut up...

sameera got scared with his anger in voice...

maan: maan singh khurana ko ullu banana chahthe ho...kya tumhare ghar mein gunde gus gaye...yehi keh rahi thi na mujhse...

sameera was speechless...

maan: bolo...yeh keh rahi thi na...

sameera: ha maan sach mein...

maan:oh shut up sameera..aur kithna jhoot bhologi tum...mein tumhare flat mein ithna security lagaya...agar tumhare flat me chiti bhi gus gaya na mujhe patha chalega...gunde gussna..chance hi nahi hey...ur flat is under tight security system...agar galathi se bhi koi guss gaya ..toh warning alarms bajenge...except me no one knows about that security system...aur usko disable karna kisiko bhi nahi aatha...tho tumhare ghar mein agar gunde guss gaye tho...i would have known...but nothing like that happened...that means u r telling lies to me...

sameera could not say a word after that...she understood that her lie got caught by maan...

maan: bolo kyu kiya yeh sab..kyu jhoot bola mujhse...woh bhi ithna cheap jhoot...

sameera: woh ...tumhe..manane keliye...

maan: shut up...mein kabhi nahi socha ki tum ithna ghir jaaogi...aur mujhpe iss tarah ki cheap tricks use karogi...

sameera: maan...merei baath tho suno...

without listening to her words maan cut the call and switched off his phone...and looked aside when he heard the sound of his car door opening...he was shocked...

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Geet who was running saw maan in the car talking on phone...she thanked god for sending maan in right time...she ran faster and.reached his car which was parked aside...maan was talking on phone..and .he didnot notice geet...geet quickly opened the car door and sat beside him sighing in relief...with tears in eyes...

maan looked at her in shock and surprise...she couldnot speak anything due to shock...she was sweating profusely..her hair was in mess...her legs were bleeding...her breathing was faster...

to be continued...




Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res
hehehhe...
me 1st yay...
hurrah...
yippie...🥳


awesum update dear!!!👏
geet was sooo damn scared abt the puppy!!!
luvd her!!😳
ye maan ko gussa bahut aata hai!!1😆
uff

hope he finds her soon b4 sumthing wrong happens!!!😕
and tht sameera...uff..i hate her!!!
badi dramebaaz nikli yaar!!😡
plz update soon and regularly!!!!

Edited by kawaii_geet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...geet is very concered abt puppy...maan apreciating geets drawings wow...maan & dadima has same taste reg art...maan & sameera part is nice...poor geet she hurt badly...cont soon...thanks 4 pm...
Edited by priya.shilpa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG !!! superb story pls continue it... It was amazing...just love it...
Is there maahi maahi.. wali background tune??
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it's too exciting pls continue it as soon as possible n why didn't u update d page no.42
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Posted: 14 years ago

yar maan itna gussa...not gud for health...😆
well awesome part...loved it...!!
geet was too gud...!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
luvd it!!! Sameera is so cheap, Aab MSK ko bhi jaldi akal aa jaye
Keep up the good work
Luv
TC
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Posted: 14 years ago
wen will maan know geet is deaf!!!!!!!hope he knows soon...cant see geet like this being yelled by maan now n then
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Posted: 14 years ago
YUPPIeee U UPDATED this SS too …...

JWALA THANK U SHo0o0o0o0o0 MUCH ... !!!!! 🥳🥳🥳

AWESOME UPDATE !!!! SUPER LIKEEE ... 🤗🤗🤗

aaawww i was so curious to know what made GEET screamed like that in middle of road and i m in AWE '. !!! GEET is such a sweetheart she was so worried for the PUPPY ... 😳JWALA i love this SWEET, INNOCENT N NAIVE GEET uufffhh !!! she is simply a DARLING and i knw i have said this so many time but i can't help it …..🤣

and what to say about that CHEAP CHUADAIL SAMEERA '.. !!!🤢 🤢🤢 is she still living in 18th century ??? and i didn't get is she that fool that even if GUNDE were raping her, how on earth she was able to call MAAN for HELP and that too 3 times??? did she took 2 times from the GUNDES so that she can call MAAN for HELP '.. 🤣🤣🤣 HONESTLY she needs brain '.. what was she thinking when she thought of making THE MAAN SINGH KHURANNA fool???? 😆😆😆 JWALA THANK U sho0oo0o0o0 MUCH for keeping my hottie THE MSK'S CHARACTER ALIVE ... 😍😍😍

so finally MAAN got to c the talent of GEET'...🥳🥳 i m sho0o0o0 happy that he realize his mistake and went back to help GEET and felt GUILTY for his mistake ... 😍

JWALA i m loving the suspense ...😳 i dun want MAAN to knw so soon that GEET is DEAF ...😉 cuz after that he will have sympathy for her and won't b his self in front of GEET what he really is "THE MSK"….. ☺️i want MAAN to fall for GEET for her CAPABILITY, QUALITIES & NATURE ...😃 i dun want him to feel bad that she DEAF and then those LOVE feelings... NO !!!! 🤢

I M FALLING 4 THIS MR. ATTITUDE ALL OVER AGAIN IN UR SS ……. 😳😳😳 he is THE MSK and expect him to b all LOVE DOVEY & caring type would b the JOKE of century ,,,,, 😆 i mean he will melt but not that early not like in his first meeting with GEET ,…… 😳

just want to tell u i m falling more for this HOT N ANGRY MSK and SWEET N INNOCENT GEET '..😳 and loving their MISUNDERSTANDING ... and SPICY NOK JHOK '...☺️☺️i knw i might sound weird as everyone want this MU to end soon but i want it to extend, its just i m loving how u r unfolding this story …. 👏 and DARE u make GEET or MAAN fall for eachother so soon '. !!! or else i will leave JUGNU MAMA behind u ... 😆😆😆 sometime LOVE takes time to hit u and i want to c the same in their case ... 😍😍😍

JWALA no JUTTIS N CHAPALS on me for the THREAT ….. 🤣🤣🤣

well aagey toh u r the WRITER all is in ur HANDS ... 😆😆 u r simply AMAZING ... 👏 PLZZZ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK DUDE !!! 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

PLZZZ UPDATE THIS SS SOON ... !!!! 😍i m already dying to read the next PART ... 😆😆 dun get a HEART ATTACK by my mere request i knw u have other SS too but still plzzz try to update this one soon plzzz plzzz ... *ANGEL MAKING BABY FACE*😍😍

and a BIG THANKS 4 THE PM!!!!!!!!!!🤗🤗


Edited by khansangel - 14 years ago

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